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break Room / I got booed at an hospital
« on: July 19, 2018, 01:44:53 PM »
I got booed by the childrens there when I was attempting to read them a story that I wrote for them.
Obviously, they didn't like it and in the end, I was booed by them...


Not sure this needed a thread but, you know me...

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break Room / Don't be shy
« on: June 26, 2018, 11:42:28 AM »

I have finally decided to return to MangaRaiders,
After going on missing like forever, I started having various ideas of arts, writing and even poetry.


PS: I still have that quality Profile Picture + Sig combo! <3

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Develop Your Story / The Dome
« on: May 02, 2018, 01:05:49 PM »
Synopsis: The known world to Mankind has fallen, continents turns into a single world engulfed by hunger, crime rates increases and lifespans reduced. This is the story of Phelia, a 12 years old child that lost her family, murdered by a man that soon after took his own life and the hope sleeping deep within the young girl of vengence.
As she walk through a endless desert, she crosses road with an adventurer named Hara, having her life saved by this strange woman, Phelia give her life to Hara.


Genre: Adventure, Action, Psychological, Sci-Fi

Chapter 1:
Spoiler
Chapter 1: Desert of Life

In the midst of one of the various desert around the world, a young girl barely walking with the weight of the sun on her back, her face was drenched with sweat and her brown eyes partly closed, she could only see the endless sand scenery up ahead.
The year was 2102, this desert was previously known as New York, this name was long forgotten and this was a place that anyone would want to avoid.
The girl had the chance to get access to an education of the previous civilisation and she could hardly believed that, this "hellish" place, once attracted thousands of people. The young girl, Phelia was her name, gazed at the sky, she couldn't help but wondered, "how does rain looked like?"
The girl finally stumbled and fell unconscious on the sand, her final thoughts went to her late family.

{…}
Cold...
Phelia woke up to the cold night the desert. Suprised to be still alive, the young woman sat down and was face to face with a horse.

"-Woah! W-What is this?!"

The light brown animal seemed amused by this reaction but, with the sound of a whistling, the horse went a little bit away from the girl.
Phelia looked around, she was unable to find the owner of the animal, her eyes weren't perfectly  accustomed to the night, without any warning, she felt an hand touching her blonde long hair and she quickly turned around, noticing that the owner was probably behind her.

"- Who are you?" Asked Phelia, still unable to see clearly, she pushed the hand away.

"- You should sleep, tomorrow will be worst than today in terms of temperature." The responding voice sounded like it belong to a woman, it felt kind too.

Phelia was slowly starting to see clearly - A woman, probably in her 30s, her piercing blue eyes were underlined by a black heavy make-up.

"- My name is Hara. I am just an adventurer that happened to be passing by. Anyway, how old are you to be travelling alone in the desert, kid?"

"- Twelve. Why I travel is none of your buisness."

"..."

"- I suppose that you are right."

Phelia felt the blue eyes of Hara piercing through her soul, like an eagle seeking it's prey. The girl felt uncomfortable, unable to keep her attention of her savior, she looked at the horse that went to sleep a moment ago.

"- Starting tomorrow, you will be by yourself again, what happens to you after tonight won't have anything to do with me. How do you plan on getting to the nearest city, I could care less..."

Phelia's eyes were once again drown into Hara's eyes. At these words, the girl couldn't help but reach for the woman's hand.

"- I have nowhere to go. My family was murdered so, would you take me with you?"

Hara smiled. It wasn't a warm smile or a kind smile but, one that made her resembled a demon.

"- As of tonight, your life is mine. You will die when I decide for you to die." The woman's eyes closed and she seemed to have fallen asleep.

Phelia was unable to comprehend the reason she suddenly told Hara all that but, she was certain that it was her own wish.
The girl had been wandering from city to city only to find the murder of her family but, she learned that the one responsible for her unhappiness had taken his own life. Leaving Phelia with no more reason to keep on living but, in this desert, where she was prepared to die, she had given her life to someone else.

-Chapter 1: END-


Chapter 2:
Spoiler
Chapter 2: Road to one's resolve

The stumbling of a carriage attached to the running horses had woken up Phelia, at first, she wondered about the reason that she was being transported but, before long she was able to remember about her talk with the person sitting next to her.

"- Where are we heading to, Hara?" Phelia asked to the woman that was focusing on steering the horse transporting their carriage.

