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break Room / Re: Post your birthday ...
« on: January 15, 2021, 12:32:38 PM »
My birthday recently passed, but it's January 9. It kinda feels weird that I'm 20 now...

Welcome Center / Re: New Guy Introduction
« on: January 15, 2021, 12:14:01 PM »
Hi Ryu welcome aboard.

Everyone is an amateur writer until they're not you know

Thank you kindly.

Manga Writers wanted / Re: ANIME WRITER/ ANIME ARTISTS
« on: January 15, 2021, 12:09:27 PM »
I'm so confused. What's your priority? A writer or an artist?

Manga Creations / Densetsu: A Beautiful Day
« on: November 07, 2020, 09:55:12 PM »
This is my first time sharing a story on this website, still kinda new, so let me know if there's anything I need to fix. I'm always trying to improve myself! For now, I'm just going to share the prologue of my story. It's called the Densetsu Series. Hope you enjoy it!

Brief Summary: There resides a world that hides behind ours, separated by a mystical barrier. A utopia where humans and other beings such as fairies, yokai, and even gods live peacefully together. High in the mountain, there lives a shrine maiden who guards the border that conceals its identity from us. This world is known as Densetsu, the world of the Legends, created by the Legends.

Upon setting foot into the empty room, the black-haired boy noticed a circular pit in front of him. Visible blazing lights illuminated the room from below the pit. And ahead, a bridge awaited his next destination to another room. Falling off the metal bridge would incinerate him in a couple of seconds. Previously warned of the dangers, he sought to complete his objective: to destroy the generator. Deadly smoke havocked their world—the other world that lurked behind his own. Sickness filled the air, and the people were caught by it. Coming from a different place, this boy was unaffected. If the generator wasn’t stopped soon, this other land the boy discovered would rot.

The dreaded hot wind from the pool of lava blew through his soul as he progressed. His hands swelled, turning red the further he continued. Oxygen became harder to grasp, his breaths shortened, and his vision blurred.

The generator...must be...here, he thought. Even as he headed further into the next room where the generator resided, he realized how exhausted he became so quickly.  I must be...careful too... any enemy can come and...attack me. Sweat drenched his body. Each step touching the flames of the sun became harder than the other. By now, he should’ve been dead. He didn’t understand why he was able to withstand such intense heat.

A rustling movement caught his attention. The boy halted, and he caught sight of a young golden-haired girl in an azure cloak. Her appearance was expected. Before coming here, he was previously warned about this girl—he knew what to do, searching through his pockets. “So you must be Project Device Type-0013 NEW?”

“Analyzing… Target… Complete… Returning into Memory Mode…” Then, she opened her eyes, their gazes interlocking with each other. She met his chestnut eyes while he stared into her azure eyes. “Kotaro! Have you come here to kill me… again?”

The young man recalled no memories of this young girl. He saw nothing in her but scraps of machine embodied with violence. “I’m not here to kill you. I’m here to destroy you and the generator!” Kotaro answered. NEW burst into laughter, but Kotaro remained silent.

“Oh, Kotaro! You’re so funny! Killing and destroying are the same thing,” she teased maliciously. “Let’s have fun and kill each other again!” The tone of her sweet and innocent voice became more sinister and evil, but he didn’t fret.

Kotaro was at a disadvantage. With the fiery heat burning his skin from both the inside and outside, he wouldn’t last very long. He had no other choices. It was either fight or die. “Power Sword!” Kotaro commanded. The stick in Kotaro’s hand morphed into a double-edged sword. “Get ready to be destroyed, you stupid machine!”

“Project Device Gear Activate,” the girl commanded. A sword-shaped object fell between Kotaro and NEW. With one swing from Kotaro’s sword, the heavy impact pushed Kotaro away from NEW. He dropped his sword, and his hands touched the metal floors. Kotaro groaned as his hand made contact with the heated floor. Enduring the fiery pain, he picked up his sword and stood up. “Project Device Type-0013 NEW Combat Mode.” The object disappeared, and Kotaro opened his eyes to see NEW in different clothes. He was impressed by how swiftly she changed clothes. Her cloak disappeared, replaced by a thick azure suit with gray metal shoulder plates. Two identical swords appeared in NEW’s hands, and the two commenced battle.

Kotaro resumed his attack, grunting upon every swing. NEW stood still before clashing her blade to his into a shower of sparks. Laughter filled the battle. NEW used her other sword in an attempt to impale Kotaro. Luckily, Kotaro pushed her away from him, resulting in NEW losing her balance and nearly falling off the bridge.

Now’s my chance! Kotaro thought. He dashed forward with a readied slash. He twisted his body, gathering enough strength to finish the blow.

Then, it occurred, and it would always happen: the Infinite Loop. No matter what happened or how many times it has changed, the conclusions remained the same. Crimson stained the metal floors. The days continued to repeat itself, and eventually, the two would come to meet once more in combat. In their fight, he fell into battle again, and the day would repeat itself once more. This was not the first of his attempt to stop the machine and the generator that corrupted the other world with sickness. The world went round and round, a never-ending world it became. The kaleidoscope never stopped.

