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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #990 on: February 24, 2018, 11:51:56 AM »
Rough work, but that style of scruff looks something like this on Vacant:

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #991 on: February 24, 2018, 12:20:57 PM »
Looks pretty good to me

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #992 on: February 24, 2018, 04:30:06 PM »
Ooh ooh, that's looking good Vio! Certainly gives off a different impression. :thumbsup:
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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #993 on: February 25, 2018, 01:01:23 PM »
Alright, this is what I have so far with Vacant's character. I'm going to start working with the highlights, some details, and fix some touch-ups for today. I'm posting this now in case someone would like to comment or recommend some adjust while I'm on the fly.

Also, I added one of the backgrounds from the game for a comparison look, :hmm:


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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #994 on: February 25, 2018, 01:44:07 PM »
It's like it was always meant to be.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #995 on: February 25, 2018, 01:45:04 PM »
A young, cheeky, playboy wannabe Vacant? :hmm:


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« Reply #996 on: February 25, 2018, 01:46:30 PM »
More like trapping a part of his soul in a video game.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #997 on: February 25, 2018, 02:12:03 PM »
Vacant's character definitely looks like he sells all types of miscellaneous items to other students in the school as a side hustle.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #998 on: February 27, 2018, 12:51:42 PM »
I'm just now coming across this, man am I slow, but the idea sounds really cool!

I might be able to offer some art or sketches at least, but another would most likely have to finish the process if the sketches were to be used due to my work load. I wish I could partake 100% 😅

EXAMPLE OF WHAT I COULD OFFER

Character in image is my own OC Razi
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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #999 on: February 28, 2018, 12:59:15 PM »
@RaziKitsune - As far as I know, the more artists the better. We could always use some sketches. :thumbsup:



Here's Vacant with his highlights and minor fixes. This is a simple 3-shell colour style (for those who may not have known) and I can simply upgrade it if we choose to. If anyone wants to add comments on how the colour image can be improved, please let me know as I would appreciate it. :thumbsup:

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If everyone is satisfied with the style, then I just copy and past the colours to the faceless version and move on to the next available character

Speaking of characters, are the previous characters' lineart still available? Since my style is different from the previous ones, I though I would ask to rework and colour the previous ones to have a matching style. :hmm:

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #1000 on: February 28, 2018, 03:13:36 PM »
@Vio: the hair highlights might be a little bright. But I like it otherwise.

The only other previous character would be Nairbons, but I don't know if there's line art for him in here. I can check my computer at home, but it might be quicker to scroll through the early pages of this topic.


@RaziKitsune: I wo coordinate with EchoRiver, to make sure the style/sprite size remains consistent, and to get a plan for who is going to draw who. But if you can get us to where someone else can take care of coloring and cleaning the image up, I say go for it.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #1001 on: February 28, 2018, 03:17:02 PM »
@Vio: the hair highlights might be a little bright. But I like it otherwise.

That's interesting because I thought it wasn't bright enough. :hmm:

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #1002 on: March 03, 2018, 04:33:28 PM »
@Vio Nice work! I like how it looks.  ;D
I have the lineart for some of the other characters, I can add them to the character folders when I have the time.

@Razi We'd love to have you on board :D Sketches would be most appreciated. Thank you for offering to help!
(Razi looks ready for Raider Academy owo).

At the moment, we have these lovely concept placeholder drawings by Lego:
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,10636.msg291522.html#msg291522
So what I was thinking, would it be possible if you could do character sketches based on these? The uniform is pretty standard. I can get you some references. Then I could take the sketches to the lineart stage, if that works with you. Or if you had something else in mind, feel free to share. ^^
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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #1003 on: March 07, 2018, 04:44:21 PM »
I checked the previous posts and could only find lineart for Writer-Tan. I have found some sketches of Raiders and Tans, but no other lineart. Some links are no longer working that might have led me to more, but that's all I could get from here.

So, Echo, I would be more than happy if you can do that when you have the time. :thumbsup:

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #1004 on: April 11, 2018, 03:05:42 PM »
Phew! Okay then. Little miniscule step here.

Firstly

*Sliding bow*

GOMENASAI ECHO. I forgot you already did Ecchi tan and stuff! My amnesia is legendary sometimes.

*Turns* *Sliding bow*

DOMO ARIGATOU VIO

Seriously that Vacant turned out legit. And the stubble thing was exactly what I had in mind. Guess that's canon, eh?




Now then. My amnesia struck again and I found myself already finished drawing Nabe Man. Because of his avatar I modelled him after a young Mayuri, then I realized Coryn pointed out he needed to be replaced with No1sey. So I did that again.

But there's a problem Coryn. You said Adam should be switched out with Echo but there's just no doing that without some real surgery on the script. I'm cool with cooking up an image for Adam, or switching in another raider if there's anything there. Your call, but anything is better than throwing away all the lines. They just muddle up Echo's introduction later so yeah.

Anyhoo placeholder images ahoy



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PS:  The game is pretty much a dead thing as in I'm pretty sure I uploaded a corrupt version or something, so until I'm done patching in these assets the only help that can be rendered would be with these images *Pleads shamelessly with the kami-samas of colouring and line art*

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Don't make me brainwash you, Echo, Vio