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Music / Re: What are you listening to
« on: July 20, 2010, 12:54:07 AM »
Save Ourselves (The Warning) - The Blackout
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MR Pub / Re: ^>V Direction Game
« on: July 20, 2010, 12:52:21 AM »
^ Fish makes me nervous. There's always some foreign delicacy that has been left rotten for some time and tinned for people to eat. *blegh!* bad memories...
< Too bad about the art skills. I'm at rock bottom all the times, though.
V Greatest artistic achievement.
< Too bad about the art skills. I'm at rock bottom all the times, though.
V Greatest artistic achievement.
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Develop Your Story / Re: Chimera
« on: July 20, 2010, 12:46:48 AM »
Cool character sketches. I like the pro-violence kid!
CH8 Gangster? Hmmmm.
Cool! Interesting! Nice!
CH8 Gangster? Hmmmm.
Cool! Interesting! Nice!
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MR Pub / Re: Comeback/holidays/departure notice.
« on: July 20, 2010, 12:35:37 AM »
Yosemite! Nice, must've been quite an adventure.
Welcome back Animedoodler!
Welcome back Animedoodler!
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Music / Re: What are you listening to
« on: July 19, 2010, 06:21:50 PM »
Centuries of Knowledge mistaken for Omniscience - So Long Forgotten (Indies has such cool lyrics)
me sleep now... Z.z
Sumi you sure like anberlin!
me sleep now... Z.z
Sumi you sure like anberlin!
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Music / Re: What are you listening to
« on: July 19, 2010, 06:15:15 PM »
Empty walls - Serj Tankian
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Suggestions And Feedback / Re: Anniversary competition
« on: July 19, 2010, 05:40:13 PM »
Interesting. I can honestly only sit and wait to see what happens. Have no suggestions to make, unfortunately.
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Music / Re: What are you listening to
« on: July 19, 2010, 05:36:19 PM »
Fly Me away... i've... heard that song... somewhere... nostalgic brain tingle!
*listening to nothing*
*listening to nothing*
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MR Pub / Re: MORTAL COMBAT!!!!!!!!
« on: July 19, 2010, 05:13:46 PM »
"What does it mean? My spanish sucks T-T"
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Manga Creations / Re: Kingfisher
« on: July 19, 2010, 04:54:12 PM »
2. Crimson II (Before Aftermath II)
Rex stood up, and looked in the horizon where Yolanda had taken off to. She was long gone from anyone’s view, hidden by tall pyramids, but he raised his great, golden hand in the direction anyway.
All ten hooks flew through the air in the direction he had faced. They coiled and sped with golden flame falling from their chains. The hooks themselves looked larger and were sharper.
Regina, trying to survive being pushed off the building, realized the shape the flames made together: A hawk. A golden hawk… this is…
The top of pyramids in the way of the hawk formation didn’t stand. Entire top floors of buildings were blasted away violently.
“Rex!” Regina screamed, but this person didn’t reply. He stared in the direction, keeping his hooks flying.
… Yolanda was flying through the air, her blue hair flapping. She smiled as she looked at the book in her hands:
I wonder… how it looks inside.
She began to turn a page to read from it…
“! Yaa!”
She screamed in surprise and pain as chains and hooks wrapped around her body painfully. Two hooks punctured her legs, and she screamed, holding out her hands, which were also wrapped up, forcing her to hold on to the book and sword.
Yolanda was suddenly flying backwards, and found herself turning in the air. She found she was returning to the tower she had run from.
Wha- what’s that golden light? She wondered. But soon she knew as she was pulled close enough. Yolanda looked down at the terrible sight of a demon with gold hands and a golden belt, with eyes that shone like the sun while they cried golden tears.
Regina watched as Rex held Yolanda up. He muttered in an unnatural voice: “Porto Daemonis.”
Yolanda screamed as the hooks spun off her, spinning her wildly in the air.
The hooks rushed beyond her, and vanished into the air. There was a massive tearing sound, then the sound of an explosion, and the world seemed to darken.
A flaming black rift appeared in the air, flashing white within as though there was lighting. It spun and vibrated in the air, roaring occasionally with thunder and causing a wailing wind that sucked anything loose. Crystal blades and a harpoon flew into the portal.
Regina stared, completely shocked as she understood this danger: DAMNIT! A CLASS ZERO! She stabbed the floor with her blade to catch a rift.
