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break Room / Where are you from?
« on: July 13, 2016, 05:02:55 PM »
Hey guys! With all the crazy stuff that has been going on in American I wanted to see what other parts of the world are like. I feel as if America convinces us we are better off than all other countries but I highly doubt that. So actually two parter post, Where are you from and Do you have any comparable to the amount of discord going on where you are from?

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Develop Your Story / Too much for PM
« on: July 13, 2016, 01:21:18 PM »
Hello! I have Chapters I wanted to share but could fit in messages haha so I hope its cool I post chapters on this thread.

Chapter 1
Spoiler
Rocks fly through the air and crack on the stone floor as a boy with spiked white hair frantically digs through a pile of stones. Fires crackled outside and the smoke scented air carried red embers, houses were crumbling as time passed and the boy labored.
“Please Bito,” the boy cries desperately, “ don't die damn it!” The final stone is thrown and shatters on the floor behind him, “We have to run before they come back!” The boy pulls on a boy trapped under the rubble, he is wearing a gas mask with a filter on each side, around each one purple symbols swirled around as white dressed boy reached towards his brother. Bito had blood pouring out of his head and his breathing was slowing down, he was not responding as his brother shook him.
 “What is that?”  As the white haired boy reached towards the mask’s glow intensified, he touched it and shouted reflexively out of pain.
His scream was one of many that filled the air, some were crying for help, others were calling out names, some parents could be seen guiding children and fighting off giant armored Salamanders.
 Their brown-red skin blended in with the dark red armor crested with yellow and red gems, they had helmets that revealed Black eyes, two flat nostril holes and sharp yellow teeth. Extending hands out, ice shot out from a dark-skinned mothers and pierced the invaders breast plate, falling down the corpse kicked up a cloud of a dust. The other soldiers pressed on a slashed at the parents, some of them producing flames that trailed behind their sword with each swing. The woman who had shot out was now being pinned down as she distracted danger away from her children, running down a street  one of the Salamander held a staff up and flung a dense ball of fire. It exploded on a building and blocked her escape, yards away.
She turned and began fighting once more, slashing back with icy blue claws she had produced, she fought back and killed many warriors but was being outnumbered and was growing tired. As she shot out her final icicle she huffed but refused to fall; from behind the stone barricade powerful winds lifted and pushed the giant stones over the woman's head, and Thick clouds followed a light skinned man as he dashed towards soldiers and began grappling with them, he moved rapidly out of the way of sharp swings and pushed his enemy away remarkably as he punched them. The clouds cracked every time he shouted as he fought, the small army stood united and pulled back their swords in unison. The man looked around and was trapped, he steadied his stance as he stared down the mob. The circle roared and a ring of fire sped towards the man, leading with his left arm he pushed up, heaving, and the flames spiraled above him towards the air.
The woman from before stood on top of a tall broken home and pulled her glowing blue hands down as she yelled out, “ Aufero Aridus!” Large patches of sharp ice rained down on all of the brawlers, endlessly the ice pierced everything it touched upon reaching the ground.
This was one of the fights that had broken out but from inside the simple stone home the conscious boy was angrily cursing at his brother, “Damn it Bito! You’re always giving up like this, why the hell do you have to be so damn powerless?” He had gathered rags to press against his brothers wound, but the rags quickly soaked and dripped on his hands.
The front door kicked in and a small figure blocked the light coming from flames outside, the brother shot around and pointed a handgun at the figure with one hand while holding his brother with the other “Get away! If you touch my brother I’ll *censored*ing kill you!” The child’s hand trembled as the person stepped closer, bright beams shot out from his fingertip towards the stranger but missed every time.
The pale hand slowly pulled out a knife and stepped even closer, the boy frighteningly shot and began glowing brightly. The knife was pressed against a pale arm and a green light burst out, blinding the white haired child.

10 years later

"Hey kid you can't sleep here." A warm voice rang, " Woah are you ok?" The voice asked concerned. 
Green tinted light shone through the sockets of a mask that clearly had its fair share of the elements. The boy sat up to look at the source of the gentle sound. It was an average sized dirty looking man. He had frayed hair, dirty hands, and a small basket on his back.
"Glad you're not dead but I can't have you sleeping here," the man stated, " Are you alright? Do you need help home.
The boy sat silently looking up at the man, then shook his head slowly. The silence in the air was broken by chirping of nearby birds on decrepit buildings. They looked as if they'd been scorched and were in shambles. Stray dogs chased cats in and out of the building's, and teenagers shifted through the broken homes.

"Im sorry to hear that kid" the man sighed sympathetically, "My names Tyrael and as hard as it is to believe this broken building is my home!" he smiled extending his arms to gesture towards the crumbled structure they were in front of . He then stretched one arm down towards the boy, "Sorry whats your name?" He asked joyfully grasping an extended hand.
"Bito" the boy stated quietly.
"Don't really talk much huh?" Tyrael laughed pulling Bito up to stand, "well Bito I have nothing against children" he ironically brushed off dirt that Bito had on his torn and tattered clothes, "Hell I have three myself!" He bellowed happily tussling the mid-teens crazy hair.
Bito stood silently.
"Sorry I can get carried away sometimes..." the older man apologized embarrassed, " anyways I was saying I can't have you hanging out here because my family stays here, " Tyrael explained, "Im sure you can understand me trying to keep my family from danger."
Bito nodded and adjusted his mask and bag made from branches. The branches and vines wove in and out of Bito's oversized clothing making it seem as if the bag was part of his outfit. He turned and began to walk away from the cluster of broken buildings when the man put his hand on his shoulder.
Bito tensed slightly quickly grasping the mans wrist.
" Ow kid take it easy!" Tyrael shouted in pain.
Bito instantly realized what he was doing and released the man. He quickly began his trek again before the man called out to him.
"Dammit kid here!" Tyrael reached into his basket and pulled out two shiny red apples, "catch!" He threw both swiftly at the boy who caught them reflexively.
Bito looked at the apples surface, he saw a gas mask topped with a full head of shoulder length black hair. A hood shrouded the mask and hair hiding any more details that could have been gleaned. He put the apples away into his back and turned to leave once more.
"You're not my brat but you're still the future of this village so don't die." Tyrael sounded more serious,”Dont be so damn reckless anymore,” Surprised by the sudden change of tone Bito swung around but Tyrael was gone.

Bito walked out of a side street into a main dirt road, many adolescents filled the street. Some were merchants and advertised in front their stores, shouting out prices or approaching shoppers with deals. Bito walked down the market past persistent shop owners, walking aimlessly. Bito walked by the shops looking at the various weapons, armors, and jewelry; all the shop owners only glared as he walked by, in fact everybody who noticed Bito began to watch him closely.
The boy kept walking past everybody, his darker clothing  contrasting against their white or tanning cloths. The sun overhead meant Bito should have been overheating with his outfit but he seemed perfectly fine, he was a little warm but did not complain.

 


"Thief!" Yelled a voice from behind.
Bito didnt even have time to turn around before he was knocked over by a gray figure holding a basket.
"Move dammit! Cant you see that dirty runt is getting away?!" An old man barked at Bito as he lay on the ground confused," If that brat gets away I'm blaming you!"
 The man kicked Bito and continued to chase the thief, he flailed his club in the air in frustration, "If you wanna actually be useful for once why dont you help me catch the punk?!"
 Bito owed the man nothing, but he was intrigued by this particular thief. Standing up he brushed himself off quickly before ducking into an alley behind the man. He grabbed a ledge and pushed off to a higher rooftop. Pulling himself up he spotted the hooded bandit running with a bundle of apples in a woven basket. He jumped over gaps and balanced on beams connecting the buildings, he saw a group of people surrounding a fire a few houses away and stopped.

There were three huts, each circling around the fire, men in red and orange clothing conversed with each other before other men dressed in black jumped up from the floor and landed on solid ground. They had black clothes and were holding carcasses of green rabbits, Bito ducked behind a corner when he saw one of the men in dark clothes pull out a long dagger; he slid it against the rabbits hide so quickly a cloud of hairs rained around it. He triumphantly held the skinned rabbit up to one of the other men, he was dressed in red clothes and had a bulkier build. He grabbed the animal as his hands lit up red, Bito's mask began glowing dimly, his symbols spun around his filters. One of the men in black looked over in Bito's direction alarming the other men, the others reached for swords and daggers before being called off.

Bito was to far away to hear anything but could see the man giving the other orders before stepping into one of the huts produced from planks of wood. The dark men skinned rabbits and handed it to the other group, they cooked the meat in their hands and handed it back. The meat was taken into a different hut and the red men continued talking.

Bito did not spot the grey thief and decided to sneak past the men, he dropped down back to the street and walked into the moving crowd. Walking past the building the men were on top of he saw it was a store that seemed to sell customized weapons, teenagers and kid walked in and out of it; excited to either have a new sword,,shield, or other weapon that reflected their personality, or looking forward to get a new one.


The sun was setting; The orange glow cast long shadows beneath the broken buildings making it hard for Bito to see. He sighed in disappointment,  his opportunity to catch up to the mysterious person was fading along with the sunlight. But something caught his attention. In the distance he could hear familiar scolding. Inspecting the dirty landscape closer he saw somebody running. It was the old man who had battered Bito, he was still lingering close behind. He saw another person easily weaving through the buildings and fallen structures keeping a steady pace.
Immediately Bito ran towards the two. All he had to do was catch the, most likely, tired thief; Indeed Bito made it a mission to catch up. His feet and legs wanted to give up on him but the fiery spirit inside of him wouldnt let him give up. He was so close to catching it. He was so close to grasping the ever escaping chance that always slipped through of his fingers.
The old man was obviously out of shape,he was panting like a dog. He wheezed as he bent over to gasp for air. The old dirty long spiked club in his hand was the only thing keeping the man from falling over. Step by step he grew weaker, legs trembling and sweat pooring from his face.
"You again?!" Yelled the man, "*censored*....listen you dirty mutt im tired...." the man stopped and caught his breath,"Lets make a deal. You catch that punk ill forgive you for being such a worthless piece of garbage. Deal?" The man grinned.
Bito didnt even acknowledge that his curiosity was just way too peaked.
"You know you idiot it be easier to catch that maniac without that mask on."The sweaty man reached for Bitos mask with trembling hands.
Instinctively Bito twisted his hand and snatch the club out of his other hand. He kicked the man's legs out and watch him fall to the floor. Standing on top of him one foot on his chest he pointed the club towards the mans face. The man didnt even realize what was going on until he was already on the dirt street. He lay struggling to breath with the added weight on his torso.
".....Dont touch the mask....." Bito whispered dropping the club on the man. Turning around he ran into an alley realizing he was wasting precious time.



