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Messages - YoUr EyEs

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Starter Gallery / Re: WHEN MAHLUA WAS A BABY ARTIST (~2008-2012)
« on: July 19, 2018, 01:50:29 PM »
It's not that bad!

Honestly, considering that these are arts when you just had started drawing, I think they were superior to usual beginners drawings.

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break Room / I got booed at an hospital
« on: July 19, 2018, 01:44:53 PM »
I got booed by the childrens there when I was attempting to read them a story that I wrote for them.
Obviously, they didn't like it and in the end, I was booed by them...


Not sure this needed a thread but, you know me...

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: YoUr EyEs Gallery work~
« on: July 10, 2018, 11:27:22 AM »
for a first time drawing hands, thats certainly better than my first hands :P
well done on the lips and eyes. it would be nice to see a few lines for folds on the clothes though. keep it up!

Thanks, I will try to add a little more folding, tbh, I am not good at making folds but, I will try.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: YoUr EyEs Gallery work~
« on: July 05, 2018, 11:33:30 AM »
The lst hand looks nice


Thanks!


Love the hands there. Hands are a treat for the eyes when drawn well.


I haven't posted for quite a while some drawings so here this one,
I am actually proud of it!


Oooh I like her look! What's her name?




It's actually my first time drawing an hand lol! I didn't expect it to look like that at first.


Thanks! Her name is Hara, she is one of the main characters from a story that I am writing

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: YoUr EyEs Gallery work~
« on: July 04, 2018, 12:53:31 PM »
In the first new one I can't tell if the character doesn't sleep well or if they're wearing eyeliner under the eyes. The second one has a good purpose. I think while you're using your camera instead of a scanner to send images, it might help to really push values, e.g. make the darks super dark and the lights almost white with your eraser if you have to, that way it prevents the camera from muddling up everything.

They were supposed to be heavy eyeliner but, I think that I missed that lol

I will, especially since my camera is trash.

Thanks!

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: YoUr EyEs Gallery work~
« on: July 03, 2018, 11:43:38 AM »

Second one, "Help Yourself"
It's a concept about going foward by helping yourselves!

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: YoUr EyEs Gallery work~
« on: July 03, 2018, 11:39:37 AM »

I haven't posted for quite a while some drawings so here this one,
I am actually proud of it!

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break Room / Re: Don't be shy
« on: June 26, 2018, 04:56:40 PM »
welcome back! my longest missing went on for about a year and a half though I think :P

omo, that's a long period of time. Also, Thanks <3 [/b][/i]

You would be very much welcomed. We seem to be going through a small revival, and I know I'd be happy no longer being the only girl active.

@suuper: my streak has little to do with the length of my hiatuses, but with the fact that they seem to have an annual cycle.


I will join in probably tomorrow since, I will have free time on me, well, I don't know how many people are usually online there but, my reputation on the ecchi world is very troubling sometimes, lol.

[/b][/i]

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break Room / Re: Don't be shy
« on: June 26, 2018, 04:08:17 PM »

Uhh...MRverse protagonist undergoes various ecchi-trope inspired trials to get Ecchiworld back on its feet.
Or something.[/url][/font][/size]


I will read it, also, I might join in on Ecchiworld, I had several stuffs that I didn't post due to the age restriction here.


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break Room / Re: Don't be shy
« on: June 26, 2018, 01:49:30 PM »
Welcome back Eyes!


Thank you Coryn! <3

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break Room / Re: Don't be shy
« on: June 26, 2018, 01:29:19 PM »
Yeah, I've been around a little. I'm having an art day, but I have been working on a writing project for our sister forum. It's close to reaching 20k words.


Well, its good to have you back here! If you want, I could check them out, what is your project about?

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break Room / Re: Don't be shy
« on: June 26, 2018, 12:51:40 PM »

Welcome back! Not much has changed, as you can see. I look forward to seeing some of your writing!

(Did we turn another artist into a writer? Dag nabbit, this forum and ye olde switcharoo...)



Thanks! Welcome back yourself, I haven't seen you around for awhile, I hope you are doing fine?


(I kinda do both now, writing make it easier for me to draw stories and all.)



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break Room / Don't be shy
« on: June 26, 2018, 11:42:28 AM »

I have finally decided to return to MangaRaiders,
After going on missing like forever, I started having various ideas of arts, writing and even poetry.


PS: I still have that quality Profile Picture + Sig combo! <3

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Develop Your Story / Re: The Dome
« on: May 31, 2018, 01:50:38 PM »
I Added chapter 3 to the op!

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Develop Your Story / Re: The Dome
« on: May 31, 2018, 01:50:03 PM »
For the most part the story is okay. My only problem is with the characters and how random they kinda feel at times. Hara especially. One minute she's seems somewhat caring, next minute she's cold and heartless. Also her dialogue feels kinda weird and confusing. Like this one:
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"- As of tonight, your life is mine. You will die when I decide for you to die." The woman's eyes closed and she seemed to have fallen asleep.

That felt really random to say. It makes feel as though she's some maniacal puppeteer or something like that. Hopefully, more light will be shed on her character and why she acts the way she does in later chapters.

Also, it would be nice if you tossed in some explanation on how exactly the world in your story came to be the way it is. You don't have to spoon-feed us with paragraphs of info dumps, either. You can weave it into dialogue exchanges between characters, if you like. That's one way I like to reveal information, personally.

Overall, not a bad start. Keep writing! I'll be looking forward to future installments! 

I will try to fix the confusing part regarding Hara. I wanted to make her mysterious.

I will add further description to the word as well!

Thanks for reading and commenting on it, I appreciate it!

Damn that woman's help comes at quite the price. Reminds me of Master from Kino no Tabi, although to be fair the both of them are nihlistic and apathetic in so many ways it's almost hilarious. It's a good light novel series if you ever get around to it, I'd recommend reading them.

Yesssss Dystopia. And ah, how does the woman know the time? Does she have a working watch? I'm always interested in knowing little stuff like that in Dystopia: How do you tell the time? How do you find your way? How do you even find water that isn't horribly polluted in some way?

Keep writing

I started Kino no Tabi, I think 3 chapters but, for some reasons, I never continued reading it... I will try it out!

I didn't thought about that. I am not good at detailing stuffs but, I will try my best lol

Thank you for reading and helping me out!

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