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Messages - legomaestro

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Develop Your Story / Re: The Fall
« on: February 01, 2018, 07:45:39 AM »
You bastard! What the hell! Shut off your psychic powers NAUW. Geez it's always too creepy how you guess these things.

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Manga Creations / Re: BLACK PINE H: MR
« on: February 01, 2018, 07:44:25 AM »
Oh gawd I'm losing braincells! How could I forget hahahaha.

And yeah I needed to keep it PG 13... So only stabbing and slashing and general blood allowed. No skull bashing.

It just occured to me writing a sequel to Black Pine would be impossible. Read The Science Division Raid Arc in Day of 1,000 Styles to see why haha. It's weird how Canon mutates like this.


Medal is going to be made, bro

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Manga Creations / Re: MRverse: The Return of the Drifter
« on: February 01, 2018, 07:42:26 AM »
*Steps out of room full of screaming and the smell of sulphur

Can confirm

*Returns to room


I'm the main issue here atm. Just so lazy at plugging in the script. But when I get over that hurdle it'll be a purely asset-based problem. I'm working on it though.


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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Animations Art Gallery
« on: February 01, 2018, 07:40:49 AM »
Kawaii desu nee. Nice work there dude!

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Write A Story in 6 Words
« on: February 01, 2018, 07:40:05 AM »
Fro, starting a zombie apocalypse

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MR Pub / Re: Chit Chat 2018
« on: February 01, 2018, 07:39:46 AM »
A wild AA, A wild Nair appeared.

I'll try to get to your community project at a point Operative. My head is everywhere this days but on forum stuff. Trying to focus more methinks.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Galactic Raiders
« on: February 01, 2018, 07:38:18 AM »
Sigh, I remember I once had a fleet of awesome known as the black knights. Good old days, now slime monsters are attacking me!

Follow strange individual I guess

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Develop Your Story / The Fall
« on: February 01, 2018, 07:11:35 AM »
I need to flex my writing muscles in any way possible. So what better way than to make some MR Canon? This may or may not be a short story depending on how fast I abandon it or not. I need to finish the other ones that I started, but really at this point I just need momentum rather than always stressing about what I haven't done yet. So here goes nothing. (I'll move this to Creations if I finish it.)


[Decrypting Classified files]

[Operation: Revengers]


The Fall
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQggvJx_kFA





"Hold the line." Sai said calmly, his dual wielded pistols singing a chorus of death to the spam ninjas.

"What Line!?" Doodler swung her broadsword and cleaved through a mass of jumping ninjas. Even as they dissipated into destroyed html code more came to fill the place. There were enough of them to darken the sky. 


There was a roar of a sniper rifle, and a bright flash as a light-based spell stunned the hoard, and in the next minute after some more desperate shooting from Sai and slashing from Doodler, the spam ninjas were eradicated.


Doodler coughed and stabbed her broadsword into the dark sand.

"That was too close."  Toasty said, walking over with his 50. Cal sniper rifle over his shoulder.

"We're just tired." Monsterful sighed as he walked over to them.

They were standing in a massive desert . The sand was black and glittery, above them was a vista of stars and spinning galaxies. A completely clean look into space without any clouds or atmospheric distortions to hide the view. It was an awing sight, but in a sombre, dark sort of way.  They were far from The City. Very far.

It seemed appropriate for the wretched situation.

"Are Nair and Lego still out?"  Sai asked, scanning the horizon for any future attacks.

"Yeaup." Toasty nodded towards two unonscious forms in the sand, "Hasith and Co. Are going to kill us."

Sai smirked, "I thought we all agreed we're going to kill you first. Let's just get back home. "

"Nope. I'm resting for a moment."   Doodler said.

The raiders themselves - moderators to be more specific - weren't in good shape. They were all battered and bruised in one way or the other. Hair ruffled, dried blood on their lips. Their clothes were made of Mysias thread of the highest calibre, but even it was starting to tear. They'd been through countless battles in their long trek back to The City. 

