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Develop Your Story / Re: Alter Ego ( POLL )
« on: March 19, 2019, 11:23:56 AM »
I would like to apologize, especially to you Robin Ryuu, I should have know better than to go with that title, and honesty meant no harm. This story, odd enough, takes a little inspiration from jekyll and hyde but instead of good and evil personalities, I wanted a more relate-able struggle, like what Action Animation said, to suit her audience.  As the story goes on, its suppose to get deeper.  Unfortunately, I lack common sense and creative writing.  But regardless, this is no excuse, I am very ashamed, and sorry again.  I will learn from this and appreciate your comments.  I just wanted to share a story that maybe some people can relate too and I'm thinking about deleting this (just need to figure that out).

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Develop Your Story / Alter Ego ( POLL )
« on: March 18, 2019, 06:49:49 PM »
Been developing this story for awhile.  Let me know what you think, all feedback and constructive criticism is welcomed.  Also, will be holding a poll, I am at lost for a name for this series.

Summary:
Kendall is a well-mannered college student.  But secretly, she craves an alternative rock lifestyle and likes to go by the nick name Kenny.  But… it is a lifestyle her parents do not approve of.  She hides her alter ego, Kenny, from her parents at night, and by day is Kendall, a reserved and polite young lady.  Will she be able to be her true self and achieve her dream knowing her parents would disown her?  Or be respectful and honor her parents.

Episode 1: Kendall? Kenny?

Kendall has finished up her college classes for the day as she walks through campus heading to her dorm.  When she gets home she immediately changes out from her school clothes, an ironed white collar blouse and pale pink knee length skirt.   She takes out her braid and pulls it up into a nice bun securely fastens by a few hair clips and into her green scrubs.  She then grabs an apple and a backpack and leaves for the hospital.  After putting her stuff in a locker in the break room she clocks into the computer and logs her hours for her college nursing program and begins her intern routine.  She goes over the previous nurse’s shift notes and heads to greet a patient in one of the hospital rooms.  She checks and records his vitals and checks his stitches that he received during his appendix surgery. 
“Everything looks good Mr. Wahn, hopefully you will be discharged tomorrow morning.  We want to make sure you are cleared of infections before you leave, so let us know if you have any discomfort, okay?”
Mr. Wahn, nods his head and drifts off into a nap.  Kendall continues her route, checking patient’s blood pressure, heart rate, and temperature, making notes in their charts and notifying the doctor for any inconstancies.  After a few hours into her shift, she goes on her lunch and eats her apple.
“I’m so glad that this month, all I have to do is monitor and prepare discharge for patients, last month in the ER was so intense!”
Flashback to a time where she was cleaning up laceration on a grown man’s leg till blood starting squirting out, he became nauseas and ended up throwing up on her.
“May the power of Christ compel you…” goes through her mind.
After her break, she continues her routine for the rest of the evening.  As she logs out of the computer, recording the credits she’s earn for tonight shift, she heads to the locker room, changes into an all-white uniform and makes her way down to the hospital kitchen. There, she grabs her clock-in sheet and begins to work her part time job.  She prepares dinner meals, beverages, and dessert for patients making sure to follow chart orders that may require any special diet or food restrictions.  She looks to see what floors she is schedule to deliver food and takes the elevator and steps out walking while pushing a cart full of food and drinks in and out all the patients rooms.  Once she is completed with dinner service, she heads into the kitchen and goes over the menu with the head chief.
“I was thinking of making cannoli’s tonight for tomorrow night’s dessert, what do you think?” 
Chef nods.
“That sounds great; I can’t wait to try one for myself!  I’m impressed with your baking skills.  Let me know if you need any help, otherwise I’ll begin prepping tomorrow mornings breakfast.”
“Thank you Chef!” Kendall replies and she begins grabbing utensils and mixing bowls.
Later on, she is on the last try of cannoli’s and starts stacking them in the refrigerator. Chef pops his head around the corner.
“Great job getting those done by yourself, you can head home.  Also, we had leftovers from dinner, I made doggie bags, make sure to grab one and thanks again for picking up tomorrow night’s shift as well!”
“No problem! Thank you Chef!  I could use the extra hours. Have a good night and see you tomorrow.”
She stacks up the last of the cannoli’s, grabs a doggie bag, and clocks out and heads to the break room to grab her belongings.  It’s pretty late but for some places the party is just getting started, and she thinks to herself “Perfect timing to meet up with everyone!” and rushes to her dorm.  As she enters, she kicks off her shoes, drops her backpack down by the front door and goes to her bedroom where at the end of the bed is a locked trunk.  She unlocks it and starts going through it.
“Ooooo, what to wear tonight!?”
As she looks trying to decide, she starts eating the leftovers.  After a few minutes, she finally makes a decision.  She pulls out a pair of black ripped skinny jeans, red tank top, fish net off the shoulder crop top, and leather combat boots.  She also grabs a makeup bag and a jewelry box and takes out a spiked choker necklace and safety pin earrings.  She puts on her makeup, foundation and contour, does a bold winged liner and mascara, fire engine red lipstick, and fills in her eyebrows.  Once she get dressed and accessorized, she grabs a leather jacket from her trunk and closes and locks it.  As she makes her way to the front door she takes her out her bun and shakes her long, mocha brown hair and with a smirk on her face says to herself:
“Watch out everyone, Kenny is coming out tonight!”

