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Messages - Echo_River

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Welcome Center / Re: Hello people :)
« on: August 19, 2013, 08:08:02 PM »
Oops, forgot personality...

Umm, if I had to describe my personality, I would say that I'm pretty easy to get along with. I prefer silence in the real world, and I tend to keep to myself. It's very hard for me to talk to other people if the topic isn't something I'm interested in(which is a lot of the time). I forget to shut up however, if the topic is related to manga, music (at least the kind I like), or history. I become absorbed in my inner world really easily, and can stay there for hours. I don't consider myself to be a mean person, and I try to help others whenever I can.

Omoshiroi...

Even if the topic is interesting for me I can't keep up a conversation...

Hey there:) and thanks for the comment. I love fighting games, jrpgs, advenrture games, puzzle games and music/rhythym games.
Kingdom Hearts and Okami are among my top favorite games. i've played nearly every FF game. I love the Legend Of Zelda Series as well as the Bioshock series.

Ooooh, another LoZ player! Me too!....Sort of, I can never fight any of the bosses myself (Chicken)
I played KH:358/2 days and finished it with - *Beep*, hehe.
Which consoles do you play with?

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Welcome Center / Re: Hello people :)
« on: August 19, 2013, 07:53:34 PM »
Hello Donna! Don't worry, there are other people around your age here. It makes me feel...young O_-
I'm from the year of the Ox. I play and listen to Classical as well.
What video games do you play?

And Welcome To MR!!

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Develop Your Story / Re: Blue Moon Circle
« on: August 19, 2013, 07:14:57 PM »
No, I think I always put too many characters in my stories...X_X
And don't worry, I read fast.
Ah, Motivations. Now that I think about it, Drek doesn't really have one.
His sister Nightash though, believes that she should use her power for good, but doesn't really want to include any innocent people in the process.
Jinx doesn't want the same calamity to fall on the kids, so he tries to keep them apart, but when he sees an unavoidable danger brewing, he easily changes his mind to use the twins to his advantage. He has a greater plan that might kill them all in the end as well. (But I don't like killing off characters so that's very improbable)

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Develop Your Story / Re: Sanity Fair- A College Comedy and Drama
« on: August 19, 2013, 07:00:31 PM »
A co-writer huh? Who had the idea first then? Hehe.
I guess they miraculously get away from vandalizing a construction site and pay taxi the money next? hehe.
Or do you have a plan for that?

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Welcome Center / Re: If you couldn't tell, my name's John. Bonjourno.
« on: August 19, 2013, 06:15:40 PM »
Music helps makes an anime interesting?
Welcome to MR! Enjoy your stay here!
(What's audio engineering? *Clueless...*)

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Develop Your Story / Re: Blue Moon Circle
« on: August 19, 2013, 06:07:03 PM »
Hrm, hrm that's right.

Further on (1)?

Drek by himself has felt restless once they entered the zone, and investigates the outskirts of the large town. Aside from the urban population, there is also a rural side of the oasis where lies a small village. Nightash is there with a former sage, Osledon, who keeps the Entities in check. Unlike Drek, she knows their history, but not that she has a twin brother. Drek does investigate the village, but doesn't meet Nightash.

    Jinx is back at the ship then, and keeps track of Drek by keeping a special ring on the boy and keeping an identical one. The rings vibrate when Drek's power is restless, and Jinx is alerted to that. Drek by himself returns to the ship unaware of the riots in the town. Jinx learns where he has been and trades places with him. On the way, he becomes aware of the upheavals, and also meets Osledon. Twist here is that they will conspire to awaken the twins power the destroy the town if things don't quiet down.


Thoughts?

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Develop Your Story / Re: Blue Moon Circle
« on: August 19, 2013, 05:52:55 PM »
Good point.
Um...think I will dump them all in there, hehe. I can always get them out later.