He looked down at the person from rooftops as they ran in the street, he looked and finally saw what they were running towards. A green forest, the sun dipping behind the thick trees, shadows reached and pushed the sunlight away as they wrapped around buildings. He saw a crowd walk around a corner, right before the forest, causing the thief to duck into the first alley they came across.  Bito leaped over the large gap in between the buildings, he reached towards the edge and saw it was out of reach. He looked down and was surprised to see how far away the ground was. His heart pounded and blurred his vision. He glared at the edge before he shut his eyes, he felt stone underneath his fingers and then opened his eyes. He quickly pulled himself up, and watched the wave of shadows continue spreading. He turned and saw the person run towards a corner that would lead to a wall. Bito waited until the person turned the corner before dropping down into the alley, his prey was unaware of the wall hidden by shadows in the distance.


Spinning around the grey hood had realized she was trapped, like a cornered rat it backed until the wall pushed against them. Bito slowly walked towards the person, he was so intrigued and his prey was within sight. Instinct kicked in and like a cornered beast, the person fought back; pushing Bito they managed to surprise him, yet was yanked back as Bito grabbed the hood. The person fell on on Bito and caused both of them  to fall on the cold floor.


A dark red river of silky hair rolled through Bito's hands as they tumbled, the small amount of light revealed the crimson silk and pale skin. Bito turned to look down the alley and saw a group of light approaching the corner. He looked up to see a full moon  and how it was lighting up the alley, he looked at the girl in amazement. Her skin bounced the moonlight and stood out in the dark, assisted by her glowing hair.


"You're a girl..." Was all Bito could say, he was so taken aback, unable to think.
She stared back at him blushing wildly, her brown eyes rounded in fear. She whimpered yet failed to form any words. Terrified she struggled to escape from his grasp, she only stopped when she heard a voice boom orders.

"Get that damn thief!” The old commanded, “I’m tired of these demons running around stealing from us,” the crowd cheered in agreement and barreled towards the corner towards, the two hidden in the darkness.
He pulled back as the girl fought him, he watched as they turned the corner. A small group approached the end of the alley, they marched inspecting everything they could.
“Please they’ll kill me!” The girl pleaded as she fought against Bito, but he would not let up, he did not let go. She had committed a crime, Bito had been instilled with the idea that crime must be punished, this is what he thought justice was.

Chapter 2
Spoiler
“You dont understand! Please just help me escape!” She cried tugging away from Bito, “Please Bito, save me.”


The moment he heard her say his name He ripped off his mask and gasped, the air stung his lungs and eyes; he began coughing allowing the girl to slip from his grasp. She stared at him as he held the dangling mask, he regained himself and quickly strapped it onto her face. She resisted at first, but feeling his arm wrap around her didn’t seem to bother her, in fact she relaxed, even when Bito tugged her jacket off. A tight, black, short sleeve shirt contrast against her pale skin on her thin arms, but it was not as flawless as her face, scars ran up and down the length of her limbs. Some were fresh and were still healing while others were now fading marks on her skin. 

"It’s right there!" The crowd began closing in on the just as Bito finished pulling the jacket over his head.
"Hide.." Bito whispered pushing her into a corner. He put on the gray torn jacket and threw on the hood. He walked towards the crowd, “Promise me you won’t interfere, " He beckoned the masked girl. She silently nodded in agreement and tucked herself away.

The crowd struck Bito down repeatedly, the picked him up and threw him down as they tormented him.
“We have families to feed you damn thing!” A young man cried out, tears in his eyes rolled off as he kicked Bito.
“Don't bother, beast like you wouldn’t know anything about families would you?” Another male slashed at Bito, blood dripped and soaked the grey jacket, yet Bito would not give up. He spat blood out and was picked up by a large boy. The man who Bito had helped was now staring at Bito, his bloodied hair covered his face so the man yanked it back and stared at his eyes. Bito’s eyes slit as he glared back angrily.

“What is this thing?” The old man questioned inspecting his eyes and fangs as Bito resisted violently. “Take him, the Erlking will want to see this.”
The Crimson haired girl heard this and jumped out from her hiding spot, “Leave him alone,” the girl reached towards the crowd and various vines burst out of the dirt, they were incredibly thick and had dark green thorns, the men fought back and began hacking the vines but more were spawned and began grabbing men and throwing them. Bito’s vision closed in and his breathing became labored, he watched men slash at the thick vines and drop dead before the tunnel closed in.

The void enveloped Bito, he couldn't see anything. He tried moving but only.got the always friendly rattling of.chains in response. He took a long deep breath, which was a terrible idea, the air was so stale and dead it almost seemed like he coughed out more dirt than air. He began to panic. His mask...where was his mask?! He struggled trying to escape the cold grip of the chains and darkness.

"One thing ill never understand is your species need to struggle...." a chilling voice chuckled from the shadows.
Bito stopped. It had to have been his imagination. He peered into the darkness. All there was there was two red dots. He stared at the dots confused. Then they did something. They blinked.
Bito jumped and the voice laughed. Bitos heart pounded, his thoughts raced, every single.fiber in his body was telling him to fight. He needed to fight.  He writhered and yanked at the.bonds that tied him to the darkness. He twisted and yelled in an attempt to break free.
The dark voice bellowed, "Although it's quite entertaining, You should problaly stop before-"
A loud crack echoed in the oblivion of nothingness. Bitos scream followed soon after. The two.sounds bounced off the walls.of.darkness chasing each other back into Bitos head, shaking in his.ears until all there was left was a ringing.
Bito fell to the freezing dank floor. Crippled by the pains in his broken shoulders. Blood trickled down his chest and made ripples in the sea of darkness he was standing on. Then he did something he hadn't done in a long time. He began to cry.

He needed to find her. He needed to make sure she was safe. They were chasing her. Theyd kill her....
"You should be worrying more about yourself kid"  laughed voice "That little red head got you killed anyways" 
Bito was immediately filled with rage, "She saved me!" Bito yanked at chains towards the shadow infront him. His body yelled at him to stop, but the burning fury overpowered all the crackling and snapping that rang from his body.
The voice boomed and evil laugh, "Can you kill death itself?"
The young captive stopped struggling for a moment.
"Got me killed...?" Bito muttered.
"Just where do you think you are?" Hissed the voice.
"Who.....?" Bito began but the words wouldn't leave his mouth. As if they were afraid to leave the safe sanctuary that kept them away from this...thing. This vile creature that seemed to be all around him. A dark mist swirled around Bito. Circling the bonds that restrained Bito, moving down the rusted bloody chains and wrapping around Bitos blood spattered neck. He could feel the life being choked out of him as the shadow moved into his mouth and poured out of his nostrils.
"Out of all things you want that...?" The deadly mist manifested itself into an obsidian black shadow with two piercing rubies for eyes. Although it was black all around, this shadow was blacker. It was darker than black, it had shadows swirling inside of it distorting its shape so it was never one solid figure.
"What the hell do you want?!" Begged Bito.
"To give you what your heart most desires of course,"responded the voice.
Bito hung motionless. What did his heart most desire? Happiness?
"You really don't know do you?" The shadow interrupted Bitos thoughts.
He hadn't noticed before, how didn't he notice before? This thing could listen in on Bitos thoughts.
"Correct. I am an omniscient being here, this is my domain, I rule this dimension." The shadow began wishing and circling Bito, "I can be anything or anybody," the shadow stated, "I can be anybody" The shadow began to glow dimly morphing into a female.

*****An incredibly attractive woman, she had large breasts and dark red lips. He dark black hair rolled down the back of  her red dress down past her ass. She laughed a sexy chuckle. She appeared infront of Bito, "C'mon boy, you don't find me attractive?" P the woman into his ear,touching his chest slowly sliding her hand down his chest.
Bito hung motionless. Looking down not wanting to make eye contact with this succubus. She wasn't real. She was as fake as the hope that's been snatched away from Bito countless times.
The seductive woman noticed she was getting no response, her face twisted into a disgusting frown. She paused as if thinking. The her Face lit up and created a creepy long smile with her glossy red lips. *****

"I know..." she laughed fading away.
Bito watched as the petite form began to shape and stain different colors, the jacket Bito had borrowed was becoming grey, her hair rolled down barely reaching and touching her hips. Pale skin and pink lips,"Bito...." a soothing voice whispered.


