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Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« on: November 15, 2008, 09:13:32 PM »
I decided to write this story instead, for now, since im regaining interest in creating it. This story is more like a fanfic except i drew it in comic form and going along as i drew, the story was never written. So, I'm going to remake the comic myself. As I said, this is a fanfic for Lunar series, if you've ever heard of the playstation/dreamcast games, Lunar:Silver story or Lunar 2: Eternal Blue complete, or event he modern sivler story version for Game boy advanced, Lunar Legends. This story takes place after Lunar 2: Eternal Blue Complete, and since i dont have the old version i made, i think it was about 3 years after the story. As for those who don't know this Lunar thing, im going to post a summary of its story. ( Just to let you know, its so rare and such a good ps1 game this all 3 discs are worth 90$ in total today)

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Here is a quick 2 second summary of some stuff in Lunar 3:

The main character's name WAS Theo, but I'm changing it to Tao, to make it more...err "Lunar Original". The story takes place in a town of Azado, a town of holiness with a great statue of Althena at the top of the High Priests temple. Azado is Tao's home town, and because his parents were killed in the war at birth, Tao lived alone, roaming around the city causing mischief as if he were Naruto  :laughing11: but, nothing good can last long, as the black knights approach, and even though they are sworn to protect the city in the name of Althena, they are actually a group of no good heavily armored and skilled guards with a very annoying leader. Alvis, the leader of the black knights, son of White Knight Leo (an actual Lunar 2 character), has come to the town to "claim taxes" for "broken buildings".  But everyone knows, and even Tao knows, that these guys actually only want too collect money for whatever reasons they have that they can't let the goddess know.  now if I rememebr it correctly, i think i drew it as Alvis forcing a woman and her child to pay taxes, but she was a homeless woman with a child, so she was beaten by guards for not obeying  :laughing11: and well, Tao, being all heroic and stuff saw this was wrong, so he climbed the top of a building, and with a justice-like feeling, he tossed his boomerang at the guards and knocked them out  :confused: yeah he's got skills. Anyway, Alvis is pissed now, and forced Tao to come down to fight like a man. Tao jumps off the roof, and in mid air, pulls out his blade created by his father, and clashes with Alvis, who also pulled out his blade to block. Alvis counters the attack and humilates Tao by tossing him, with Tao's back slammed to the wall (ouch...) And that moment, a soldier of the black knights reports to Alvis stating that their boss ordered to recruit more guards at this town by holding young men and boys captive. And, well Alvis took all the men and boss he could get, including Tao. When Tao wakes up, he is in a cell at the Black Knight's Fortress, with an old looking man in his 40's waking him up. this man Identifies himself as Ronfar, a powerful priest, (he's actually a funny ol heavy drunkard interested in women, hes a real character from Luanr 2 as well). Ronfar says that with a little effort, they can break free from this hell hole. It's simple, as the cell is only on this giant ship called the Dragonship Destiny, a ship former owned by White knight Leo, passed down to Lunar 2's main character Hiro, and then hi-jacked by Alvis  :laughing11: . With the cell being on a ship they can easily jump out to mainland. Ok so yeah they make some commotion and then the guard comes in and then Ronfar knocks him out with some heavy priest magic O.O and then they take a map and the keys to the cell, and break out. They jump off the DragonShip Destiny and then run off to the woods, only to run into an old friend of Ronfar's; Jean, a dancer of a traveling caravan, and another heroic kick-ass woman from Lunar 2. She was captured and trained in the atr of the shadow fist stlye as a child, and later learned the art of the blue dragon style from the same guy (lol, she didnt know, and she was pissed at him and then kicked his ass in an epic duel) yada yada yada that sums some of this story up.

AND NO, I WAS NOT SERIOUS ABOUT WRITING THAT JUST NOW, ITS JUST A LIL' SUMMARY  :icon_santa:
 


 
« Last Edit: November 16, 2008, 06:08:39 PM by Ryokoujin »
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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #1 on: November 16, 2008, 09:09:03 AM »
i kinda figured

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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #2 on: November 16, 2008, 11:07:40 AM »
THATS ALL YOU GOTTA SAY?  :confused:
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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2008, 04:24:13 PM »
pretty much never heard of the games before now.

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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2008, 05:51:02 PM »
i got bored after the first 4 words ><

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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2008, 06:29:00 PM »
DANG it this was a bad idea, bringing it to THIS forum......no one's even heard of this game i bet.
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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2008, 06:45:21 PM »
well that and it was boring :p

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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #7 on: November 18, 2008, 08:21:48 AM »
maybe if you actually right it out?

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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #8 on: November 18, 2008, 10:47:13 AM »
mmm if you write this properly it might be okay

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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #9 on: November 18, 2008, 05:28:10 PM »
im not writing this, in fact that was a lil summary of it, IM DRAWING THE STORY   :JC_cheesy: Its's better than writing, because if a picture is worth 1000 words, and my comics have like 100 panels, your eyes are in for a world of hurt.
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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #10 on: November 18, 2008, 05:38:42 PM »
actually the phrase is "a picture is worth a 1000 words"

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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #11 on: November 18, 2008, 05:47:49 PM »
i know, i made a typo and didnt realise it until you said so >.< ill edit it
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Re: Lunar 3: The Final Hour of Hope
« Reply #12 on: November 18, 2008, 05:48:49 PM »
oh

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