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Messages - Ryuzaki

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Members Manga / Re: [Beige] Manga: Shadow's Love
« on: February 22, 2015, 10:04:03 AM »
OMG, there is so little background and tiny minute details splattered here and there but the story is interesting! MOAR.

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Members Manga / Re: The Promised Land
« on: February 22, 2015, 09:59:32 AM »
Pretty cool way of telling a story, it's like a picture book... but comic style lol. Nice.

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Members Manga / Re: DARK-SIDE-HERO
« on: February 07, 2015, 05:10:15 AM »
Yes. Definitely needs moar! This is just the epilogue isn't it? We need the main story!

The art is fantastic. Though there is just too much text to read in one speech bubble, which can be solved by having more bubbles.

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Members Manga / Re: Da Brigade!
« on: February 07, 2015, 05:07:21 AM »
Nice, this comic really gets the reader hooked from the get-go.

Nothing much can be said about the story until a few more pages are out but it has a lot of potential!

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Members Manga / Re: The Infinite Reality (New Version)
« on: February 07, 2015, 05:05:04 AM »
Woah! Nice backgrounds, and nice perspectives! Can't wait to see more!

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Members Manga / Re: Guessstar Short Manga
« on: February 07, 2015, 04:58:17 AM »
Read the whole thing.

Your screenplay is done pretty well, you chose appropriate angles to show different scenes depending on the situation. Love the range of characters that you have in just 1 chapter.

Okay, hre's some helpful tips:
1)Make your speech bubbles bigger, since sometimes it looks like you're trying to squeeze words into little boxes.
2)Try not to overuse the computer shadings. It looks plainly obvious. Just adding more black to your drawings will give you the contrast you need.
3)You may want to keep practicing on your perspective, just keep drawing.
4)Look at some manga action lines for background. The lines are not all evenly spaced out, it's actually irregular. Doing so makes the action scenes look nicer.
5)You may want to use block letters for the sound effects?
6)Use more shadings on the backgrounds to make them look more realistic.

Your style is pretty similar to Bleach haha.

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Members Manga / Re: TSUYU
« on: April 19, 2014, 07:34:28 AM »
@legomaestro: Hehe, yes it was.

@KagePen: Sorry for the wait!

@Naya: Hey what's up? Thanks for reading it all the way!! :D

@Ayano Tanaka: Haha, that's because I used a ballpoint pen for the lineart of the first chapter..

@bossx5: Oh!! That's a great idea! Though I came up with the escaping part only after Alice showed up haha

@Adam Masterman: Thank you for the Constuctive criticism and tips!! Yeah, I'll try to make everything look more clearer!

CHAPTER 4 IS UPDATED!!




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General Discussion / Re: Ultimate Dream
« on: April 11, 2014, 10:06:48 PM »
Hehe... everyone's talking about their own dreams but nobody's commenting on other people's dreams. Edit: except for Coryn (my bad haha, you the man)

@Ayano Tanaka: The best ever manga artist eh.. well, you might or might not come to a point of realization that it's almost impossible to be the "best" in the world. The chances of you becoming the best is 1 out of ( the no. of ppl drawing manga - which is increasing in number everyday single day mind you). So, the chances is preeeeety slim. Not trying to shoot you down or anything, but it is more of a reminder. hahas, other than that, good luck with your dream! :)

@WatcherOfSky: That dream is exactly the same of that of every single author in this world, whether manga, comic, books, poems, show, movie, theater play, music album, podcast, whatever, you name it. But it is nevertheless a good dream, good luck in it :)

@KagePen: You sound like you're a tad too influenced by death note or something but that's okay. It's good that you have a noble purpose to your life and I'm looking forward to seeing you at your peak. Go get em'!!

@Lorenx1: Nice.

@GingerJoy: *Licks the spilt tea*

@Manimal: Yesh!! Traditional FTW, but still, you can't change the world, you can only change yourself. Seeing how the world is moving into the digital medium isn't that bad of a thing, but you can always advocate for the traditional cause but do note that you must thrive in the digital medium as well. hahas

@Coryn: Well said.

@ legomaestro: Lol

@Theonesuperx: Manga into a comic? You know that their both quite different right? Can't you just draw comic in the first place? Or do you mean you want a serialization of your manga? hahas, you can do it. :)

@ Hikari: Wooh!! Your ambitions are really set so far in the future. It's good that you know what you want in the end. But make sure to keep your options open and focus on what's happening now! haha. Good luck in your dream! :)

@Killer B: Hmmm.....you need to have a more concrete dream, because right now its kind of in the clouds and floating. So yep, a more solid dream will make you more motivated. Go at it man! :D

@IronQuill: Sounds pretty passive but if that's what you want then sure.

Yay, my turn my turn haha. I don't have a "Dream" but more of Ambitions.

1) Undergo Lasik treatment for me poor eyes
2)Become a Mangaka
3)???

It's still open for more because I don't have enough exposure to the world yet, so I'm keeping an open mind and my options open for what's to come. tehee.

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Members Manga / Re: TSUYU
« on: February 14, 2014, 10:11:50 PM »
@Everyone: Thank you for reading the manga! You guys are awesome!! :D

@SyncG4x: Yep, the lines will be scratchy for now until I switch to a G-pen to draw.

@legomaestro: Glad you enjoyed it

@Eva: Haha, thanks, I'm working on the speed of the story now.

Chapter 3 is updated with more pages!

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Manga Art Gallery / Duck training in progress
« on: February 13, 2014, 11:32:29 PM »
And that's the thread title haha.

I'm helping a friend of mine upload his works here for you all to critic and help with. You can address him as Res'Now.

"Here they are!"






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General Discussion / Re: MangaRaider's First Annual Mascot Contest!
« on: February 08, 2014, 08:02:49 PM »


This is actually a portrait of an actual Japanese girl I met haha.

But she looks great so why not?

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Members Manga / Re: TSUYU
« on: January 04, 2014, 06:36:27 PM »
Haha, we could be already.

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Members Manga / Re: TSUYU
« on: January 03, 2014, 07:22:23 AM »
1) Yep, it's my goal to become a mangaka in japan.

2) I'm the sole author of this project. I feature some characters created by friends as well.

3) Lol, this is easy. Because I find the upmost satisfaction in drawing manga. haha.

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Members Manga / Re: TSUYU
« on: January 02, 2014, 11:17:10 AM »
@Everyone: Haha! Thank you!!

@DXDEVIL13: Okay, I'll try to make them smoother.

@DBNext: Lol, I've done quite a bit of manga before so this is just training for me.

@Manimal: Lolol, I'll try to make the panels more cleaner for the future works.

@Lorenx1: haha, yeah, I get that a lot, need to work on the pacing of the story.

@KagePen: Nice, spot-on on the part where Kubo-sensei is my inspiration. His work was the first one I referenced from so there re quite a bit of similarity in style. Hmm, though I don't use references now anymore. (Except when drawing difficult poses, I'll search up the internet for models)
 Splitting art and story for now..haha, no can do, mate.. cannot lose momentum on this one.

UPDATE: 4 more pages added to Chapter 3!!

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Members Manga / TSUYU
« on: December 30, 2013, 05:05:08 AM »
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