Now, once in, they are very warmly welcomed by the residents of (Temporary name?) Gape Ghetto, a full bloom city mostly on a hill right beside the water. They don't have to worry about typhoons or calamities as such because of their enclosed haven. Akanaru gets invited to see the Mayor. He instructs the explorers to scout the place out. They work in pairs: Adair with Korak, and Kinuwa with Attatsu. Except Drek investigates on his own.
   
I'm wondering though, should I just keep attention on the voyagers, or give mention to the crew who stay on Blue Moon?

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Develop Your Story / Re: Sanity Fair- A College Comedy and Drama
« on: August 19, 2013, 05:46:50 PM »
Actually, rethinking about it. The friendship thing seems okay. (Just don't 'drift' them too far, hehe)
So Luke is just a friendship side story pusher? (Unless he comes back again and again to get at olly and Richard - running comedy? Hehe XD)

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Develop Your Story / Re: Stalled on Untitled Circus/Fantasy Manga
« on: August 19, 2013, 05:43:37 PM »
How about "Circus to the Sky"?...Nah, too close.

A male character huh? Do you have a role set for him yet? If he adds to plot or something it might be a good idea.

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Welcome Center / Re: How's you all doing
« on: August 19, 2013, 04:49:21 PM »
Welcome to MR, TOF.
(If Watcher is WoS, then is it okay to call you TOF?)
Enjoy your stay here!

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Develop Your Story / Re: Sanity Fair- A College Comedy and Drama
« on: August 14, 2013, 10:52:01 PM »
You edited it...And I thought there was gonna be a fight!!!
Oh well. But you've chosen another route (GPS: Recalculating...)
But is this an alternate story line here? It's not so much on the school or his goals anymore...How do Luke and the others fit in? Or does Richard realizes his 'friendship' with Olly after they get out of their situation?

(You know, I see that 2000 Euro going to the taxi driver...hehe)

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Develop Your Story / Re: Blue Moon Circle
« on: August 14, 2013, 11:49:32 AM »
Drek and Nightash will be the main characters, but scene switching will be frequent I figure.

@GingerJoy Alright then. I plan to do both scenarios. And hey, maybe I'll impute the Yakuza idea.

This is for the (1) idea.

In the first part, the party encounters a Brigadoon town contained within an enclosed oasis. There is an entrance whenever someone from the outside appears, but it shuts them in once they are in its borders.

So I was thinking that Blue Moon is the only one that ventures in, but because the other two ships are still outside the exit doesn't close.
 But I could also have it that all three go in and they are trapped there for the first story.

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Welcome Center / Re: Hi
« on: August 09, 2013, 07:51:57 PM »
Welcome to MR!

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Develop Your Story / Re: Blue Moon Circle
« on: August 09, 2013, 07:14:04 PM »
I could make Akanaru older. Thirties- ish? And these are just the explorers. The crew of the ships would be older of course. But they're background characters.
There's Jinx too. He doesn't look it, but I imagine that he's been around since Drek's grandfather. He looks as if he's in his mid-twenties.

Now, I was thinking the situations could be similar in each outlook. This in onto the inner plot besides the phases.

For (1) Fantasy, Drek and Nightash are descendents of those Entities. Their parents had a clash with Attatsu's kind,
    who broke the said contract, but they ended up getting killed. Jinx back then was the one who separated the
    twins because he didn't want their destructive powers to awaken.

(2) (Code names) Drek and Nightash are kids of certain agents of an organization that make bargains with cities.
     They work in a sort of clan/gang system, so leadership would pass onto the kids when they become of age.
     Attatsu's people accepted, but when they learned of a disagreeable fine print (Undecided), they retracted, and in
     return, the organization had a fight with them, during which (code name) Jinx separates the twins to hamper the
     organizations movements. When Attatsu learns of their roots, he wants to kill them.

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Members Manga / Re: The A-TOM
« on: August 09, 2013, 06:03:27 PM »
Haha! Actually now that I think about it, for certain people I would rage.
(But I wouldn't have a plan when I get them DX hehehe)

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