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Manga Creations / Re: Drake of the darkness
« on: November 21, 2017, 07:19:40 PM »
I think u should consider spacing out a bit and using paragraphs, that way it would be easy to read. Cos honestly I got lost when I was reading. So pls try to space it out

Develop Your Story / A World For The Speedster God.
« on: September 13, 2017, 09:38:41 PM »
So as part of creating a bigger story, I got an idea to write about one of the gods in my story as a side story.


A young reckless god, bored of his lifestyle sets out on an adventure in a new world.

This has undergone some reviews and edits but seeing as its a work in progress it still needs some changes. Let me know what you think.


Somewhere in the void of creation; the vast parts where nothing existed with nothing to be seen but the dim lights of worlds (universes) several millions of light years away stood two beings hovering in the void of nothingness.
One lamenting and pleading in a childish manner
“You have been around longer than I have and surely you must know how it is to feel unfulfilled and discontent. Please help me like the good friend you are.
The yellow silhouette listened but gave no reply. In attempt to pursue his desire as persistent as he is: “Erhh… even if you can’t help as a friend; do it as a watcher, or as a brother like the mortals would say.”

And the other, resisting his friend; though thoughtful, kind and understanding among other qualities saw no other end to this conversation than to rather give in, because if he didn’t this; this worrisome god will follow him to the ends of creation relentlessly and effortlessly.
“Sigh, fine. If thou have decided to be so stubborn about it, I shall fulfill your desire. But fair warning reckless friend of mine; thou ought to be careful of what he wishes for, even if thou art a god, for consequences pay no heed to status.”

Overjoyed in hearing his wishes approved, he breaks out in the excitement
“Thank you big brother, I knew you wouldn’t let me down.”

Turning to his right side, glancing through the lights far out in the void;
“Another troublesome one is about to be born.”

Deep in the void but not far off from where they stood, a light appeared out of nowhere and started to expand gradually and slowly taking a spiral shape.

A new universe had been born, a universe, a world full of beings capable of reaching the ends of the world in the blink of an eye; a world full of speedsters.

“There you have it. The deed is done, but thou hopes and expects you can handle the consequences, oh reckless little brother of mine.”

Hurriedly bowing on one knee in the void of space as the swift god he is, the reckless little brother in question lets out a tone, one he rarely lets out, clear and firm, filled with confidence, bent on seeing his universe through to the end no matter what;
“I, as the god of speed bow to you the god of imagination and creation and on behalf of the other gods seeing and hearing this; the god of gods Adromeda, the elder god-guardian, the gods of old and all gods in creation vow to be held solely responsible for the happenings in this new world of mine.”

Hearing his conviction and determination the god of imagination was pleased;
“Very well little god, be gone to your new world and enjoy, find what you so wish to discover.”

With a smirk, the little god sped off into this new world exploring the countless planets, stars, solar systems and galaxies.
Observing this new world; planet by planet, solar system by solar system and galaxy by galaxy he became knowledgeable of every single existence in this new found universe and was revered as the overlord of every celestial body he visited.


Manga Creations / Re: Shinigami no Tora
« on: September 13, 2017, 07:27:48 PM »
Write in a way you flow easily, you can always re-edit or change your writing style once all I done. Good plot btw :thumbsup:, kinda reminds me of ushio to tora :D

Manga Creations / Re: The God Killer Chronicles
« on: September 12, 2017, 07:00:47 PM »
A good read. When do you plan on releasing the next chapter?

Develop Your Story / Re: my first official project: Chimera
« on: September 12, 2017, 06:51:13 PM »
What a twist and turn of events, a story focused on a reformed vilian and the modern world. I'd like to see how it plays out.

Develop Your Story / Re: Couple of ideas
« on: September 12, 2017, 06:39:41 PM »
Its an awesome journey you're about to embark on with lots of new interesting stuff at each turn. The ideas you have are cool and as a fellow writer, I get excited each time I see a story structure like yours.

Develop Your Story / Re: Worldbuilding Project
« on: September 12, 2017, 06:30:06 PM »
A very well detailed and structured world, I'd like to see how it unfolds as a story.

Develop Your Story / Re: I need Advice for this Plot
« on: September 12, 2017, 06:26:56 PM »
So its basically action based? The plot is good and there is lot to build on like how the world would deal with such changes and how the government or people in power would deal with this new change. Does he make friends or meet people like him or does he go solo on adventures?

Develop Your Story / Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (COMPLETED)
« on: September 12, 2017, 04:18:39 PM »
This is an awesome read with anime vibe and I can definitely see it play in my head, I'm gonna have to binge read all the arcs😁.  Waku waku💜

Manga Creations / Re: The Chronicles of Alti: Legend of Delta
« on: August 06, 2017, 09:14:51 PM »
Wow... I'm almost speechless.
As a person doing what you're also doing, writing various spin offs, i feel your determination, and to be so far off into it, it musnt have been easy. I think youve motivated me in one way or another.

Just keep doing what youre doing. It will definitely pay off one day :thumbsup:

Manga Creations / Re: Legomaestro`s Storybox
« on: August 06, 2017, 08:37:57 PM »
First story sounds cool. I think it'd be more
fun if you spiced it up a bit like Coldmiser suggested.

The second one had a strong battle manga feel to it... Even the the dialogues but i didnt see that coming, :D love, the girl and him... Honestly i was looking forward to a clash of swords but either way, it was good. Keep it up😁

General Manga writer discussions / Re: Writer Discussion Table
« on: August 06, 2017, 04:42:07 PM »
I found my core when writing by heart by soul (finally), and it will require me to rewrite the first chapter. I don't know if I can make my writing has life but I will try and do it with the help of articles. My main problem is motivation.

Oddly  enough i seem to be facing the same problem. No motivation. Whats worse is the ideas and concepts are being thrown around in my head. Its quite frustrating.

Manga Talk / Re: what manga are u reading now?
« on: August 06, 2017, 02:08:28 PM »
Feng shen ji
The god of highschool

Manga Talk / Re: Where do you read Manga Online ?
« on: August 06, 2017, 02:04:43 PM »
Over my manga reading years, i have never been so in love with an app before. Pocket manga is awesome tho you cant find on play store.

General Discussion / Re: if someone made a fan opening of your story
« on: July 17, 2017, 03:22:06 PM »
Its not officially an anime but I think I'd choose god of high schools trailer.

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