The unconscious Reyuu rolled towards the portal, pulled by the rift. Regina shot her hooks at the woman’s leg, keeping her from being sucked into the rift. However her hook snapped, and Reyuu was pulled into the black depths of the portal, along with the hook.
“Mercy!” Yolanda screamed as she faced this same fate. She was only held by one hook coiled around her waist.
“Rex!” Regina screamed in the wailing wind and sound of thunder, “STOP THIS NOW!”
“Takaroma!” Yolanda threw the book to Rex, “Take it! I’m so-”
A hook landed in the center of her skull, and Yolanda remained silent.
The hook and chain that killed her threw her into the rift like garbage, and then returned to Rex’s nelt, who stood there watching the rift swirl and swallow. The very tower began to vibrate now, and The other still bodies began moving to it.
“Rex! Close it! NOW!”
Rex looked at Regina with his unseeing, golden eyes.
No time. Regina thought.
She took the sword out of the stone and rushed forward to Rex. She stabbed him through the side of his stomach, and twisted the blade. Rex coughed blood and his eyes returned to normal.
The hooks flew away from the rift, and it sunk smaller, but remained vicious. Regina brought up her left hand and sent six of her hooks to it, spinning and trying to shrink the portal. Regina strained for a few moments, and sealed the portal. It closed with a loud bang.
However not before all the hooks she sent fell into it as well… Forever lost.
Regina and Rex found themselves falling down, since they had unknowingly been leaning in one direction against the force of the rift. There they stayed in silence...
Rex stood up, and looked in the horizon where Yolanda had taken off to. She was long gone from anyone’s view, hidden by tall pyramids, but he raised his great, golden hand in the direction anyway.
All ten hooks flew through the air in the direction he had faced. They coiled and sped with golden flame falling from their chains. The hooks themselves looked larger and were sharper.
Regina, trying to survive being pushed off the building, realized the shape the flames made together: A hawk. A golden hawk… this is…
The top of pyramids in the way of the hawk formation didn’t stand. Entire top floors of buildings were blasted away violently.
“Rex!” Regina screamed, but this person didn’t reply. He stared in the direction, keeping his hooks flying.
… Yolanda was flying through the air, her blue hair flapping. She smiled as she looked at the book in her hands:
I wonder… how it looks inside.
She began to turn a page to read from it…
“! Yaa!”
She screamed in surprise and pain as chains and hooks wrapped around her body painfully. Two hooks punctured her legs, and she screamed, holding out her hands, which were also wrapped up, forcing her to hold on to the book and sword.
Yolanda was suddenly flying backwards, and found herself turning in the air. She found she was returning to the tower she had run from.
Wha- what’s that golden light? She wondered. But soon she knew as she was pulled close enough. Yolanda looked down at the terrible sight of a demon with gold hands and a golden belt, with eyes that shone like the sun while they cried golden tears.
Regina watched as Rex held Yolanda up. He muttered in an unnatural voice: “Porto Daemonis.”
Yolanda screamed as the hooks spun off her, spinning her wildly in the air.
The hooks rushed beyond her, and vanished into the air. There was a massive tearing sound, then the sound of an explosion, and the world seemed to darken.
A flaming black rift appeared in the air, flashing white within as though there was lighting. It spun and vibrated in the air, roaring occasionally with thunder and causing a wailing wind that sucked anything loose. Crystal blades and a harpoon flew into the portal.
Regina stared, completely shocked as she understood this danger: DAMNIT! A CLASS ZERO! She stabbed the floor with her blade to catch a rift.
The unconscious Reyuu rolled towards the portal, pulled by the rift. Regina shot her hooks at the woman’s leg, keeping her from being sucked into the rift. However her hook snapped, and Reyuu was pulled into the black depths of the portal, along with the hook.
“Mercy!” Yolanda screamed as she faced this same fate. She was only held by one hook coiled around her waist.
“Rex!” Regina screamed in the wailing wind and sound of thunder, “STOP THIS NOW!”
“Takaroma!” Yolanda threw the book to Rex, “Take it! I’m so-”
A hook landed in the center of her skull, and Yolanda remained silent.
The hook and chain that killed her threw her into the rift like garbage, and then returned to Rex’s nelt, who stood there watching the rift swirl and swallow. The very tower began to vibrate now, and The other still bodies began moving to it.
“Rex! Close it! NOW!”