It was her, Infront of him was the girl in the hood. She shed the gray jacket to dawn a new dress. It cut off at the knees. Exposing her smooth pale skin. Bito reacted At the site of her. He jumped towards her being pulled back by the rattling chains. He tugged at them violently trying to escape their cold grasp.
With one final pull he finally got a response. Two chilling cracks. Immediately Bito dropped down unable to move his arms.
"Now you've done it...." laughed the girl in front of him.
His arms had given up on him. They weren't capable of movement anymore. Bito looked up horrified, this wasn't her. This couldn't be her, the aura radiating from her wasn't calming and warm. It was cold and had a feeling of death.
Bito screamed. He screamed until his throat was burning. His screaming finally stopped when he collapsed to the pure black floor. He lay face down, shivering and sobbing.
"Why do you care more about her?" Asked the demon,"Is she really that important to you?"
Bito just lay I'm a pool of his own blood. He must have ripped the skin on his upper arms off, he could feel the flesh barely keeping his shoulders attached to his torso. He had a terrified look on his face as he gasped for air. The steady up and down of his chest danced with the chains In sync with the rattling that echoed In the endless pit.
"....what do you want...?" Bito finally managed to spit out.
The beautiful girls face twisted to an evil grin, "To help you realize your potential, my son.”
 The demon vanished in a black mist again. Bito lay wondering what he meant. He felt something lift his body from behind. He turned and saw another woman. She had short dark brown hair, warm brown eyes, and a cheerful smile. He pearly white teeth shined even more surrounded by the endless sea of black. Her pure white gown draped down to her feet. She had Burn marks up and down her arms. Those marks were the imperfection on her smooth dark skin.
"You wish you could protect her..." whispered the woman into his ear, "you know you're weak"
Bito stared forward frozen. Petrified.
"I can make all your wishes come true my son....." the voice wished, "...for a price" the woman laughed pushing Bito down.
"...." Bito lay silent, "No" Bito stated stone faced. He managed to use his legs to push his body of the ground. He knelt facing down at the pool of blood that lay At his feet. He stared at the face that looked back at him. His face. It was covered in scars and bruises. The two shiny purple eye lids stood out the most. His nose crooked and teeth broken. The cuts on his face still spat out blood at an incredible rate. The pool grew bigger and bigger around him.
Slowly the black sea was being taken over by the red liquid. The red pool invaded the black swamp. The black mist that swirled up from the swamp retreated back, quicker and quicker the pool spread until finally it was no longer a sea of black that Bito knelt In,but rather an ocean of red.
"Come now son..." the warm voice said once more, "Who will protect her?" The voice taunted. Walking away from Bito. Two children were now holding her hands. One of them looked familiar, he had black hair and shiny eyes and was wearing a long white robe. It was Bito. The other had white hair, and white eyes. His lips were black and he wore a black robe. Bito didn't recognize this boy.
"I will protect her, I want to protect her!” Bito began to yell.
"What if I kill her?!" The woman flew towards Bito. Her once beautiful face was now a charred mess. Her shiny black hair had died and frizzed with streaks of white, "You'll Kill me?!" The woman's laugh was more a shriek than anything. That evil cackle echoed shaking the peaceful ocean of red water causing waves to splash up. The water roared around him. Huge creatures reached out from below the surface of the barely clear red stained water. From below he could sea people trying to escape only to be dragged back by huge tentacles or be clamped on by the massive jaws of what resembled sharks but more humanoid. As if someone had been twisted and mutilated to look like shark. Instead of fins they had huge arms with webbed hands. At the end of the finger tips were long black sharp claws. These claws were used to rip out the throats of a lot of the people trying to escape. Two "sharks" tugged at the hands and feet of a man. The man screamed muffled by the surrounding water a stream of bubbles jetted out of his mouth. He was torn in half and quickly devoured by the two demons who turn their attention to Bito. Bito turned to look forward and saw a wave begin to form in the distance. It was small at first, but it began to grow bigger as it rolled towards Bito. Bito shut his eyes the moment before it was supposed to crash on him. He expected the wave to wash him away but instead it fell silent.
"You shouldn't worry about me hurting her," the chilling cold  voice from before echoed in his head,"a soul and will that pure and good has no place in my kingdom," the voice almost sounded disgusted at the thought, "No. You should be worrying about what they'll do"
Swinging his eyes open the tortured soul saw the two boys from before. They stood motionless staring at him.
The boy in white. He felt so familiar, yet he looked so sad.
The boy in black. It was clearly Bito, but He looked so happy.
The two traded stares, and then switched expressions. The boy in white smiled as he began to.shine he morphed into the girl with red hair. She stood frozen expressionless.
The boy in black frowned as he began to turn black. He split into more shadows. They began to grow and stretch into tall built ment holding swords and maces. Surrounding the girl they had bloodthirsty looks In their eyes. They were intent on killing the girl.
Bito shut his eyes and shook his head. It was all lies. It was all fake. This demon was tricking him again. He had to be.
"Look you little *censored*!" The woman shriek in his ear yanking his head up by the hair. His eyes were peeled open and he was forced to witness the scene unfold.
The men moved from their frozen positions. And began.to.yell. They  charged towards the girl. The girl simply yelled. What more could she do? These men encircled her and raised their weapons.
"No!" Bito yanked forward once again this time ripping his arms off his body. He ran towards the group of men. He could save her, he could protect her.
Chains shot out from the water And looped around his shoulders Pulling him down. They chained his legs and neck down. Bito struggled furiously to try to.free himself, But it was useless, he was prisoner once again. "You can stop it!" Yelled the woman, "you can save her!" The men were holding the girl. One man pulled his sword back ready to thrust it into the girl's stomach.
"Don't you love her?!" The woman pressed, "Don't you wish you had the power to save her and keep her alive?!"
"Yes!" Bito bellowed struggling.
"Will you trade your life for hers?!" The woman boomed.
"Yes!" Bito shouted crying.
"Deal." The woman smirked.
Bitos gas mask shot out of the water and onto his face. It burned into his skin hissing. Bito withered in pain yelling Pulling side to side. The mask shone a purple light from the eyes. Bitos voice began to become deeper and beast-like. His hands cracked as They expanded and grew sharp black claws. With one final roar the chains ripped off his body. His body shone and eventually exploding into a blast of purple light and a deafening  roar echoed throughout the red landscape.
"This is your fate my son..."

Chapter 3
Spoiler
Bito woke up to a cold salty breeze on his face and the sound of waves crashing against the shore far below cliffs. It was nighttime. The stars and moon let him know the sun had given up its reign of the sky to the nocturnal kingdom once again. They were incredible, they were so clear and visible tonight.
His mask.
Where the hell was his mask? He sat up frantically. Feeling around, but he couldn't find it. He touched his face curiously and slowly he was almost scared of what he would discover. It was just his face, but with some bandages on it. Bito realized he didn't even know where he was, he knew he had to be somewhere near the sea. Then he looked left and he saw someone. It almost made him jump.
He saw the girl.
She was standing right bellow the full moon. Holding the graying gas mask in her hand down by her waist. The girl was staring at the moon as if it was hypnotic, she was locked in a trance her eyes never leaving the surface of the pale celestial body.
"You shouldn't move around."She stated unexpectedly.
Bito did jump at that. She looked so mesmerized  he wasnt respecting her to say that So boldly.
He heard a slight rip coming out of his side followed by a sharp pain.
"*censored*ing hell man!" Bito yelled. He rolled around in pain.
"You're just making it worse idiot.." The girl said turning slightly to look at him.
Bito stopped when he remembered.
"What's your name?" Bito demanded.
Now the girl was drawn back. She stared at the bandaged boy.
"Why would you care about that?" Asked the girl.
"Hey you owe that to me!" Bito stood up but quickly fell back down yelling from pain.
"You're so pathetic..." the girl whispered with a smile rushing to his side.”For now,”  She held Bito as she cut the soaked  bandages, Bito just stared at her. She seemed so serious and focused yet she was still relaxing. He felt so safe and comfortable with her. Bito stared At the girl and smiled.
He shook his head because he remembered something else. He saw the mask. Where was it? He had to make sure she didn't put it on. He saw it by the mysterious girls side. He just needed to reach out and grab it.
"I told you not to move idiot!" Yelled the girl, "you just ripped more!" She pinned Bito down using her arms and legs.
"Don't put on the mask! Give it to me!" Bito thrashed but unable to throw the girl off in his weakened state.
"God you're stubborn..."the girl smiled. She leaned in and stared at Bito. Bito blushed at the sight of the girl inches from his face. She looked so amazing in the moonlight.
The girl leaned in and kissed Bito. Bito couldn't Even react, he lay enjoying the moment. Bito swallowed from being nervous and felt something small and hard slide down his throat, "What the *censored* are you doing?!" Bito yelled pushing the girl away.
The girl jumped on top of Bito once again laughing, "that was to put your stubborn butt to sleep again!"
Bito began to become slower and started slurring as he spoke, "no...the mask....I gotta....." he began dozing off.
"You have to sleep my Hero,” Koi whispered sweetly,
"No...I have to.....must protect her....."Bito was so weak he was barely moving anymore. It was obvious he was knocked out now.
The girl was surprised to hear Bito say those three words. She didn't know how to react at first but then....she smiled. She turned red and began to giggle, "Perhaps tomorrow then, tonight you need to rest up.”
"What's your name.....?" Bito managed to murmur weakly.
The girl jumped. She inspected  Bito again. He had to have been asleep there's no way he was still awake. She looked at him for several moments before confirming he was passed out. She laughed whenever Bito twitched as he slept peacefully. She carefully lay Bitos head down and stood up looking down at him. She once again knelt down by Bitos side.
"My name is Koi..." she murmured sweetly into a quietly snoring  Bitos ear. She lay down on top of Bito resting her head on his chest. He twitched, she giggled.
"....and I think we are destined to be together." Koi whispered into Bitos ear kissing his cheek. Koi giggled as she dug her face into Bitos neck and kissed it. Bito must have subconsciously felt this because he smiled. The two peacefully lay in the field above the ocean. The moon shone on both of them as they happily drifted off into sleep together. The two smiled as their breathing began to sync. And eventually they were both in a deep sleep. Yes it was true.....Koi and Bito were happy.