There was a groan as Lego finally gained consciousness. Toasty walked over to him and offered a hand,

"Welcome to the land of the living."

"Guh." Was Lego's reply, "What did I miss?"

"Oh, just about a thousand spam ninjas. It was pretty epic."

"You lucky bastards." Lego grinned. His right eye was swollen shut.

"It's amazing how many you see hanging around trolls." Monsterful said.

"Yeah well, misery loves company." Sai said.

Lego balled his fist. "More than getting knocked out by cannon fodder, it pisses me off that we didn't get at least one of them. And whoever that traitor is I swear ..." 

Sai held up a finger, "No point in worrying about that now, Lego. Your mission failed. That's what got you guys in this jam in the first place. And make no mistake, you guys are in trouble. But for now, gather strength and focus on the task at hand. "

"Roger, roger." Lego grimaced and sat down in the sand. He just stared at the ground, hanted.


Doodler and Sai exhanged glances, and then walked off a bit from the four raiders. Toasty began checking his anti-material rifle while looking around.


"Should we even tell Co and Hasith about this?" Sai said in a low tone.

Doodler shrugged, "They're strict about rules and stuff, but it's not like their hearts weren't in the right place."

Sai shook his head, "Musick got-"

"No." Doodler refused the thought, "She isn't. She'll be fine. Any one of them could be in the same situation, and any one of them would make a way out. She's a ninja. She'll make her way to us."

"So we don't say anything?" Sai asked.

"Let's just deal with getting to the portal we used, and try to put some distance between us and the hoard."

"Fine by me. Man, Coryn is going to be pissed we didn't bring him along."

"Not our fault he locks himself up in the lab all the time."

"Well, at least he didn't need to see us get our asses kicked by that spam monster."


The two raiders spent the next few moments in silence, waiting for things to get busy again, waiting for the next hoard to attack.

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Members Workshops / Re: The Day Of 1,000 Styles
« on: February 01, 2018, 06:38:08 AM »
Style 51 - The Ghost With The Machine

Legomaestro woke up with a hangover of the ages.

Songs would be sung of the excruciating levels of pain it brought him, but in the cat-man's defence, he and Coryn had had a particularly traumatic 2 years of being stuck in a stasis field to forget, and a return to normalcy to celebrate.

Relatively.

For this was Mangaraiders, and nothing was ever normal here.

For now, he had a hangover to cure. He'd need meat. Meat and lots of water. And a day spent in bed. It's not like there was much of anything else in his house.

Lego had an odd minimalistic mansion of a place. It was preposterously large, and even more ridiculous in how little furniture it had. It consisted of white marble floors, large one-way glass windows and stairways made of dark wood. Furniture always consisted of singular black plastic chairs set behind desks that determined the use of the room: His living room had a sofa facing an abstract geometric painting. His office had a table with a typewriter. His bedroom had a simple futon with no beddings. When he was a cat he abhorred the place, but the human side of him seemed to enjoy this strange mis-match of space and furniture.

He was taking a sip of water when there was a flash of light and he found himself sitting in darkness.

"Eh?"

He looked around, shocked to see that the entire world had been rendered to white lines in black space. Where his feet touched the ground there were white glowing spots, but otherwise everything else was rendered in this strange Tron-esque world.

Someone had the remote.

"Oh for heavens' sake!" He sighed.

"Coryn, I thought we're done with this thing! Let it die! The joke is old! The storys's done!"

No Coryn.

Come to think of it. He could see past the walls of his house out to the rest of the city. It was a bit tricky but he studied the scene as much as he could and found that indeed, the rest of MR was where it should've been. But it was completely empty.


Was he alone in this universe?

[/spoiler


You know, I'd been sitting on the description of Raider houses for some future canon, but that was aaages ago. I'll use that up here for MRDTS.

I'll be up for a chapter next week, but feel free to come along when you wish.

Otherwise stay tuned for next Tuesday! I have some ideas here.


And did I mention the Science Division Arc was a goldmine of Canon shenanigans? No? Then I'm saying it again.

