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These are my version of what NaruSaku's children would look like: (Side note: the artist of these two images are pumyteh.)

Haku Uzumaki's image:



Haku Uzumaki’s appearance:

Pink hair and Violet eyes.

Chiyo Uzumaki's image:



Chiyo Uzumaki’s appearance:

Big forehead, Red hair and green eyes.


The scenes:

1. Scene (Return of the Hero to the Land of the Waves.)

Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Uzumaki, Haku Uzumaki and Chiyo Uzumaki with Tazuna, Tsunami and Inari standing by the graves of Zabuza and Haku. 

2. Scene Visiting the Suna

Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Uzumaki, Haku Uzumaki and Chiyo Uzumaki with Kankuro, Temari, Shikadai, Gaara and Shikamaru by Chiyo's grave.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Daniel The Guardian of the Realms (New Version)
« on: February 18, 2015, 01:53:25 PM »
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CHAPTER 1


On a red moon lit night. Daniel Den got a bad feeling that he could not understand. Shivers went down his spine like he could feel something bad was about to happen. Daniel Den has a INFJ type of personality. He's creative, he’s a dreamer not a realist, attracted to sad things, fears making the wrong decision, an observer, avoidant, fears the spotlight, anxious, cautious. He is somewhat easily frightened, offended, and hurt : socially uncomfortable. He values private, a moody person, and doesn’t like stares. He’s a perfectionist, self sabotaging, he can be wounded at the core, guarded, does not like crowds, organized, always second guessing, doesn't support marijuana legalization, he focuses on peoples hidden motives, prone to crying in his room or far away from others, he is competitive, prone to feelings of loneliness, not spontaneous, prone to sadness, longs for a stable relationship, fears rejection, frequently worried, can feel victimized, prone to intimidation, low energy, and a strict followers of the Wolion. He's a gentlemen to both men and women. He also is kind to kids. He has a low self-esteem due to all the rejections he had and his first break up.

Ever since his Brother’s, Cousins' and church friends’ weddings, he wished he could find the right girl. He keeps being told that he'll one day find some one special. Those who says that are mostly married couples or are in some relationship. He wants some one but every once while he imagines he’s the last man on earth.

Daniel's family was loving and caring family. They played pranks each other, mainly Daniel and Garth Den. Which is basically against the law of the USA. The Government is over stepping their authority. Garth Den was a hunter and Fishermen while his mother was Gardener and a knitter . So they kinda taught him how do stuff like that. How to build fires and among other things.

Unbeknownst to Daniel Den. On the West Coast of the USA. In the San Francisco, California. There was family named, "Danette." The girls' name is Avril. This family was totally against any people who worship material things. They are referred to as Followers of the Mind. Her family isn't normal but she was born from rape. Her parents didn't want her at all. They don't want to tell the authorities either. So they put her up for adoption. While she was treated like slave only doing the disgusting chores. She eats only the leftovers.

One day she decided that she'll would run away during the night from her foster home. That's when she gets kidnapped by a UFO. Creatures that had a Torso of an Alien but a monkey resembling lower half. She's on the experiment table of the ship. They injected two DNAs into her body. That cause her silky black hair to change into a dark red hair color. It also changes her left eye to blue and her right eye green. Now on her cheeks are freckles. Now she has all of the blood of the world except for Irish, British and German blood in her.

The UFO just got too close to a planet called, "Banville". Which shoot at the UFO. Unknowing to the other Alienkies their half-ling cousin is named Caen Kicig. He launch himself from a pod and go back to his home planet Futictis. He claims that the earthlings had killed their leader. So they are the fighters and warriors of Futictis. They are more advanced in technology than the humans on earth. After all of the most important people on the planet left for the War room/command center. Caen Kicig smirked and said, "Hi father. I'm carrying out orders."

A evil set of eyes opened in the shadows and said in creepy voice, "I know my son. You are half demon and half Alienkey. You are the first of it's kind. We'll take over the pathetic earth that we should've took over long time ago. I have to go now son. I'll since our Alpha Emperor is calling me back to our realm." Caen Kicig said, "See ya father."



Back on Earth and in the family of Den. Daniel just got fed up with his dad saying, "All of the lights in the house is on." Only when 3 lights were on at the most. One day Daniel heard his father just drove into the drive. So Daniel had crazy idea. He decide to turn on every lights from the main floor to the basement and even all the lamps as well. Few months later. Garth Den and Daniel Den had father and son prank war with each other. One day while Garth was at work. Daniel decide to get his long underwear of both bottom and top. He fill it up with rolled socks. He had a wresting masked and a stuff chimp doll. He put the head in the long sleeve long johns. Where you put your head come out of. He put the wrestling masked on the chimp's head. He put two long swords as the legs. While the short sword was in one of sleeves. The rest was of his wrestling figures. When Jeune came home from work. She was shock and cause Daniel put the dummy on Garth's chair. Daniel didn't mean to surprise his mom. They both start laughing. The Prank war went on for two months until Garth threw in the trowel. At the end of the Prank war. Garth had 20 wins and Daniel had 22 wins.


Chapter 2



All of sudden the Earth was attack by Alienkies and Demons. They gas bomb the earth but do the earthquake shaking the whole world. A textbook knockout Daniel Den out cold. Demons was checking on every human and saw all of the humans dead. After they left. Angels and Aliens join forces to fight back to get the Demons and Alienkies retreat. Angel notices Daniel's breathing. They were glad.

Few days later Daniel waking Up. He saw the destruction of his world. Angel disguise as a little girl at that suggestion of the Alien. Daniel asked, "Who are you? And what happen?" while still dazed a bit.

The girl said, "I'm your sister silly."
Daniel replied, "I don't have any sisters at all."
The Angel reveled himself as an Angel and said whiled looking at the Alien, "I told you that he didn't have a sister. He only had one brother."
The Alien that was disguise as a dog said, "Sorry. We just mess with DNAs but we don't study every human beings. We are not like those Alienkies. They are the ones that give us Aliens a bad reputation in the eyes of the humans. "

The Angel said, "That's alright. Now " while looking at the last human male. He continued on by said, "Rest of your human race is dead. You are the only male left alive. I know you want to buried all of the humans even those who bullied you in Middle and High School. Let's do this. We will protect you. If those enemies come back. "

An Angel messenger said, "Captain Angel, We gather all the human stuff and the knowledge of all the human stuff. What do you want us to do with it?"

The first Angel said, "We'll seal it into a tattoo on Daniel's right shoulder. Also we need to take Daniel Den to a save place from Demons and the Alienkies. "

So both Aliens and Angels sealed up humans knowledge and other stuff with what they called, "Chaki Energy ." Daniel was about to go into but the Angel said, "Your God and our God want you to give you some super powers. Here they are."

Aliens said, "We don't believe in a God but. I'lll list them off for yeah. Since Angels seems tried from Speaking.
1. Clothing Creation (When you can imagine any style of clothing you want to wear.)"
2. Invisibility
3. Intangibility
4. Teleportation
5. Shape Shifting
6. Regeneration
7. Magnetism Manipulation.
8. Talking to babies of any language and Animals.

That's all of the powers. You will get. We'll take you to the planet called Banville to become the people's savior. There are two trainers that could help you out in your power. There names are The Crow and Takashi Kaoru.
"

After Daniel kissed all of his family members on their foreheads and kissed all of his crushes on their lips before he buried them. They got on the UFO to the Banville Planet that was more corrupt then all of the government on the planet of Earth.