Chapter 4
Spoiler

Awaking, Bito groaned with haze from whatever Koi had slipped him last night, he squinted at the sunlight that assaulted his eyes. "My name is Bito...." Bito whispered to himself quietly recounting the events that unfolded just before he passed out. Pulling himself to his feet Bito collected his thoughts and looked around. He knew his face was exposed but right now he was wondering where his savior was. "Why does she keep taking my mask dammit..." He muttered angrily feeling his exposed face. He had bandages covering his cheeks. But he was also clean. His clothes had been patched up and even his hair seemed combed and washed. Bito blushed furiously when he realized Koi had taken the liberty of bathing him, he tussled his hair in an attempt to rebel against his new clean state.
"Were destined to be together," a soft voice echoed in his mind. Bito stopped and reflected on those words. "Destined?" Bito whispered joyfully.
It was strange for Bito to be feeling as he did. He had an incredible drive to do anything and was excited thinking about what he could do or see today. Looking around he saw a nearby tree with his mask dangling from a branch.
Bito approached the edge of dim lit forest and reached into the tree untangling his mask. His stomach growled and his mouth watered intensely;kneeling down Bito drained his stomachs contents on the leaf covered forest floor. Heaving heavily his stomach was unable to produce anymore and Bito was left spitting and coughing.
Slowly pulling himself up Bito hesitated putting his mask on for a moment out of fear. Staring at it he could feel himself getting lost, maddening whispers echoed louder and louder the longer he looked at the cursed object.
A slight snap interrupted Bito's  concentration;looking around nervously he noticed a small rabbit peeking its head into a basket sitting at the base of the tree his mask was dangling from. Bito approached the basket and the rabbit scurried away into a nearby bush. Taking the cloth covering the cargo shiny red apples we revealed along with a note written in a sophisticated and educated font. Bito struggled at first turning his head as read the complicated loops.
"Dear Bito,
That drug I had to give you last night might make you wrench your insides so be sure to do that before you eat these," the letter began.
Bito sighed at the apples muttering to himself, "Thanks for the heads up..."
He continued reading the letter, " I hope you're feeling better try eating these slowly. Ps. Don't give any away they are specially made for you!"
Bito squinted at the last line, "Don't tell me what to do..." He muttered snapping an apple in half. He looked around and spotted a fur ball trembling in the bushes.
"Hey its ok here," Bito approached the rabbit cautiously, "I don't think I would have found these without you so take it!" Bito extended half of the apple to the rabbit, who stared at Bito from her shrubbery of protection. "Cmon take it its just an apple." Bito chuckled.
The rabbit hopped hesitantly towards the fruit, sniffing intently the rabbit approved the snack and began to nibble happily.
Bito pet the animal gently before loading the rest of the apples into his bag. "She even fixed my bag..." Bito smiled. He bit into his half of the apple and began walking into the dim forest. Crunching leaves were carried by the wind, Bito munched on his snack as he looked at the tall trees around him. The sun peered through the trees letting beams of golden sunlight reach for the floor. He could hear animals chasing each other and even spotted a fox exploring his surroundings. "Where am I?" Bito asked the trees; finishing his apple he jumped and climbed a nearby tree. He thought he knew the area around his village but this forest was foreign to him. Reaching the crown of the tree he gleaned details on his location. He saw an ocean to the south , mountains north, he was at the edge of a large forest that extended east towards the ocean, finally looking west he saw a familiar desert and his village not very far from where he was perched.
"Did she really carry me all the way here....?" Bito pondered out loud, before being startled.
“Yes she did,” a small voice echoed.
Bito looked around and saw a small fox looking at him curiously, “Did you say that?”
“Perhaps!” The fox ran into the forest, Bito swiftly followed after it. He was compelled to find out what the fox was leading him to, it could be dangerous but the curiosity was unbearable.
“Bito!!” The fox jumped at Bito and growled happily, running in circled it played with Bito in a small clearing. Bito would chase it whenever it would come out from the bushes, preparing to dash once again, “Are you really her SoulMate? You’re so much fun I hope you are!”
“A SoulMate?” Bito stopped slowly and asked catching his breath.
“There's been tons of definitions while I’ve been alive but basically you and her have the potential for incredible things when you're close.” The fox laughed as it rolled in leaves.
“Close to who?” Bito asked eagerly.
“Koi of course!” The fox stopped and looked into the forest, “Bito I gotta go! Red Caps!”
“Red Caps…” Bito was alarmed by the foxes tone and tensed up in anticipation.
The bushes shook in front of Bito, yet a small imp jumped out at him from the trees. Bito spun around and punched the round monster, it shook its face and shrieked at him before scurrying off. Bito was attacked by multiple Red Caps this time, they lunged at him and began swiftly pummeling him with small fist.
Bito could feel his body begin to toughen slowly, his arms and legs began to swell. But he punched and he lost all the energy he had, he would gain more only to lose all of it whenever he retaliated.
“You’re using too much energy,” the squeaky fox corrected, “ Just block their attacks for now,” it peaked its head over a bush to examine Bito fight off the invaders.
Bito would duck, or catch blows, every time he chose to absorb them a purple pulse lit up. With this Bito now stood a chance, every hit he absorbed caused him to feel sturdier and heavier. He could feel his fists wanting to explode, but resisted the urge to punch.
“Now hit one of them!” The fox jumped out of the bushes and stood tall next to Bito, the boy wound up his dim purple arm and released a punch with all his might. It sent purple shockwaves out, but the Red Cap was sent flying into the trees; eventually crashing into one. The other two scurried off into the woods after their friend and did not return to test the power of Bito again.
“What was that?” Bito stood looking at his sore arm, it twitched and trembled slightly.
“That’s you being a shadow! How can you not know that?” The fox sniffed in the direction of the Red Caps, “They Are definitely gone after that display!”
“But how did I do that?” Bito rubbed his forearm.
“You absorb the energy behind their attacks, Shadows have the ability to convert many types of energy into Mana, Chi, or Chakra.” The fox look up and flicked its tail back and forth happily, “Your muscles then store it and it is used the next time you attack usually.”
“I guess my body isn't use to it, I can already feel how sore it has made me,” Bito stretched, “But I really need to find my way back to the village.”
“Why?”
“I’m not sure, I just have the feeling it's where I should be,” Bito looked around uncomfortably, sensing something; Jumping up to a higher branch he inspected the surrounding trees.

"Let go of her you bastard!" A young male voice demanded, it was followed by a painful scream; Bito strapped his mask on, threw on his hood, and dove towards the cry. Gripping sturdy branches and swinging to slow his fall he descended gracefully, ears perked.
The more he ran the louder the screams of a young girl became. Bito reached the edge of a clearing, within the small circling field he saw a humanoid salamander, it had armor plating and a sword. The girl screamed reaching for her head in pain, "Help me Tadashi!" She cried louder as the creature shook her around.
 Bito waited for his chance, he didn't want to rush in. Being positioned behind the larger thug in the bushes he was hidden from the sight of the second bully just yards away. "Kira don't worry I'll protect you-" the boy was cut off by slug to his face.
"Shut up kid," the thin Salamandra hissed," we both know you can't save anybody." The bullies laughed as the dizzy boy got to his feet.
"Tadashi no!" The girl cried. The larger Salamdra slapped a scaley hand over her mouth.
"Damn you're annoying!" The large warrior stated angrily, "Just kill the other brat so we can take this one."
The other lizard picked up Tadashi and growled, "Well sorry kid, you're just no use to us" pulling his arm back his arm for a moment before before it began to glow a dull red, releasing steam radiated off the boys arm and shoulder.
 
Tadashi flailed and powerful winds startled the Salamanders, knocking them off balance momentarily,
"Tadashi!" The girl yelled shaking free, her body glowed dully but rapidly illuminated, a large beam of light shot out in all directions blinding everybody, except Bito who hid down in the shrubbery.
As the Salamanders flailed and reached for their eyes, Bito ran out of the bushes, running on the back of the large lizard he sprang forward and slammed his heel the slender delinquent. A slight screech resonated as the giant reptile Recoiled and crumbled down clutching its head.
Turning around he pulled and arm back, yet he was greeted by a large fist to the chest that robbed him of his balance; He didn't have enough time to recover when he was snatched up from behind.
The other Salamander did not hesitate and began to pummel Bito with heavy fist. Bito heaved each time he was struck, yet he stood tall, head up enduring.
The young girl snuck around the commotion to help the recovering boy struggling to stand up, "Tadashi we need to help him!" The girl pulled Tadashi up.
"Kira are you ok?" Tadashi muttered dazed still, Standing up Tadashi regained sense, shaking his hazy state.
"Tadashi what do we do?" The Kira squeaked.
Tadashi pulled out an aged slingshot, "Get behind me" he ordered his sister. Kira jumped behind and clutched Tadashi shaking.
"I can't get a shot if you keep shaking Kira" Tadashi chuckled.
"Give me a turn!" The slender bully yelled,"he hit me idiot!"
" We're wasting our time anyways," the large lizard hissed back,"We came for the brat!" Turning towards Tadashi and Kira the bullies watched as he steadied his shot and released. Bito heard a zoom and the sound of a projectile going through the large lizards chestplate, the more slender one dropped Bito and turned towards Tadashi, “ You little brat!” He slashed his sword at Tadashi just as the boy released a shot, the round shot was surrounded in a thin, whirling veil that penetrated the flames and lodged itself in the metallic plates.
“Too bad Kid,” the Salamander snarled, “ Anfractus Incensus,” extending his hand out a flame spiraled out, before Bito grabbed the Salamanders arm reflexively, draining the energy the fire dwindled and Bito’s arm began to glow purple and drained towards his body. He stepped and squatted slightly before unleashing a powerful uppercut that left a roaring purple aura around it as it connected with the Salamanders chestplate, eventually shattering it and sending the beast flying towards a tree. He slammed into and leaves dropped out, but it slowly got back up and hissed at the boy, “I’ll cut both of you in half!”
“Nope,” an orange haired boy jumped out of the tree and recited, “ Scintilla Pila,” a sparkling ball zoomed towards the red lizard and exploded. Bito stood and watched as dust and debris was carried by the blast’s energy outwards him, his clothes flailed and Tadashi advanced towards the blast with Kira, stopping a short distance from Bito.

