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Develop Your Story / Re: The Final Story
« on: February 20, 2014, 10:38:55 AM »
Right now, I'm working on the outline so it will be a little while before I can bring out the first chapter. I'm focusing on somewhere between 8-9 chapters for Volume 1.
The title is still up for debate but I haven't found a better title than Revolutionary Diarist so I guess that will be the project title until another one can be thought up.


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Develop Your Story / The Final Story
« on: February 18, 2014, 02:33:09 PM »
Well new here, you all can probably tell by my botched introduction and low post count... :push:

Anyhow... After much deliberating, I've decided to quit writing light novels to focus on other things in life. However to mark my completion in this activity I believe I should write one more story! :D ... I know, kinda backwards logic if their was one.

Okay, so on to why many of you possibly clicked on this topic in the first place; the summary...

Hotaka kagesaki is finally entering High school. After tough exams and a tramuatic middle school experience things are finally looking up. He's made a small circle of friends; found a not overly impossible romantic interest in his class who just might go out with him. To top it off his parents have finally remarried, so Hotoka now has two more hands to help around the house. His businesswomen mother, and younger sister Chihaya.
One afternoon of his first week as a first year, Hotoka hears a loud noise from his sister's room. After investigating the room he discovers a small notebook half open. Inside where notes, like one would find in any ordinary diary except that, they weren't. Details and dates months in advance predicted to the letter how their parents would meet, redate, and even marry, The housing district the would live, even the exact house and rooms they would sleep,  the school Hotoka choose, everything is dated months in advance...
Did she plan and organize this to happen? Could she?
As Hotoka searches for answers he ends up, near the end of the book where two lines  are dated,  on Hotoka's predicted High school graduation date.
"Hotaka proposes to me, I accept."
"Happy ending..."

Having read a few imouto love stories I just felt like writing my own with a huge influence from such stories like Death Note...of course mixed in with a heavy dash of rampart passion... of the Yandere kind....

So genres for anyone would want to know is: Romance, Psychological, thats all I can think of for now. X_X

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Welcome Center / Um...Hi
« on: February 14, 2014, 09:12:23 AM »
So um... Hi
I'm not good with introductions. Just a guy who likes anime and writing stories in m free time. I came to this site, because of my love for light novels and to possibly find a community of writers who also like anime.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Looking for thoughts and suggenstions
« on: February 14, 2014, 02:49:16 AM »
Okay......Where to begin.

We will start with this part.
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2013 the U.S. government shuts down supposedly because of the healthcare bill the truth?
So it's safe to say the Government has enforced a shutdown due to financial reasons?
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A terrorist organization has intercepted a nuclear missile and is threatening to use it if the government does not comply with its demand number one shut down the government.
Why would he want to shut down a government that is already shut down?
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A terrorist organization has intercepted a nuclear missile and is threatening to use it if the government does not comply with its demand number one shut down the government.
This would alert the CIA, FBI, NSA, and a whole host of covert government agents. Even some overseas that work with the logistics of military guided control systems.
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little did they know this was all apart of the plan moles have been planted all amongst them and now they have access to the U.S. nuclear missiles which are unleashed upon the U.S.A turning it into a wasteland.
Even if he planted moles, he would need at the least, a group of about 1000-1500 men to pull this off. Each one of these men would of had to stay committed to the cause for over 10+ years. The reason for this, is because their are many systems to avoid such a scenario. Each one of these systems would have to be compromised. 
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Somehow Mr.King has survived and months later hands himself over to the U.N. for questioning he there invites them to his amusement park in the ruins of America called "Dead Land"
First off nuclear fallout would be pervasive. Any amusement park would be highly radioactive. Furthermore, the United Nations would be undergoing investigations to discover how Mr.King pulled this off, to protect the rest of the world from nuclear destruction. Also, the global economy would take a disastrous hit, Mr.King could find himself in a power struggle.
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gains total control of old America will be deemed its new government.
Controlling old America would be pointless as radioactivity would of destroyed most of the resources and contaminated many others.
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to destroy the world and the only people who can stop him are them
Why does he want to destroy the world? What does he get out of it? Also, if the people leave the bunker they would have an extremely hard life.
The mutated wouldn't live long due to radiation but neither would the escapees.
Besides, starvation, dehydration, and lack of civilization they would have to fight with the fact that many of their loved ones are dead. Their life is gone and will never return.
This would not be like a Hiroshima bomb attack but a sort of black plague situation.
Good story but I think it still needs a little developing.

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