So this is a gathering of my works. There are others but I’ll post them later along with any other ideas that come to me. Would love some critique, the harsher the better, to help make these series work. Thanks! ^^
Works Catalogue
Series’
EXO - Angels hold supernatural powers so they can maintain order and balance. The archangel is chosen by the being above all others but there was a mutiny. The protagonist lives with his elder brother and must unlock these strange powers to reclaim his throne. Progress: Needs major overhaul
Card Scan - Special cards gained the ability to become real. The company that created the game reveal that they have created a golden card that will grant any wish to its wielder. This turns the world into a barren wasteland as the people rob and murder in order to gain a better chance of finding the treasure. Yui lost her father because of the card, she aims to find it and bring him back to life. Progress: Needs substantial overhaul
Import - An out of luck mangaka finds a hidden room with portals to strange new worlds that resemble those of the works his colleagues claim to have created. Knowing this secret makes him a target, he must travers these manga worlds to survive. Progress: Needs major overhaul
1% - Orphans Mirai and Chiyuki are thrust between a battle between the holy Vatican and the roaming night terrors, the Baku. Chiyuki vanishes after the two are attacked by the dream eaters causing a deep anger to emerge in Mirai. He becomes a member of the Japanese branch of the holy army named Sandman. He is part of their task force giving him ample opportunity to find and free his missing sister. Progress: Chapters 1-3 completed, changes needed however
EWZ - Yamato Yuzuru is a freelance wrestler alongside his childhood friends and sibling students Sakurai Ichiro and Koizumi Hana. They are eventually spotted and given contracts from EWZ, the biggest promotion in the country. But Yuzuru’s past lingers over him like a time bomb slowly ticking away the time he has left being himself. Progress: One shot done, slight changes needed however second chapter ready to be started.
One Shots
Natsu No Kori - In this world the technological singularity rules over humans. It has created a perfect system, chooses everything that the citizens do in order to maintain efficiency. Hotaru is amongst the rebels and aims to restore order to mankind. Progress: Currently working on the base synopsis, trying to find the most intriguing plot.
Sedai Shoku - New inventions are put on the market in order to better the lives of humankind however one is held back, the time machine. The protagonist risks everything to find the parts to the machine, allowing him to go back and save his beloved. Progress: Needs tuning, plot is rather weak but is promising.
Incomplete Concepts
Scavengers: Hundreds of people live on a water locked island in 5 districts. Each part of the island have different resources and benefits to them. In each district are tribes of people, who all want to dominate all of the districts in order to control every resource. It is a war for natures assets. The main character lives in the central district that is constantly under attack due to it bordering every other district. Progress: Weak premise, needs serious work or deletion.
Immortals: After many years of research into stem cells, humans have found a cure for ageing, virtual reality. People transfer their consciousness into their own worlds. In these worlds people can buy whatever is available to them, everything from houses to lifestyles. Anything is possible in these worlds, you can change every single aspect about it and even yourself and your second life. Progress: Fairly interesting premise but will most probably be broken down and fused to create a stronger story.
Hacker Manga: The protagonist is a self proclaimed superhero, by day he is a regular student with an aptitude for computers but by night... he is a world renown hacker that police have searched for fruitlessly. He has transferred to a new school filled with many problems. He utilises his skills to defeat the wicked and save the day! Progress: A pretty good Shounen story reminiscent of Ashirogi Mut?’s “Perfect Crime Party”. Might need tuning and research but could be worth it.
Game Manga: Protagonist died and is greeted by an angel. This angel rules over limbo, a place between heaven and hell. The angel offers him a challenge, take part in a game, should he win he will be sent back to earth like he never died in the first place... but should he lose, his soul will be sent to hell. Progress: one of the weaker works. Either it’ll be deleted or drastic changes will be made.
Romance Manga: This is a story of a young homeless girl with a tragic past, and her saviour. Follow the story of the girl and a Good Samaritan. Progress: Needs fleshing out with details on both backstories and other characters to make it a feel good Shounen comedy
Psychological idea: The protagonist is two parts of a person. He hasnt got multiple personalities, it’s just that one part of him wishes to push him unto a goal he has had for many years and become successful, the other side aims to destroy this goal and put him in a direction that he believes he doesn’t want but deep down is tempted. The story is about the protagonist trying to figure out what he truly wants and to accept who he really is. Progress: This is a story capable of being a cult hit but it needs stellar writing and impeccable pacing, this should only be started when I am confident with my skills to do it justice.