The spiked orange haired boy stood with his arms crossed, he had thick black pants and white t-shirt under a leather jacket. “Listen you scum, I am taking that girl and there is nothing you can do about it.” He held another sparkling ball in his palm and pointed at Kira.
"I'll never give my sister to you thugs,You’ll have to kill me!” Tadashi stood tall and aimed a shot at him.
 “ You should really choose your words more carefully,” the boy chuckled and flung the ball at Tadashi. Both of the boys projectiles clashed and exploded close to Bito, who tried collecting energy but had his palms burned instead.
During that time the orange boy zoomed behind Tadashi and blasted him away, following closely behind to grab and slam him into the ground. Flipping backwards he unleashed another sparkling ball at the fallen boy to make sure the job was done, Tadashi lay motionless in a smoldering crater when the smoke cleared.

If this is spam let me know haha on the other hand if  you want more also let me know! Thanks guys:3

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Develop Your Story / Different Story, same universe.
« on: July 09, 2016, 10:35:46 PM »
Hey guys, ive been working on a new story along with my Koi and Bito story. For now its called Nilah and Raven because Im not creative  :sure: I wanted another story because there was so much to do in my universe and thus this was created!
So far I have two solid Characters with at least five more in development, these other five characters are actually going to appear in Koi and Bito, because this story takes place in the same village only 10 or so years earlier.

Spoiler
Nilah Tru’ng is a 16 year old girl who comes from a  Royal Family in the Water Dimension.  She has been trained in high levels on Chemistry and martial arts. She is able to combine and split molecules easily and quickly, but she prefers to manipulate water as much as possible. In theory Nilah has the capability to turn dust into gold but has been taught to be above that and have pride. Her family prides themselves in having beautiful yet dangerous daughters. Nilah is, she is a well educated, attractive bride to be, who is more than capable of defending herself. She is respectful, especially when in the presence of her elders, and has a hard time relating to Raven’s plebbeness.

Raven Shih is a 18 year old girl who runs a travel service with her father in the hybrid dimension, her father is a wind nature and is able to lift and transport heavy ships with ease using his winds. Her mother was a powerful Shadow Discipline who died saving Raven and her father from a herd of Mana Crazed animals.Raven has underdeveloped shadow skills due to losing her mother at such a young age and learns most of her techniques from her dad because he plans on handing the business down to her. Raven had always been a bit blunt and straight to the point while still being able to make jokes and laugh with her friends.
Raven and Nilah have just met when the incident that orphaned many of the children in the village and dimension occurred,Both Raven and Nilah lose their fathers and barely survive slamming into the sands from the atmosphere. They reach the nearest village and their first encounter begins a dangerous path for Raven as she defeats a bandit preying on children for food. She is approached by a mysterious henchmen for the Erlking and is told she has the potential to become the Merchant Queen of the Hybrid Dimension, and control crime. She accepts knowing that if anybody were to have such a title it should be her, to show mercy wherever she can as she commits crime across the dimension.

Theres much much more, Raven and Nilah fall in love, and the slow trek up to becoming the Queen. I wanted to have two females fall in love and have a whole story around them but not sure if it will be taken as perversion or not  :noidea:. Much like Koi and Bito there will be regular romantic scenes to emphasizes the bonds between the main characters so I suppose I would need to start taking romantic scenes more seriously.  Please leave feed back good or bad just leave something haha thanks guys:3

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Develop Your Story / Fight Scene attempt #2
« on: June 26, 2016, 06:28:27 PM »
Hey guys! Im working on a story called Koi and Bito and I wanted to get all your opinions on this scene I wrote. I am now starting to develop more of the meat for this story and want to make sure even small scenes work, that being said this one of the longer scenes ive written but Im not sure if adding more would be better or make it worse.

Anyways its Tadashi Vs Rukino

Tadashi's Description,
Spoiler
Tadashi
Male
5'4"
15
      A slim soldier Has been through extensive training that included Hand Sparing, Sword and other weapons training, along with developing his natural skill with guns. He wears dark thick camouflage pants  and fitted shirt with a small pouch on his back, on his hands he has gloves with the index fingers cut off exposing his skin. The pants are held up by a belt with that has multiple slots for explosives or ammunition,  and pistol holster. He wears a black bandana that is under his mechanical goggles when he isnt using them, the goggles are made to be able to sense heat, have x-ray vision, and detect the discipline of any organism.
He has multiple knives that are activated by filling them up with energy and creating a blade, a compact Katana, varying numbers of pistols that have 6 shots of each 6 Disciplines,  and a custom designed sniper that has rapid fire capabilities.

Rukino's Description

Spoiler
Rukino:
Male
6'3
Age Unknown
    Very mysterious he wears a white robe that covers a majority of his body with the exception his hands and legs below the knee. He has dark skin and blue eyes with a shaved head, he has a very thick african accent and speaks very wisely. He shows off his sculpted face and muscles whenever he flexes his power, in battle, which is rarely.  He is a mighty spirit which means he is capable of using all 6 Disciplines, and has incredible amounts of Mana, Chakra, and Chi compared to even Hybrids.

Heres the scene please give me feedback! Especially if something is just bad or doesnt make sense, this is later on in the story so theres not much context to use, i want to start making sure my ideas are fluid:3 thanks guys:3

"Im not the bad guy, Im doing a mission. I was trained for years for this specific kill,"  Reaching back he pulled out a blade hilt, but it had no blade, "Im so close to being free, nobody will prevent me from seeing her, Ill kill you, then Bito, then finally I will be able to find my little sister." Tadashi shouted and lunged at Rukino with a golden tinted winds that roared out of his hilt.
"We all had dreams," Rukino replied coldly, slamming his stone arm against the knife. The roaring energy jammed into his arm, Tadashi tensed and shouted once more, flooding the knife and shattering Rukino's arm. Rolling back he dove for his pistol and sniper, he tossed his pistol back into its holster and lifted his sniper up at the Mighty Spirit. Rukino had vanished, only shards of his arm remain sprawled in the dirt.
Tadashi slowed his movements and lowered his goggles down, he began searching the area using Mana-Detecting vision, plants lit up green, and critters reflected whatever color their discipline was. Looking at his hands he saw golden glowing aura, yet his veins stood out in a dark humming red. It intensified and shone the closer it reached towards his heart, Tadashi quickly spun around at the sound of a twig snap and shot multiple rounds.
Pulling back on his sniper a clip fell out as Tadashi quickly reloaded and aimed again, he saw Rukino reach and slam his sniper up against his face before being choked.
"Those bullets," Rukino looked at the boy and then the bullets that ran up his own arm,"Where did you get them?"
 Tadashi gasped for air and kicked at him, finally his restraints loosened enough for him to reach for his pistol and aim at Rukino. "Why dont you get a closer look?" A single shot blasted through his skull, the arm dropped and the body slumped. Tadashi dropped down and inhaled deeply, coughing and clutching his throat. He looked up to see the body begin to crumble and be spread by the wind, "Where are you?" He shouted angrily.
Small clouds over head cracked and echoed, in response to the boys pleas ice shards began to raid down on him, he aimed his pistol and rotated it to a small flame setting. Rapidly he shot down shard that would have critically injured him. He was so busy shooting down small shards he did not notice the large chunk of ice spiraling towards him behind a wave of ice. A red glow caught his attention as the chunk began to peak with burning energy, similarly small red orbs spiraled around Tadashi's muzzle. The boy lunged back and unleashed a powerful blast that exploded upon hitting the ice, yet still the ice sped towards the boy.
"Incendo  Ferio," Rukino's voice rang as the ice detonated, shrapnel quickly stabbed the area and slashed through Tadashi's skin. Piercing through him he yelled in pain,
" Percuro," Faded wings materialized on Tadashi's back, they began to glow dimly as his wounds sealed up.






"Get up," A voice commanded. A younger-less experienced Tadashi looked up to see Kemono frowning at him, "You're damn pathetic, it reminds me of someone I know," he reached his hand out and helped the boy stand up.
"Then train me dammit! I told you I cannot grapple, I am a marksman!" Tadashi protested slapping Kemono's hand away once he was up.
"Sparring is training!" Kemono growled, "You think the enemy will care you prefer shooting from afar? You little rocks will only get you so far, Kemono pulled out a pistol and pointed it at him. Then spun it around and tossed it at Tadashi, "Shoot me, fool."
Tadashi inspected the pistol, it was a silver revolver. Very slick and light he flicked it up towards Kemono, multiple shots rang out from it and the white haired twin laughed.
Bullets melted into his skin and he held out a finger gun, "Neat trick right? Ive been practicing more since I am part Shadow," he shot Tadashi in his leg, and the boy let out a painful scream.
"Percuro," Kemomo muttered, the wound sealed and the bullet was pushed out, "Quit bitching, we have a lot of training ahead of us. Together were going to kill Bito!" Kemono laughed and extended a hand out towards Tadashi, he angrily grasped it and was pulled up, " Why do you wanna kill Bito?"
"He's pest who must die," Kemono stated coldly.
Tadashi perked up a bit and smirked, " Im glad were at least on the same page. That beast is responsible for killing my parents, its his fault all of our parents are dead."
"Even more reason you should let me train you Tadashi," Kemono stared with his devilish eyes at the boy, "You're hybrid just like me, were powerful organism who have abilities the other Disciplines wish they could even understand. After we kill Bito we will establish a name for our race, we will be the first to show everybody how powerful we actually are. You may be a mutt, but you deserve to be proud about that fact."
"Alright," Tadashi responded, "Lets Kill Bito."
Kemono's back let out a bright flash and huge wings appeared out of his back, "Alright first you're learning how to fly," He grinned before snatching Tadashi and flying high into the air.