The Alien in cloak mode drop off Daniel in the woods need the the corrupted town called, "Foreverworld". There was little girl was picking some strange flowers to Daniel any away. He asked the strange looking girl, "Where is the nearest town?"

The little girl screamed in the low voice and that cause the little girl's older sister coming out and asked, "What do you want outsider?"

Daniel replied, "I was dumped here by Aliens and Angels. They want me to help the people here out."
The older sister said, "My name is Eiskcirt Neetruof and this girl is my little sister, Ajnij Neetruof. Your quest is pointless. Every group that every tried to overthrow the Empire. They are the hardest people ever made."

Daniel laugh and said, "With Alpha King on my side. No one can stand against me. Any way. Do you know where person that is called, 'Crow?' Or the person whose go by the name of Takashi Kaoru?"

Eiskcirt said, "Those two are rebels that can't be beaten by any other empire. So they let them live outside the walls of the Empire. They are afraid that some one with unknown powers to come and join forces with them to overthrow them."

Daniel laugh again and said, "My people back on the planet Earth. We destroy our mother land's forces. By the way these buildings. They are more similar to my human race's history." He pause a second and he asked, "Does the soldiers of the Empire march in a rows?"

Ajnij said, "Yes. They do." in a timid voice. Daniel could tell that she's a worrying-wart.

Eiskcirt was shock to see her little sister's action by hugging one of Daniel's legs and Daniel pat her head in caring manner. He went down on both knees and said, "I'll free you guys. I'll give my life. If I have too. That's my promise of my blood and soul."

Eiskcirt smiled at her little sister and said to Daniel, "Be ware of the Deal With It Gang. They think they are almighty cause they are in the ranks of the Government. They love to fight new opponents and humility them even more."

Daniel said, "Tell them that their nightmare just came true. No one can stop me."

Unbeknownst to the trio and Caen Kicig was watching the events unfold. He was going wait to see what happen next. He decide not to get evolved at all. So he'll help out Daniel a bit by chasing him towards the Crow's hut.

While in the dungeon of the Empire of the Planet in the Avril Danette's cell. She felt power going through her veins like never before. That night. An Angel appears to her in a vision and said, "You are the last human female but don't worried. We just drop the last male human on this planet. So you could help him to overthrow this government. That feeling you just felt was your powers.
1. Clothing Creation (When you can imagine any style of clothing you want to wear.)"
2. Regeneration
3. Super Strength
4. Super Speed
5. Stretching
6. Appendage Creation/Manipulation
7. Shape shifting
8. self-Duplication .

That's all of you new powers. Go to the mountain range to find Takashi Kaoru."

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Chapter 3


In Avril Danette's cell and after her vision. She was chain up to a Troll Princess named, Thuya Seishi but people nick name her 'Rabenda Shai'. She had darkest green skin and a Big long nose. To the Troll society. She's the most beautiful troll in their history. She Her powers was could scan any length of her vision and through walls and clothing. So just saw some one she never meet by using her eyes. She thinks he's kinda handsome in exotic way. She's wants this person to be hers. She saw this person going into the Crow's Hut with the Crow let him in for the night.

She said to Avril, "I just saw your human partner outside of the Empire. I can't read lips that far away. Now I see Crow training him. He's a good looking." 'while thinking. Dough he's the first male of human or Earthling I saw.' She licked her lips like she's see her prey.



Back with Daniel Den. The Crow decide to help Daniel in his new found powers. He's told Daniel how the Government works here the ranks. He starts with the highest position in the rank. He wrote some notes.
Emperor ???
Pharaoh ???
King & Queen ??? & ???
Prince & Princess ??? & ???
President ???
Vice President ???
Kage (A'mas Deerg)
Head Warlord (Sirnef)
Head General ???
Military Chief ???
Commander ???
2nd Commander ???
Lieutenant General ???
Colonel ???
Sergeant ???
Corporal ???
Chief of Police (Hsiloof Gnilgnuoy) {His dream is to banned everyone from other realms to Banville for his entrainment.]
Assistant Chief ???
Deputy Chief ???
Colonel ???
Major ???
Captain ???
Leader ???
Inspector ???
Private ???
Soldier ???
Border Patrol ???
Trainer ???
Deal With it Gang:
Otu'ran Hyumaki (His goal is to become the Emperor.)
Eku'sas Chiarun (Wants to be King)
Aru'kas Chiarun (She want to be Queen.)
Ata'nih Hyumaki
Soi Shimanaka
Ian Shimanaka
Hata'shi Kakake
Yamzo Tenato
Teu Mermi
Aru'oji Michiaki
Cha'rui Michiaki
Huki Yaku

Recruiter (Jeh Sok)
Recruit ???

The Crow start with the Clothing Manipulation. That one was easy and so was Regeneration power. Next year he got the handled of his powers but not masters of them yet.

Back in the cell of the Empire. Avril asked, "Thuya. I want you to look for Takashi Kaoru."
Thuya said, "Sure. He's at his home right now. I'll help you. Only if you let me meet that handsome human friend of yours."
Avril Danette said, "Why not. An Angel told me that he's the last male of my race. So you can meet him. I want us to get in a fight. So the guards have to open the cell doors. That way we could escape from this cell and dungeon."

Thuya said, "I'm not fighter. I'm lover. Cause I wasn't raise to be the fighter like my father and the King. His name is Kishi Seshi."

Chapter 4:





Nooj Ojon is a scouter for new slaves for his dog which is he sleep with all night. The dog is watch dog and this dog think he's Immortal like he's the Cerberus. The watch dog smell a new scent and he went off running and end up at the Dread Crow's home. Nooj Ojon is frighten like a deer is surrounded by a wolf pack. Nooj Ojon gather much of the courage he could get together. He knock on the door of the Crow's house.


Then the Crow is opened the door. Nooj Ojon saw the person in front of him was one of two most dangerous person on the Planet Banville. Who people could overthrow the Banville's Emperor if he want to. He knows that Crow is blind but his Banville's greatest detective and The finest Lawyer in the Banville as well. He could use sound to fight and he has good reflexes.

Nooj Ojon asked in a nervous voice, "My watch dog follow a strange scent. It lead us to your house. Mr. …… Crow." The Crow replied, "Yeah an outsider is here. I can't help myself to try to help others. What do you want with the Outsider?"

Nooj Ojon said, "The Recuit aka my boss want me to find new entertainers for the games." The Crow devious smirk was appeared on his face and let the Nooj into his house. That's when Nooj saw Daniel Den. Who was just sleeping on the couch. He thought that Daniel isn't special one bit.

At the moment Daniel woken up and saw a Big dog with scars all of it's body like it be in tons of animal fights. He swore he heard the dog mocking him due to Daniel's new power of Animal Language. The dog was saying, "He doesn't look like much. I'm the Immortal Watch Dog. Nothing can stop me ripping your leg off." but to the dog's amazement that Daniel spoke back to him in his own animal language. Daniel thinking, 'I can't believe that I'm going be Cruella to this dog but if a bad dog needs to be put to sleep..' but he said to the dog, "I'll skin you and make your fur into a coat for all of the slaves." Daniel use his clothing manipulation to make coat look like the dog's fur. He change the clothing of Nooj's and Crow's as well to match his own fur coat. That got the Watch Dog angry enough to go after Daniel and tried to bit his arm off. Daniel teleport around the living room of the Crow's house. Daniel decide to mess with the dog some more by letting the dog ripped his arm off. Due to his acting making the dog smug on face. All sudden Dog and Nooj was shock when both Daniel and the Crow started to laugh at them and their faces. That's the recruit and his watch dog see Daniel's regrow his arm that was ripped off of him by giant dog. Daniel look sad for what he's about to do to the dog since Daniel was a dog lover but sometimes you have to kill a dog to defend yourself. So he cut the head off with one of Crow's sword he was training with. Nooj said, "Sorry sir un what's your name sir?" Daniel said, "My name is Daniel Den but you and the Banville Empire can called me Empire's Nightmare." Nooj said, "I want you to come to the games." Daniel smirked and said, "Sure I love too. Only if I face all of the ranks of Empire."