"- Finally awake? I was wondering if you planned on sleeping all day long. It's already Four-in-the-afternoon." Hara replied without turning her attention away from her task.

"- Did I sleep that long? I guess that I might have been tired. Where are we going?" The young girl looked around her and she was able to discern that they were still in the desert.

"- We are heading to Naïa, I have refill on food supplies, water and weapon." Hara took out a cigarette from her coat and adjusted her cowboy hat.

Phelia felt uncomfortable in the mention of "weapon", it clearly meant that the woman that saved her life was, clearly used to killing people but, to what extent, the girl couldn't know.

"- Naïa used to be Montreal."

"- Indeed but, it's not anymore." Hara's eyes were closed, she seemed to be sadened or at least, Phelia thought she was.

The girl decided that it would be better to not say anything more about the Ancient Civilisations, to her late mother's wish, Phelia should restrain herself from revealing details about that Era that only her family knew of.
It's true that it was possible to learn about those civilisations through education but, things about their downfall wasn't known in the modern days. "The Human-kind era wasn't wiped out by Humans", Phelia's mother kept repeating to her childs.

"- We will have a little fray before we head to Naïa. I will need you to take this, kid." The voice of Hara made Phelia blench, she was lost in her thoughts but, she was sure that she heard it clearly, they were going to fight.

Hara was handing a short sword to the young girl, with a smile, the woman started humming. Phelia took the weapon, although she never had used such a thing, she felt possessed by the piercing glare of the woman next to her.

"- Are we going to kill people?" The girl couldn't help but ask a question that she already knew the answer of.

"- We are."

"- Why are we killing other people? I don't want to kill at random, I am not an animal!" Phelia was against it, her family was murdered and she didn't want to do the same thing that she had to endured to someone else.

A small town could be seen, noises could be heard coming from it and the two adventurers were about to reach it in an hour or so. Phelia started to wondered if it was a good choice to follow a woman she didn't even know. The girl realized that she could probably run away and live in this town.

"- I could always feed you to Wesley, my horse. You gave me your life to me and it appears that I always try to keep what is mine, even if it get taken away, I will take it back." Hara said with an emotionless tone, her pale blonde hair flying through the wind, rain was approaching.

Phelia felt terrified at the Hara's word but, she suddently felt that she needed to run away from that person.

The girl had her mind set.

~Chapter 2: END~



Chapter 3:
Spoiler

Chapter 3: Broken

The sun had been covered, partially by the dark clouds. The carriage transporting Phelia and Hara was at the gate of Naïa, a city that was renowned for it's merchant-friendly label, the roads were filled with carriages from different regions but, what took tge girl's attention was, a gathering near a shop, smiles and voices melting into each other. Phelia wanted to know the cause of this crowd but, Hara's hand grabbed her shoulder and kept her from going any further.

"- Unless you really want to figure out this town's true colors, I suggest that you stay right here." The cowboy hat wearing woman seemed to be familiar with whatever was going on, her hand that held the child in position was quickly slapped away and her cold eyes quickly looked detached of emotions as she gazed at Phelia.

The twelve years old girl looked around, occupying the sands of the desert was a beautiful city, small buildings were encircling a taller one in the middle. An impressive fountain with the presence of a siren painted on it was kept in front of the city gates. Phelia was stupefied by the way water didn't seem as absent as other places. Naïa was a city that had several festivities during a year and that caused different merchants of various places come sell their merchandises to the diversified crowds of people.

"- Hey! You over there! I will need to get an identification first before letting you proceed any further." An armor wearing man said while approaching both Hara and Phelia. He beared an imposing moustache that was twisted in a manner that made him look like an hunting dog.

"- Are you now? We are simple travellers, me and my slave." Hara didn't seem intimidated by the city guard that had come to identify them. Instead, the woman simply walked past him after she had tell him who they were but, the guard's hand firmly caught her shoulder, stopping her from going foward.

"- Are you here to participate in the Traders Raid? Are you planning on buying anything? Are you carrying any weapons on either you or your carriage."

Phelia's eyes immediately looked at the sword that was given to her, she realized that she never really asked about where did it came from, actually, she never asked about the woman that rescued her, which she started to get intrigued of.

"- I am indeed carrying weapons. I am carrying quite a lot of things that you may have never heard of or see and by that, I am talking about what you are holding. I ask you to unhand me."