Rex looked at Regina with his unseeing, golden eyes.
No time. Regina thought.
She took the sword out of the stone and rushed forward to Rex. She stabbed him through the side of his stomach, and twisted the blade. Rex coughed blood and his eyes returned to normal.
The hooks flew away from the rift, and it sunk smaller, but remained vicious. Regina brought up her left hand and sent six of her hooks to it, spinning and trying to shrink the portal. Regina strained for a few moments, and sealed the portal. It closed with a loud bang.
However not before all the hooks she sent fell into it as well… Forever lost.
Regina and Rex found themselves falling down, since they had unknowingly been leaning in one direction against the force of the rift. There they stayed in silence...
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Manga Creations / Re: Kingfisher
« on: July 19, 2010, 04:50:22 PM »
The 2nd to last chapter. A whopping 2300 words! But it’s all action… and something else. Tomorrow is the last chapter then I'm DONE! (nd I start corrections T-T)
[for web's sake, i broke it into two pieces.]
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CHAPTER FOUR: CRIMSON BEGINNING
1. Crimson I (Before Aftermath I)
The fight had exploded into action. The pirate-soldier known as Tex had fired his weapon at Rex and Regina, and they had been forced to jump and roll out of the way of its explosive bullets that blew up huge holes into the floor.
Hart had smiled at this missed attack and suddenly fired his large gun twice at Tex, who had stepped away from the pink, stretched fireballs, which exploded into the face of a pyramid as Tex jumped away from them.
…Regina had thrown five of her hooks at Yolanda, but Reyuu had jumped and slapped them away her black, metal hand.
Reyuu screamed to Regina underneath the black facemask, “She’s mine!”
She then turned to fulfill her challenge. She jumped towards Yolanda and took her up in the air with a flying jump. Yolanda gasped in pain, but quickly recovered and slashed down at Reyuu’s shoulders with both of her blades.
Reyuu was forced to dodge the strikes, leaving Yolanda falling free. However two cloths wrapped around her arms and blew outwards to leave long, white ‘wing’s’, allowing the pirate to fly. She smiled and rushed to Reyuu with her two swords ready to slice.
…Aikichi had still been rolled up in the silver cloth, and Rex ran to catch her, but two spikes were shot down at Rex. Aiming for the kill. He only had enough time to step away and found himself with two green spikes stuck into his right shoulder.
“Aah!” Rex shouted in pain. Blood flowed and his right hand weakened.
Rex pulled the spikes out with his left hand and faced his attacker: Thousand. The mutant freak, who was now a green beast resembling a mix between a fish and bull, with his feet arranged like that of a bull, and a face like of a fish. His skin was slimy and gray, and his tattered clothes were spread across his unnatural body strangely.
Thousand smiled, “No girl until we get the book, Takaroma!” He shouted in a squeaky voice.
Rex glared, and raised his left hand. A silver hook and chain flew towards Thousand, who rolled away and spat two more spikes from his fish-mouth.
Two hooks and chains rose from Rex’s belt and made tight circles in the air, forming two small ‘shields’ which blocked these spikes.
The ‘shields’ then quickly attacked Thousand, who jumped in the air and spat more spikes.
Rex rolled away again…
… Regina stood there unsure as battle unfurled. In front of her, Hart fired his gun at Tex, who dodged and fired his own gun as well. The two men dodged each explosive, and the ones fired by Tex flew over Regina’s head narrowly, blowing up on the pyramids behind her.
It’s amazing none of them have died already. She thought.
- But she was rudely disturbed, as two harpoons shot at Regina from beside her. She turned to face the harpoons and flipped backwards, and they flew over her head. Regina landed on her feet and found herself facing the man Rex had called ‘Harper’.
He was aiming his harpoon gun at her. Regina slashed up her left hand with three fingers extended and sent three hooks from her sling after him. Harper pulled a gear on his harpoon gun, and an umbrella of skyblue light appeared at the neck of his gun.
The hooks bounced off the ‘umbrella’, and Regina screamed as electric shock burst through her, conducted from hook to chain to her body. She fell backwards onto the ground, finding that she was completely unable to control her body.
Two harpoons flew over Regina.
Flying backwards… She noticed: Harper was collecting the two harpoons he had shot at her.
After he was finished with this, he walked over to Regina, kneeled over her, and dug his gloved hand in the pockets of trenchoat that was wrapped around Regina’s waist.
