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The Golden Kingdom becomes the only magic in this world but then divided 10 magisterial espers to take place in continents in order to expand their territory. Each divided organization chooses a diversity of Magic less candidates to compete for survival as they face a captivated society and segments of humanity biggest threat.  The story takes place with Andou and other members of his family being in several exploits. Andou and friends become invaders to magisterial espers making them fugitives.  As the story moves on they predict Disasters and World Domination yet to come leading to indestructible foes and events that can bring down the Golden Kingdom.

My story is about a Ancient Civilization that has been targeted for deadly magic organizations. They need something there that can expand there territory. I'm still thinking of stuff but yeah my character Andou is one of the people to evacuate the Ancient Civilization due to threats of his fathers business called the Ancient Civilization market. So basically bad people target Andou fathers plan his name is Siegmund. However during the process of evacuating, Andou is chosen from heroes bloodline to receive a blue ocean amulet to protect himself and he must later become a member of the band of misfits. The Ancient Civilization has a borderline to cross the terrestrial territories. Andou must cross it however within this borderline there is a sewer dungeon more like a shrine and a shrine tournament this is a ordeal he must face for superior ranking. A man name Kilimanjaro organizes the band of misfits he guides Andou and Elliot to get pass the border and to live outside of the Ancient Civilization. One of the reasons why they have to leave is due to stress of these kinds of scenarios.

My problem is so far is trying figure out the sewer dungeon you can look in my file I just need scenarios. I'm thinking the candidates facing the mandarin fish knights and the final boss is already known as the heroes bloodline individual. I'm thinking of Andou facing that creature and sealing it in his amulet later on receiving training from this individual.

So far I was thinking of something feudal and modern like just like hunter x hunter and inuyasha. So what I have thought of is that these deadly magic organizations came from the history of the past that was in a plot with the Golden Kingdom somehow these individuals became immortal and now they are plotting deadly dreams. So I would call these people the dead people / deadly magic organizations. So far there is 3 organizations who are low class kingdom compared to the Golden Kingdom like Mime, Serpent Knight and Asian Lung. I'm thinking of enemies with cool outfits later in the story. I'm thinking of katastrophe levels, survival situations, tournaments, scenarios and 1 to 1 fights.

I want to introduce a couple of characters through out the story while Andou gets a manufacturing/laborer job and goes to school.

Andou characteristics: previous trauma to mental illness its in wikia link he is recovering, stupid boy, mature, funny, heroic, empathy, sometimes impulse and unpredictable such as being oblivious he is kind hearted and buds to his strength.

https://www.sendspace.com/file/bra869 ~ my scripts chp1-2 I want to keep writing more and want to draw manga

I want to also put demons and folklore creatures in here. I want to think of lots of stuff.

Develop Your Story / Chosen Beta chapter 1 I'm rewriting so far
« on: November 04, 2018, 01:12:34 AM »
I'm thinking of adding Ukrainian mime military cause i'm in to mimes and I want to make them a danger to society in my manga I'm thinking of them becoming demon mime magicians so far my characters are going to be clashing with the deadliest magic organizations. There will be one to one fights with powerful enemies, tournaments and war like warring state periods idk etc... But i'm trying to find a direction with my story for my characters and I need help. I want to add feudal stuff, science, religion, aliens, monsters, and a little bit of a dark fantasy further in the series. The Viking guy is not answering my discord so yeah..

Andou techniques we can discuss in this thread here since you guys haven't answered my character movelist thread

my inspirations

If I were to make manga I would like great art style and story like gantz for example: I would like to relate it like this story to be like a certain magical index, yu yu hakusho, hunter x hunter, fate / stay night unlimited blade works, saint seiya, gantz, beelzebub, bleach, the law of ueki, magi, UQ Holder, One piece, Kingdom, Jet Set Radio Future,Trails of Cold steel, tokyo underground and zatch bell.

Other Wikia i’m trying to relate too




My manga writing

Andou Keitohno is a water user and is capable of using abilities called sacred vases, using the the power of his eyes and many others. Later in the series he can use his abilities as much as he wants. The power of his eyes is called siren chaos later in the series he wears different outfits like martial art clothing and much more..

Manga Talk / A Certain Magical Index
« on: November 01, 2018, 09:34:53 PM »
Hey can anyone explain to me about the world of the anime a certain magical index about science and magic.
It is quite interesting to me I'd like to explain things like that in my manga even the concepts of hunter x hunter and maybe berserk in a dark fantasy kind of way later in my story..

General Discussion / Fineline 3 stylus questions?
« on: October 29, 2018, 03:28:37 PM »

Hey does anyone know if this device can work on LG G6 and Pavilion pc that I have. I can just downloaded photoshop sketch and maybe it can work.
Could this work I'm planning to buy one.

