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I sat by my desk, staring idly at the marks my sandals left on the floor. Judging by the moon, more than a couple hours have passed since the incident. As much as I tried to distract myself with the scratches on the wooden surface, I couldn’t help but think back to the rest of the Viterran’s family. Had the rest of them been brought in? Were they informed about the death of their husband… of their father? Were they going to share the same fate as him? Holding my head, I tried to comprehend the situation. A part of me wished that I would forget it all together. To forget those eyes. No matter how hard I tried, I could not. The screams, my mother’s lifeless figure sprawled helplessly in front of me—my thoughts were swirling in a cloud of darkness, only those green eyes visible as it swallows me.
From outside my door, a pair of muffled voices sounded, talking softly to one another. After all those years, I instantly recognized who they belonged to: Leia and Ambrose. Turning my head ever so slightly, so that my ear pointed towards the direction of the door, I could nearly make out what they were saying. Most of their conversation consisted of concerned sighs, though. Eventually, there was a light knock on the door, almost as if it was not meant to be heard. I didn’t answer, quickly snapping my gaze back to the planks I was examining before. After a pause, Leia poked her head inside.
“My lady?” she asked calmly with a hint of surprise. She probably had expected me to be asleep when she entered, and tentatively pushed the door open before stepping in. “I brought some desert.”
She placed a small plate of sweets besides me in hopes cheer me up. Of course, ...
First and foremost, I'm sorry of the pitiful amount of content I covered in the last few days. D: I've been working a lot more with the details--logic in particular. The grammar is borderline perfect now, so I'm stepping up a level in my editing. This, however, means I will be working much more in depths with the consistency of the scenes and wording, which may take increased communication to settle down with the best result. I feel like if I write this too much to my style, I might skew some aspects that makes the story unique to you.
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MR Unofficial Discord Community. Alternatively, you can contact me at ArQane#6538 on Discord as well. This is my top choice since it allows for rapid real time communication, so we can discuss the points of clarification in detail.
The other option is PM on MR, which I'm opt in for as well. The process would be slower, but the results will ultimately be similar/the same. It's your choice.
Sorry I didn't do more, but I'm ready to crank down some editing. Keep up the good work!
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