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Messages - Hinata Tokumi

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Welcome Center / Re: Paulina WELCOME!!!
« on: May 06, 2011, 11:24:03 AM »
I made a mistake this isn't one of my friends. Who knew Paulina was such a common name in poland?

Welcome Center / Re: Paulina WELCOME!!!
« on: May 06, 2011, 11:22:57 AM »
Can I ask a QA?
Just basic Qs
Do you know me?
do you go to copland?

Welcome Center / Re: Paulina WELCOME!!!
« on: May 05, 2011, 05:24:29 PM »
OMG  Hi paulina it's me Shereen what's uuuuuup? Welcome to MR!! Enjoy yourself here! And anybody who messes with her... I will set you on fire. Great that you came to this site!!

D?mo arigat?. Finally, I get to move on to part 2. Yay!!

But before that tellme your full opinion on the story now?

Should I make another poll on my part 2 of my three part story

Sorry I meant that. I will correct it when I write some more in the actual story.

Let me answer your questions.

1. The legendary crow is Yuki's ancestor. Yuki's mum is a legendary crow therefore mum getting married to a guy... child birth... legend passed down to Yuki.

2. Basically, I want to keep him hidden. The first time I wrote this story, I got everyone's profiles but now it will take some time to describe since I've never done something like this before.

3. When I said the legend lives on I meant like the legendary crow's powers. (I think?)

I think I just figured out how to describe my story.

Title: Part 1: The Karasu
Genre: Romance, action, comedy
Centuries ago, there were different creatures that roamed the earth causing havoc for humans but there was one particular creature that didn't hurt humans but actually helped humans. Karasus. Karasus means crows. They are creatures that look human but have the features of a crow for example they were able to retract and protract their wings. They would tell other creatures to stop hurting humans but humans would think that we were teaming up with the other creatures. In conclusion, creatures, including Karasus, were driven out towns by humans so creatures were thinking of two options. Co-existing with humans or secretly live from humans. One day, a karasu was caught by a human picking some berries from a bush and a war broke out because the human thought that the karasu was a demon. They rewarded us with the nickname tengu when we were only karasus. Tengus are crow demons. A lot blood was shed and a lot lives were taken away. Suddenly, the population of Karasus was going down and it wasn't because of the humans killing them it was something else. Creatures known as chigaus was killing Karasus and stealing their powers to kill humans. Another war broke out and it was now between the Chigaus and the humans. Suddenly, during the battle, a large explosion knocked everyone off they feet in the battle. A teenager, that was crying and cut up, screamed no. She began to glow different colours. She unlocked her powers and she looked an angel. She used her powers to calm the war down and using her powers, peace was restored. She was known as the legendary crow..... A couple centuries ago, in the 21st century, the legend still lives on. Seventeen year old, Yuki, has been running for a long time away from Chigaus. Her parents disappeared when she was young. No trace of them: no clue or anything. Nowhere is safe for her. Everywhere she goes, she is encountered by chiagus. How will she get away if they're everywhere she goes? You'll find out soon.

Character descriptions

Name: Yuki
Personality: Nice, softhearted, strong, stubborn, easily angered.
Yuki is a seventeen year old that is very kind and loving but she does have her strong side as well. She has long brown hair and she is the right height for a seventeen year old. She is currently running from chigaus because of being the daughter of the previous legendary crow thus inheriting her powers. Her parents have disappeared and she doesn't know whether they're dead or not. She was previously visited by a guy about her age in a dream that she had before any of this even happened and she was told to run as fast as she could because he was going to save her though the chigaus were on her tail. They finally catch up to her but at the moment she is about to die she is saved by the guy from her dream. Yuki uses different types of elements and powers. 

