Going through the beginning at the moment. Definitely looks a lot different from the last time I've read it. The added character art is really making this feel much more complete. In spite of the improvements however, I may have spotted some potential issues which could ultimately just be bugs on my end.
For starters the beginning dialogue between the protagonist and my character reads a bit weird, as if there was text that somehow gotten cut out randomly. I'll transcribe the first bits of conversation directly from my play through so you can get an idea of what I mean.
Spoiler
Protagonist: Man, I hate locker rooms...
Fro: Why? Take the time to strut your stuff!
Protagonist: I'm sorry. Who are you?
Fro: Me? I am Fronomenal! King of the Fighter's club!
Protagonist: Fighter's Club? Didn't you just break the first two rules by telling me about it?
Fro: Fighter's Club, not Fight club. And yes! It's my own little creation.
It may be just me, or the fact that it just may be a technical issue on my end, that conversation comes off as a bit weird to me. Also, the color highlighting my character's name is a bit dark, which made it hard for me to even notice that he was the speaker at first. Not a major issue, but it might be worth checking out.
And strangely, whenever Ginger's character appears on the screen only his lower half and his cane can be seen. Not sure if this is intentional, but again, another potential bug that's worth checking out.
Other than that, the VN is looking great so far guys! I'll be sure to catch up on all the updates I've missed. Also, what hell is up with those smackdown vs raw Caws in the fighter's club references folder!? Don't tell me my fighter's club is actually some indie underground wrestling promotion haha! Guess I'll find out in due time.