Nooj Ojon smirked and said, "Only if you can beat me in a fight." Daniel smirked and said, "How about we do it in front of the whole empire?" Nooj agreed to it. Unbeknownst to Nooj and that Daniel's plan was to get inside the empire itself but as fighter to gather up supporters to his plan. L

Mean whiled Avril and Rabenda got of the cell easy cause the fighting was heard from the Crow's house all over the empire. Now they are heading towards Takashi Kaoru's house. On the way to Takashi Kaoru's home in the mountain range. On the way Avril save Rabenda's life so many times without her powers expect for her Super strength. For next year Takashi Kaoru will teach Avril and Rabenda how to be medical warrior and an assassin as well. He'll also teach Avril how to use her new found powers.


Back in the Empire. Nooj was shock to see that female human and the troll princess was gone from the cell. So he put Daniel into the cell that was once Avril's and Rabenda's cell. Later that month. Nooj opened the cell door to Daniel's cell. Unbeknownst to Nooj. That Daniel team up with a Rebel group was dubbed the 'Crazies.' Their members are

Ras'uto Harumaki
Aru' oka Harumaki
Teneji Hyuten
Tintin Hyuten
Nirak Usashi
Uske Usashi
Ina Chiuya
Sia Yamucihaka
Ion Yamucihaka


Where Daniel enter the arena with Nooj. The guards named Chiroth Schild and Kree Gahii yelling, "Destroy It." Before Daniel entered the arena. He asked Nooj to cut his arm off like how his dog ripped his arm off. Nooj chuckle a bit and agreed to it just to see the faces of the crowd.

When the Emperor said, "Start." That's when Nooj cut off Daniel's arm off. That's when The Emperor was about to end the match but shock in amazement when he saw that Daniel's was regrowing his arm while his old arm was turn to dust on the arena floor.

The Deal With It Gang over looking over the event. After they saw the regeneration power of Daniel. They want piece of the action as well but to lack of patient. They all jumped into the arena. The user their powers but Daniel teleported away just get them mad. Every time Daniel Teleport behind someone and kick them in their behind. He also asked, "Does your butt hurt?" After he said that to all top eight of the group. Then Daniel goes on the offense making the Deal With It Gang on the defense. Deal With It Gang was eating dust now. Daniel asked, "What does the dust taste like?" Daniel paused for moment and asked the Deal With Gang, "Does it taste salty?"

Nooj smirk thinking that Daniel forgot about him. So he use his powers is eating dust and said, "Yeah It does taste salty." He expand his body into ball shape. He bounce around trying to roll over onto Daniel. Daniel kept on teleporting away before the last second. He shoots Rainbows out of his eyes and shoot light beams from his finger tips of his hands tried to blind Daniel. Nooj forgot that Daniel was trained by the blind master name the Crow. Part of Daniel's training was to fight blindfolded.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Daniel The Guardian of the Realms (New Version)
« on: February 10, 2015, 11:33:54 AM »
 
  Summary:

In Hamilton, Ohio, USA. The population is made of  46.4 % Males and  53.6 % Females. The ages that is under 5 years old are 7.0%.  Ages of Ages of 5-17 is 15.6%. Ages of 18-29 is 14.9%, Ages of 30-44 is 19.2%,  Ages of 45-64 is 24.64% and Ages of 65+ is 18.6%. The relationships are these: Singles that never married is 25.5 %.  Married people are up to 48.4 % and the divorced rate is at 13.3%. The last one is the people who are Widowed is at 7.4%. The Annual crimes in Hamilton is total up to 4,325 %.


In the outskirts of the Hamilton in a rural arena. There is a family called "Den". They are the nicest family but somethings they are goofy.  The main character of this story is about Daniel Den and his family in the first chapter. How he live and in react with others of his age or younger or older.  Some reason even at food stores. Once while strange things happen to him like one time he help his mom getting some food to take home. When he looked back to see a baby in a shopping kart.  The baby saw him and raise their stumpy arms as if he/she want him to hold her/him.   The mother of the baby was shock but smiled at Daniel. Daniel smile back.

That was when he was teenager. When he was in Elementary School named, "Brown Elementary School". He went there for  K-4 but he wasn't there for 3 grade cause he went to Marie Elementary School. After that he wen to the Weavers Elementary School for fifth grade. Then he went to Collins Middle School that was for 6 grade to eight grade but after that he went to Collins High School for ninth and 12 grade.

While he was in the fourth grade he had crush on this one girl. That girls name was Raff Fen. Who asked him and other boy named Dean Dawen. Some how Raff Fen find out that he likes her. So She asked the two boys to go being a recess sign. She asked them to kissed her but Daniel wanted to but he was too shy. He regret ever since then.

Later in life when he turn 18 years old. This girl was 16.  They are only 3 years apart in age a gap. That girls name was Aby Bay. Who was the oldest daughter of the pastor Neral Bay.  It was on a trip to a religion fest called, "Snowfest." They believe in one god but who has three parts to him. The called him the Alpha King. His son, Alpha Prince and their help Alpha Helper.  Cause they are one being.   Daniel Den and Aby Bay are the Followers of the Wolion.

Daniel's father name is Garth Den who once was a Party Animal in his youth while his mother Jeune was like church Mouse. Whose focus on her spiritual life. Daniel have a brother, Nate Den.
 
 

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Develop Your Story / Re: Need help with these myths
« on: February 09, 2015, 08:19:27 AM »
That's a huge loads of myths to cover if you ask me . Also , a lot of these myth can't be put into details you wanted it to be above . Refer to XXX Holic (Bakemonogatari & it's sequels as back-up info) as reference as to how to make use of myths .

It's best if you narrow it down to the ones you're mostly interested and/or highlighting as well . From the looks of it , you're doing exactly what you did in your previous story you had here .


I'm gonna have some characters in my story that they are those gods and goddesses but they are not.  I just need to know their role

Who Created the world in those Myths.


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Develop Your Story / Need help with these myths
« on: February 09, 2015, 06:38:40 AM »
http://www.pantheon.org/areas/mythology/asia/japanese/articles.html


Could someone help me sort these myths in these way:


Creator:
Evil One:

The other ones:

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Normally people just need help fitting in the right character to the right story.

I think That's why I need right now. I think am done with the first chapter to start whose the villains and whose the main character.

Now I just the right time for each villain and other characters.
http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=622024

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Develop Your Story / Daniel The Guardian of the Realms (New Version)
« on: January 21, 2015, 08:46:01 AM »


That picture above is my Main character. That what he would look like if he went to anime-con. But true Artist that I request her to draw me in a Naruto format. That what she give me. I like the head and rest of it but I don't like the clothes expect for the Headband of course.