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I am watching The Promised Neverland, its so good!  Can't wait to see your work!

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Develop Your Story / Re: Underworlders
« on: March 18, 2019, 11:20:57 AM »
I'm still reading, but I'm really enjoying this!!

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I'm still reading but your work is amazing, great job! Your an inspiration!!

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Manga Drawing Workshop / Re: Workshop Requests
« on: March 14, 2019, 12:23:24 PM »
Are there any future planned workshops coming out from anyone?

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Manga Anime FanArts / Re: My Fanart Stuff
« on: March 13, 2019, 07:32:00 PM »
Aww I love the Fairies!

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Develop Your Story / Re: "Red Room/ The Victims" Story idea
« on: March 05, 2019, 01:40:41 PM »
Yeah this story idea is pretty different and random, I am not familiar with a lot of manga and anime's, so I'm hoping I didn't subconsciously get this story idea from something I read or saw.  I like being unique and different, I want to push myself into creating stories that seem ridiculous but has a great outcome.

I know its odd to mix a dark web world type story and putting a band together, but the more I ran with the idea and how these other band members get kidnap can add to this story of how the dark web works, who works for who, money laundering, pretty much how it gets from point A to point B.  Also, giving hope, plot twist, and false hope.  And how and if these members survive.  Also, I want to contribute into the story of how some business men (and woman!) hide evil so well. 

Example:  A rich man who owns many luxurious hotels, is the leader of a gang involved with human trafficking in certain parts of the world.  He holds meetings at his own conference halls at his many hotels, where innocent people stay and have no clue this type of stuff goes on right under their noses.  Hiding in plain sight from everyone....  He  is holding these private meetings, going over requests from cults, brothels, red rooms, (the bidder and masked man odd request!) who are looking for certain types of men, woman, age, color, race, and so on.  Coming up with estimates and forming a hunting parties to travel out into the world to find these people that have been requested.  But at the same time this hotel owner gives the appearance of being a classy/ charming, hard working, very smart businessmen!  An important part of the story that is scary because this does happen in real world sadly.

I know this story is not for everybody, I actually would like it to be a manga/ comic series.  I just hope it takes people on a journey they never explored before, especially for people who are into suspense and thrillers.

All thoughts and constructive criticism is welcomed  :)

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Welcome Center / Re: Hello there!
« on: March 05, 2019, 12:54:12 PM »
Hi Jacob!  Hope to see some stories soon!

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Anime Talk / Re: Which Anime series you are watching ?
« on: March 05, 2019, 12:45:19 PM »
Last night I just started watching The Promised Neverland on hulu...... so good and creepy!!

