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General Manga writer discussions / Re: Protagonist Gender?
« on: May 22, 2014, 07:04:41 PM »
depends on the genre and the type of story youre telling, making a protagonist a curtain gender reflects different aspects on him or her, also it depends on the problem in your story. For example its more relatable to have a male character who is a pervert or is a bit "pervy", you could also use this to avoid stereotypes with the main characters.

MR Pub / Re: Women, Men, Sexuality and other bull
« on: May 22, 2014, 06:55:14 PM »
me meets "nice" girl
nice girl cheats two weeks into dating
guy she cheats with is total dirtbag
"we can still be friends right?"
"yeah sure" in my head "hell no"
one week later...
"nice" girl calls me up ( we were not on speaking terms)
me: "yeah what do you want"
her: "omg, blah blah blah blah blah blah... HE CHEATED"
me: "oh really? (concerned) in my head i was like "really? (sarcastically)"
her: "i really need a friend right now... maybe you could even stay the... (hung up at this point)

yep so thats how it happened. Women: the infinite mystery

Develop Your Story / Re: Love: A curse~
« on: May 15, 2014, 06:14:01 PM »
Sounds like something out of a hentai.

Why does he have to be a highschool dropout? Because you are? Is this character a reflection of you and your personality?

I can only assume this is the case.

i will neither confirm nor deny this accusation.

Develop Your Story / Re: Love: A curse~
« on: May 14, 2014, 06:10:29 PM »
yes, he does.

Welcome Center / Re: Hey
« on: May 14, 2014, 01:54:44 AM »
hey glad to have you, cant wait to see what you can do maybe we can work together in the future

anyways, welcome to MR

Develop Your Story / Love: A curse~
« on: May 14, 2014, 01:53:17 AM »
A hopeless high school drop out, a struggling manga artist and completely invisible to the opposite sex. these are only a few ways of describing Arata Himura, but during a harvest festival, he buys a love charm said to "guarantee that your true love will be found!". After an unsuccessful day of wooing women, he attempts to return the charm to no avail. The store in which he bought it from seems to have vanished with no one who seems to remember anything about the store or the person who ran it. In a bitter rage, Arata tears the charm apart, from the torn charm bag comes a cherub~, an angle of love that gives Arata the curse of being irresistible to all women. Now he needs to find a way to break the curse of love bestowed upon him.


Writers note: ill be honest, writing this is not type priority to me, especially due to current events the idea of a romantic anything is kind of fair off in my mind. Ill get around to writing this after i finish a few chapters in my current works. if you like the idea its pretty much up for grabs at the moment.

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Different characters for different stories
« on: May 14, 2014, 01:12:59 AM »
your head/body proportions could use some work, but other then that very nice.

MR Pub / Re: Women, Men, Sexuality and other bull
« on: May 13, 2014, 02:49:20 AM »
hey guys sorry about the moodiness, just got dumped sooo yeah feeling better now that she got what she deserved though

MR Pub / Re: Women, Men, Sexuality and other bull
« on: May 12, 2014, 06:25:20 PM »
am i the only one who just hates everyone?


Develop Your Story / Daughters Of Paradise
« on: May 10, 2014, 01:42:33 AM »
 A war is on the horizon, each nation is in a dangerous arms race against each other, lines were drawn, Alliances formed, and betrayed. Unfortunately, in the heat of war, one nation made their biggest blunder. While testing a new bio-chemical weapon on a peaceful, isolated island, now known as “paradise” a freak chain reaction occurred, as the bio-chemical spread throughout the island, the indigenous plants and wildlife thrived, though the natives of the island were left unaffected, or so it first appeared. In the years that followed, strange things were reported coming from the island, specifically, with the children native to the island. It was reported that all the female children born after the bio-chemicals was tested had glowing eyes, while most of the male children usually died upon birth or up to several months after. After this, the main land was flooded with reports of strange events from the island’s native children. As the war erupted, children from the island developed odd abilities such as telekinesis, precognition, levitation, telepathy, and the ability to communicate and manipulate plants and wildlife native to the island. However, these reports were left unchecked, at the end of the war, only 14 years later is that when these children of “paradise” come of age, they became unstable, which led to the “paradise” island massacre, nearly 1400 natives to the island were killed, many more immigrants, tourists, and other foreigners, leaving only the children born with glowing eyes to remain.