He pulled out the book, and stepped away. Regina couldn’t tell if he smiled or not, through that large helmet he wore.
He raised his hand in triumph in the direction of Yolanda and Reyuu’s fight.
“I have it!” He screamed, stupidly. Unaware that this would shift all focus to him.
…Hart turned from fighting Tex and saw Harper raising The Legendary Treasure in his hand, and immediately turned his gun on him. Tex took this chance to aim a pistol at Hart’s head.
“Learn to watch your back, Hart!” Tex shouted with an angry smile. Hart didn’t even turn his head.
There was a loud metallic slash and the sound of sliced flesh, then blood rained on the floor, and Tex fell forwards in two halves, with a face of angry pain.
“Learn to watch your's.” Reyuu said, standing over Tex. The underside of her hand was now a sharp blade that dripped blood, proving her guilty of Tex’s death.
“Run, you idiot!”
Yolanda screamed from where she was. Her shoulder was bloody, and she held one sword her right hand. Her other blade was stabbed on the center of the roof in a pile of stained white cloths.
Harper began running slowly in his heavy suit. He headed for the edge of the building. Hart aimed his weapon, and charged it. The tip of the gun glowed pink. Reyuu simply watched.
Rex was dodging spikes, so he couldn’t do anything. Regina was still paralyzed.
Hart fired his charged shot, just as Harper was about to jump to his freedom, and the pink flame blasted the floor in front of him.
Finally the roof had reached its limit: cracks formed on the floor instantly, and the whole level crumbled downwards with loud sounds of shattering glass and instruments on the floor below.
Rex, Thousand, Hart and Reyuu jumped and landed as properly as they could on the new, jumbled floor, while Regina tumbled helplessly. Her side on a piece of glass, and she gasped in pain. However this also served as a cure for her paralysis, because she found she could finally move her body.
Regina turned her head, and found that she was looking at Harper. He was lying against a piece of remaining wall, while holding his harpoon gun out, preparing for any attack. She rolled backwards into a squat, then jumped straight at Harper with her sword preparing for a slice.
Harper fired all his harpoons at her, but he was wounded too badly to hit Regina. The harpoons hit different parts of the room harmlessly. Regina slashed her sword sideways, and Harper remained still.
The severity of the cut was only known when the piece of wall behind Harper fell over him, covering his body up to his boots: The sword had passed through both flesh and stone… The book tumbled out of Harper’s hand, and Regina reached for it-
“!”
A vicious surprise attack from above!
Regina raised her sword in defense and blocked the wakishashi slash aimed at her head. Regina was pushed down from the strong force, and couldn’t avoid the following kick to her stomach. Regina flew backwards and rolled on wood, stone and glass.
Yolanda squatted and picked up the book with her weak left hand. She turned with a desperate look in her eyes: “Thousand! I expect you to do everything to avenge your friends and help me escape!”
She jumped up and away, flying with dirty cloths. Hart and Reyuu began running towards her.
“No you don’t!” Reyuu screamed in defiance as she began jumping-
But Thousand was away from Rex and in front of her in an instant. He curled into a ball, and unfurled into a fish faced being with a fat, bloated body that lined with green crystal blades.
“Take this!”
He exploded, and the spikes flew in every direction.
-Reyuu was hit in the shoulder. The crystal spike easily went through her black armor, and stuck out from the other side. She gasped, and fell to the ground. Her face plate and helmet disappeared, letting her hair cover her face. She remained there unconscious.
- “REYUU!” Hart screamed in shock and he was hit in the shoulder as well. He stumbled back, and fell off the building.
-Rex had begun running towards Yolanda, when the hundreds of crystal blades had flown. He ran and performed a backflip. A sharp blade ran along his chest, cutting a thin line but otherwise missing him whole. Rex landed on the floor in a heap.
- Regina rolled away from the blades, and came to her feet, jumping towards the now spikeless Thousand. He only had a moment to widen his ugly eyes before Regina stabbed him with her silver sword.
He coughed pitifully as it cut his mutant insides. Regina then kicked him off the building. He flew like a strange sort of ball, spilling green alien blood all over the floor.
Regina looked at Rex, “Rex! Yolanda is getting away! We have to-”
That was when she noticed what had happened to Aikichi…
The once floating silver balloon was punctured with spikes, and blood poured from it. Rex was pulling out the crystals and throwing them away. He started shaking his sister’s body frantically, “Aikichi… Aikichi! Aikichi!!!”
