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Messages - bossx5

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Legomaestro's Art Box
« on: July 20, 2019, 11:40:37 PM »
Im being left in the dust good stuff keep at it.

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break Room / Re: The Status Of Our Fellow Raiders
« on: July 12, 2019, 10:41:28 PM »
I been the same. Super san do what i do i work hard and set an amount of money to save and when i reach my goal i take a few months of from work it gets stressful towards the end of what i call runs but when you do find a job its best to have two. I know that this sounds lazy but lifes to short to be working the whole time so i do it this way and enjoy it to the fullest. I have to get back at it soon but im here now hopefully posting more.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Help kinda
« on: July 12, 2019, 05:11:41 PM »
Thanks guys she always said life moves on i cant change the hurt but its life. And to answer the power questions no super strengths but like esp and visions and the ending it will end in like a comidic way with our main character story him building a safe zone. But what i mean by true ending is the wraping up of the full ending like extra where you get a diffrent view of how the children grew and how they all live their lives.

The title part qell im working on it. The zombies are super strong which i believe all real humans have it but our bodies have limit caps that keeps us from hurting ourselves of course a 130 lbs man cant lift a car over his head but he might can lift the back in extreme conditions.

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Video / PC Games / Gaming
« on: July 12, 2019, 05:04:31 PM »
So whats everybody playing and psn gamertags xbox to but i dont haveone yet been thinking about it but not a xbox guy brought like 7 360s all broke. Anyway i play alot of pubg fortnite not good at it the building is just to fast for me. I play nba 2k19 dayz when its done downloading i still play battlefield when invited. My psn us shaudx5 send a request.

I also want to ask what do you think console gameing is missing. Ne sandbox games and cross play i know fortnite does it. I wanna play rust and ark but im stuck playing on mobile if anyone wants to know rust mobile is called last day rules its not in the states yet but 3rd party app stores has it. Im doing this because im trying to be more social im real close to being a hikikomori lol anti social is what my mom called me but anyway let me know and i will join you. I also play MONSTER HUNTER WORLD one of my favorite but it gets weirf talking to myself while fighting a huge flying dinosaur and laughing at a lame joke. Last thing if anyone here is a streamer let me know.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Help kinda
« on: July 11, 2019, 12:42:58 AM »
I was thinking the same. In the ending i want to go the dragon ball to dragonball z route but the second arc will be short so i can do my favorite kinda of story action but im not taking the comedy out of the story. The ending i have in mind is one of the children he looked after becomes a zombie (this ends the main story) but the MC cant kill him because of the love he has for the now young man and lets him escape.

The true ending will be the part two where most of the kids have become hunters looking for survivors and their lost brother to end his misery but they discover that the MC is also looking to do the job to protect them from the mental harm it can cause. In the process they discover that one person is controlling the zombies so they must find the person.

Other notes in this story zombies differ you have the slow moving ones and then the mutated and finally the generals huge somewhat thinking zombies who leads packs of zombies. They retain their original talents but lack conscious meaning their personality.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Help kinda
« on: July 10, 2019, 02:00:53 AM »
Thank you and thats what i want to avoid. I was thinking like the first set of kids he stumbles on are siblings and one is like 16 close enough to watch the kids when he goes out. Im also contemplating some super power not over the type but tge 6 sense type. And i dont see anyone eles doing this here but is okay to share endings i ask because if you are posting in this section your story is a prototype meaning its somewhat of a community test group.

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First let me say i haven't finished chapter one yet and i am already hooked. This has thought in it and you obviously have a world build already. I just wanted you to know i like it so far and cant wait to finish at work now but i will give a full review if you will when i read it.

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Develop Your Story / Help kinda
« on: July 09, 2019, 12:53:36 AM »
I have had a bad 2019 and been away again to gather myself. I lost my mother and it hurts of all days april 1st. I say this because its the reason for a story i want to do but i want you guys help with the characters mainly the protagonist.

The story is set in the end of the world (you said you were getting away crom the saddness) but its a comedy based on a delivery boy who survived the whole thing only to be stuck with a new job he hates a babysitter. He discovers a small group of kids alone with no one to care for them and with the stupid zombies roaming around his only option is to take care of them. But while looking for a safe place he finds more children.

Basically its a comedy that turns a little serious based on a young man i want him to be old enough to take care of kids but still be inexperienced learning what life is and what true love is (no pedo stuff he is in search of a woman to help but instead of looking for a couple, remember he is young). My thing i need help with is his development should he be goofy which in all honesty most mangas make the MC a little goffy example luffy goku toriko Asta. Anyway is it possible to do this with him being somewhat serious but clumsy. Or should i just make him humorous.

Ps the story is a comedy slice of life story with serious tones but i dont think they will overshadow the story. Any advice opinions are welcomed and thanks for reading i might post a rough draft soon if intrested. Sorry for length.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: boss art
« on: April 24, 2019, 02:31:29 PM »
Yea i sometimes take the art from stories for granted not saying i dont recognize good art. So for those like me it is a reward in movies, games, comics any art form to find the out of place piece in it or reference. I have to patient and learn to make more controlled long strokes.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Help with a plothole
« on: April 22, 2019, 04:55:29 PM »
That sounds cool. But i would keep in mind it has to be foreign because of its narure and no human has never seen it. Which now that i type it the optical illusion thing could work best, for instance the surrounding cities or towns could be looking at it and not know what it is and inadvertently modled their world after it not knowing it

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Develop Your Story / Re: Help with a plothole
« on: April 22, 2019, 09:38:22 AM »
Make it made out of a light spectrum that humans cant comprehend so it looks like a mountain or something

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: boss art
« on: April 22, 2019, 12:52:55 AM »
Yea sorry it took so long to reply, but alot has happened. Anyway i usually order things like tablets in pairs one cheap as a back up and a little more expensive one for main use but i have a new one and it works good but wish it had a wheel to move the screen around and zoom in and out. Anyway here is some colored sketches


Third redraw sketch what have you


The symbol on the headphones are my mothers initials which i may make into my signature easter egg.

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MR Pub / Re: Where i been
« on: March 31, 2019, 01:06:18 PM »
Thanks guys and gals im not sad about death but its my mother i dont want her to hurt i love her and she is my best friend how will the world be without her. I keep telling myself it was gonna happen one day along the lines of forty years or so but wrll it hurts and hard to wrap my head around. Anyway if anyone wants to play with me on fortnite or pubg (ps4) my gamring namme is shaudx6 psn and fornite name. I say that because i have been deep into playing to keep my mind off of the situation (the rage lol) anyeay thanks for being here.

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MR Pub / Re: Where i been
« on: March 30, 2019, 01:37:48 PM »
Thanks guys and yea she is strong.

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MR Pub / Re: Where i been
« on: March 29, 2019, 04:18:05 PM »
Thanks i found out today she only has a week or to left. Dont know how to feel it hurts but if she is in pain maybe its for the best its just strange to be in a world without my best friend. My father was in my life but he had a drinking problem so it was just my mom there for me working multiple jobs beating cancer the first time just hard thanks guys and girls

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