Years following the massacre and the war, the children of “paradise” have been harvested and their powers adapted for government use to “keep the peace”.  After years of testing, there are three absolutes known about the daughters of paradise.

1. Children of the island “paradise” will continue to be born asexually and continuously, the origin of these children remains unknown, they all appear at the ages 5-10

2. at the age of 16, children of Paradise Island are considered “feral”, it takes exactly 16 shots to kill a feral daughter, and for every year left alive after that point, it will require one more bullet to kill them.

3. As long as they are “adopted”, daughters can share curtain abilities with a human host.

To adopt a “daughter” the bond is two parts;

 A physical contract in which both the host and the daughter in question must offer a drop of blood for each year the contract is to be upheld. After a year, a drop of blood evaporates.

Secondly, a possessionary seal where each party of the contracts blood is sealed within a cherished possession of the other. The daughter cannot destroy this possession willingly, however the host may destroy the item given to him or her to end the contract with the daughter. As well as this, when a daughter is adopted, they are given a brace, at any time this brace can give up to 32 doses of highly potent nerve toxin which could kill the daughter at any time the host sees fit.

Daughters though widely disliked for their destructive power. However, they are used as Coadjutor for proctors in the Civil Enforcement agency (C.E.A) who are in charge of keeping the peace in civil and bordering nations. Also, the CEA is in charge of finding rouge or feral “daughters” and killing them. As “daughters” are seen as a major threat to the national security, if one is escapes the borders it could result in a mass genocide. Any “daughter” without a proctor, or without a brace, possessionary seal, or other seal is to be killed on sight. the CEA is also to seek out any new evidence of “daughters” being born, created artificially, or otherwise.

Concept: A new mysterious new threat has appeared, one which might bring about another war. A mysterious group of extremists called “The Kinn” have been killing CEA proctors and kidnapping or liberating “daughters” leaving us without a trace. This leads to mistrust within the newly joined union of nations as it is widely believed they are spies from bordering nations who are trying to get their hands on, and mass produce “daughters” for the reason of bringing war upon the now peaceful countries. As this is going on, civil rights activists for daughters riot against the CEA and its agents for its policies regarding “daughters” as tools of war, or weapons. As the world teeters on the edge of war once again, things seem only to become more cryptic and as more answers are revealed, even more questions surface.

ill be posting the first chapter soon, as well as maps and perhaps character designs.

so, i noticed today on my account that I've reached 98 posts (99 counting this one) and i was thinking of some way to celebrate, i was wondering if i could get some help and/or ideas from my fellow raiders, i was thinking to either start a new series/story or maybe put out a chapter on one of my existing scripts but im not sure, i dont want to be to inactive on the forum while im making this decision. So, any ideas of what i should do?

Develop Your Story / Re: Concept for "Fallen"
« on: March 21, 2014, 03:19:56 PM »
i dont want to give to much away, i will say, however, that their homeland is nuetral and isolated from a war right outside their borders, And the obvious reason for them wanting to return is that their family and everything they have ever known are withing the borders of their homeland.

Develop Your Story / Re: Concept for "Fallen"
« on: March 20, 2014, 10:56:00 AM »
the story is about the rash discrimination of the era and these two boys looking for a new home and a way to restore honor to their names. However, this is a time of war and lines have been made. In order to find a new home, they will have to cross these borders and through the war itself.

(i have removed the angle vs demon concept, it was a wash and over done plus i prefer the struggles of man to that of a god or demi-god.)

General Manga writer discussions / Done to death
« on: March 19, 2014, 03:31:25 PM »
by: white

i think there is an over saturation of curtain ideas and concepts which is flooding the main stream, these ideas are ussually used so not to resort on original thinking and rather leeching of the success of a previous concept, theme or idea. I realize an idea can be reimagined to create a new, original concept. But i believe that can only be done so many times before the original idea concept or theme becomes a deluted mess. So, in your optinion, what concepts, themes or ideas have been done to death?

Develop Your Story / Concept for "Fallen"
« on: March 19, 2014, 03:14:39 PM »
(UPDATE: ive eliminated the "angel vs. demon aspect as it has been over done, instead it is now more of a man vs. society story)


For the greatest crimes against their county, two boys have been expselled from their homeland. Unfortunantly, the world is much more hostile in a time of war, in this age of panic and rash Xenophobia and discrimination they are prosicuted as these two boys must find a way back home.

any comments? ideas? ect. that can help me this story off the ground?

age: 14
race: Asian-american


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