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MR Pub / A Christmas wish?
« on: December 08, 2015, 01:15:58 PM »
So guys,what is your wish to santa this year?

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Develop Your Story / Operation:Blitzkrieg (short story)
« on: September 21, 2015, 11:11:35 AM »
Title:  "Operation:Blitzkrieg"

Genre:Drama,Slice of life,Tragedy,short story.

-A story of men and women that works on a Humanitarian organization for relief operations faced an ordeal on their career and life as they challenged one of the strongest storm in the history of mankind,

-Typhoon "Haiyan".


Do the title and description fits each other?..still dont know if its interesting to read though.
 

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General Manga writer discussions / Diary?
« on: August 30, 2015, 11:27:23 AM »
(I dont know if theres a topic about this already)

I really wanted to ask this matter to the people here but it almost took me atleast months to open this up.

In these modern age where people were busy from here and there doing their daily routines esp. work and school.

Does any of you ever here tried to sit down and make your own "Diary"? or tried to read one(if there is)?

I do have 2 diaries at my hand but these two arent mine,one is from my mother which i already finished reading years ago but and to say that,from back then and now,it is one of the best life story that i ever read so far(unfinished and always be)..
The one is from our neighboor and i can't read it because of the language used and im still searching how to translate it for me to know what's inside.

So any of you here have your own diary and continue writing on it? or ever tried reading one?..
so what does it feels to write on it(if you have one)?
and same as you read someonelse?   

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Anime Talk / GATE:Thus JSDF Fought There! Opinions and reactions.
« on: August 09, 2015, 01:45:30 PM »
So i created this topic to know some reaction,opinion of people here, whos been reading the manga series GATE:Thus JSDF Fought There! and about the ongoing series.

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General Discussion / Who is "he"?
« on: August 09, 2015, 11:20:16 AM »
So guys,i just want to ask if who is "pied piper"? because i was addressed by that name earlier.tried to search it and said it is a "folklore" and this is not the first time i am called like that,because of kind of busy and i dont have any knowledge of the story i kind of ignore it back then and forget it afterwards..but seems many person called me like that in my count and all of them is ive only meet for the first time..it all comes back when someone did it again today and its bugging me whole day why would they gave me that alias.

Opinions and links about that story is appreciated,so that i can build a better understanding of what they called as "pied piper"..thanks in advance.

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MR Pub / To extend others life..
« on: July 20, 2015, 12:01:20 PM »
Sorry for bringing this topic up and i don't know if it is the right place to post it.

To my fellow Raiders, Anyone of you here ever tried to donate something like
Spoiler
blood or something
to extend or save others life.

I just want to know your opinion and any other reactions in this matter.

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Develop Your Story / My girlfriend is Grimm Reaper's sister!
« on: March 24, 2015, 11:32:26 AM »
Title:My girlfriend is Grimm Reaper's sister!

Genre:comedy,slice of life,supernatural,romance,harem

oneshot:a 16 year old Akihiro Nagato aka "Hiro" also known as "the accident phrone boy" meet an accident while walking home together with his childhoodfriend,Risa.

After that tragedy,Hiro wakes up inside a small wooden boat in a dark river like way..with a skeleton rowing it.

in fear..he attempt to jump out of the boat but the skeleton stopped him and upon his resistance they accidentally collide and kissed each other,
Hiro passed and wakes up again with a beautiful girl kissing him and saying "take responsibility"
 
-the story is still in progress..shud i continue it?   

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my friend wants to know the little concept of F.G.2.M
so here's  a Little story.


Title:From Guns to Moms(F.G.2.M)
genre:comedy,military,slice of life,drama.sci fi



F.G.2.M is a story of four women who is from team phoenix of the organization called as C.H.R.O.M.E

C.H.R.O.M.E- is an anti-crime organization built alongside with U.N forces, working in shadows-destroying nuclear weapons and facilities,human experimentation laboratories,terrorist,etc-an organization that accepts women with extraordinary skills to perform any kinds of dangerous military mission just like many men can do..

