Hi there all, here I have a story that I recently came up with, and I kinda need reviews and such, so feel free to comment and bash on my story's flaws ^^. Names in this story are temporary, so if I found a better name I could change it.
Grimera Hunters
Orcus.
The place filled with catastrophe. For centuries, kingdoms have been fighting over territories and glory.
The Orcus consists of 5 great lands, which the kingdoms have been fighting over, and many more smaller lands which only a few kingdoms fight over. It is also home to places yet to be discovered.
Those 5 great lands are Solshire, Valmorde, Mios, Blackmist, and Alterilocus.
Years upon years have the kingdom fought. But one day, 80% of the kingdoms decided to unite in order to save themselves from their damnation.
Out of nowhere, grimeras started to show up. Grimeras are large beasts with superpowers. This led to the unity of 80% of the kingdoms of Orcus
They started their counter attack, killing a huge amount of grimeras. This counter attack was a fail however, when they discovered that more grimeras are about to tackle.
They decided to create a weapon to fight the grimeras. The scientists collaborated and created an amulet that could absorb a grimera's power from it's corpse, and allow the holder to use the grimera's powers.
The amulet can contain unlimited amount of grimera powers. Powers such as firebreathing, armor creating, lightning manipulation, and others were used.
This amulet is called Mjölnir.
The kingdoms started their 2nd counter-attack by using the amulets they have
The 2nd counter-attack went well, but only for a short time. There are grimeras with powers far beyond theirs. The 2nd counter-attack was another fail.
The kingdoms realized that they cannot win with their powers.
They started to ask the civilians for help. The kingdoms set a bounty on the grimeras head, with a tier 5 grimera being the cheapest and a tier 1 grimera being the most expensive.
Interested, the civilians started purchasing Mjölnirs and formed factions. Together, they venture the Orcus in search for grimeras. From that day on, the age of Grimera Hunters started. Mankind successfully launched a counter-attack. With the unity of 80% of the Orcus' kingdoms, and the help of civilians, the fight was brought to the grimeras
Owen Whiteheart is a 17-year-old boy who was given a Mjölnir by his lost dad. Inside it is the power of the Crimson Grimera. The story is basically about the adventure of this guy and his factions.