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« on: June 22, 2020, 06:32:10 PM »
Hello guys thank you for the quick reply and feedback.
Coryn :
That's a great point perhaps I should have done an introduction chapter explaining the world that this story will
take place in. You are definitely right if you read this chapter and thought that this was confusing and abrupt then maybe I should have taken more time to show the brother and sister spending time together and then maybe the other side of the portal... but on the other hand I wanted the audience to be suprised and not know about what's behind the portal as this is what the audience will explore as the story progress. For example in Bleach Rukia appears out of nowhere fighting the hollows ,so I am just thinking how can I do it better but still leave the element of surprsie.
No1SY
The brother and sister will be moving out to city together. They were working hard on the rice field to save money. They are very excited about that move. I think you are right, perhaps I should create way more panels of them spending time together and working hard and discussing their future plans etc...I will bare that in mind and maybe redo this chapter when the art gets better and I figure out the story completely. As for my art this is definitely not close to what I would like it to look like ,I guess it will take time to find the style and improve. The art will probably change a little bit all the time as I haven't figured out my own style so I am just trying to draw what I see in my head.
I will post again when I create more panels, I am trying to work as quick as possible. Maybe after next few chapters we will be able to figure out a less confusing way of showing my story.
Thanks again! :)
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I did not realise that they would dissapear from here as well. I just don't want them to be kept on the hosting website. Is there any other way I could upload images here? Thanks :)
