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Manga Art Gallery / Re: - The Drawings of a Mushroom -

« on: May 07, 2018, 05:02:22 PM »

Love the colouring! Your style is cool too, I'm sensing some inspiration from Sui Ishida a bit? Looks like you have a bit of Shigenori Soejima influence as well. They look great, keep it up!

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Walter's Gallery

« on: May 07, 2018, 04:59:17 PM »

Walt, I would definitely read a gag manga made by you. Absolutely love this!

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: KeaneFox Artwork

« on: May 07, 2018, 04:58:06 PM »

Good scaling, it can be hard to figure out the right perspective to be honest. Scott Robertson has some interesting techniques in relation to this. Your tree/rocks and the one with the characters by the trees are very good. Trees/rocks look very professional quality.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Jamie's sketchbook of fun.

« on: May 07, 2018, 04:55:15 PM »

Looking good slam, I like your aqua colouring. For moe, try adjusting the proportions to be slightly more baby like (i.e: increase size of the head and make the jaw smaller) that can help out. Also I hated Uni so feel free to vent whenever.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: TEA Gallery

« on: May 07, 2018, 08:14:41 AM »

Thanks guys, my confidence just went up!

Quick edit, page 5. I need to adjust the height of the two figures behind in the top right panel because there is a huge discrepancy there.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: TEA Gallery

« on: May 06, 2018, 10:11:04 PM »

Pages look interesting. I guess they are in a cabin in words. From their uniforms, they are on a school trip. Or it's just the club meeting place. They are discussing/investigating something that can taker people shape. One of them gets scared and runway.

Woah, spot on. You're pretty smart!

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: TEA Gallery

« on: May 06, 2018, 07:59:57 PM »

Thanks Slam! Focusing on churning these drafts out.

Another page I did. It didn't really work for me unfortunately so I won't be including it but figured I'd post it anyways.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: TEA Gallery

« on: May 06, 2018, 12:47:06 PM »

Been relaxing for a bit, not been doing too much. I'm not too invested in this story but I do need to have something to show for myself eventually... No text at the moment, just thumbnail drafts for some pages from my oneshot Occult Club. It's read right to left. Will post some more drafts soon then take the manga to completion.

Page 1

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Page 2

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Page 3

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Page 4

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Page 7 I think? I did this first for some reason before 5 and 6.

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Anyway it's not much but I just wanted to let people know I'm working on something. These are only rough drafts, final product will look better.

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Anime Talk / Re: Darling in the Franx

« on: May 06, 2018, 08:57:48 AM »

Same, looking forward to where it goes. The fact that the director doesn't necessarily see it being a happy end for everybody makes me excited about how the series will progress from this half onwards.

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Zero Two deserves happiness.

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Anime Talk / Darling in the Franx

« on: May 04, 2018, 05:34:53 PM »

Anybody watching this? It's pretty good.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Name anime that doesn't take place in japan!

« on: May 04, 2018, 05:33:54 PM »

Just checked, 'Diamandra' is the name of the place, but it's definetly south america and done pretty legit methinks.

I think it'd be a great pity if it isn't attempted at all. There's definitely terrible lazy stuff out there, but there's room for faking it too methinks. If not then you really are bound to the place you've been born in.

I agree. Let people create what they want to create. I've never been to Japan but if I wanted to set a manga there I would do so.

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Tips and Tutorials / Re: What kind of tutorial are you looking for?

« on: April 30, 2018, 10:53:03 AM »

Proko's videos on Youtube are really good for anatomy.

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break Room / Re: Tea or Coffee?

« on: April 30, 2018, 10:49:59 AM »

Lol, guess 

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: TEA Gallery

« on: April 25, 2018, 09:24:10 AM »

Ah, seems I've started something. Someone doing the script for a manga would take a load off of my mind to be honest. Thanks for the heads up Slam.

Sure Effie, you focus on what's important to you. I'm not going anywhere. Hope your novel goes well!

I'll try get this 22 page Oneshot posted that I've been working on for the Summer of Manga thing.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: TEA Gallery

« on: April 25, 2018, 04:58:41 AM »

Writer for anything really, I prefer stuff that's like a battle of wits more than action (i.e Death Note). Anything Psychological or Horror would be cool. It'd be nice to collab for a 45 page Oneshot or something. That's obviously  a lot of work for a writer though. But if you have an already established script knocking around I'd love to take a look, this is aimed at both of you (Walt/Effie).

Also thank you both for the comments.