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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #945 on: March 08, 2017, 02:47:57 PM »
I don't think it's too crazy towards the end...

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #946 on: August 24, 2017, 09:20:47 PM »
I'm back in black and ready to -

*sees that there is new art needed for Kandy Kane, Tiger Mask and co and slumps in despair*

Guh... I'm working on it. The art shall not look exactly beautiful, but it will be done.

Don't bother downloading the latest version. It has fatal errors. But I'm back to coding again, for all that's worth.

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« Reply #947 on: August 24, 2017, 10:25:46 PM »
Neat. Trying to run it right now would probably kill my laptop anyway

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #948 on: August 24, 2017, 10:27:04 PM »
*thumbs up* I know the feel.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #949 on: September 25, 2017, 04:09:54 PM »
I'm curious what's happening here.

If this project is still on the back burner, and not in the cryogenic chamber, I would like to help with the colouring if it helps ease the work load.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #950 on: September 25, 2017, 10:22:33 PM »
Back burner for sure. But I'm not really sure what our art situation even is anymore. The writing was finished, the coding was about 3/4 of the way there though.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #951 on: September 27, 2017, 03:33:25 PM »
Alright. When the art kicks off again, I'll be gladly to help out in anyway I can. For now I'll work on my side project on Renpy. :thumbsup:

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #952 on: February 07, 2018, 10:02:45 AM »
Scene 31 done and debugged so when you download the latest files it will work. Assets, as always, are still placeholder.

Finally flexed those atrophied programmer muscles so I'm back to my hack job of simply plugging in stuff so that the overall script works. I laughed out loud at the Kandy Kane and King Tiger intros you recorded man. I miss Smackdown vs Raw. Too damn fun.

Looks like the next two scenes will be doozies. I look forward to weeping

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« Reply #953 on: February 07, 2018, 03:30:58 PM »
Good luck my friend. I'll get it download this weekend and do a bug report.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #954 on: February 07, 2018, 09:46:25 PM »
Caught up with the latest scene. That last part was quite fun to go through. Great job with the coding work Lego. Love the shaking and light effects going on.
Also enjoying the story and dialogue, Coryn.

I see something went wrong with the KagePen files in the character art folder. I resized them and reuploaded them. I think you can use them now.
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« Reply #955 on: February 07, 2018, 09:51:35 PM »
That's a loyore Kage faces than I thought we had  :ohmy:

Too bad he's no longer able to see this thing continue on. I'm really glad I got his part written before he passed. I don't know if I could have finished it otherwise.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #956 on: February 07, 2018, 10:31:51 PM »
Going through the beginning at the moment. Definitely looks a lot different from the last time I've read it. The added character art is really making this feel much more complete. In spite of the improvements however, I may have spotted some potential issues which could ultimately just be bugs on my end.

For starters the beginning dialogue between the protagonist and my character reads a bit weird, as if there was text that somehow gotten cut out randomly. I'll transcribe the first bits of conversation directly from my play through so you can get an idea of what I mean.

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Protagonist: Man, I hate locker rooms...

Fro: Why? Take the time to strut your stuff!

Protagonist: I'm sorry. Who are you?

Fro: Me? I am Fronomenal! King of the Fighter's club!

Protagonist: Fighter's Club? Didn't you just break the first two rules by telling me about it?

Fro: Fighter's Club, not Fight club. And yes! It's my own little creation.

It may be just me, or the fact that it just may be a technical issue on my end, that conversation comes off as a bit weird to me. Also, the color highlighting my character's name is a bit dark, which made it hard for me to even notice that he was the speaker at first. Not a major issue, but it might be worth checking out.

And strangely, whenever Ginger's character appears on the screen only his lower half and his cane can be seen. Not sure if this is intentional, but again, another potential bug that's worth checking out.

Other than that, the VN is looking great so far guys! I'll be sure to catch up on all the updates I've missed. Also, what hell is up with those smackdown vs raw Caws in the fighter's club references folder!? Don't tell me my fighter's club is actually some indie underground wrestling promotion haha! Guess I'll find out in due time.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #957 on: February 07, 2018, 10:38:41 PM »
Hm... I mean O wrote it, so I'm having trouble exactly seeing what you're seeing. Can you go into more detail?

Those visual things sound like bugs though.

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« Reply #958 on: February 07, 2018, 11:02:05 PM »
Here's what I'm seeing: The part where the protagonist says, 'Fighter's Club? Didn't you just break the first two rules by telling me about it?" Comes off weird as to me because my character didn't mention anything about rules during his prior dialogue, which leads me to speculate there was dialogue by Fro pertaining to this that may have gotten changed or just left out in the final version.

Compare my earlier transcription with this excerpt of the script that may be an older version. This is directly from the word file:

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Protag: Man I hate locker rooms…
Fro: Why? Take the time to strut your stuff!
Protag: I’m sorry, who are you?
Fro (happy): Fronomeal! King of the Fighter’s Club!
Protag: Fighter’s Club?
Fro (happy): Yup! It’s my own little creation. Great place for fighters from around the school to strut their stuff!
Fro (serious): Keep it on the down low though. It’s not strictly ‘in compliance with school policy’, or particularly ‘legal’.
Protag: I see…


An older version of the script I know, but the conversation makes more sense to me I guess. I don't know, I'm probably just tripping, Coryn. And if that's the case then I wouldn't worry about it too much unless someone else points out a similar issue.

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« Reply #959 on: February 07, 2018, 11:14:37 PM »
Oh, I see what you're saying. But it's just a reference to Fight Club. The first two rules are "Don't talk about fight club", so here Protag is misunderstanding, and bringing up that Fro announcing it like that would be breaking the first two rules.

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