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Topics - everlastin01

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Develop Your Story / Pile of Stories
« on: May 13, 2014, 10:55:18 PM »
So some reason I keep making more topics saying I am going to finish this story...and I never do...or I lose motivation to write but still continue planning the story. Well to make it easier for everyone here is where I am going to dump stories I am working on. I have about 6...maybe...

1) Unnatural
2) Pirates
3) Lizard Alien (not sure on title yet)
4) Collar for Master
5) Brain Waves (not sure on title yet)
6) ....can't remember at the moment (will update later)

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Starter Gallery / Lair of things
« on: November 15, 2013, 01:15:23 PM »
>//////////////<
yes I draw.....oddly enough

Magician Dragon
Spoiler
Practice with Hands and....aliens (or frog)
Spoiler
THE THING
Spoiler

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Develop Your Story / Unatural (working on title)
« on: November 01, 2013, 10:22:06 PM »
There are so many versions of the story and where it is going to go it and the characters may change a lot. I am open for suggestions and if anything is confusing or spelled wrong please say so. Still working on the first chapter but this is what I have so far.
*Will post character sheets later*
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The streets were crowded with women, men, teenagers, and children. Among these people was a shady character

sitting at a little café scanning the people. Oddly enough, nobody felt threated by the intense concentration of the
 
eyes dissecting their children. He was not attracted to children sexually, to him those little brats were just his

specimen. A mother with a stroller caught his gaze. The mother was on her phone window shopping paying no 

attention to the fact he walked up. He looked in the stroller to see a sleeping infant that was just the right age.

He looked at the mother and smirked. "Some people are so clueless," he thought to himself. He picked up

the infant and walked away into the crowd. He turned around to catch the look of fear that her child was gone, but

to his surprise the expression on her face showed relief and joy. He looked down at the infant to see it clinging to

his shirt asleep. He shrugged and headed off to the lab.

He arrived at the building which was located in the middle of no where and strolled inside to his kingdom. With the

child clinging to his shirt asleep he walked into the nursery forgetting something very important. As soon as the

children caught glimpse of his face all crying broke loose. All the children caretakers turned and gave him an

unwelcome glare and he high tailed it out of there with the child. He let out a sigh of relief and started to hear the

familiar laughter of that special female. She walked up and kissed him on the cheek.

"Well it looks like you forgot to read the sign again," she said with a flirting tone. She began to hug him when the

infant he was holding caught her eye.

"This is a first Blake," she said as she pointed to the now awake child. Blake looked down confused to see the

baby quiet and calm which was not normal for any child Blake had contact with.

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break Room / Building Websites
« on: January 12, 2013, 06:00:22 PM »
I know that building websites can either be hard or easy. I had to build them from scratch. Finding code to make the website awesomer is harder than it looks. If people building websites would like to know where to find coding they can post what they are looking for and if the code ifs found a link to where the code was found can be put here.

For basic coding google w3school and you can find a ton of coding there.

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break Room / DC Batman Comics
« on: January 11, 2013, 06:50:17 PM »
I recently began to read these and my friends started talking about their most favorite characters and the worst characters.
So here talk about your favorite villains, heroes, or least favorite villains and heroes. Also heroes and villains you view as worthless.

Favorite Heroes:
Catwomen
Batman
Nightwing
Robin (Tim)

Favorite Villains:
Harley Quin
Riddler
Hush

Worst Villains:
Kiteman
Calenderman
Crazy Quilt
Ten Eyed Man
Maxie Zeus

Worst Super Heroes:
Superman


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Like to hear your views :3

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break Room / I feel forgotten
« on: November 02, 2012, 04:51:45 PM »
I feel like once you come back everyone is suprised the first day then doesnt care any more....any of you feel th same?

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General Manga writer discussions / Writers point of views made easy
« on: November 02, 2012, 04:37:00 PM »
1st Person: Main Characters point of view
         e.g.: I walked into the room. (main character is "I")
2nd Person: think video game point of view
         e.g.: You will wak into a room and die. You are poisoned. ("You" is used a lot)
3rd Person: Narrator not in story
         Can't really think of a way to put this other than you watching a movie, you see all that is going on (big picture) while the characters see their point of view (tunnel vision)

Hope this helps!!!!!

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Develop Your Story / .........DOTS.......(not story name by the way)
« on: November 01, 2012, 06:15:45 PM »
This is topic will be my stories about my 74 (not sure if correct) characters. Not all of them will be in one story at once. There will be bits and pieces. Also I am not one whom likes to start at the begining of story so bare with me on some parts. I will update posts of stories to continue them. I need to get better at writing also.

I enter spaces between paragraphs to take stress of your eyes and to give you a saving point. Your welcome.

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i realized if i write on notebook paper i will continue my story, but if i type what i have (like the beginning) i lose interest in it right away

How do you lose interest in your stories?

