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Messages - suupertramp

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« on: November 21, 2017, 01:48:54 PM »
i think the top half of the character is fairly ok, but the hips need to be quite a bit wider i think. i like the bark effect on the branches. good shading though on the character. hands are very well done compared to everything else.
obviously it depends on the style of clothing, but i think the horizontal part of the neck line of the top should be more straight, as if it is stretched between the breasts more, otherwise it looks loose. that may have been the intention though. its a very minor thing though :P
maybe the moon would look nice with a bit of texture?
but good use of tones from fully black to fully white, its very balanced.

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Narutogod's Drawings :)
« on: November 21, 2017, 01:31:50 PM »
thats a gorgeous woodland background!
i love it when the light shines through the trees and everything is green :P

Manga Art Gallery / Re: check out my work :P
« on: November 21, 2017, 01:30:42 PM »
i love your cel-shading style, its so anime-esque :P

Welcome Center / Re: Yo
« on: November 21, 2017, 01:29:21 PM »
welcome to MR!
there are a range of writers and artists who just dabble in their trade, to having it as a regular hobby, to doing it as partial or full employment. if you stick around long enough you'll see for yourself who is serious or passionate etc.
and yeah not many people are active all the time, but its gets busier and not busier depending on the season :P
I've done a couple of low quality chapters of different stories but i spend most of my time sketching to improve my level :P
looking forward to seeing your own art!

Members Manga / Re: Penance
« on: November 21, 2017, 09:21:41 AM »
i had a reread of the whole thing and its really gripping. I think your forte is definitely writing, so even with a lower quality art, if you forgive my saying, the story is very cliffhangery and i want to read more. that being said, your pencil drawn chapter was a very pleasant soft style, i much preferred that to the digital style. but keep trying and you'll find a style that suits you.
will you be writing another chapter? I'm looking forward to it

Welcome Center / Re: I'm back
« on: November 21, 2017, 09:08:32 AM »
lol it happens!
welcome back :P

Welcome Center / Re: Heart Explosion!
« on: November 21, 2017, 09:08:05 AM »
good old chuunibyou mode. looking forward to seeing your work!

Welcome Center / Re: Oi Mangaraiders, I'm Ogono.
« on: November 21, 2017, 09:07:13 AM »
welcome to MR!

Welcome Center / Re: HI everyone
« on: November 21, 2017, 09:05:46 AM »
thats a bunch of old animes. good times indeed. welcome to the crew :P
......and i geniusly managed to double post on a welcome thread. goes to show how good my memory is lol

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Rusinstein's Illustrations
« on: November 21, 2017, 09:04:14 AM »
I struggle with this.
August 2015 lol :P
just because you are good at something doesnt mean its easy :P

love the shading on the clothes, and some nice natural poses too. i think if you used darker shading on the body you might get a bit more depth out of it.

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Lewd Cat's Art (OC only)
« on: November 21, 2017, 08:58:50 AM »
Hi there!
it looks like you are linking to a google image, but i cant view it. You might be better off uploading to a file sharing website that allows you to share on forums. imgur is a quick and easy one :P

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Killer B Gallery
« on: November 21, 2017, 08:56:09 AM »
KILLER B!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
havent seen you for ages :P
great to see you again, nice sketch too. I see you're still using mspaint :P

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« on: November 21, 2017, 08:54:06 AM »
hi there! this is the first time ive seen your work i think!
i love your soft backgrounds, theyve got lots of detail but you didnt have to draw every last bit of it to be able to see it, you draw just enough to imply it, which is great :)
the clothes of your characters while being simple are realistic with all the folds and stuff in the rigth place which is very nice.

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Devola's Stuff
« on: November 21, 2017, 08:50:55 AM »
very cool. and background looks good so far, cant wait to see it finished. love all the glowy stuff too :P

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Ogono's Illustrations
« on: November 21, 2017, 08:49:53 AM »
this looks traditionally coloured? is so then props to you because i cant stand physically colouring :P
very cool looking manga too :P

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