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MR Pub / Happy birthday Vacant!
« on: November 17, 2017, 06:49:43 PM »

Now wish that you could look like him :tongue:

Collaboration (Art Exchange) / Logo Help
« on: September 28, 2017, 01:53:48 AM »
If anyone wants to help me create a logo, feel free to do so  :clapping:.

MR Pub / Happy Birthday BobbyJoeXForgotenSB
« on: September 08, 2017, 10:07:44 PM »
I almost didn't make it in time.

I know this is during the most stressed up part of your life, so i hope this makes you feel a little better. 

MR Pub / Happy Birthday Musicfreak8800
« on: August 03, 2017, 07:22:51 AM »
Since I've seen that you still pop in and out of this forum, I felt that you deserve a cake.

Happy Birthday!!!

Develop Your Story / The Lemonade Stand
« on: August 01, 2017, 02:41:14 AM »
This is my workshop story. Please don't comment on this thread, so i can keep it clean. I doubt people will anyways :tongue:

I don't write novels. I read them, sometimes. I don't much care for them  :thumbsdown: Why read when you can get information twice as fast with half as much effort with television? I'm kidding here.

Anyways, this story is written in Third Person Limited. 

MR Pub / Happy Birthday ToxicWaste97
« on: July 24, 2017, 05:57:45 PM »
I almost didn't see your name on the B day announcement list. I'm still not a fan of your username  :tongue: it makes for an ugly cake.


Develop Your Story / New Moe Manga Idea
« on: July 17, 2017, 09:53:08 AM »
Title: I Adopted A Young Dead Girl (but she's really cute though)

Logline: A young woman moves into an apartment, but is confronted with unexplained phenomena while trying to create a new life for herself in the city.

Genre: comedy, drama, slice of life, supernatural, fantasy

Demographic: Seinen

plot: The young woman has been fired from every job in her hometown, so she moves to the city to start a new life. She is given an once in a lifetime deal for an apartment and moves in as soon as she can. Unbeknownst to her, she is being haunted. After she realizes that there's a poltergeist, she, being a jack of all trades, conducts her own exorcism (thank you YouTube), but she finds that the ghost is just a little girl who wants a mother. So, seeing this as an opportunity, plus she can't leave the apartment because of the deposit, she decides to raise the little girl until she fulfills her unfinished business.  Which means, she just wants to live her life as a normal girl.

Rules of the universe:
1) Ghosts exist
2) Ghosts can eat and put on clothes (but they don't have to)
3) If they are loved, other people can see them and touch them, not just the host of the building.
4) Ghosts don't age, but can change form
5) Anyone can perform an exorcism  :tongue:

This is probably the closest thing to an autobiography. You know, except about the dead girl. Or is it :sure:

MR Pub / Happy Birthday Manimal
« on: July 14, 2017, 05:33:18 AM »

General Manga writer discussions / MR Reading Binge
« on: July 07, 2017, 03:53:39 AM »
So I'm about to read everything that I can that has been uploaded in the manga creation and develop your story. By that I mean like the latest 2 pages. I have a lot of free time today so I'll read your story until I get a good feel of it or it becomes a pain to keep on reading it.

Good news! I'll submit a feedback through PM.

There is No need to respond to my critique.

I'm going to first start out with those without comments.

break Room / Fourth Of July Celebration USA USA USA
« on: July 03, 2017, 11:27:48 PM »

General Discussion / Who is scared of theft?
« on: July 03, 2017, 11:04:31 PM »
I'm just wondering, who here is scared that their ideas/drawings will be stolen?

Movies and TV shows / Your Pilot Idea
« on: June 26, 2017, 09:11:35 AM »
For those who write pilots, place them here to discuss.

Here is mine.
title: Jefferson

Synopsis: we look back into the past of Thomas Jefferson and explore his sexual pursuits over the years.

Who you want to pick up the series? HBO.

MR Pub / Happy B-day MahluaandMilk
« on: June 17, 2017, 03:02:59 PM »

I got you another one, just for giggles.

General Manga writer discussions / U.S Comedy in Manga
« on: June 14, 2017, 04:30:20 AM »
So manga is a style right?

Have you read a manga that is a comedy with U.S style jokes? This includes, but not limited to: rape, incest, murder, racism, sexism, ageism, etc.

I know there is a lot of ageist jokes in manga. Typical young MC calling everyone older than 20 an old man. Or a no married woman older than 25 a lost cause.

I know comedy varies from culture to culture, but have you read anything trying to mirror U.S style comedy?

I'm going to have that kind of style of comedy. Don't worry, my demographic is not Japanese markets.

break Room / Future Earth Problems (or country)
« on: May 27, 2017, 08:35:49 PM »
When I was in the 8th grade, we made a poll of what problems we would face in the future, so 13 years ago, today.
I remember we actually discussed robot rights. I'm laughing at that now. We were so freaking wrong. At least for my immediate future.

What are your guesses for future problems?

The obvious ones are climate change, defunding of social safety nets, etc.

This can be useful so you see where the youth are feeling anxious. Once you got that down, you can write a story that captures that feeling.

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