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Manga Creations / Re: Dollars of the Damned.
« on: February 21, 2023, 08:59:44 AM »
I do like her spirit, but I personally as a reader would like a lot more tidbits to her personality and emotional state and mortality as an observer. In Lovecraftian tales the observer is not always necessarily freaked out by the situations but clinical and descreptive about every step and process, and through those assosciations and realistic risks of hunger, cold, thirst, pain or madness they keep on going until the mystery is absolved. She's defiintely got the 'detective' trait of the main focus but she's a tick too peppy and surfing through every situation without actually being a part of the world.
Otherwise love it to heck. Great character design and I want moooar Lovecraft in my life in general haha. Great stuff and I really haven't read scripts in ages so this was a treat. Keep at this and please let her have a happy ending...
Please?
Otherwise love it to heck. Great character design and I want moooar Lovecraft in my life in general haha. Great stuff and I really haven't read scripts in ages so this was a treat. Keep at this and please let her have a happy ending...
Please?