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Yinyang6's art
« on: March 04, 2019, 12:25:16 PM »
Awesome characters, do you have any stories or names to go with them? I like the macho guy as well!

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Recent art by Sayuui
« on: February 28, 2019, 04:39:11 PM »
I love your drawings!!!!  Thanks for sharing!

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Attempts at hair and body work
« on: February 28, 2019, 04:37:31 PM »
Had a "lovely" winter snow storm in my area, which is uncommon... I'm calling it the Winter Apocalypse of 2019!  Had no power, hot water, and heat for 3 days, and was not prepared!  Finally got power back yesterday, you would think in the down time I had during this I would draw... nope!  Had missions to travel into a bigger town and get supplies, used my brother in laws place to take a shower and charge our phones, had to shovel snow in the drive way, and kept my hand in my pockets with hand warmers.... what a mess, missed an opportunity to practice drawing, but like I said, my hands were freezing... I fell off a dirt bike and dislocated and cut down to the bone on one of my fingers, jammed another one (this is on my dominant hand of course) so my hand cramps up easily from writing, drawing, or even holding stuff for too long, so go figure when its super cold, my injuries get stiff and are a lil tender.  Well, that's my fun story about my life I wanted to share, felt like its been awhile since I've been on here!

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Develop Your Story / "Red Room/ The Victims" Story idea UPDATED STORY
« on: February 10, 2019, 04:08:19 PM »
I have this story idea.  I think it would be nice to get some feedback.  Its a little dark but it could be an interesting comic.  Looking for your thoughts.  This is a rough outline of my story idea!  So I'm gonna take a leap and see what happens.  I am very nervous about this, but I got to get over that.  Sorry, its this is unpolished.  I am going to clean this up as time goes on, but I figured I'd start here.  My goal is to make this into a manga/ comic one day.  I am currently writing out the rest of the story and eventually write it into a script/ storyboard type format.

(((((UPDATE STORY)))))

This is a story is about a girl, a blonde hair, green eye beauty who is about to graduate high school.  Out on the weekend with her friends, they attend a concert.  What seems to be a care free fun night and letting the music take her away; she gets separated from her friends.  Knowing them, they most likely met some boys.  Before she starts to look for them again she uses the little girl’s room.  As she looks in the mirror touching up her makeup, in the corner of her eyes one of the bathroom stall doors opens slowly.  Before she can turn around to see what's going on, a figure leaps out and bashes her in the head.

 
She wakes up dazed and confused in a small room tied up to a chair, unable to move her hands and feet, just her head.  How did she get here?  How long has she been out for?  Her head hurts and her body aches.  She looks around the room.  Above her is a red light bulb and the entire room is lit in red.  There is also a table in front of her with many items including a saw, needles, knifes, pliers, and a blow torch.  Next to those items is a laptop and camera setup. She notices the camera is recording and also what appears to be a chatroom of some type on the computer screen.  But she can't see what is being said on the screen.
 
A heavy set man walks in, wearing a partial black mask where you can only see his deep socket black eyes and greasy spiked up hair.  Now known as Spike, he goes to the computer and starts talking about his "guest" and who is the current highest bidder is.  She is still confused, starts crying, pleading to be let go.  The man turns around and tells her "Congratulations, the highest bidder wants a good show tonight."
 
Spike makes his way the table of weapons, slowly tracing his finger over each item, the needles, the knife, saw, until he stops at the pliers.  As Spike grabs them, he makes his way to the girl.  She starts screaming, yelling for help!  Spike moves behind her and starts laughing, covers her mouth, looks at the camera and whispers into her ear "You’re not going to like this, but we are... let the show begin" and proceeds to yank out her nails with the pliers. 
 
The modern version of the snuff movie, a Red Room is a live stream of the torture and murder of a person for the entertainment of others.
 