The MAIN CHARACTER:





Name: Daniel Den
Age: 30
Height: 5'3"
Weight: 119.8 lbs.
Body-type: Natural Skinny
Hair color: Darkish brown (people argue about it. Dark brown or black.)
Eye color: Rich dark chocolate
Skin: Peach
Race: Human
Realm: 8th realm
Nation: USA
State: Ohio
Work place: Grubb Gaming Extreme Entertainment
School: Brown Elementary School (K-1-2) > Marie Elementary School (3) > Return to Brown Elementary School (4) > Weavers Elementary School (5) > Collins Middle School (6-7-8) > Collins High School (9-10-11-12)

Personality:
INFJ. He's witty. He's shy around girls he likes specially when the girls talk about sex.
creative, smart, focus on fantasy more than reality, attracted to sad things, fears doing the wrong thing, observer, avoidant, fears drawing attention to self, anxious, cautious, somewhat easily frightened, easily offended, private, easily hurt, socially uncomfortable, emotionally moody, does not like to be looked at, fearful, perfectionist, can sabotage self, can be wounded at the core, values solitude, guarded, does not like crowds, organized, second guesses self, doesn't support marijuana legalization, he focuses on peoples hidden motives, prone to crying in his room or far away from others, he is competitive, prone to feelings of loneliness, not spontaneous, prone to sadness, longs for a stabilizing relationship, fears rejection in relationships, frequently worried, can feel victimized, prone to intimidation, lower energy, strict with himself and he's a christian type character. He's a gentlemen to both men and women. He also is kinda to kids.  He has a low self-steam due to all the rejections he had and his first break up.

Likes:
helping Kids, dress up for Halloween  and for kids' church as well. Helping others, teaching kids strategy games (Like Battle Ship, Chess, Checkers and etc.) , Playing video games as well, writing stories, poems and songs but he's not a good singer at all.

Want to learn:
Ballroom Dancing and harp lessons.

He's the only guy at church that wants to learn how to ballroom dance. He doesn't know how to swim or want to know either.

Dislikes:
deep waters (due to him almost drowning in his Aunt Nallas's swimming pool but Jeune saved him.)
Afraid of Heights.


Hatred towards:
Women Abusers
Kid abusers
Animal abusers.
Illegals
Sexual Predators
Terrorists


Pet Peeves:
People who leaves shopping karts in a car parking space.
People who isn't handicap park in a handicap spot.
People who taking up more than one Parking space.

Quotes:

"I'd came to realized those who said that I'm handsome are family and friends. When I'd heard a girl tells me that I'm good looking or some thing along the lines of that. I'd automatically put her in a The girl that just wants to be friends and on the list of non-possible Girlfriends."

"Chivalry isn't dead until the World's Last Gentlemen is."

“You can't out cunning us or trick us.”
"Eternity Waits for no one!"

"Does your butt hurt?"
"What does the dust taste like?"
"Does it dust like Salt?"
__________________________________________________


Garth Den (The father of Nate & Daniel)
Jeune Den (The mother of Nate & Daniel)



Daniel's mother side of the family

The oldest to the youngest:
Nallas Sallal (The oldest Aunts) (1st Husband: John Mich Sr. 2nd Husband: Sylvin and her 3rd husband: Cill Sallal. )
Rolf Etats Jr. (Father of Raia Coria, Dika Etats & Keeve. The Husband of Curie Etats.)
Sirra Garrots (Who is mother of Jehus & Jole Garrots. Ex-wife of Rai Garrots.)
Wisney Etats (Who is died 10 days after Jeune Den's wedding. His First Wife: Bidis Etats. 2nd wife: Jacana Etats. (Father of Clyster Etats Jr. Her mother is the first wife.)
Meri Norias (She lies alot but only thing you can trust her is with Health. She's jealous of her own Daughter and her younger sister named, Jeune.)
Jeune Den (Garth's wife)
Gall Etats (Husband of Wallas Etats. The father of Hale Etats & Ren Etats.)
Lea Etats (Youngest of her sisters.)
Berth Etats (Husband of Darcy. The father of Rya Etats & Dyne Etats.)





Daniel's father side
The oldest to the youngest:
Kirn Brak (The wife of Merk Brak. Mother of Kana Brak.)
Garth Den (Jeune's husband.)
Dido Den (Husband of Simurgh. The father of Brad Den & Curias Chica )


Cousins:

The oldest to the youngest:
John Mich Jr. (The Husband of Jupe Mich. Son of Nallas and John Mich Sr.)
Kelli Mich (Sister to both John and Ray Mich. Younger than John but older than Ray Mich.)
Ray Mich (The Husband of Kula Mich.)
Clyster Etats (Who Daniel never met yet.)
Raia Coria (Sister of Dika Etats & Keeve Etats. Mother of Nettly Coria and Nirl. Wife of Bainin Coria.)
Dika Etats (younger than Raia but older to Keeve. His first wife Clyster. Who cheated on him. She give birth to Jass(son), Ould (son) & Zabiteh (daughter). His 2nd wife: Cicero.Who had son Cyan.)
Kana Brak (Son of Kirn. The husband of Kinins. They are parents to Rim.)
Jehus Garrots (Older brother of Jole Garrots.)
Jole Garrots (Younger brother of Jehus Garrots.)
Keeve Etats (The youngest brother of both Dika and Raia. His first wife Casa. His 2nd Croik.)
Brad Den (Older brother Curias Chica. Husband of Firn. The father of Myna and Kaes.)
Daniel Den (THE MAIN CHARACTER. Older brother of Nate Den)
Nate Den (Younger brother of Daniel Den.)
Curias Chica (Younger Sister to Brad Den. Wife of Juco Chica.)
Rya Etats (Older brother of Dyne Etats.)
Toom Norias (Older than his sister. Circa. The favorite of his mother.)(He's just like his mother. He can get a girl but can't kept her.)
Circa Cerci (Younger Sister of Toom Norias. The love of all cousins and Aunts and father.)
Hale Etats (Older Sister of Ren Etats )
Dyne Etats (Younger brother of Rya Etats.)
Ren Etats (Younger brother of Hale Etats)


Grandparents:
Jadey Den (The wife of Beret Den)
Beret Den (The husband of Jadey Den.)
Clyster Etats (Wife of Rolf Etats Sr.)
Rolf Etats Sr. (The husband of Clyster)
______________________________________

Daniel's Church crushes:
Aby Bay (older sister of Wae Bay and Rade Bay.) (Officially Girlfriend but never kissed.) (She's the oldest daughter of Pastor Neral Bay. Her mother Arle Bay.) (She look like Snow White.)
Rid Madefy
Rasse Rhos

Nate's Church Crush:
Wae Bay (Younger Sister of Aby Bay and older sister to Rade Bay.)


Church Friends:
Wae Bay (Younger Sister of Aby Bay and older sister to Rade Bay.)
Rade Bay (Younger brother of Wae Bay and Aby Bay. )
Sei Madefy (Younger sister of Rid Madefy and Shojis (Brother).)
Sris Sorus (Daniel's church best friend.)
Jinns Hing (Nate's church best friend. Who dated Wae Bay. )
Vasa Mica is Aby Bay's fourth boyfriend and her husband as well.
_______________

Daniel's High School teacher Crushes:
Erick Cokier (Daniel's Homeroom Teacher. Study Hall Teacher.)
Kraals Alary (She's doesn't have right arm.)

Daniel's school crushes:
Ail Eon
Aba Pata
Cella Bael
Jinnee Whorl
Nosh Hent
Skols Hent
Romaji Addeem
Nimbi Inti
Merl Lym
Selle Ared
Swath Sha
Stim Idem
Ska Kas
Idants Belts
Meve Mem
Retama Aril
Palla Elan
Nettle Lob
Iglus Lieges
Mickle Calkin
Dich Cham
Raff Fen (She almost kissed Daniel Den in Elementary.)
Holm Baheth
__________________


School Best friends:
Cirl Rotl (Soccer teammate)
Relit Hets (Gentle Giant. He fights for Daniel Den.)