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Develop Your Story / my story i REALLY am going to work on
« on: May 06, 2011, 04:41:54 PM »
ok my storeh is about a imaginary world i made......in 7th grade i think. they randomly came into my head after i made a symbol for myself (i will answer if asked any questions...) there are a lot of clans so you have to bear with me when i post them later today or tomorrow and i will try to post pics (if it is okay to do that here for my storeh) when i get the SCANNER ON MY PRINTER TO WORK *WACKS WACKS WACKS
ANYWAYS i will post them on a different post here in a minute (descriptions will be later)

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Develop Your Story / meh 2nd storeh......DOTS...........
« on: February 23, 2011, 08:06:56 PM »
meh second story is my own little creatures called sighs.....it is a long story.....also i need help with the main characters name right now it is Aru (A-roo)....what a minute i forgot to type it.....it will be up soon

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Welcome Center / hello
« on: February 23, 2011, 07:52:56 PM »
i am not sure if i have introduced myself correctly so here i am....i am a hyper active person so expect anything from me...........DOTS..............uh....DOTS!! sorry adhd kicking in(or something like it) i am a begining writer and somewhat of a drawer (not the best but not the worst either) my best friend likes manga like i do and i have stories up my sleeve......DOTS........oh and one story is under Develope Your Story and my is my manga.....so to be(i hope)...i just realized so was supposed to be soon....DOTS.....FAILURE!!! i will post my other stroy later.....DOTS......HELLOOO!!!!!....more DOTS.....

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Manga Artists Wanted / Searching for an artist
« on: February 23, 2011, 04:50:15 PM »
i am looking for someone interested in drawing my characters for my story. you can find the story under develope your story which is under manga artists......you can reach me three ways
1) you can type here..(obivious)
2) you can send me a personal message
3) you can reach me by my email account which should be under my profile
THXS!!!

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Develop Your Story / my manga.....so to be(i hope)
« on: February 21, 2011, 04:21:30 PM »
ok my writing skills aren't the best so if you see any mistakes will you please pint them out to me, thanks. i will have the begining of the story typed an probubly up by tomorrow. anyways here are the characters....below the DOTS!!! sorry my ADHD is kicking in....MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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Name: Chad

Background:
He was left at the orphanage when he was 5 years old and was never adopted. When he was 15 and a half he left ran away from the orphanage. When he was 16 he joined a gang called the “Mists”, because they used smoke bombs. They thought him how to shoot a gun, spray graffiti, and how to steal using smoke bombs. When he was 22 years old he left the Mists and made his own gang called the Mystery”, because no one has ever saw or talked to them. He was 25 when he found a baby left in the street for dead. He raised her and named her Orphan.

Hair color: Brown with blond tips
Eye color: blue
Weapon: pistol
Personality: stern, but kind
Outfit: t-shirt, blue jeans, work boots (brown)


Name: Orphan

Background:
A girl who you don’t want to mess with. Abandoned in the street and left for dead, Chad rescued her and raised her to be used to a gang member’s life. As soon as she could walk she was trained to be a pick-pocketer (side job), a graffiti tagger, and an assassin. She rarely talks and is usually in a bad mood. She is, most of the time, either with Chad or by herself.

Hair color: black
Eye color: really dark brown (look black)
Weapons: pistol and knives
Personality: angry-ish, sometimes happy (rarely)
Outfit: black hoodie, black t-shirt, skull belt, and black boots


Name: Everlastin

Background:
He is a sport lover and is good at them too. He started to box and take karate at age 5. Later he became a foot ball player. Then he took wrestling and became a very strong 14 year old. His parents died two days after his freshman year in high school. Soon after that he meet 12 year old Orphan, who he challenged and lost to, who brought him to Chad and Everlastin joined the gang.

Hair color: black with red tips
Eye color: green
Weapons: sword and fists
Personality: nice, yet angry tone
Outfit: black t-shirt, blue jeans, red and black toboggan, and black spikey boots


Name: Zixon

Background:
Raised by her parents, Zixon was pampered into a brat. She gets everything she wants and can’t control her hyperness; she gets on everyone’s last nerve. She has funny random jokes and can copy anyone’s voice.

Hair color: green
Eye color: green
Weapons: fighting stick
Personality: hyper and nice
Outfit: blue shirt, blue jeans, and green shoes


Name: Zion
Is a young mischievous male who loves to pull pranks on people. He is Zixon’s twin (supposedly) and is Ash’s half brother and is the oldest out of them all. Normally he will pull a prank whenever he can, but if you give him a mystery novel he will not put it down until he finishes it. He is a boxer and hasn’t lost to anyone in the ring…….except for Everlastin and Orphan.

Hair color: blond
Eye color: blue
Weapon: fists
Personality: mischievous
Outfit: blue and green cammo hoodie, blue pants, and blue tennis shoes


Name: Ash

Background:
He is Zion’s and Zixon’s youngest brother. Ash is always in a bad mood and usually gets in trouble for fighting. He gets along with Chad, Everlastin, and Orphan very well. He is a football player and is a beginner wrestler. Everlastin helps him practice to be a better foot ball player and wrestler. He only gets along with Zion in his family.

Hair color: brown
Eye color: brown and green
Weapons: anything near him at the time
Personality: mean, unless he is with the people he gets along with


Name: Joe

Background:
He met Chad at the orphanage when they were younger. He was six and Chad was fifteen and a half when Joe was adopted. Joe was raised with the family that adopted him, but he wanted to see Chad again. When he turned fifteen he ran away from home and joined Chad’s gang and is one of Chad’s best friends. He and Everlastin both fight each other because they both like Orphan.

Hair color: brown
Eye color: brown
Weapons: pistol and knives
Personality: mean, yet kind to Orphan and Chad

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Anime Talk / Things they need to change.
« on: February 18, 2011, 01:09:17 PM »
I think the best thing for them to do is change the story line because you do the same thing over and over and the story line would be better to change than adding more pokemin for me(everyone) to remember. I am knida annoyed that they never change it and it is getting boring.

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