C.H.R.O.M.E's  basic team consists of only four members that is specialized in different area of military skills ..

Team Phoenix will be in charge of destroying human experimentation laboratories mainly consist of four members which are:

Runa Ashebourne-Runa is a unnamed female child-at the age 9 years old,she was trained under the supervision of some great bomb makers in afghan(Terrorists) ,but with a certain test mission in Baghdad  to detonate the bomb she made to kill hundreds of civilians-she was captured by Janette Ashebourne-former member of team Phoenix(the person who baptized and named her as Runa and given her the last name Ashebourne)
Runa was taken by Joan to her homeland-The arctic
She practice creating bombs in the icy-lands and the story and reason behind her name will be told as the story goes off to tell about their pasts.
Runa will soon join the C.H.R.O.M.E in the age of 19 by the influence of Janette..her full background story will be told in a certain chapters.




Claire Willson-given name as "Kim" a Vietnamese-Filipino,ex-american special forces..raised in the rice fields of Vietnam,at the age of 7 she dreamed to be a rice farmer just like her parents do..she lived happily in the outskirts of Vietnam-she lived a simple life along with her parents and two younger brother when everything turns in a mess..
a sudden event when  a certain group of  people with guns destroyed her village,raped some women and killed many villagers which is dear to her..execute her parents as well as her two brothers right in front of her..as she ran away she killed at least 3 men with the sickle her father made which is meant for her dream to be a farmer-upon her escape she meet Flora Willson(an american traveler that saved her)
Flora took "Kim" to America,changes 'Kim" to Claire-

Claire will soon join the Special forces at the age of 20  But was given early retirement because of her achievements and mainly reason-some higher ups don't want to see a women in the team..upon a certain recommendation she will join the C.H.R.O.M.E-her full background story will be told in a certain chapters..



Joan Madrigal-  The eldest amongst the three siblings,at the early age of 9 she learned that "if you don't work,you don't eat"-Joan and her siblings were abandoned by their parents,
at the early age she learned how to work like an adult just to feed her younger sister and younger brother..
at the age of 15 she fought underground fights for mixed martial arts..and with the certain events she joined U.N as a soldier and  in the age of 19 and was recommended for promotion to be C.H.R.O.M.E s soldier..her full background story will be told in a certain chapters.

Flaire Johnson- Daughter of a wealthy American gunsmith-
Flaire was given a decent life among the other members-at the early age of 9 she was engage with some man that she don't know(business for rich people)
at the age of 14 she learned how to use the internet as her playground...she can hacked different kinds of information,sites etc..she joined the C.H.R.O.M.E as a mistake and a biggest chance to mock her father...her full background story will be told in a certain chapters.



F.G.2.M is a story of a four women who will be given a mission to raise some babies they rescued in a certain laboratory in Africa-these babies are the firsts successful experiments for super soldiers experiments..


This women will raise the babies separately in their own homeland and meet 9 years later after they accepted the mission..
With the biggest question HOW?
if this women grows old without even the experience they called as "childhood"


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Theme/scene:     :heart:----kiss me---- :heart:



For all the participants:

Neoraise
Gelmra
Nekonomicon
Rice ball
AmanoMai
Manimal
Cinamoroll


( pls send me your drawings after you're done..I'll be the one who'll post it..everyone of you will certainly know your own drawings right?..i do it this way so that all of you can comment each others pictures without realizing whos drawing is that..its like a game..if your picture were critized or gained help make sure youll not spill the number of your work.that way the audience will anonymous gain confident to comment about your works as well help you..)(if any of you will spill the beans out-you will be the next host for the next battle)


A rule for drawing:only use color of a normal pencil could do,digital way or traditional way...

Deadline: Nov.11.2014..MR.homepage date..I'll post your works here (any more questions participants? pls p.m me)




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Manga Artists Battle Ground / a week theme battle. (.who's next..?)
« on: November 01, 2014, 11:06:02 PM »
As beny and I started a sudden battle for about a week ago..with the theme of "dual fighting scene"..