School Friends:
Tihit Hets (younger sister of Relit Hets. In the Freshman. All of the girls from Seniors, Juniors and Sophomores were jealous of her beauty. She was also a Soccer teammate).
Hye Gad

Strict Teacher:
Mrs. Isms (She didn't follow the IEP.) IEP means "Individualized Education Plan".


School Bullies:
Myc Whumped (He's a bully cause his family issues.)
Nish Jisms (American Football Player)
Nemn Din (Wrestler)
Chase Mee (Best friends with Rho Borer.)
Rho Borer (Stopped bullying cause he's lives next door to Nallas.)


__________________


Coworkers Crushes:
Regee Gae (former coworker.)
Denari Aga (The floor manager but due to her Fiancée of Gart Gnar's action. She got fire but now she's a teacher. She and Gart Gnar were High School Sweethearts. She got him the job.)
Agria Aga ( former Party Host and the younger sister of Denari Aga.)
Brere Erred (former coworker.)
Eten Gennet (She's the shortest 4'3" but she's 7 years younger than Daniel Den.)


Almost a best friend:
Gart Gnar (Tech Manager>GM>Had Sex with a Minor/employee. A week before his wedding.>He was the Fiancé of Denari)

A Good friend:
Kyu Ules (used to be best friends with Gart Gnar.)


The Owner of Grubb Gaming Extreme Entertainment:
Wesley Grubb

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Develop Your Story / Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« on: January 13, 2015, 09:45:03 PM »
Here's my new version of the story:

 In the Hamilton, Ohio, USA. There was a family that was called, 'Den.' The oldest son of two but his younger brother got married and moved out to Cleveland, Tennessee. Where they met at. Daniel Den is the oldest. He is naturally skinny. If you see him without a shirt on. You could see his rips. He tried everything to get fat on him but he reaches five feet and three inches.

One day. His dad named, ''Garth Den". Daniel was tired of his dad saying, "Every lights in the house is on." Really is only 2 or three at the most. So Daniel just heard dad's car drove into the driveway. So Daniel decide to ran around the house even the basement to turn on all the lights even the lamps.

Garth was busy talking on his cellphone. When he went back to his bedroom and after he got off of the phone. He finally notices that all of the lights were on. He went to Daniel. Daniel said with smirked/smiled, "That's what every lights is on look like."

Since then. It been jokes like for example. Daniel sees two pieces of trash in the trash can and said, "OH NO! There is two pieces of trash in the garbage. Do to Dad's Math that equals up to the garbage is full. If this garbage is full. It means that all of the garbage is full. If every garbage is full. That means. The house is full. Which means."


Garth is very good at slap boxing. He teach little bit of Boxing due to one of his friends invited him to get into the ring. When he was younger and party animal. Party Monkey. After he met his new best friend at Church. Which was about to split up into two churches. Garth help build the new church. One day. He say to his fellow drywall worker that he wish that pretty girl come through the door. That's when Jeune Etats walked into the Gym. Jeune was consider a Church Mouse. When Jeune's friends find out that she married Garth Den from their rival school. They were shock.

Garth trying to teach Jeune to stand up to her big sister named, "Meri Etats". Who is jealous of Jeune's sister hood with the rest of the family. Meri is a liar the only thing she doesn't lie about is being a nurse in a school cause she's good at that. She's like to control every one and everything.

Meri even try to make her daughter's wedding her way not her daugther's way. She plays favorites between her son, Toom Norias and her daughter Circa Cerci. Circa Cerci is fed up and felt emotionally abuse by her mother. That's why when she needs to get away. She comes to Jeune for comfort.

Few months before 6 moths before her wedding after Daniel's brother named, Nate Den and Daniel's first new sister-in-law's wedding. Two more months before that wedding. Daniel and Circa Cerci tried to learn how to ballroom dance together. Now Circa Cerci is happy due to not dealing with her mother at her own house but Meri still tries to control Circa Cerci even if she's married now.

Daniel Den only wish is to find some one special like his brother and most of his cousins. Few of his cousins got remarried too. It's unfair to him. Some times he thinks that he isn't handsome enough for any girl. Most of the cute girls from his youth group days are married and have kids. The Golden Youth Group age. He calls it. When everyone was invited. Now they are married. Now Daniel is 30 years old. He never been kiss even with his ex-girlfriend, Aby Bay.

Now he be at the Grubb Gaming Extreme Entertainment almost been there for almost four years. Where is Grubball court, Laser Tag, Bumper cars, Ball pit and putt-putt with arcade games like Pinball and etc.


So sometimes Daniel wish he was the only man on the planet. But he realize the most girls would either turn gay. Cause the girls doesn't have choice in the matter. Sometimes he wish he could have the power of travel Dimensional and teleportation powers.


Hamilton, Butler Country, Ohio, USA having some problems like most towns and cities do. The atmosphere is cold since it's in winter time. That's when Grubb Gaming is most busiest time of the year. Specially on Fridays, Saturdays and Sundays but Daniel doesn't work on Sundays. He only works on Saturdays cause he goes to church on Sundays mornings.

Hamilton's rates:

Ages
under 5 : 7.0%
Ages of 5-17 is 15.6%
Ages of 18-29 is 14.9%
Ages of 30-44 is 19.2%
Ages of 45-64 is 24.64%
Ages of 65+ is 18.6%

Relationships:
Singles that never married is 25.5%
Married is 48.4%
Divorced is 13.3%
Widowed is 7.4%

Crimes:


Hamilton, Annual Crimes:
Violent is 400
Property is 3,925
Total is 4,325

Annual crimes per 1,000 residents
6.43 for Violent
63.04 for Property
69.47 in total

Males: 46.4%
Females: 53.6%

Report Total:
Murders 6%
Rape 79%
Robbery 189%
Assault 131%

Rate Per:
Murders 0.10%
Rape 1.19%
Robbery 3.04%
Assault 2.10%


Meanwhile in the Nightmare Realm. The atmosphere is creepy and ugly trees, mist fill realm. It looks like the Stone age style of living. A strong will lady was running from creatures known as Alienkies. Who kidnapped her from the 8th realm and Injected DNAs into her red hair DNA, Green eyes DNA & Freckles DNA. She was trying to get away from them. She crash the UFO into realm of Ugly. Thuya Seishi found her and help her from being taking back. Thuya saw a creature that has arms upper body of Aliens whiled it's lower body is more like Monkies' lower half. So she recuse this girl.


But unbeknownst to both to females. That they are in the forbidden woods cause of the Mage Guilds' own. Swayer saw the Troll Princess and he tried to captured the other lady but Rabenda Shai got in the way and opened the gate way to other realm for the other lady.

In the next realm The lady that was pushed in the beginning of the Bronze age realm. She found out that she got powers of limp manipulation and she could stretch her body as well. She have two other arms now she can't get rid of them either. She smiled and said, "Now I can two time the task." She starts wondering, 'How can I get back to my realm?'.

That's when the Dwarves, Elves, Fairies, Pixies, Leprechaun, Sprites and Gnome. Melissa is the leader of the Fairies and she asked the dark skin female her named. The lady said, "My name is Avril Danette. I'm trying to get back to my realm cause Alienkies kidnapped me against my will."

Gnome came up to her and gave her the bad news of the demons, alienkies and others creatures and beings ruined by killing most of earthling expect for her and one male named, Daniel Den. You two have to repopulate your kind back but now you guys have super powers now."