After a few more bids inflicting torture (pouring chemicals into her freshly ripped off nails, branding her in the arm) Spike takes a break. He goes into the wash room that is attached to the red room and cleans off some blood around his face, takes a drag of a cigarette before the final bid is made for the big finale, her death.  As she is crying, and in pain, knowing what fate is to come, she starts singing.  It’s her coping mechanism, which is odd, but she needs to find peace before her demise.  As Spike walks back in, he hears her sings and is impressed. “Too bad to see such talent be wasted, but the show will go on.”
 
As Spike moves towards the chatroom with excitement to see who the highest bidder is and what tools and technique to use to execute her, he sees an overwhelming amount of bids!  Reading many messages, one bidder wants her tongue pulled out, another bid for her to sing while being stabbed, but there is an overwhelming amount of bids to force her to sing otherwise pain is to be inflicted. Finally, Spike finds the highest bidder; the amount he is paying is the most he has ever seen!  Accepting the amount and reading his request, Spike becomes very intrigued.  An offer and partnership has been proposed.  Spike is puzzled, this never happens, it seems the Bidder is infatuated with her.  Is this a trick?  The money offered is unrealistic, but the payment went through!  Spike has a decision to make that could back fire, or yet, be a set up. Even if it could have been a set up or the authorities, they wouldn't have enough money to do what had just happened.  No, the Bidder is a powerful man, with a plan.
 
“Looks like it’s your lucky day Songbird.”  The Bidder and Spike have come to an agreement to keep her around and try out a new business venture in the dark web world.  Spike comes up to the camera, and tells his audience "to be continued" and cuts off the live stream.  Spike grabs one of the needles from the table and stabs her into the neck.  As she screamed her world goes black.  Over the next 24 hours Spike and the Bidder goes over details, income, and what the Bidder wants to accomplish.  Songbird is their slave.  Bidder is a rich and sick powerful man that runs many gangs around the world for human trafficking.  He sets up monthly meetings at different locations ranging from restaurants to casinos conference halls, with security monitoring the build and doors.  Spike is the keeper, something different and new for him.  He’s been doing the red room thing for a while now, and is craving higher status in the dark web world and to make more money to achieve some personal goals.
 
The Bidder gets restless of the same ol' boring meetings.  Songbird will be preforming at conferences where these men and woman meet up to discuss kidnappings, weapons, human trafficking, and the secret underground world that provides to the dark web.  The Bidder wants to provide entertainment to not only himself, but to his guests and provide a welcoming environment for future clients.  He has provided a new environment with his clients during meetings and now parties, such as illegal gambling. The underground world is enjoying it, the Bidder is playing his cards right, coming closer to being the boss of an organization he has long and desired for.  What is the Bidder’s desire, what does he have up his sleeve?
 
 
While Spike has Songbird in the red room till she is needed for entertainment purposes, he lives streams, forcing her to perform for certain dollar amount.   Songbird is threaten that if she escapes, seeks/ asks for help, or does not comply; she will be tortured or meet her ultimate fate.  As time goes on, the Bidder and Spike "recruit" others to form a band.  The Bidder hires people to go out to bars, small venue concerts to find a drummer and guitarist, now known as Stix and Strings.  A behind the scenes look of how kidnapping works and how the victim’s identity has been torn away from them and sold into modern day slavery.  They are locked away next to Songbird and forced to practice.  Some “customers” in the live streams like to set them up to fail, sometimes having them hooked up for electrical shock if they miss a beat or off key.
 
Stix is a young talented drummer and has just graduated from high school.  He decided to take a year off and travel with his band to play at any venues.  Hoping they would be offered a music deal one day.  One night after playing at a small concert hall, him and the band head next door to the local bar and set up their booth to sell merchandise.  A gentleman approaches him, with false information, about being a manager at a record label and how they need a drummer to lay down some beats for an upcoming solo artist.  Stix agrees to meet up the next day, ecstatic to go over a contract, compensation, and free hours in a recording booth.  The gentleman offers a courtesy service to pick him up to which he gratefully obliges to, only to be drugged with chloroform during the ride and wakes up in his own red room.
 