Name: Kyo
Personality: Loving, jealous easily, perverted, strong.
Kyo is the same age as Yuki but he is older than her. He has long black hair that he ties in a ponytail and he's taller than Yuki. He is Yuki's childhood friend and her saviour. She forgot about him because of the whole chase between the chigaus and her. He uses his powers to enter her dreams and talk to her. Even though he's seventeen, he owns a school that looks after people like him and other creatures which includes vampires. Kyo takes Yuki to the school and there she discovers she's a legendary crow because of Kyo. He is very protective over Yuki because of his love for her. He is only perverted to Yuki because he loves her. Kyo uses electricity as his power

Name: Sky
Personality: Kind, a little weak.
She appears in most of the story and she is one of the first friends Yuki makes in the school. She is short and has dyed blue hair with black streaks going through her hair. Sky sometimes gets caught up when Yuki is being kidnapped and normally gets hurt. She is younger Yuki and she's like a baby sister. Sky uses the air as an advantage to hurt people for example she can use the air to hurtle people to the other side of a room.

Name: Kiru
Personality: Crafty, sly.
Kiru is part of another a school and he slipped into Yuki's dream. He imposed as Kyo and tried to do something to Yuki. He has short green hair that looks like bed hair. He is from the second school and has come and try and capture Yuki and bring her to his boss. He is very annoying and one feature of him that is a snake like is he has a very long tongue that he can shorten or make long.

Name: Yamato
Personality: Perverted, annoying, strong.
Yamato is the second crow is that appears in this story. He is after something that has to do with Yuki. He is after her energy. Using her energy, he can become stronger. He's very intimidating and in some way, he begins to like Yuki. When gets a opportunity, he tries something perverted on Yuki but when Yamato realises that Yuki loves Kyo he begins to understand that he has no chance. (Sorry I can't describe him anymore because I'm still editing my story so I still have to think of the character's profiles)

New characters to com

Yuki's mum and dad

Please bear with me but I will definitely have the character profile.
Gomen nasai for the mistakes. Make any comments please. I wanna hear your opinions ;D.

I'm almost done but I have some stuff to do.

I feel so happy today cause I found out how to explain the plot of my story but it's pretty long! Hope you enjoy it!!! :thumbsup:

Things are going great now!

Also It is my first time doing doing this so.... and also, I'm not very good at description. I apologise for all the mistakes and the parts that don't make sense.

I started this when I was about twelve but I kind of modified it. By the way, it's a three part story.

Title: Part 1: The Karasu
Genre: Romance, action, comedy
Plot: There are hideous creatures called Chiagus(Different) that roam the world looking for people that are half crow to kill them and devour their powers. There a specific crow. One that has far more power than any crow in the entire world and right she is in the world. The girl, Yuki, is on the run from Chigaus and she has to hid anywhere safe. Nowhere is safe so all she can do is run but right when her life is about to end, the unexpected happens.

....That's so far what happens but I'm not telling you the rest. That would ruin the surprise.  :-X Anyway, to the characters!!!

The characters

Name: Yuki
Age: 16
Main character.
She is currently running away from her death and when she is about to die, she is saved by her saviour. She is taken to a school people like her and in the school she has to go through perverted half humans and fights. Her blood contains the power of a legendary crow and right now, she is safe. At leasts that's what she thinks. She is a legendary crow that posses different types of powers for example she is able to control fire, ice, water, plants, shadows(?), and one of my favourites, angelic powers. She also has a super transformation but I'm not going tell you what it is. She also has different clothing and different hair colours and styles when she transforms. She is sort of strong and but she can get scared easily. She will do anything to help her friends and loved ones. She is medium and has brown hair.

Name: Kyo
Age: 17
Main character.
He is a guy that visited Yuki in one of her dreams to warn about the coming of the Chigaus. He tells her that he's going to save her but he also tells her that she has to run and wait for him. His a little perverted but he loves Yuki a lot but she just hasn't realised it yet. He's a crow as well but he posses the power of electricity. His hair changes from brown to yellow when he transforms and he is Yuki's childhood friend. He get's jealous like any other guy and he's the principal of the first school. In the monster world, there is no such thing as illegal.  :thumbsup:

Those two are the main main characters but I don't want to explain everyone in the story it will take a long time to. So yeah

Welcome Center / Re: Kind of shy but I love Manga.
« on: April 25, 2011, 11:57:08 AM »
I can sort of draw but thing is I can only copy but the pictures I copy are pretty good.

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