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Develop Your Story / Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« on: January 13, 2015, 09:39:41 PM »
By the power of Greyskull, thats a lot of characters!

Will all of those people feature in your story? It may be wise to slim down the roster a little, so you have more time to develop and give the proper amount of attention to the most important Characters.

Those characters are foundations of the main character due to his family problems. Also his love life. But the main characters are Daniel Den & Those characters in the other realms.

I'm having trouble describing the modern days.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« on: January 13, 2015, 07:12:16 PM »
Better than before.

I got a better Idea:

These are the characters of the Modern World aka the 8th Realm.


Garth Den (The father of Nate & Daniel)
Jeune Den (The mother of Nate & Daniel)



Daniel's mother side of the family

The oldest to the youngest:
Nallas Sallal (The oldest Aunts) (1st Husband: John Mich Sr. 2nd Husband: Sylvin and her 3rd husband: Cill Sallal. )
Rolf Etats Jr. (Father of Raia Coria, Dika Etats & Keeve. The Husband of Curie Etats.)
Sirra Garrots (Who is mother of Jehus & Jole Garrots. Ex-wife of Rai Garrots.)
Wisney Etats (Who is died 10 days after Jeune Den's wedding. His First Wife: Bidis Etats. 2nd wife: Jacana Etats. (Father of Clyster Etats Jr. Her mother is the first wife.)
Meri Norias (She lies alot but only thing you can trust her is with Health. She's jealous of her own Daughter and her younger sister named, Jeune.)
Jeune Den (Garth's wife)
Gall Etats (Husband of Wallas Etats. The father of Hale Etats & Ren Etats.)
Lea Etats (Youngest of her sisters.)
Berth Etats (Husband of Darcy. The father of Rya Etats & Dyne Etats.)





Daniel's father side
The oldest to the youngest:
Kirn Brak (The wife of Merk Brak. Mother of Kana Brak.)
Garth Den (Jeune's husband.)
Dido Den (Husband of Simurgh. The father of Brad Den & Curias Chica )


Cousins:

The oldest to the youngest:
John Mich Jr. (The Husband of Jupe Mich. Son of Nallas and John Mich Sr.)
Kelli Mich (Sister to both John and Ray Mich. Younger than John but older than Ray Mich.)
Ray Mich (The Husband of Kula Mich.)
Clyster Etats (Who Daniel never met yet.)
Raia Coria (Sister of Dika Etats & Keeve Etats. Mother of Nettly Coria and Nirl. Wife of Bainin Coria.)
Dika Etats (younger than Raia but older to Keeve. His first wife Clyster. Who cheated on him. She give birth to Jass(son), Ould (son) & Zabiteh (daughter). His 2nd wife: Cicero.Who had son Cyan.)
Kana Brak (Son of Kirn. The husband of Kinins. They are parents to Rim.)
Jehus Garrots (Older brother of Jole Garrots.)
Jole Garrots (Younger brother of Jehus Garrots.)
Keeve Etats (The youngest brother of both Dika and Raia. His first wife Casa. His 2nd Croik.)
Brad Den (Older brother Curias Chica. Husband of Firn. The father of Myna and Kaes.)
Daniel Den (THE MAIN CHARACTER. Older brother of Nate Den)
Nate Den (Younger brother of Daniel Den.)
Curias Chica (Younger Sister to Brad Den. Wife of Juco Chica.)
Rya Etats (Older brother of Dyne Etats.)
Toom Norias (Older than his sister. Circa. The favorite of his mother.)(He's just like his mother. He can get a girl but can't kept her.)
Circa Cerci (Younger Sister of Toom Norias. The love of all cousins and Aunts and father.)
Hale Etats (Older Sister of Ren Etats )
Dyne Etats (Younger brother of Rya Etats.)
Ren Etats (Younger brother of Hale Etats)


Grandparents:
Jadey Den (The wife of Beret Den)
Beret Den (The husband of Jadey Den.)
Clyster Etats (Wife of Rolf Etats Sr.)
Rolf Etats Sr. (The husband of Clyster)
______________________________________

Daniel's Church crushes:
Aby Bay (older sister of Wae Bay and Rade Bay.) (Officially Girlfriend but never kissed.) (She's the oldest daughter of Pastor Neral Bay. Her mother Arle Bay.) (She look like Snow White.)
Rid Madefy
Rasse Rhos

Nate's Church Crush:
Wae Bay (Younger Sister of Aby Bay and older sister to Rade Bay.)


Church Friends:
Wae Bay (Younger Sister of Aby Bay and older sister to Rade Bay.)
Rade Bay (Younger brother of Wae Bay and Aby Bay. )
Sei Madefy (Younger sister of Rid Madefy and Shojis (Brother).)
Sris Sorus (Daniel's church best friend.)
Jinns Hing (Nate's church best friend. Who dated Wae Bay. )
_______________

Daniel's High School teacher Crushes:
Erick Cokier (Daniel's Homeroom Teacher. Study Hall Teacher.)
Kraals Alary (She's doesn't have right arm.)

Daniel's school crushes:
Ail Eon
Aba Pata
Cella Bael
Jinnee Whorl
Nosh Hent
Skols Hent
Romaji Addeem
Nimbi Inti
Merl Lym
Selle Ared
Swath Sha
Stim Idem
Ska Kas
Idants Belts
Meve Mem
Retama Aril
Palla Elan
Nettle Lob
Iglus Lieges
Mickle Calkin
Dich Cham
Raff Fen (She almost kissed Daniel Den in Elementary.)
Holm Baheth
__________________


School Best friends:
Cirl Rotl (Soccer teammate)
Relit Hets (Gentle Giant. He fights for Daniel Den.)


School Friends:
Tihit Hets (younger sister of Relit Hets. In the Freshman. All of the girls from Seniors, Juniors and Sophomores were jealous of her beauty. She was also a Soccer teammate).
Hye Gad

Strict Teacher:
Mrs. Isms (She didn't follow the IEP.) IEP means "Individualized Education Plan".


School Bullies:
Myc Whumped (He's a bully cause his family issues.)
Nish Jisms (American Football Player)
Nemn Din (Wrestler)
Chase Mee (Best friends with Rho Borer.)
Rho Borer (Stopped bullying cause he's lives next door to Nallas.)


__________________


Coworkers Crushes:
Regee Gae (former coworker.)
Denari Aga (The floor manager but due to her Fiancée of Gart Gnar's action. She got fire but now she's a teacher. She and Gart Gnar were High School Sweethearts. She got him the job.)
Agria Aga ( former Party Host and the younger sister of Denari Aga.)
Brere Erred (former coworker.)
Eten Gennet (She's the shortest 4'3" but she's 7 years younger than Daniel Den.)


Almost a best friend:
Gart Gnar (Tech Manager>GM>Had Sex with a Minor/employee. A week before his wedding.>He was the Fiancé of Denari)

A Good friend:
Kyu Ules (used to be best friends with Gart Gnar.)


The Owner of Grubb Gaming Extreme Entertainment:
Wesley Grubb

_____________________________________________

8 realms:


1. Trolls Realm: Stone ages.
Trolls
Hobgoblins
Goblins
Nix
Nymphs
Banshees
Brownie


2. Fairies Realm Bronze Age:
Dwarves
Elves
Fairies
Pixies
Leprechaun
Sprites
Gnome (Leader)


3. Egyptian Bronze Age:
Sphinx (Leader)
Pegasus
Unicorn
Catoblepes
Hippogriff
Chupacabra
Kelpie


4. Roman Empire Style:
Centaurs
Minotaurs
Faun
Gorgon
Harpy
Manticore
Mermaids
Sirens
Konkies (Body of a Donkey & Part of a Gorilla} similar to a Centaur.)


