Vacant's Destined to Fail Attempt's at Drawing

[Vacant]

Hey guys, although I mainly focus on writing, I figured I'd be brave and post my humble efforts on here in the hope that it gets me to practice my drawing a little more. That way I could eventually draw a manga panel myself if I ever get decent enough! So here's a drawing I did about a year ago. It's a character from my Heavy Rayne Manga series (Chapters found here:http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,10286.0.html) and goes by the name of Seraph.....   

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[Killer B !!SAMA!!]

Practice clothing ang hand more by the way good

[Rojas]

Nice start, draw someone without such heavy clothing next. Only advice I can really give on this is umm the left hand/arm doesn't appear to show and looks a bit off.

[Vacant]

Found some more of my old drawings, I'm thinking I may just take up my pencil once more and try a few sketches soon, so i'd thought I'd throw a couple of these up.

First, we have the Titular character of my current series, Shio Rayne. I was pretty happy with the inking I did, until I decided to ruin it by applying colour I also realised his head is waaayyyy too big for his body, so I'm going to redraw this one and see if I can improve upon it!

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Next the Male and Agent Uniforms the characters wear, I know the girls boot is unfinished, but I thought I'd post it anyway, these were more for my own reference as to what the design of the Uniform would be.

Male Academy Uniform

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Female Academy Uniform

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[KagePen]

The coloring wasn't that bad, and I don't think the head was too big do the body. The problem imo is the length of the boy, it feels squashed and the limbs look a bit too pronounced in width. Anyway, nice designs, keep it up!

[Killer B !!SAMA!!]

haha good moremore

[legomaestro]

Oh, nice, I get to see their designs and stuff! Keep them coming. I like the way the outfit looks. Wait, doesn't shio have a blade of some sort?

[Vacant]

Yeah he does have a sword, it's holstered at his side, although I've done a poor job perspective wise to show it. I'm gonna bust out the old pencil and redraw that one, I've been meaning to for a while.

[legomaestro]

Looking forward to seeing it