Regina grabbed Rex’s shoulder, “Rex, she’s dead!”
“NO!” He screamed.
“!!” Regina was pushed back by a blast of golden light and force pushed Regina back. Her tied up hair came undone and flew backwards in wild bands.
“Rex!?” Regina shaded her eyes in the light.
Rex’s belt shone gold, his hands shone gold, and his eyes cried tears of gold and burst golden light as bright as the sun. He was completely changed.
[for web's sake, i broke it into two pieces.]
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CHAPTER FOUR: CRIMSON BEGINNING
1. Crimson I (Before Aftermath I)
The fight had exploded into action. The pirate-soldier known as Tex had fired his weapon at Rex and Regina, and they had been forced to jump and roll out of the way of its explosive bullets that blew up huge holes into the floor.
Hart had smiled at this missed attack and suddenly fired his large gun twice at Tex, who had stepped away from the pink, stretched fireballs, which exploded into the face of a pyramid as Tex jumped away from them.
…Regina had thrown five of her hooks at Yolanda, but Reyuu had jumped and slapped them away her black, metal hand.
Reyuu screamed to Regina underneath the black facemask, “She’s mine!”
She then turned to fulfill her challenge. She jumped towards Yolanda and took her up in the air with a flying jump. Yolanda gasped in pain, but quickly recovered and slashed down at Reyuu’s shoulders with both of her blades.
Reyuu was forced to dodge the strikes, leaving Yolanda falling free. However two cloths wrapped around her arms and blew outwards to leave long, white ‘wing’s’, allowing the pirate to fly. She smiled and rushed to Reyuu with her two swords ready to slice.
…Aikichi had still been rolled up in the silver cloth, and Rex ran to catch her, but two spikes were shot down at Rex. Aiming for the kill. He only had enough time to step away and found himself with two green spikes stuck into his right shoulder.
“Aah!” Rex shouted in pain. Blood flowed and his right hand weakened.
Rex pulled the spikes out with his left hand and faced his attacker: Thousand. The mutant freak, who was now a green beast resembling a mix between a fish and bull, with his feet arranged like that of a bull, and a face like of a fish. His skin was slimy and gray, and his tattered clothes were spread across his unnatural body strangely.
Thousand smiled, “No girl until we get the book, Takaroma!” He shouted in a squeaky voice.
Rex glared, and raised his left hand. A silver hook and chain flew towards Thousand, who rolled away and spat two more spikes from his fish-mouth.
Two hooks and chains rose from Rex’s belt and made tight circles in the air, forming two small ‘shields’ which blocked these spikes.
The ‘shields’ then quickly attacked Thousand, who jumped in the air and spat more spikes.
Rex rolled away again…
… Regina stood there unsure as battle unfurled. In front of her, Hart fired his gun at Tex, who dodged and fired his own gun as well. The two men dodged each explosive, and the ones fired by Tex flew over Regina’s head narrowly, blowing up on the pyramids behind her.
It’s amazing none of them have died already. She thought.
- But she was rudely disturbed, as two harpoons shot at Regina from beside her. She turned to face the harpoons and flipped backwards, and they flew over her head. Regina landed on her feet and found herself facing the man Rex had called ‘Harper’.
He was aiming his harpoon gun at her. Regina slashed up her left hand with three fingers extended and sent three hooks from her sling after him. Harper pulled a gear on his harpoon gun, and an umbrella of skyblue light appeared at the neck of his gun.
The hooks bounced off the ‘umbrella’, and Regina screamed as electric shock burst through her, conducted from hook to chain to her body. She fell backwards onto the ground, finding that she was completely unable to control her body.
Two harpoons flew over Regina.
Flying backwards… She noticed: Harper was collecting the two harpoons he had shot at her.
After he was finished with this, he walked over to Regina, kneeled over her, and dug his gloved hand in the pockets of trenchoat that was wrapped around Regina’s waist.
He pulled out the book, and stepped away. Regina couldn’t tell if he smiled or not, through that large helmet he wore.
He raised his hand in triumph in the direction of Yolanda and Reyuu’s fight.
“I have it!” He screamed, stupidly. Unaware that this would shift all focus to him.
…Hart turned from fighting Tex and saw Harper raising The Legendary Treasure in his hand, and immediately turned his gun on him. Tex took this chance to aim a pistol at Hart’s head.