5. Chinese style Samurais:
Ogre
Giants
Cyclops
Titans
Sasquatch
Bigfoot
Yeti


6. Japanese Style/ Ninja Style life:
Valkyrie
Were-wolves
Vampires
Mummies
Wendigo



7. Middle Age/Spiritual World:
Cerberus (The Guardian of Hell.)
Dragon (Andvile Validest similar to a Devil.)
Succubi (Arch=demons)
Griffin (Guardian of the Heaven.)
Angels (Messagers)
Archangels (Soldiers)
Demons (Messagers)
Alpha King (God like character.)
Alpha Prince (Jesus Christ type of character.)
Phoenix is like the Holy Ghost type of character.

8. Our Modern World.
Human
Angels
Demons
Aliens
Alienkies (Part Alien and Part Monkey or Gorilla}similar to a Minotaur.)


SIDE NOTES:
I need names for these creatures and rules of each realms. I also need prophecy for my MANGA.
_____________________________________________________________________________

The MAIN CHARACTER:


Name: Daniel Den
Age: 30
Height: 5'3"
Weight: 119.8 lbs.
Body-type: Natural Skinny
Hair color: Darkish brown (people argue about it. Dark brown or black.)
Eye color: Rich dark chocolate
Skin: Peach
Race: Human
Realm: 8th realm
Nation: USA
State: Ohio
Work place: Grubb Gaming Extreme Entertainment
School: Brown Elementary School (K-1-2) > Marie Elementary School (3) > Return to Brown Elementary School (4) > Weavers Elementary School (5) > Collins Middle School (6-7-8) > Collins High School (9-10-11-12)

Personality:
INFJ.
He's witty. He's shy around girls he likes.

Likes: helping Kids, dress up for halloween & for kids' church as well. Helping others, teaching kids strategy games (Like Battle Ship, Chess, Checkers and etc.) , Playing video games as well, writing stories, poems and songs but he's not a good singer at all.

Want to learn: Ballroom Dancing and harp lessons.

He's the only guy at church that wants to learn how to ballroom dance.
Doesn't know how to swim.

Dislikes:
deep waters (due to him almost drowning in his Aunt Nallas's swimming pool but Jeune saved him.)
Heights.


Hatred towards:
Women Abusers
Kid abusers
Animal abusers.
Illegals
Sexual Predators
Terrorists


Pet Peeves:
People who leaves shopping karts in a car parking space.
People who isn't handicap park in a handicap spot.
People who taking up more than one Parking space.

Quotes:

"I'd came to realized those who said that I'm handsome are family and friends. When I'd heard a girl tells me that I'm good looking or some thing along the lines of that. I'd automatically put her in a The girl that just wants to be friends and on the list of non-possible Girlfriends."

"Chivalry isn't dead until the World's Last Gentlemen is."

“You can't out cunning us or trick us.”
"Eternity Waits for no one!"
______________________________________________

To these creatures below a kiss on a nose is same as an intimacy or Making out.):

Trolls
Hobgoblins
Goblins
Nix
Nymphs
Banshees
Brownie
Dwarves
Gnomes
Leprechaun

If you touch Elf's ear(s) is same as an intimacy or Making out.

If you touch a wings on one of these creatures below is same as an intimacy or Making out.:
Fairies
Pixies
Sprites
Pegasus


If you touch the horn on an Unicorn is the same as a intimacy or Making out.


Suggestions for theses creatures below for intimacy or Making out?


Sphinx
Catoblepes
Hippogriff
Chupacabra
Kelpie
Centaurs
Minotaurs
Faun
Gorgon
Harpy
Manticore
Mermaids
Sirens
Konkies
Ogre
Giants
Cyclops
Titans
Sasquatch
Bigfoot
Yeti
Valkyrie
Were-wolves
Vampires
Mummies
Wendigo
Cerberus
Dragon
Succubi
Demons

______________________

Name: Sawyer
Job: A Mage of the 7th Mage Guilds.
Race: Hobgoblin
Gender: Male
Gay Crushes: Daniel Den nex Mario Chacon.
Powers: Elemental powers.
Hair color: Darkish blondish
Eyes Color: red eyes

Appearances:

He reaches the height of six feet and one inches. On both shoulders and his forehead. He has a heptagon shape make. He wears something close to a mixture of Pirates and Ninjas style of clothing.

His hobby: Booty calling men




Name: Mario Chacon
Hair color: Lightest brown
Eyes: blue
Gender: Male
Race: Nymphs
Gay crushes: Daniel Den then Sawyer.




Name: Draven Seishi
Gender: Male
Race: half Nix and half troll.
Power: Shape shifting and enhanced hearing, Smell, taste and could see in the night as well.
Jobs: The collector and the hunter of the Mage Guild. He's the 6th mage.


Markings on him: Hexagon with a Square inside of the Hexagon. Squarexagon (that's what he calls it.) On both his shoulders and his forehead.
His half brother is Troll King named Kishi and his sister-in-law name is Queen Moto.





Name: Kishi Seishi
Job: The King of Trolls
Gender: Male
Race: Troll
Hairstyle: Duck's butt
Hair color: Pink
Eyes color: Lavender
His half brother is Draven Seishi.
His wife Queen Moto Seishi.
His daughter, Thuya Guanna Seishi.


Name: Thuya Seishi
Nickname: Rabenda Shai
She the most beautiful female troll.
Levander hair color and red eyes.

She is a princess and she's traditional courtship.
Other male of any kind tried to trick her to kiss their noses.




    Name: Skua Kueh
    Gender: Male
    Nickname: The Avenger
    Hair color: Black
    Eye color: Bugged eye style
    Race: Banshees

    His goal is to defeat all so called Avenger and destroyed the dimensions/realms.

   
     

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Never heard of those  theories, but it always is fun to connect universe to universe like that

This is my own theory"


side noted: I'm calling Prince Charming's father "King Dashing".


Prince Florian and Snow White is King Stefan's parents. Who married a Queen Leah. Her daughter is Princess Aurora.
 
King Hubert (The father of Prince Phillip from Sleepy Beauty) is the older brother of King Dashing.
Prince Charming and Prince Phillip are cousins.

That's my theory.


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MR Pub / What do you guys and gals think about any of the Disney Theories?
« on: December 16, 2014, 06:51:59 PM »
What do you guys and gals think about any of the Disney Theories?


1. Pixar Theory
2. Elsa & Anna's parents died going to Rapunzel's wedding.
3. Elsa & Anna's parents' ship wreck but they survive but was lost at sea. Then their mother gave birth to Tarzan and the Leopard killed them.
4. Jane Porter from Tarzan is great granddaughter of Belle from Beauty and the Beast.
5. The Ship in Little Mermaid was Elsa & Anna's parents' ship.
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Here's two questions:

What if Prince Eric and Aladdin was related cause they have the same hair color?
What if The Prince from Snow White is relate to Prince Phillip and Prince Charming. Since all three of them have Brown hair.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« on: December 15, 2014, 07:47:23 AM »
WHAT DO You guys think of this version?

