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Messages - Coryn

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General Manga writer discussions / Re: Doubting my ideas
« on: Today at 07:51:37 PM »
My first impression is that it was hard enough to follow all the stuff happening in your summary. I think you're suffering from a classic case of clutter. Just that paragraph was all over the place. I couldn't tell you what tone you're shooting for there.

Take a hard look and pull out things that don't ultimately matter to the story. Find your core, and then add the accessories which make it better. Otherwise, you'll just drown the main course in aide dishes.

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*ushers you two away from the annuls of history*

Chainsaw away, just do it in the foyer. No blood on the scrolls.

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MR Pub / Re: Chit Chat 2018
« on: Today at 07:46:50 AM »
I'm pretty sure there are female events for every Olympic event.

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MR Pub / Re: Chit Chat 2018
« on: February 20, 2018, 02:41:10 PM »
I invite you all to remember that Day of 1000 Styles is still a thing that exists.

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Welcome to mangaraiders! You can post images using a pair of image tags (click the Mona Lisa icon above the emotes when posting to generate some)

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Members Workshops / Re: The Day Of 1,000 Styles
« on: February 19, 2018, 02:04:53 PM »
Spoiler
STYLE 52-A

And then Coryn played the most wic-wiggity-whack beat in his power.

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MR Pub / Re: MR Visual Novels
« on: February 19, 2018, 01:59:06 PM »
(finally gets around to looking at the Vacant sketch)

Maybe a little stiff, but just being a VAN sprite, it's not super important for him to be super active looking. I might suggest adding some scruff to his face though. Might help him stand out a little.

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MR Pub / Re: MR Visual Novels
« on: February 18, 2018, 08:29:58 PM »
I definitely remember seeing some rough sketches of these. They look really good in color! I like Ecchi-tan's hair a lot as well.

I wouldn't worry about redoing them. Let's just concentrate on getting something out the gate for each character. Keeps things simple.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Galactic Raiders
« on: February 17, 2018, 06:18:51 PM »
I assure you I have no such interest.  :o

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MR Pub / Re: MR Visual Novels
« on: February 17, 2018, 06:18:01 PM »
Keep that foot down Echo!

Honestly I don't think any one  could be more "canon" than the next. And I'm sure Lego is more than willing to have to take point.

But more to the point: you have Writer and Ecchi-tan sprites?!?!!! Please share!

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MR Pub / Re: Chit Chat 2018
« on: February 17, 2018, 06:11:37 PM »
You're never truly alone. All the lurkers are here to keep you company.

Forever.

And ever.

And ever.

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MR Pub / Re: Chit Chat 2018
« on: February 17, 2018, 08:35:46 AM »
It's certainly been worse. But we are mid school semester. It can't be helped.

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MR Pub / Re: MR Visual Novels
« on: February 17, 2018, 08:34:43 AM »
I will argue that 3.0 needs long "hair, since he was based on early Coryn, and I also suggest loosing the pupils. He just looks haunted like that  :ohmy:

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Members Workshops / Re: The Day Of 1,000 Styles
« on: February 17, 2018, 08:31:25 AM »
If you're worried about that Fro, you're missing half the point of 1000 styles.

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Develop Your Story / Re: Galactic Raiders
« on: February 16, 2018, 02:03:21 PM »
I don't remember enough about the previous chapters to contradict you, but that doesn't sound right.

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