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Develop Your Story / Re: Jumbled Idea Journal and Random Scribbles
« Last post by Coryn on December 10, 2018, 03:04:38 PM »
Well, you asked me to take a look at the dialogue, and I'm pretty sure I can offee some advice.


1. There is an awful lot of your characters just announcing what they feel/what is happening. This is the first thing on the list of dialogue don'ts. Nobody has ever proclaimed "I've been walking for days and I'M LOST!". The character already knows it, and obviously there's no one around to tell. Maybe if Magnolia had asked the question, he would have said it, but she certainly wasn't in scene yet. Have the character do something to express his being lost. Maybe he offers up a prayer to the gods asking for help. Oraybe he's angry and starts yelling at the map itssld. Just something that is coupled with an action.

2. Asher speaks in a very proper way. If he's supposed to be a country bumpkin, make him sound like a country bumpkin. Give him slang, contractions, poor grammar. It can be excused potentially by Magnolia, if she's from the fancy capital, but there should be an immediate difference between their speech patterns.


I have more thoughts, but duty calls. Those are the top two points though. I'll be back around later to add more.
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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Echo Archives
« Last post by Walter B on December 10, 2018, 01:12:29 PM »
Such cool hatching as always. Great work!
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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Suuper's manga (+digital and 3D)
« Last post by Walter B on December 10, 2018, 01:12:01 PM »
Nice purple hair! :)
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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Suuper's manga (+digital and 3D)
« Last post by suuper-san on December 10, 2018, 02:29:27 AM »
@echo thanks! doing the 1000 figures really loosened me up for the poses that I use when sketching rather than having them always facing dead forwards. hopefully I can increase the range even more in the future :)
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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Legomaestro's Art Box
« Last post by Echo_River on December 09, 2018, 10:21:32 PM »
Sweeeeeet animations! I get what you mean by it being scary. Draw one thing - then another thing - and then it moves:ohmy:
Neat work. I like the effect the action lines give.
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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Suuper's manga (+digital and 3D)
« Last post by Echo_River on December 09, 2018, 10:13:14 PM »
I think the purple haired girl still looks cute (or I just like purple-haired characters ;p) I like the way you do your lines and how the eyes are coloured.

Cool to see more poses in the second pic. The girl with her hands in her pockets is my favourite.
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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Echo Archives
« Last post by Echo_River on December 09, 2018, 10:08:33 PM »
So many Christmas music performances to go to... falls over
It's been fun but busy. I'm part of a brass band and a choir, then I'm trying to teach Christmas songs to my students...
Looking forward to having my holiday lol

@Lego You got me interested :ohmy: Why don't you? I'd love to see your interpretation for it, only if you're up to it though. No pressure XD Thanks so much though!

@Walter Thanks! ;D

@SlamJam Thank you!!

@Suuper Yeah haha I used a whole page for it too. It was fun to produce a piece pretty much by 'scribbles'. Thanks!


Update --

Inktober Days 28-31 the last of the batch featuring Shadow Child and Doctor River.

28 Hee Hee

29 In A Hurry

30 Random Encounter

31 Fateful Friendship
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MR Pub / Re: Chit Chat 2018
« Last post by Echo_River on December 09, 2018, 09:53:45 PM »
 :clapping:
Hope you can get to relax c:
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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Kesashi's Gallery
« Last post by Echo_River on December 09, 2018, 09:52:11 PM »
They all look great! My favourite is the purple wizard looking one.
Nice that you have someone else you're working with.
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break Room / Re: Xmas Raider MR
« Last post by MahluaandEggnog on December 09, 2018, 09:22:25 PM »
For the very easily cold Mahlua:

>a purple beanie
>very thick hoodie with the hood up to double layer over the beanie. long sleeve. front pocket. there are probably at least two other longsleeve shirts under it.
>regular black gloves under green fingerless gloves.
>tripp pants made of a nice snow-repelling fabric. probably got a pair of jeans under them, and skinny jeans or leggings under the jeans.
>there'll be some thick snow boots going on, probably lined with fur, even though I wouldn't feel the fur given two layers of kneesocks.

THE COLD WILL NEVER STAND A CHANCE AGAINST MY INSULATION TACTICS.
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