“Learn to watch your back, Hart!” Tex shouted with an angry smile. Hart didn’t even turn his head.
There was a loud metallic slash and the sound of sliced flesh, then blood rained on the floor, and Tex fell forwards in two halves, with a face of angry pain.
“Learn to watch your's.” Reyuu said, standing over Tex. The underside of her hand was now a sharp blade that dripped blood, proving her guilty of Tex’s death.
“Run, you idiot!”
Yolanda screamed from where she was. Her shoulder was bloody, and she held one sword her right hand. Her other blade was stabbed on the center of the roof in a pile of stained white cloths.
Harper began running slowly in his heavy suit. He headed for the edge of the building. Hart aimed his weapon, and charged it. The tip of the gun glowed pink. Reyuu simply watched.
Rex was dodging spikes, so he couldn’t do anything. Regina was still paralyzed.
Hart fired his charged shot, just as Harper was about to jump to his freedom, and the pink flame blasted the floor in front of him.
Finally the roof had reached its limit: cracks formed on the floor instantly, and the whole level crumbled downwards with loud sounds of shattering glass and instruments on the floor below.
Rex, Thousand, Hart and Reyuu jumped and landed as properly as they could on the new, jumbled floor, while Regina tumbled helplessly. Her side on a piece of glass, and she gasped in pain. However this also served as a cure for her paralysis, because she found she could finally move her body.
Regina turned her head, and found that she was looking at Harper. He was lying against a piece of remaining wall, while holding his harpoon gun out, preparing for any attack. She rolled backwards into a squat, then jumped straight at Harper with her sword preparing for a slice.
Harper fired all his harpoons at her, but he was wounded too badly to hit Regina. The harpoons hit different parts of the room harmlessly. Regina slashed her sword sideways, and Harper remained still.
The severity of the cut was only known when the piece of wall behind Harper fell over him, covering his body up to his boots: The sword had passed through both flesh and stone… The book tumbled out of Harper’s hand, and Regina reached for it-
“!”
A vicious surprise attack from above!
Regina raised her sword in defense and blocked the wakishashi slash aimed at her head. Regina was pushed down from the strong force, and couldn’t avoid the following kick to her stomach. Regina flew backwards and rolled on wood, stone and glass.
Yolanda squatted and picked up the book with her weak left hand. She turned with a desperate look in her eyes: “Thousand! I expect you to do everything to avenge your friends and help me escape!”
She jumped up and away, flying with dirty cloths. Hart and Reyuu began running towards her.
“No you don’t!” Reyuu screamed in defiance as she began jumping-
But Thousand was away from Rex and in front of her in an instant. He curled into a ball, and unfurled into a fish faced being with a fat, bloated body that lined with green crystal blades.
“Take this!”
He exploded, and the spikes flew in every direction.
-Reyuu was hit in the shoulder. The crystal spike easily went through her black armor, and stuck out from the other side. She gasped, and fell to the ground. Her face plate and helmet disappeared, letting her hair cover her face. She remained there unconscious.
- “REYUU!” Hart screamed in shock and he was hit in the shoulder as well. He stumbled back, and fell off the building.
-Rex had begun running towards Yolanda, when the hundreds of crystal blades had flown. He ran and performed a backflip. A sharp blade ran along his chest, cutting a thin line but otherwise missing him whole. Rex landed on the floor in a heap.
- Regina rolled away from the blades, and came to her feet, jumping towards the now spikeless Thousand. He only had a moment to widen his ugly eyes before Regina stabbed him with her silver sword.
He coughed pitifully as it cut his mutant insides. Regina then kicked him off the building. He flew like a strange sort of ball, spilling green alien blood all over the floor.
Regina looked at Rex, “Rex! Yolanda is getting away! We have to-”
That was when she noticed what had happened to Aikichi…
The once floating silver balloon was punctured with spikes, and blood poured from it. Rex was pulling out the crystals and throwing them away. He started shaking his sister’s body frantically, “Aikichi… Aikichi! Aikichi!!!”
Regina grabbed Rex’s shoulder, “Rex, she’s dead!”
“NO!” He screamed.
“!!” Regina was pushed back by a blast of golden light and force pushed Regina back. Her tied up hair came undone and flew backwards in wild bands.
“Rex!?” Regina shaded her eyes in the light.