Phelia was confused by Hara's words, there were nothing that seemed like a weapon on her right shoulder, the one the guard was holding firmly and even if it was an invisible one, it would probably have a mass into it. The guard didn't either release Hara or searched for any possible weapon but, he instinctively reached for a sword that was attached to his thigh and pointed it near Hara's neck.

"- You are suspicious and therefore, I must either have you go back from where you are from or have you arrested until we can clear you."

Growling?

Sounds of growl could be heard, both Naïa's city guard and Phelia seemed confused, the noise was coming from Hara's coat, exactly where the guard's hand firmly held, his grip had grandly diminished though.

Phelia was able to notice blood coming down of Hara's fingers.

~Chapter 3: END~

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break Room / Anyone interested in joining us on LINE app?
« on: March 14, 2018, 02:11:22 PM »
Me and Forlorn uses that app and if anyone wants to join, you can just add me with my ID: youreyes_me


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break Room / Which type of animal represent you best?
« on: March 01, 2018, 01:51:15 PM »
Mine is the White Wolf~

WBU?


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MR Pub / Happy Valentine Day for Raiders from YoUr EyEs
« on: February 14, 2018, 12:33:56 PM »

Hello to all the Raiders,


We may have crossed each others path by mistake but, it will always be a mistake that I will cheerish from the bottom of my heart.

Alongside you all, I felt your passions from your drawings, stories and artistic behaviours, I am in love with this community and thus, I am wishing you all happiness during Valentine's day.


~From the Valentine of all raiders YoUr EyEs

Chocolate for you all!



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break Room / This is so funny!
« on: February 02, 2018, 12:52:53 PM »

Hi everybody,

Something funny happened recently, in class, I always sit in the same seat but, yesterday, there was someone in the seat. At first, I didn't see anything into it and so, as I arrived in school today, I came across the guy that was seating where I always seat, when he saw me, he ran away to secure the seat for himself, I laughed so hard.
Why is he so serious about a seat? Why would he run to make sure that he would keep this seat? LOL


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break Room / Do you like Freckles?
« on: February 01, 2018, 12:28:48 PM »
What do you think of them? I love them~

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Where do we, people, get to say what we really feels? At first, we were presented with democratie but, it's as become a fake form of tyranny that as been going on and on, the tensions and war are only affecting the citizens rather than the one responsible.

What if at some point, people were to undo the brainwash that they were uncounsiously made to believe and we were to take a stand against politiciens? I, for myself, have come to a realisation, Politiciens are all the real preachers.

What about you all? What do you think is the main reason for the wars and tensions?

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break Room / How much have I suffered since 2018, already~
« on: January 11, 2018, 10:47:20 AM »



I actually used the word and for some reason, people kept staring at me, I had to check to make sure...

"- I'll give you a bop." I said (Speaking about a song.)

LOL!!!


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break Room / Babymetal Guitarist Mikio Fujioka Dead at 36
« on: January 09, 2018, 01:44:46 PM »

http://loudwire.com/babymetal-guitarist-fujioka-mikio-dead/

This is really sad, I can't believe it...

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And is this widespread across your personality or does it only come up in certain situations?



For me personally I'm a bit ot both; I'm really optimistic/positive towards/about other people but a bit of a pessimist when it's about something of myself? It's annoying but also difficult to change unfortunately ;c



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break Room / Which Manga do you want an anime made for it?
« on: December 15, 2017, 01:00:57 PM »
I wish that anime of Hirunaka no Ryuusei would be made...

That was definetly the best manga that I ever read~


It made me so happy~!

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break Room / I AM SOOOO ANNOYED!!!
« on: December 13, 2017, 11:51:41 AM »

I woke up this morning and was very excited when I saw the snow gathering up on the ground but, I was wrong to be, as soon as I got out, I slipped on the ground because of those incompetents Snowplows throwing the snow on the roads to the sidewalks. Why are they doing that?!

2- Raging people in cars... Why are they raging?! Ok, yes, you will be late but, would you rather run someone down with your cars? I almost got hit by five cars only this morning and they dare stare me down afterward, as if, the "Stop" things are there because they are pretty...

3- I recieved a snow ball in the head, thank you to the respect that childrens nowadays learns...

Anyway, are you having a tough time this winter yet?


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