“How did you…get me?” Kotaro panted as he convulsed fresh scarlet. Unknown to him, cold steel impaled his chest from behind.

“Summoning Technique: Undefined Saber. I thought you knew I was bound to use Skills for our fight,” said NEW. Smoke-like particles of energy billowed from her fingertips. “But I was wrong…” Carelessly, she walked towards Kotaro, ignoring the pain of the sharp steel piercing through her chest. At last, they were together.

“Let’s become one, Kotaro! Let me accept you, Kotaro!” NEW exclaimed, smiling. “Engaging Project Device Type-0000 THE END…unleashing the ultimate power,” Wrapping her arms around Kotaro, NEW moved backward as she dragged his lifeless body. Without warning, they both burned into cinders. Then, the pool of lava began changing to an emerald hue.

A different man watched their battle from the sides. He spoke to himself in his soliloquy. “And he failed once more...” A girl in red robes sat next to him.

“I’ll see you again, Yuuki Nohara,” she said.

“Kamiyama Shrine Maiden, how many loops have we experienced?” Yuuki asked, “I’m already sick of doing this again!”

A heavy sigh was exhaled into the world. “This is our twentieth Infinite Loop,” she revealed no emotion through this conversation. The tears and worries had already been dried for the scarlet lady. “Kotaro… we’ll meet again.”

Interesting fact, I worked on this over 100 times--but I still don't think it's good YET. I was kinda hesitant to share my story, but I realize I needed to push my boundaries if I wanted people to read my stories. Plus, if I don't improve, I'll stagnate--and I think that's everyone's biggest fear. Anyway, thank for reading! I love to hear some feedback, and then I'll post the next few chapters every now and then!

Welcome Center / Re: New Guy Introduction
« on: October 25, 2020, 11:46:42 AM »
Welcome to the forum, Ryu! What do you like to write about?

I like to write fantasy. I have a whole GoogleDocs full of stories that I've been writing on. Let's just say there's... a lot of writing. Many trail and error done there and there, always trying to improve!

Video / PC Games / Re: Favorite Video Games??
« on: October 25, 2020, 11:34:29 AM »
My favorite games were the Dynasty Warriors franchise, Rune Factory Frontier, Street Fighter II, and Xenosaga.

Video / PC Games / Re: Pokemon dream team?
« on: October 25, 2020, 11:32:40 AM »
Oooh, this is hard lol! There's so much Pokemon that I love to have as my dream team. I think if I were to have one, I think it'd be:


Video / PC Games / Re: Favourite Pokemon and Why?
« on: October 25, 2020, 11:26:46 AM »
The legendary Pokemon, Lugia, will always hold a special place for me. The movie Pokemon 2000: The Power of One was my first movie, and when it talked, I thought that was cool. I remembered as a kid I would tell my uncles that my Lugia can talk just like in the movies lol

Video / PC Games / Re: any game francises that you are waiting for?
« on: October 25, 2020, 11:22:45 AM »
For me, it's always the Rune Factory series. I was excited to hear that Rune Factory 5 was coming soon, but I had so much memories with that game.

break Room / Re: tell me of your dreams wwwww
« on: October 25, 2020, 11:20:21 AM »
My dream is to become author.

break Room / Re: Do you easily cut ties with your friends/family?
« on: October 24, 2020, 10:44:26 AM »
For me personally, it's hard for me to cut ties from someone. Family, it's hard to do that. That's important to me. Like, I have some troublesome brothers, but I still love them as their older brother despite scolding them for making poor decisions.

Friends though, like the comment above, some come and go. But the closest friends are the special ones. Those guys are the ones you can be comfortable around, banter at each other like crazy, or even be your emotional support. They're like an additional family member to you because of the bonds and connection forged over the time, and that's difficult to cut ties with. But, it certainly does hurt if the bond gets thrown away out of the window.

I remember having a toxic friend who I thought I had a close bond with, but it was obvious I just had to cut all ties with him because he wasn't the person I knew back in grade school. The dude cared only himself, self-proclaimed messiah, and manipulative. The guy refused to get help and thought he was his own medicine. There's more to the story, but it's all in the past. I was just done with dealing with him.

In conclusion: Family = no. Friends = maybe.

break Room / Re: Which Manga do you want an anime made for it?
« on: October 24, 2020, 10:23:53 AM »
Records of Ragnarok, only because I want to see the crazy fights adapted into an anime. Though, I highly doubt it would do justice for the manga.

break Room / Re: What made you become an artist/writer?
« on: October 24, 2020, 10:21:21 AM »
My reason for writing may sound childish or even unrealistic, but I just want to share my writing to people. Plus, I love writing. That's about it.

Welcome Center / Re: New Guy Introduction
« on: October 24, 2020, 10:10:08 AM »
Thanks for the heads up! I had a feeling I wasn't supposed to post an email address.

Welcome Center / New Guy Introduction
« on: October 23, 2020, 01:52:05 PM »
Hello, my name is Ryu! I'm new here, but it's nice to meet you! Found this on Google, thought it would be cool to check it out. I'm just a writer, or someone who strives to be a writer. Though, I'm an amateur. Still looking forward to improve nonetheless!

Edit: Deleted email address

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