Manga Creations / Water Kahn Beta manga want to join my team
« on: July 28, 2018, 09:18:30 PM »
https://waterkahnbeta.wikia.com/wiki/Andou_Keitohno ~ to sort up rainstorming characters descriptions and the world and such. We hope to make a great plot. This Section is about setting up my writing in the Wikia Water Kahn Beta.

Join here > http://oeiji2000.boardonly.com/

https://discordapp.com/invite/6et2ReZ ~ group chat

And yeah just so you guys know I have summer vacation homework and classes
I'm gonna be available a bit later in August.

I gotta take that exam and pass..

I am open to anyone who wants to help me in this thread about: Water Kahn Beta manga writing 1-2 chapters so far


After I talk to MK and Vikings1428 and set some things up on my writing to structure it well I'm gonna post my word document here or in discord if you guys want to take a look and discuss about and please don't leave this thread stranded!!


I'm actually targeting 2 other artist but them seem to be inactive and busy 1 of them is Prassart he said he will help me after his done with someone else's manga..

I just got a reply from Naesse 19 from deviantart in email that said she or he was on a trip and give me a couple days to answer back.

Maybe around August I will post my writing in this forum and see if anyone would like to help out and collab
if you so they can join my website in order to update my wikia page and plan out a really good story.

I also have someone who is fully available helping me out with art cover and of light novel or such. I have Natsuri Natsuno, Naesse-19, Prassart - to help with manga related stuff.

I just need character designs in order to make manga panels my drawing skills are noobie and I would like to focus on light novels for a while than later on make manga.

If anyone can help with making me manga I would be happy I'm just picky with the artstyle..

I'm just gonna make a lot of light novels to publish in nanasu to do contest than see what kind of way I can become a anime cartoonist I hope to be my own mangaka one day!!

If anyone would like to help out and collab with my writing I would be happy
if you so join my website in order to update my wikia page and plan out a really good story..

I'm into great art style and stories like gantz for example
I would like to relate it like this story to be like a certain magical index, yu yu hakusho, hunter x hunter, fate / stay night unlimited blade works, saint seiya, gantz, beelzebub, bleach, the law of ueki, magi, UQ Holder, One piece, Jet Set Radio Future, Kingdom, Trails of Cold steel, tokyo underground and zatch bell.

I hope we could interact more

I'm wanting to put like folklore mythical stuff, demons, war, magic, espers, enemies, tournaments, drama, goals, mythology, stuff etc..

The summary of the story starts like this
There are 12 landlords of 5 unknown mythical islands. This is located at Tokyo Japan, Greece, Seda (Sertar) in Kham Tibet, the desert of Pakistan, and Kathmandu Valley in Nepal. 2 brothers get involved with magic. They become the demon contractor one with ice and one with fire. These creatures are the last of its kind. The blue one provides Holy magic but is too weak to use it so Andou tries to learn it. The Red one provides Horror magic and is too strong so Irugin tries to learn it in a different pace. 2 brothers become fugitives of many powerful magic organizations. They are after Andou Golden Letter and Irugin’s. These Golden Letters provide secret maps to various places and events. These espers are hunters.  One day when encountering the good news Andou becomes approved to St. Taurus and Irugin walks his own path to become a weapon collector and a strong Sorcerer. In FRSC Island there are schools named after Astrology. They are horoscope school regions. Andou takes his time researching about them and eventually get’s recruited into Class Vessel a team that develops a one man army of espers. These individuals overcome the danger that circles around them. Andou becomes a chosen candidate of the structured calendar, when defeating the challenges of the structured calendar. He and his friends unlock the rest of FRSC Island region. Andou starts off having the power to levitate items with his eyes and learns more about his esper powers from the sesame creatures, outsourcing, warrior feats, battles, war, magic side of religion, and life time experience. Later on him, some people from the horoscope schools regions and outsiders team up to prepare for more horrific adventures. This relates of taking care of evil beings that could possibly take over the planet.

Please message me about the links I can't post it here I need 25 posts

Andou Keitohno

Terrance the Alien Yeti

I sometimes don't understand my story and the point of it I just would like to make it like hunter x hunter and attack on titan in a way!!

Anybody there to reply!!

General Discussion / does anyone know what happen to petetoy
« on: July 08, 2018, 10:57:59 PM »
I am doing a project with that person but that person is inactive for a long time

we are planning to make manga together??

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Hi I'm Evan I'm in need for my own art style to improve so I can be a mangaka, I'm aiming to have my own anime
could you check my links to understand what I need.

I actually got this guy helping me out, but his kinda busy his said he will help me out soon

*Link removed*

I'm just in need of character designs please check my link and please contact me as soon as you can

I have someone making me a manga cover too

I need to help to become my own mangaka

If you want to message me and know all about it join this website *link removed* to continue this project I'll send you my writing and you can see it, please check the second link I send you it's about character designs and you'll know what I mean!!

I'm also collaborating to as many people I can to make a creative story usually i'm doing this at aminoapps!!

i'm looking for this kind of art style

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