Strings attends a fine arts college to peruse a degree in painting. He also has a part time job at night playing guitar in the back ground at restaurants and wineries.  Little does he know that he is being stalked.  After a late night playing at a restaurant, he is abducted.  A black SUV with 3 men pulled up behind and yanks him in.  He fights back swinging his guitar case at the abductors and manages to break the back window.  He takes his chance and starts crawling out the back window, receiving deep cuts from the broken glass. Before he is able to break free and jump out of the moving vehicle, 2 of the men grab him, pull him back in and bash him over the head, knocking him out.  When he wakes up, the room is lit in red.
 
 
A rich man, who owns many luxurious hotels, is secretly a leader of a gang involved with human trafficking, a “friendly” competitor of the Bidder.  Lux holds meetings at his own conference halls at many of his hotels, where innocent people stay and have no clue this type of stuff goes on right under their noses, hiding in plain sight from everyone. he is holding these private meetings, going over requests from cults, brothels, red rooms, who are looking for certain types of men, woman, age, color, race, and so on.  Coming up with estimates and forming hunting parties to travel out into the world to find these people that have been requested.  But at the same time this hotel owner gives the appearance of being a charming, hardworking, smart businessman.  Impressed with how the Bidder runs his business, even having hos people sent out to find his drummer and guitarist, Lux seeks to hire the Bidder's band, now known as The Reds to perform at one of his clients Brothels on occasion. He takes his party of rich friends and other clients to show them a good time and to spend plenty of money at these brothels.  He notices at these brothel parties that a few people have their eye on Songbird.  Lux asks Spike about selling her out after preforming.  Spike declines proposals for her, knowing she could get killed, and he is not ready to lose his investment, at least that soon.  Lux may need to steal this idea from the Bidder and Spike, or yet, why not steal her?
 
What will happen to Songbird and the others?  Will they be forced to do this for their rest of their life?  Are they going to fight back?  Will they escape or be hunted, tortured, and killed?  Or give in to become one of them.....


(((THE ORIGINAL POST/ OUTLINE OF STORY)))

Story is about a girl.  She wakes up dazed and confused in a small room and she is tied up to a chair.  She looks around, it has a red light bulb, so the room is lite in red, there is also a table in front of her with many items including a saw, needles, knifes, pliers, a blow torch.  As well as a laptop and camera setup.  She notices the camera is recording and also what appears to be a chatroom of the type on the computer screen.  Then a man walks in, wearing a mask.  He goes to the computer and starts talking about his "guest" and who is the highest bidder.  She is still confused, starts crying, pleading to be let go.  The man turns around and tell her "Congratulations, the highest bidder wants a good show tonight" and he starts to pull off her nails with the pliers.  The modern version of the snuff movie, a Red Room is a live stream of the torture and murder of a person for the entertainment of others.  After awhile of torture, the man takes a break before the big finale.  As she is crying, knowing what fate is to come, she starts singing.  Its her coping mechanism, which is odd, but she needs to find peace before her demise.  As the man walks back in, he hears her sing.  He is impressed, but moves to the chatroom to see who the highest bidder is and what tools or technique to use to execute her.  Well... everyone in the chatroom loved her voice.  Odd, this has never happened before, they really don't want to waste that talent!  The man see's the highest bidder and is intrigued by his request.  Looks like its her lucky day.  The highest bidder and the man have come to an agreement to keep her around.  They have come to an agreement to try something new in the dark web world.  She is their slave, she will perform at meetings, conferences, where these men and woman meet up to discuss kidnappings, weapons, human trafficking, the secret underground world that provides to the dark web.  Guess you can say, to provide entertainment to  these business men.  They keep her in the red room, live streaming, forced to perform there as well, threatened if she escapes, seeks help, or does not do as told, she will meet her fate.  As time goes on, the bidder and the man "recruit" (kidnap) others to join her to form a band.  Going to bars, small venue concerts, finding a drummer, and guitarist.  Forming the band The Victims.  What will happen?  Will they be forced to do this for their rest of their life, fight back knowing they will be hunted, tortured and killed, or give in to become one of them.....

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More info would help!!  I'm intrigued!

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