Flapping his wings ferociously, Tadashi stood tall and reached for his sniper, "Magnus Intorsi," his sniper focused and pulled in energies before unleashing a powerful , unstable orb that Rukino punched with his fiery fist. The orb crashed and demolished the small area it landed in between trees, smoke rose up from its crater as the marksman jumped back over it, while gliding in the air he repeatedly shot and pulled back on the rifles pin. Rukino dodged and punched unavoidable ones, the clouds quickly filled the air with dust.
" Turbinis Ignis," multiple fireballs sped towards The winged sniper as he landed.
Touching the ground he grunted as he struggled to regain control of his wings, " Animae Impetus," wind blurred in front of him as it sliced through the air, extinguishing the flames. "Affixus Beluae," a blue chain whizzed towards Rukino from the smoke and wrapped around his arm and torso. Rukino used his free hand to resist but was jolted with pain when he touched the chain.
Tadashi launched into the air and yanked Rukino with him, the chain rattled as the ascended into the sky but suddenly stopped when Tadashi dove back down towards Rukino in mid air. He drew his pistol and shot at his opponent as he fell past him spinning, he pulled down on the chain and heaved as as he threw it towards the ground.
Rukino used his sheer power produced from his muscles flexing to steadily push the smoke away, " Enough, Child." He grunted and the smoke snapped away from him, "Confudere Silvestre," Shoving his fist into the Earth he pumped it full of Chi.
Tadashi jumped forward with his pistol, pushing up using wind he shot at Rukino, Rukino was shot once but lunged back in time to dodge more. He yanked out a blue and purple whip out of the ground as he jumped, and shot out a sharp crystal toward Tadashi. "You'll like this Spell, a pupil of mine created it."
The crystal burst into shards and Tadashi jumped towards Rukino, backed by air, once more. He didnt realize until he had begun falling that the forest was moving, Rukino had given life to the forest like he had countless times before. Only this time everything came to life and sprouted limbs, Sturdy rocks surrounded Tadashi in the small clearing, behind them stood tall oaks and finally small green and red imps jumped up in anticipation from behind. Tadashi opened up his jack to count ammunition, "25 clips, 40 Snipes left, three Mana-Knives, compact-M Katana, and 5 Nukes." He looked at the army he would soon face and gripped his pistol in one hand and a raging Mana-Knife in the other, lowering his goggles once more his surroundings were flung as he pushed into the air and barreled straight towards the army. 

Tadashi showed of his quick reflexes and dexterity by slashing at the light warriors he faced first; they were humanoid stick beings, they had rapiers and small shields they used to push against Tadashi along with the shorter shield bearers. He sliced one of the stick warriors before taking his rapier and throwing it through another warrior, he stabbed his own blade into a couple of enemies before sparing by hand with the smaller imps, hed catch and throw the imps as he pumped them full of mana. The winds from the exploding imps would rips apart more of the warriors, before Tadashi would jump in and tear the remaining in half. Eventually Tadashi began to be pushed against by a heavy wooden shield, its rough surface scraped against Tadashis palm as he pushed back, more and more enemies piled behind the shield and heaved against Him. Tadashis back hit another shield as he pushed, he turned around and saw even more crowds pushing against him from the other side, he groaned as he struggled to keep the two walls apart.
Shouting he finally managed to put a hand on each side, he trembled but pushed himself up and looked up and saw Rukino's light blue aura as he stood on a thick branch. "Aurae repulsus-!" His palms produced powerful booms and shockwaves that blasted out and shred both sides in a matter of moments, Tadashi dropped and gasped for air before placing a hand on his knee and pushing himself up.
"All that power wasted on such a goal," Rukino shook his head, " Its never too late to realize you are wrong." Tadashi swiftly reached for an explosive and threw it at Rukino, a gust of wind spiraled it and lodged it into the thick trunk next to the Mighty Spirit. "Very well, we will continue," the explosion separated chunks of rocks as it burst from the tree and instantly more warriors crawled out of the ground. 

Tadashi dashed over and ripped one of the shielded fighters out of the ground and threw it at an emerging stick warrior, grabbing a couple jumping imps he again filled them with mana and used them as weapons. This time aiming for the towering trees they collapsed on top of warriors before they even had the chance to fight. Spinning and gripping his pistol he turned and unleashed a barrage of bullets before reaching for his sword again, gun still in hand. He reached back and threw a clip high into the air, he continued to slash at his enemies and even kicked some to help his air push him around. Stepping on a shielded foe he stabbed then jumped as he spun high into the air and dropped his clip, he slid the airborne clip from earlier into his gun and slowed his fall. With his katana in one hand and gun in the other he looked down and saw crowds of enemies.

 " Crux Scissus," Sliding his arms past each other directly in front of him he produced two vicious sound waves that tore at the tall warriors and shredded the smaller ones.
He aimed his pistol at the towering living trees and unleashed powerful blast that exploded and sent shrapnel into the air. More and more he shot at them and even more shrapnel floated in the air before Tadashi switched  his gun and began blasting giant fire balls that spread quickly and engulfed all of the floating bits. The towers flailed as they crashed in confusion, the smaller imps and warriors also scattered around as the fire overwhelmed them.
Tadashi smirked in victory as he watched his enemies burn, they all had been defeated so swiftly. He heard animals begin to cry out the closer he got to the ground, he watched as small orange elk abandoned their homes and birds retreated into the sky. His smirk was slowly replaced his grim and he was struck with horror, he hadnt realized a flaming tree was behind him until it smashed him down into the earth a thick branch-arm. On the ground the trunk exploded into splinters as Tadashi pushed himself out, blue chains wrapped around two giant trees as Tadashi stood up and yanked them down. As they fell they left a pillow made of black thread and red gems, when they crashed the roaring fire clamored as it was fueled. Tadashi kept fire away using small gust of winds, he made sure to be aware of his surroundings and he almost pulled out his pistol when he heard rustling and squeaking nearby. 
He walked over to the noise and found that a family of rabbits had been separated by one of the trees, the children cried as their mother ran back and forth trying to find a way for to them. Tadashi used his finger to create a small bridge in the smoldering tree, cool winds pushed the fires apart momentarily, allowing the mother to swiftly jump over and take off quickly.
"What have I become?" Tadashi watched as more trees fell and sent sparks into the air upon crashing.
"You have been manipulated," Rukino responded standing near Tadashi in a circle of flames, " You had the choice to be something else but you didn't realize it. Kemono blinded you with so much rage that became your purpose, he got you the power you wanted but now you believe it can only be used for a single goal."
" I do whatever I choose to, I want to kill Bito," Tadashi shouted back, " Crux Scissus," the winds created a gap in the sea of flames but Rukino was gone.
"Just because he gave you that power doesn't mean you have to do what he says, child. He gave you the power to mold your own future with your two hands, that is what you've always wanted power for isn't it?"
Tadashi began to calm, he still fought flames off with his winds but seemed to be deep in thought, " This is what Ive been working for, I was given the power to take this mission."
"There's no reason you have to do any of this Tadashi, you had a choice, you always have a choice because in the end your the one who must face the consequences." Rukino appeared in another swirl of flames, " Your soul is fractured but you're not corrupt. You're driven by a pure goal."
Tadashi sighed and let out one final push that extinguished the flames around himself, dropping his Katana he boldly stated, "I did all this for Kira, I wanted to protect her but I ended up becoming a hitman. I don't even know if my sis is dead and Im not closer to finding out." Placing his gun down on the ground gently he stared at it once more, " Im so exhausted, mentally and physically and I don't wanna fight anymore," he slung his sniper off and placed it down next to his other weapons, "I surrender, Mighty Spirit."

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Manga Artists Wanted / [Paid] Manga opportunity
« on: April 21, 2016, 02:35:09 AM »
Hello, before anything Id like to thank Forlorn Serpemt for editing my work, Ive posted on this site before but am now only able to offe money. Honestly I am picky so I apologize in advance, I would like to see what you interpret my characters as, along with how you would interpret the magic in the world. Im looking for color wmd eventually if I like the style would be able to pay for volumes. Please PM me with offers and examples of your work:3

