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Messages - CuteKiwiKitty

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Manga Anime FanArts / Re: KiwiKitty's Fanart
« on: July 17, 2014, 12:22:36 AM »
Amazing work really, inspirational even if-I-do-so-say-m'self.  :thumbsup: Though i've never watched/read those series.

My only suggestions (even though I can't see the second one) are gonna be pretty nit-picky since the fundamentals are well covered.

You don't seem to make much use of the focal point. The focal point is where the eyes land first when looking at a picture. It happens to be the very center of the picture if you divided it into 9 squares. Also called the rule of thirds.


When you're designing the layout of the image you should ask yourself: where do you want the viewer's eyes to concentrate on first? Many artists use it help express strong emotions. In instances of action they'll usually center the focus point on the character's expression or action or some other magical force. It's used a lot in fanservice where the butt or breasts would be centered in the focus point. In other strong emotions it may follow a tear or be centered on the character's face.

Ignoring the focus point can make the feelings and emotions portrayed feel distant. It helps make the feelings pop out. Usually in wallpapers, pictures with logos, or pictures words to be expressed artists ignore it.

There's a lot space in your artwork, and for the first one it's very nice for the mysterious feeling, but the for the last it seems as though there's something missing.

And lastly the folds on the clothes are done very well, but on the last image, they might be giving off the wrong texture of the kind of hoodie he's wearing. Fixing this could just be a matter of mimicking the folds on a hoodie in a photo to see how the folds should feel more smooth and loose.

thank you so much for the wonderful feedback! I'll make sure to try to fix the things you pointed out for my future drawings :)

I might interested in helping. I'm also pretty young, so haven't made a manga before, but I've really been wanting too.

About the drawing that you want us to make, should it just be a sketch or a completed drawing? I also have a lot of other drawings that you can see in case you want to see more examples.

Manga Anime FanArts / KiwiKitty's Fanart
« on: July 14, 2014, 02:03:55 PM »
here's some of my fanart, hope you like them :) and I would love some feedback of how to make my art better

Yato from Noragami

Kou From Ao Haru Ride

Yukine From Noragami

Manga Art Gallery / Re: KiwiKitty's Drawings
« on: April 13, 2014, 09:59:44 PM »
Very well done KiwiKitty!  :thumbsup:

My favourite of the four would be the final picture of blind boy ^^.

thanks, the last one is my favorite too  ;D

Manga Art Gallery / KiwiKitty's Drawings
« on: April 13, 2014, 09:18:23 PM »
I've been drawing manga/anime style for about 6 months now, and I am looking for some feedback to make some of my drawings better :)
(some of the drawings are commissions I've made on DeviantArt, so that's why they have names on some of them..)

Manga Art Gallery / One of my first tablet drawings
« on: January 25, 2014, 05:00:42 PM »
Sorry, I would have posted other drawings to compare it to, but I don't have any other finished ones. I would like to know some things that I do right and wrong though, for future drawings. Thanks for reviewing   ;D

Welcome Center / Hi Hi
« on: December 16, 2013, 01:30:25 AM »
Hi I'm new and I joined cause I love drawing and reading manga. :3 I also think it would be really amazing to help someone else with their story. I'm really excited about joining  :D

Manga Artists Wanted / Re: looking for artist to work together
« on: December 16, 2013, 01:04:42 AM »
I could help draw your story, but what are some of your ideas? I might be able to help make your story too if you want  ::)

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