Daniel Guardian of the Realms

The Main character's name is Daniel Butz. He's just turned 30 years old.  He's naturally skinny with a short haircut which is darkish brownish. It makes people argue about  either black or dark brown. He has rich dark chocolate color eyes and his skin color is kinda peach color; he reaches the height of five feet -three inches. He have small torso and longer legs. He have big family on his mom's side of the family but on his dad's side is small family. His mom is one of nine kids while his dad is one of three kids.  Daniel have no sisters execpt for his Sister-in-law but he have one younger brother. His name is Nathaniel Butz, his the opposite of his brother both mentally and psychically; his hair color is slightly light brown and his eye color are light chocolate color. While Daniel is more a cunning, strategy  and imagination type guy. Nathaniel is more into sports and choir at their church.  They are both right handed.

Anyway Daniel just got back home after is one day job at The DEN Extreme Entrainment. Where he picks up the trash and take out it as well. He been there for three years now. He was getting close to one of the tech manger who was promoted to General Manager. He was and kind but his name was Steven Grant. His Fiancée Liz Cage who was a floor manager and who got him the job. They was few weeks away from their wedding but Liz found out about his cheating with a minor. She was heartbroken.  So the owner of the DEN had to fire all three of them.

Daniel feels sorrow for her cause he started to consider Liz as a sister figure.  Daniel have tons of ideas for businesses but he's not rich one bit.  One of his dreams is to build his dream house which has eight sided with eight floors but comes with a basement.  Daniel want to either own a restaurant that his friends could hangout without alcohol or own a romantic restaurant or a sport owner or a Promoter of a professional wrestling.  Daniel likes to play pranks on his father since his brother got married and move out of the state but his dad's name is Wesley Butz. They have prank wars sometimes against each other. Nothing harmful pranks. His mother name was Anne Butz who does Sunday School class and sings in the choir.

Unbeknownst to the world called Earth and the habitants on that planet will change suddenly quick. While Daniel was asleep he felt a rumble like an earthquake and that cause him to opened his eyes to see was going on. When he opened his eyes fully. He was stunned to see angels was guarding him using a light force field dome. One of the angel spoke to Daniel by saying, " You are the last human in this dimension or realm. Strange creatures came from other realm to take over this dimension due to a prophecy that was spread around all of the other realms."

Daniel was about to say something but someone interrupt  him by saying, "I'll tell you about the prophecy since I was once prophecy."  Daniel turned around and saw a orangish yellowish ball of light. Daniel could tell the ball was a male due to the voice but with heavy Japanese accent.  Daniel kinda knows what Japanese people's accent due to the working at the DEN since a lot of different culture people coming in for parties and just wants to play some games.  The ball of light said, "You can called me Norio Shiro. I'm going give you my Chaki which will give you the powers of intangibility, invisibility, Magnetism manipulation, Weather Manipulation and teleportation"

One of the Angel said, "Our Alpha King wants us to give you the power of regeneration for traveling through other realms, Clothing Manipulation, Crystal Manipulation, shape shifting, Talking to babies and Animals in their own language as well. Norio Shiro will trained you in mastering your new powers. Alpha King wants you to be his wrath on those who killed your family, friends and foes alike.  " 

Daniel Butz said, "Sure. I'll do it and when my mission is done. I'll give all of my powers back to you Norio and this Alpha King."
Angel and Norio was shock to heard this from a human. Angel laughed a bit and said, "You kinda remind me of King Solomon with that statement." Daniel nodded.

A portal was created by a watching Angel and the angel that laughed said, "OH. There is a female human in a other realm and that number is….." The portal had closed before the Angel could finish his sentence.

Norio Shiro merge into Daniel's body to create a new system in his Daniel's body. Norio combined both his and the Alpha King's gifts into one system network inside of Daniel's body. After that merging. Daniel awoke in creepy forest or jungle due to the vines hanging reached to the ground. 

Norio said, "I promised you that I'll tell you about the prophecy of the Dimensional Guardian. The prophecy goes like this {Some one from the 8th realm will become wrath. Eighth-titian will get powers that never been seen in other dimensions. When the 8th dimensional traveler finished his/her quest. He/she will mark a new DAWN of untiling the realms into a group called, The Dimensional Guardians} That's the prophecy.  Let's get started on your training. Let's begging with your Teleportation power.  Daniel tried to use his teleportation power but he  disappear  from the spot.

Daniel appeared inside of the cell that's was in a dungeon. He heard cough and turned around. He saw a female troll named, 'Rabenda Shai' chained up in a cell.  Rabenda Shai's appearances is super ugly but Daniel Butz was raise by honorable parents who taught him to help others. 

One of the Mage's guardians. This guard mades Daniel laughed cause to him he look like Dangerous-Man's side kick named Dawn-wing's old costume when he use to be called 'Star-Sparrow '.   

Norio said, "Daniel Focus on your first mission is to save that female troll. From those Hobgoblins. Later I'll train you on how to use your new Chaki system.  Okay?" Daniel replied softy 'Yes!"

So Daniel actually magically appear in the cell of a ugly  princess whose have a lavender color in the shape of a duck's butt hair style and her eyes were red.  Daniel isn't able to break her chains because of it's protective magic'
Then Sawyer comes in all like: "Well, well pretty-faced, stealing my ugly prisoner, huh? Sorry can't let you do that!" He shoots a hot beam of water from his palm, but Daniel evades it. Then he is suddenly hit by Sawyer, who uses air magic to fly. Sawyer grabs Daniel and flying at high speed, he wants to crush Daniel to the wall. When grabbing he says: "Well well pretty-faced, you're gonna die painfully, aren't you?" Daniel replies: "You'll swallow those words". Sawyer laughs: "Well, I know what will you be swallowing tonight" with a smirked  on his face while rocks floating around him

Daniel then teleports out of his arms to in front of him, and since Sawyer is flying at high speed, he can't avoid Daniel's kick that he gives.  Sawyer flies a few meters back, but then charges at Daniel with full speed. Daniel uses intangibility and Sawyer crashes to the ground. When Sawyer gets up and recovers from the crash, Daniel is nowhere to be seen. Then something invisible starts hitting Sawyer. Sawyer causes a small earthquake so Daniel trips and falls. Sawyer starts shooting fireballs at him, asking: "Why is he doing all this for  a little princess?" Daniel answersed, " Because it's a right thing to do." Then jumps on Sawyer and punches him. With his right hand he grabs Sawyer's neck and tries to suffocate him.  That's when they heard rustling in the woods.

Were-bears, Were-wolves, Were-cats and other were-animals came to feed on those who was fighting. 

Daniel asked, "You probably don't want to died yet right..What's your name?"
Sawyer said, "My name is Sawyer the Mage. Your's pretty-faced name would be?" 
Daniel replied, "My name is Daniel Butz."
Rabenda Shai asked, "Why don't you leaving that kidnapper to die by those ugly animals?"
Daniel replied, "First off I know all of three of us have a better chance getting out of this situation together. Or are you going just sit there and being crybaby?"
Rabenda Shai didn't know the word crybaby but to the tone of Daniel's voice. She knows it's a type of a insult from 8th realm . She replied, "Fine I'm not.. uh what you called me,"
Daniel mischief smirked and said, "Then show me how well a fighter you are?"
Rabenda Shai use her animal spirit powers to offense from her Lavender eyes. and she yelled,  Eye of Lion.  While Daniel use his abilities to escape and help his comrades. At the same time Sawyer use his elemental powers against them.  A few hours went by.
The Were-Animals got triedand ran off.  Sawyer got tried from fighting both Daniel and the were-animals.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Killing fate (ongoing writing)
« on: December 12, 2014, 12:11:40 PM »
Good story.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« on: December 09, 2014, 02:53:24 PM »
My suggestion remains the same...

Thanks for all of the help. Guys.

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