Well just have to continue the next challenge.

And i as a winner from the last battle..i will decide the theme for the next battle..

We need some participants to join us..
There's no fun if beny and I will just do it by ourselves every week..

Well just make each theme or scene simple so that every member can join this every week challenge..maybe I'll give 3 day limit for the members to be registered as a participant..

If you're interested post a comment or p.m me..and after 3 days I'll post the participants names along with the theme or scene to be drawed..and the next winner will decide the theme for next next week..

Well?up for it?

You know what to do right?

we will start the one week challenge right after Nov.4..

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I just posted it recently on short story section..
and I was thinking if I should make a serialized chapters out of it..

title:yuchiru at nomichi's bookstore

genre:seinen,shounen,romance,slice of life, fantasy,tragic.

it is a story of 3 generation of writers..

one shot plot:a boy who wants to be a writer and loves reading books at a certain bookstore as the old man owns the shop helped him and tell him many stories. yuchiru hasegawa..as the bookstore will be name as nomichi as yuchiru becomes a writer years later after the old man nomichi died.. he reopen it and name that bookstore as "nomichi"


series chapters plot:a certain boy named as shijou repeats history as he enters nomichis bookstore and meet old man yuchiru and a elf girl named yana in the bookstore.and travel together with her with some adventures as he gathers some stories to write both fantasy and story of real people and places as he mistakenly unravel the hidden secrets of our world..as the story goes the "romance" will be developed..

here's the one shot..but the summary of series chapters is located on "short stories anyone?" I'll post it later so that you can help me about it..


one shot-yuchiru at nomichi's bookstore

" boy,you want be a story writer?
as the old man in the bookstore said to a 13 year
old boy..
yuchiru-a 13 year old boy who loves to read
books..
he often goes home carrying books..stories of
romance,fairytale,drama or even tragic ones..
the boy replied:"yes very much"
as the old man asked him again "why"
youchiru replied :because there are stories worth
reading either its a truth or a fake one..as long as
it makes the reader's feel joy,excitement, and even
pain by just reading the story..for me, if ill be a
writer someday if my reader's will feel the same
way as I do while reading this stories then as a
writer..it is worth creating..
the old man smiled at him saying "want to hear
more stories boy?I'll tell you more"
"yes,thank you very much" yochiru replies
everyday right after school he passed through that
bookstore..hearing stories from that old man..
but as the years passed by..that old man looks
sickly..
one afternoon that old man called unto him..
"yochiru..there's no more story I can tell you but
just this one piece of advice.."imagination means
no limitation"
stories are everywhere..the way the rain falls..the
way the wind blows or even as the river flows..the
way we breathe or the way we may lack of it..as
life goes on..stories will continue..you'll just have
to create them using this pen and "that" (pointing
his fingers into his chest) make out your way to
the world boy!! but don't ever forget about me..
as the next day that old man died..the shop closed
for a long time..
yochiru age 25..a well known writer..opens that
old bookstore again and named it after that old
man "nomitchi"..
after 25years...yochiru 50 years old..a certain boy
enters that shop almost everyday..he said to
himself "you're right sensei..stories will never
end"..

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Anime Talk / gun related anime's
« on: October 07, 2014, 01:16:42 PM »
Can someone anyone recommend me some gun related anime's?? Like jormungand or black lagoon?..(no mecha thou)....plssss

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Manga Art Gallery / dont know how to color it..hehhe
« on: October 03, 2014, 11:13:08 PM »
my kind of drawing pls rate it..


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Anime Talk / fate stay night (2014)
« on: October 03, 2014, 09:29:42 PM »
they say itll be released today is it true??

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Manga Talk / Bokura wa Minna Kawaisou
« on: October 01, 2014, 10:55:24 AM »
Have you ever tried reading dis??
Or watching the anime?
For me i think the cuteness and innocence of the characters wer all mixed up..that bring me to tears while laughing..

Still reading chapter 44 though.. :biggrin:

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