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Members Workshops / Re: MR fanart
« on: February 01, 2018, 05:00:17 AM »
Yeaup and @Coryn TsukiokaLoli, that's who I was talking about

Man, Nyxy like made a proto-version of the happy hour. How could I forget that.

And also quite shocked that Churro never showed up in canon. Or did she?

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Develop Your Story / Re: Galactic Raiders
« on: January 31, 2018, 06:07:23 PM »
I thought Fortis Scriptor was a legend of the darkness. Nice to see you around again, dude.

Okay I need a lot of rebooting to know where I am, but I've caught up to the latest chapter.

Two small things I just wanted to point out

Writing in present is awesomeness defined... But hard to pull off. Please read Snow Crash by Neal Stephenson. That or Black House by Peter Straub and Steven King. They are bibles of the genre. You shall understand everything that needs to be done to make such scripts amazing. Keep at it man haha. I love writing in the style.


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That's when one of the agents quickly take out the other and pull Khei off of Fearal in a chokehold. Before Khei can fight back, he is quickly knocked out with a chop to the back of his head.

The present-tense style  is based on the fact that it describes every minute action. So summarizing what could be a great action scene with 'quickly take out the other'  or 'he is quickly knocked out' are no nos. How exactly did the agent 'take out the other?' What's the biggest noticeable factor about his features ? Is he bald headed? Big? Does he have an expression when he does it?

Also, words that end with '-ly' tend to make for unexplained instances in stories, so try to avoid them as much as you can.



Ahem. So, I am a lazy creature of the night so I sort of forgot where I was? Help me out here, Roshiro. I remember WhiteCrow being supposedly dead, but I'm not sure.

All I know is that I want my hair back.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Legomaestro's Art Box
« on: January 31, 2018, 05:41:41 PM »
Gaah! There were actually two typos there, so I've gone ahead and fixed them. I'll update the pages.

Thankee Walter B! Man, landscapes are impossible. I definitely need to flex those muscles more methinks. Like, what are stick figures for backgrounds? I need to do a thousand of those before I get a feel for it.

Monster fight incoming indeed.


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One chapter before I officially feel like this is a main comic. I've really got to get back to Penance, though.

All I know is that I should've been doing at least storyboards from a wayyys back. I got too caught up in the illustrative process of making yet-another-badass-slash-hot-looking-character that I completely forgot why I joined the forum: I wanted to make manga. I'm so hard wired to worry about profile shots of characters instead of seeing how they interact with eachother with meaningful dialogue in sequential art. I'm going to definitely head down that road now.

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Members Manga / Re: Odicia
« on: January 29, 2018, 06:09:48 PM »
4 years later, and what an improvement in art style and the like. The colouring has really made the pages jump out now. Pretty cool.

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Manga Creations / Re: MRverse: The Return of the Drifter
« on: January 29, 2018, 06:08:05 PM »
Geh, now I'm super curious about who it was and why they didn't stick around. Nice work there though for sure. He feels really like he's standing in place and the arm looks on the thin side but it feels well proportioned.

Highschooler Fro looking ready to sit on the back-window-seat like a proper shounen protagonist haha

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Manga Creations / Re: BLACK PINE H: MR
« on: January 29, 2018, 06:06:30 PM »
Damn, son. Don't you know zombies eat you when you dig up graves?

You deserve a medal for this, truly. That's some titan effort right there. Wait, definitely not telling you to do anything about it but did you already read Dystop? Because that's still part of my canon literature.

I feel super motivated to make more now. And hah! I loved that death scene man. It was hilarious. And haha! I didn't even know I was going for the black guy thing till you mentioned it. To be fair, a lot of people already bit it waaay before the raiders came in to check stuff out.

I wanted Black Pine to be video-game like on purpose. From the chapter titles to the speed to the convenient challenges the characters face in every 'level'.


Cheers again Frono!

Spoiler
Haha if. And that's a huuge if. If there's a sequel sure, I'll write you in the sequel of death and despair.

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