Rex’s belt shone gold, his hands shone gold, and his eyes cried tears of gold and burst golden light as bright as the sun. He was completely changed.
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Manga Creations / Re: Kingfisher
« on: July 19, 2010, 04:43:08 PM »
3. Aftermath
-tragedy!-
The rooftop was caved into the floor below, leaving broken stone, glass and wood sticking out of everywhere. All the windows had been blown up, and the walls had been broken off, leaving this floor as the new ‘roof’.
Smoke rose in the air, dust settled slowly. Spikes and sharp crystal blades were stuck in walls. Harpoons were stuck in some walls, their ropes trailing around the room, until they reached the rubber boots of the pirate known as ‘Harper’. The boots stuck out from under a large piece of rock.
‘Tex’ the soldier lay against a piece of stone in two pieces, something having cut him neatly in half from head to toe. The halves of his face showed an angry smile, he had been in the middle of a taunt.
One wakisashi and bloodstained white cloths lay in the center of the place. Fading sunlight streamed in at an angle, casting heavy shadows on the two figures standing over something in a corner of the ‘room’.
The ‘something’ was a silver cloth spread out. It had the body of a school girl, facing the other way, her legs crossed and her black hair over her face. Blood was on her side.
Rex looked down at the body of his sister. He had a bleeding stab wound in the side of his stomach, a bloody shoulder and a thin cut across his chest. His red vest was torn almost completely, revealing his blue shirt. Rex’s hair had managed to break from a straight square style into dirty fringes.
Regina stood next to Rex, looking the other way. Her hair was undone. Blood trickled down her face, and her sword was stained red. In her sling of ten hooks was now only three hooks. Each hook carried dried blood.
“…”
“Rex…”
“…”
“… Rex… I’m sorry…”
Rex dropped to his knees, and put out a hand to Aikichi’s body. Then he took it away, and he bowed his head.
Regina stared at Rex.
“…”
Seconds. In seconds…
-tragedy!-
The rooftop was caved into the floor below, leaving broken stone, glass and wood sticking out of everywhere. All the windows had been blown up, and the walls had been broken off, leaving this floor as the new ‘roof’.
Smoke rose in the air, dust settled slowly. Spikes and sharp crystal blades were stuck in walls. Harpoons were stuck in some walls, their ropes trailing around the room, until they reached the rubber boots of the pirate known as ‘Harper’. The boots stuck out from under a large piece of rock.
‘Tex’ the soldier lay against a piece of stone in two pieces, something having cut him neatly in half from head to toe. The halves of his face showed an angry smile, he had been in the middle of a taunt.
One wakisashi and bloodstained white cloths lay in the center of the place. Fading sunlight streamed in at an angle, casting heavy shadows on the two figures standing over something in a corner of the ‘room’.
The ‘something’ was a silver cloth spread out. It had the body of a school girl, facing the other way, her legs crossed and her black hair over her face. Blood was on her side.
Rex looked down at the body of his sister. He had a bleeding stab wound in the side of his stomach, a bloody shoulder and a thin cut across his chest. His red vest was torn almost completely, revealing his blue shirt. Rex’s hair had managed to break from a straight square style into dirty fringes.
Regina stood next to Rex, looking the other way. Her hair was undone. Blood trickled down her face, and her sword was stained red. In her sling of ten hooks was now only three hooks. Each hook carried dried blood.
“…”
“Rex…”
“…”
“… Rex… I’m sorry…”
Rex dropped to his knees, and put out a hand to Aikichi’s body. Then he took it away, and he bowed his head.
Regina stared at Rex.
“…”
Seconds. In seconds…
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Develop Your Story / Re: Arcane Judgement
« on: July 19, 2010, 04:40:55 PM »frankly i just figure that no one wants me to post the next 100 pages of my story in one big dump. well maybe lego, but thats about it.
You evil man! You've been holding out all those pages!
Self-publishing doesn't sound like such a bad idea. I've had quite adventure online for searching for Light Novel publishers. Sent three e-mails... Still waiting for a reply T-T. Found interesting links though. I'll discuss in another topic.
Same hair color? Eye color? I didn't notice... but maybe so.
Anyway, i'll be waiting for the nect chatpers
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Collaboration (Art Exchange) / Re: ART TRADES
« on: July 19, 2010, 02:37:11 PM »
*sigh* such nice art...