 
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Rocks fly through the air and crack on the stone floor as a boy with spiked white hair frantically digs through a pile of stones. Fires crackled outside and the smoke scented air carried red embers, houses were crumbling as time passed and the boy labored.
“Please Bito,” the boy cries desperately, “ don't die damn it!” The final stone is thrown and shatters on the floor behind him, “We have to run before they come back!” The boy pulls on a boy trapped under the rubble, he is wearing a gas mask with a filter on each side, around each one purple symbols swirled around as white dressed boy reached towards his brother. Bito had blood pouring out of his head and his breathing was slowing down, he was not responding as his brother shook him.
 “What is that?”  As the white haired boy reached towards the mask’s glow intensified, he touched it and shouted reflexively out of pain.
His scream was one of many that filled the air, some were crying for help, others were calling out names, some parents could be seen guiding children and fighting off giant armored Salamanders. Their brown-red skin blended in with the dark red armor crested with yellow and red gems, they had helmets that revealed Black eyes, two flat nostril holes and sharp yellow teeth. Extending hands out, ice shot out from one of the dark skinned mothers and pierced the invaders breast plate, falling down the corpse kicked up a cloud of a dust. The other soldiers pressed on a slashed at the parents, some of them producing flames that trailed behind their sword with each swing. The woman who had shot out was now being pinned down as she distracted danger away from her children, running down a street flaming, falling debris crumbled a building and blocked her escape, yards away.
She turned and began fighting once more, slashing back with icy blue claws she had produced, she fought back and killed many warriors but was being outnumbered and was growing tired. As she shot out her final icicle she huffed but refused to fall,grabbing her red fist. from behind the stone barricade powerful winds lifted and pushed the giant stones over the woman's head, and Thick clouds followed a light skinned man as he dashed towards soldiers and began grappling with them, he moved rapidly out of the way of sharp swings and pushed his enemy away remarkably as he punched them. The clouds cracked every time he shouted as he fought, the small army stood united and pulled back their swords in unison. The man looked around and was trapped, he steadied his stance as he stared down the mob. The circle roared and a ring of fire sped towards the man, leading with his left arm he pushed up, heaving, and the flames spiraled above him towards the air.
The woman from before stood on top of a tall broken home and pulled her glowing blue hands down as she yelled out, “ Aufero Aridus!” Large patches of sharp ice rained down on all of the brawlers, endlessly the ice pierced everything it touched upon reaching the ground.
This was one of the fights that had broken out but from inside the simple stone home the conscious boy was angrily cursing at his brother, “Damn it Bito! You’re always giving up like this, why the hell do you have to be so damn powerless?” He had gathered rags to press against his brothers wound, but the rags quickly soaked and dripped on his hands.
The front door kicked in and a small figure blocked the light coming from flames outside, the brother shot around and pointed a handgun at the figure with one hand while holding his brother with the other “Get away! If you touch my brother I’ll *censored*ing kill you!” The child’s hand trembled as the person stepped closer, bright beams shot out from his fingertip towards the stranger but missed every time.
The pale hand slowly pulled out a knife and stepped even closer, the boy frighteningly shot and began glowing brightly. The knife was pressed against a pale arm and a green light burst out, blinding the white haired child.

10 years later

"Hey kid you can't sleep here." A warm voice rang, " Woah are you ok?" The voice asked concerned. 
Green tinted light shone through the sockets of a mask that clearly had its fair share of the elements. The boy sat up to look at the source of the gentle sound. It was an average sized dirty looking man. He had frayed hair, dirty hands, and a small basket on his back.
"Glad you're not dead but I can't have you sleeping here," the man stated, " Are you alright? Do you need help home.
The boy sat silently looking up at the man, then shook his head slowly. The silence in the air was broken by chirping of nearby birds on decrepit buildings. They looked as if they'd been scorched and were in shambles. Stray dogs chased cats in and out of the building's, and teenagers shifted through the broken homes.

"Im sorry to hear that kid" the man sighed sympathetically, "My names Tyrael and as hard as it is to believe this broken building is my home!" he smiled extending his arms to gesture towards the crumbled structure they were in front of . He then stretched one arm down towards the boy, "Sorry whats your name?" He asked joyfully grasping an extended hand.
"Bito" the boy stated quietly.
"Don't really talk much huh?" Tyrael laughed pulling Bito up to stand, "well Bito I have nothing against children" he ironically brushed off dirt that Bito had on his torn and tattered clothes, "Hell I have three myself!" He bellowed happily tussling the mid-teens crazy hair.
Bito stood silently.
"Sorry I can get carried away sometimes..." the older man apologized embarrassed, " anyways I was saying I can't have you hanging out here because my family stays here, " Tyrael explained, "Im sure you can understand me trying to keep my family from danger."
Bito nodded and adjusted his mask and bag made from branches. The branches and vines wove in and out of Bito's oversized clothing making it seem as if the bag was part of his outfit. He turned and began to walk away from the cluster of broken buildings when the man put his hand on his shoulder.
Bito tensed slightly quickly grasping the mans wrist.
" Ow kid take it easy!" Tyrael shouted in pain.
Bito instantly realized what he was doing and released the man. He quickly began his trek again before the man called out to him.
"Dammit kid here!" Tyrael reached into his basket and pulled out two shiny red apples, "catch!" He threw both swiftly at the boy who caught them reflexively.
Bito looked at the apples surface, he saw a gas mask topped with a full head of shoulder length black hair. A hood shrouded the mask and hair hiding any more details that could have been gleaned. He put the apples away into his back and turned to leave once more.
"You're not my brat but you're still the future of this village so don't die." Tyrael sounded more serious, " or at least don't let Them catch you so easily"
Surprised by the sudden change of tone Bito swung around but Tyrael was gone.

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General Manga writer discussions / Inspiration to write?
« on: April 19, 2016, 04:22:04 AM »
What keeps fellow writers writing? I find myself seeing ideas I thought were original in other  series, do you guys see this too? I get that creative ideas will always originate from other ideas frequently, but how do you work past the feeling that youre just ripping another series off?

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Develop Your Story / Introducing Monsters
« on: March 28, 2016, 04:48:44 AM »
Manga's tend to have many monsters, is there a way to explain what lore inspired the creature or would it just be better to let it explain what it is through its actions?

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Develop Your Story / Koi's Mighty Spirit
« on: March 16, 2016, 03:58:19 AM »
Hello MR!
This character is from the story I am writing, I am really intrested in entering her in the comtest that are hosted sometimes so please give me som feedback. Keep being badass guys:3  :glare:

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       Koi:
Age: 18,
Weight/ Height: Approx. 100 Lbs, 5'2"
Traits: Dark red straight hair, very pale skin, generally introverted.
She wears a well-worn grey hoodie and black leggings.  She looks very caring and loving, she is intelligent and when she actually speaks she is generally  proper but is stubborn. she has scars up and down her arms, can talk to animals and produce any type of plant in varying sizes, generally creates thick vines (thickness of football) to strangle target. Uses her six wolves as each element is needed, she possesses a Mighty Spirit, giving her vast amounts of energy, much more than anybody normally would or even Bito when he is "Mana-Crazed" but is able to stay level headed during battle. 

Merging Souls: When she Merges soul's with her familiar she dawns the color of whatever element she is using in a wolf pelt that drapes down her back and to her hands. Her eyes are golden and she appears much more confident than before. She can use pelts as a base element for her attacks,they power up the element they correspond with and may amplify the affects of weapons she creates from her other pelts.  She can use all six types of spells while wearing any pelt but if she has her fire pelt and uses fire spells the affects will amplified. Similarly if she wears her wind pelt while using the weapon her fire pelt produces, the flames from her weapon will be powered up by winds.

Fire Pelt: Red Pelt that produces heat around her, if she gets angry things will catch fire. Her personality becomes more aggressive than usual and her fire moves are stronger. When she uses her Fire Pelt as a weapon it becomes a spear, spear will be powered up by wind pelt by increasing the speed it travels and spinning it faster. 

Water Pelt: Blue Pelt that makes her surroundings cold, she can freeze sections of air and create sharp ice to rain down on an area. She can willingly freeze many of thing she touches. When a weapon, the pelt becomes a Katana with jagged shark teeth on one side. Nature pelt will power up the weapon by creating plants that increase the moisture in the air and allow slashing attacks to produce large columns of ice or hardening the sword.

Wind Pelt: Silver pelt that makes Koi light on her feet, she can use fierce winds to slash through dense objects. Whip up storms or throw off opponents movements by pushing them with strong winds, when it becomes a weapon it is a bow and arrow that can shoot all types of arrows.

Nature Pelt: Green pelt that makes plants sprout around her, she can create thorny vines to strangle target or pick up boulders, thick tree trunks, or other heavy objects to swing around. Becomes a thorny whip she can extend large distances, the longer it stretches the thiner it becomes unless Koi is wearing Water Pelt as it is filled with icy water.

Light Pelt: White/ Dark Pelt: Purple : The White and Black Wolves are the Alphas of the pack are eternally married,  and therefore they are able to co-operate together. They function as normal pelts, White pelt amplifies the power of all types of weapons by pumping them full of energy creating more fierce attacks. The purple pelt is the most defense pelt and will ease all incoming attacks, converting a small percentage of the force into energy to use. When the pelts become weapons they both become gauntlets, the purple gauntlet swirls around her hand and arm flowing with energy that protects and absorbs attacks. The energy converted by the purple gauntlet is amplified by the white gauntlet on the opposite hand. The white gauntlet has sharp spines supporting the fingers and the affects of the attack depend on the element of the pelt Koi is wearing. Fire: Explosive Punches, Water:Freezes blood upon impact, Wind: Punch can slice through objects in a direct line, Nature: Uses energy from purple gauntlet to create vines and hold target down, usually switched out with fire pelt rapidly.     

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Manga Writers wanted / [Un-Paid] Looking for Co-Writer/Editor
« on: March 10, 2016, 10:43:02 PM »
Hello Writers!

     I have been trying to get more active in this community so I wanted to ask if anybody would be interested in Co-Writing or editing my content, it is a story i have been working on for a few years and really wish to see expand more. I have concepts in my mind but am not the best writer, plus other minds create a diversity! Honestly just feed back on this thread would be enough to keep me writing.
Short Blurb: Koi and Bito is a story about two lovers who live in a different universe. There are six "Disciplines" and while people usually only get one, there is a dimension reserved for powerful and unstable hybrid beings. Koi and Bito must train while trying to figure out what caused and explosion that orphaned many children from their village and whether or not Koi's mother is alive

Expantion: some background **spoilers??**
 Koi is an incredibly intelligent girl and is the granddaughter of two Gods (Baset and Halpas) , but she was left "orphaned" due to the explosion and events that killed many parents. Eventually finding her SoulMate and calling she discovers she posses a Mighty Spirit, a unique and powerful soul that nature designed to keep the world balanced between good and evil which may also have the ability to learn all 6 Disciplines. Her pent up hatred due to being abandoned caused to lash out at her Family in an epic clash that destroyed large parts of her personal world.. As a result her grandpa decides to drop her and Bito off in the middle of Mana-Infused forest which harbors many dangerous, mutated organism, in order to train, control her powers, and mature in general. A message reveals that Koi's mother is still alive and that the explosion was intentional. She sets off with Bito on an adventure to control her Mighty Spirit and learn the truth. Compared to Bito she is more delicate looking but can preform powerful and diverse spells.

Bito is one of the orphans that was forced to fend on his own, he dawns a gas mask that his mother gave him right before she set out to protect him, and is much more beaten up than Koi. He has a twin named Kemono who he must kill or die, the two share a singular soul due to some kind of genetic-magical birth defect and thus must absorb the other half in order to become a Champion of their Discipline. The importance of Champions are their use in Wars against other Disciplines.

For now I have most of the adventure Koi and Bito set out on to find her mother, in the end Koi and Bito realize they were pawns in a grand scheme to start a war that would split the Disciplines into two factions. Familiars are animals that reflect the soul of a person and play semi-important roles in the first part but will play major roles during the war. Bito is able to control Taka, a Legendary Lion that he later finds out is his father who was sealed inside his mask to protect him after the chaos, and Koi is uniquely able to control 6 wolves, each a different element, she can control up to 2 or 3 depending on the match up of the elements. I really have invested a TON of time into this, I'd love to see this become so much more. Thank you MR Community!:3

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Manga Artists Wanted / [Un-Paid] Looking for Artist
« on: March 10, 2016, 09:45:48 PM »
Hello Mr,

I'm just like the rest of you trying to find an artist to do small work on my story, unfortunately I am not having much money coming in at the moment but would definitely compensate if you do not mind waiting. My story has been a work in progress for a few years now and Is actually dedicated to my girlfriend I began dating in high school. Koi and Bito are stereotypical lovers, who are hybrid beings. They live in neighboring dimensions where everybody is born into a "Discipline", or basically one of 6 elements, each Discipline has certain characteristics that is shared by most that belong to that school. The dimension Koi and Bito live in is much more isolated from the others due to the fact that Hybrids tend to be two or more Disciplines and can be incredibly unstable or powerful. I can expand on it a bit more if needed,  I have a few sagas already written out and am continuing on writing, so really I am in no rush to hear back or see anything, just realizing if posting it is the only chance ill have to see it come true! thank you fellow Raiders have an awesome day:3

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Manga Creations / Koi and Bito
« on: March 10, 2016, 08:28:32 PM »
Hello Fellow Community!

I am new so Hello to all, I wanted to share this short chapter of a story I've wanted to become a manga for years. This chapter is in the middle of a training session that got out of hand between the two main characters, there are slight tones of romance only because they are deeply in love, "SoulMates". This takes place in a fantasy, adventure world where everybody has control of One of the six classes of powers, there are hyrbids, the main characters are examples of some, that are much more powerful and seperated from the others. Anyways enjoy the read, please dont hesitate to tell me if it is cringe-worthy, I cant improve if people beat around the bush. Anyways just a short action scene so please enjoy:3 ps. The latin-ish looking phrases are the equivalent of spells, sorry for any confusion!

"Hello my Queen my name is Uma," the white wolf echoed looking down at a pink haired Koi.
"Hello Uma! I'm Koi!" She bounced hugging the wolf. Her tiny arms sank into the soft clean white fur. Koi laughed rubbing her face against the wolfs chest, dropping her head down Uma offered a ride. Gleefully Koi jumped on the wolf and two ran sped through the large garden.
Koi laughed loudly and cheered as Uma darted through shrubbery and jumped over obstacles. A trail of fresh green plants sprouted behind the two as they played together; Koi would spring life into any bush or tree she happened to touch with her tiny fingers. Uma eventually slowed down and completely stopped when they reached a patch of bright flowers, " I grow tired my Queen."
" Thats ok!" Koi laughed hopping off the panting wolf. Koi ran to the flowers and fashioned together a garland for her companion. Strolling back she giggled as she put the crown on the resting animal, "Do you want water?" She asked happily. 
"I would greatly appreciate it."
Koi touched the ground and a tiny spring burst from the dirt. Uma walked over and lapped the water, "This water has restored my energy, thank you my Queen."
"You're welcome!" She laughed.
"This garden is lovely, was the home built around it?" Uma asked looking at the large house.
"No I grew it!" Koi danced and created more flowers.
"That is very impressive," Uma stared off as the garden extended far out into rolling fields, "You are already showing signs off eliteness my Queen."
" I'm only playing around, my mommy always yells at me for not practicing more."
 "She only pushes you because of the spirit you posses my Queen....you are destined for great things."
"Koi come here now!" A angry voice commanded. Koi span around frightened by the familiar voice of her mother. " Go my Queen," Uma echoed walking towards Koi.
"I love you Uma," Koi smiled hugging her new friend. A sunflower stretched out of the dirt underneath Koi and Uma as the two embraced each other.
"I love you too Koi, If you ever need me I will already be there." Uma slowly vanished in Koi's arms, she smiled, picked the flower and ran towards her waiting mother.

Koi opened her golden glowing eyes and saw the spear diving closer to her, reaching out she snatched in inches from her chest. Looking down she saw she was wearing a large white pelt that covered her head and extended down her arms, to her hands. She could feel how light, but power she was now and realized the hand holding the spear was sparking purple.
"You did it my Queen!" Uma echoed excitedly.
"Uma?" Koi asked worried looking at her pelt, " Are you ok?"
"I'm perfectly fine my Queen, we have just merged. We have become one soul and thus are much more formidable in battle. I did not wish to rush this transition but we were left with no choice."
Koi crushed the spear in her hands, it burst into purple orbs and disappeared in the air. "Just how much more powerful am I...?" Koi whispered looking over at Bito.
Bito lifted his mask up and revealed twisted features, his teeth were sharp and his eyes were an intense red. "Now we can really play," Bito growled as he smiled.

Bito hurled spheres at Koi, but she would easily bounce them off. Jumping forward Koi pulled back her fist and dove down towards Bito. Rolling out of the way, Koi crushed a tree to splinters before spinning around and punching Bito's face.
Arripio Aggredi
Koi jumped out of the way as Bito unleashed a devastating purple beam; it destroyed everything in front of him, leaving smoking dirt.
Lux Telum, Koi's palms pelted Bito with spiraling light beams. He crossed his arms in front of him before he was assaulted.
 Demitto Animi , a purple "X" glowed through white smoke. Jumping through the smoke he tackled Koi and pushed her down. He clenched his hands together over his head as he looked down at Koi, Cudere Veneni. Slamming down his purple hands on Koi's chest a sickly glow crept on her skin.
Koi put her hands to Bito's chest flinching and roared out, "Lux Canno!" The thick beam thrust Bito off Koi and up towards a tree trunk. Hitting the back of his head Bito slumped forward. Koi writhed in pain clutching her chest, " My Queen he has corrupted you badly," Uma informed her, " You must cure it soon or you will die."
"I cant...." Koi struggled to blurt out, " It hurts Uma."
"How much will it hurt Itza and I if you die?" Uma barked at her, " How much will it hurt Bito if he wakes up and no longer has a SoulMate?"
Koi wept as she held her purple chest, Bito slowly groaned as his vision came into focus, " Koi..?" He called out with one hand as he held his chest.
Turning and looking at him he reached out shaking, the white pelt on Koi sparkled.
Foedus Paeonia, both of them flashed brightly.
Koi stood up and looked at Bito, who was still slumped over. Cautiously walking over she held her fists up, as she reached him he twitched slightly, causing her to tense.
"Bito are you ok?" She asked reaching out. Bito quickly placed his hand over her face and pushed against the tree behind him. They both flew threw the sky and Bito pushed through trees, Koi-first.
Koi's golden eyes shot open as she melted into a tree, Bito slammed against the wood and dropped down.
Jumping down from a branch Koi charged with a glowing punch that shattered the earth it hit. Purple and white flashes burst through the leaves on the tall trees, as Koi and Bito clashed repeatedly. Koi was a white blur as she dashed around Bito, in and out she would barrage Bito with fist before jumping back. She jumped back and forth and was lightly pummeling Bito as he caught or punched each fist back. Glowing Bito reached through the rain of fist and slugged Koi back, knocking her down.
 The White Warrior growled and wiped her face, "Im sorry Bito, this is for your own good," jumping back up she dashed around Bito quickly. He turned quickly following her around even at her incredible speed, his red eyes darting around just behind his powerful lover.
Koi clenched her left fist and poured energy into it, it shone intensely as she ran around the purple hyrbid.
Sancta Ferio.
Baring his teeth Bito attempted to brace himself as he watched Koi jump in front of him and uppercutted him off his feet. The boy soared through the sky as Koi kicked him towards a thick tree; he smashed into the tree and lay motionless inside the now hollow trunk.
"Bito!" Koi shouted running over to him, the white pelt bounced as she ran.
"Be careful My Queen," Uma cautioned, Koi pulled Bito out of the hollow trunk and held him to her chest. She could hear a low growl coming from him as they embraced.
"Bito please..." She cried staring at him, she could see him looking back.
"Koi," he whispered behind the mask, she pulled the gas mask off and saw tears rolling down his face.
"Im sorry Bito," she cried out clutching him.
"It's ok," he smiled, " We're here to train."

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Welcome Center / New Member:3
« on: March 05, 2016, 02:37:55 PM »
Hello! I will mostly be posting a story that began as a project for my girlfriend that kinda got out of hand so for internet purposes My name is Bito:3 Im from California and fit the stereotypes so dont be afraid to offend me, honestly I love people so as long as you arent going around and shaming others we're already friends! I like to watch anime and read manga as most of the people on here seem to do but I havent really found a series that grasps me enough to come back. Im 18 and a college student so my work is not going to be glorious haha I really just wanna see some of it in pictures. insert cheesy story about how my writing helped me when I was forced to drop out of school and had no job here to explain reason behind pictures. I honestly googled manga artists and this was the first link so Hello Manga Raiders! If anybody wants to talk about any amazing anime, manga, video games, whatever i'm always down:3 

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