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Topics - Xela Orion

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I used to have comic i wanted to make but i felt like it needed serios review and changes so im trying again.

The story is called Pledge to the Stars, its about the protagonist lavi progressing through a seemingly endless power struggle between the inhabitants of the planet Strata along with the Council of Light and Zasahmel with his legion of dark spirits known as Absolute Darkness. The genres are action/ adventure

if there is an artist who is interested pm me or comment and ill send you the details via message. The ultimate goal is to get the comic monetized on webtoon or published.

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Manga Writers wanted / looking for a writer's group to join
« on: February 20, 2017, 02:13:10 PM »
I've been wanting to get into another group for making comics so if there are any accepting, I'd love to join

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Collaboration (Art Exchange) / art trade
« on: December 22, 2016, 09:15:07 PM »
Im very interested in trading art im doing this to further improve my drawing skills while at the same time getting drawings of my characters

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Manga Artists Wanted / looking for a long-term artist (paid)
« on: September 11, 2016, 08:42:19 PM »
Im looking for an artist to help we with a webseries idea i had. Its a fantasy story about a teen name alex staruss who finds out that a series of dreams hes been having are actually days on am alternate reality. Now there is a catch for paymemt which is we will be getting paid via crowd funding and ad revenue on which platform we publish on, if you are interested Or have any questions please pm me

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I've been making a series and since it's my first time writing, the only knowledge i can pull from is from whatever manga i read, it helps some what but i need to find out a more in depth way of keeping a fantasy story exciting and interesting while making it last

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Develop Your Story / DeltronX arc 2
« on: June 07, 2016, 12:03:38 PM »


Two voices are heard over a radio

   Alex
We have the objective, heading back to base

  Merrick
Nice, keep up the good work kid

A battle ship emerges from the clouds, the horizon leaning over the front of the ship. A group of people stand there, staring forward.

  Vrok
Another clean extraction, captain

  Alex
Yep, we've got a good streak going.

  Acacias
You know. I could get use to these adventure

  Everyone
Ay!

  Alex
Alright team that's it for today. Let's get some dinner!

Everyone cheers and makes there way to the dining hall of the ship. Plates are laid out with a banquet of food in the center of the table.

  Chef
Good job on another mission cap! Eat up, you guys deserve

  Alex
(drooling a little) oh man this look so good! Well you heard ‘em guys, dig in!

Everyone sits down and stuffs their face except for acacias who tries to have manners while she eats. Food would be flying everywhere but every inch of their meal is being devoured. You see on their last mission, the guys had to stay 3 days without eating. They were so focused on finding the objective that they didnt go back for a meal. Acacias gets up and thanks the chef, then goes back to the front of the ship. Alex finishes after, also thanks the chef and follows Acacias.

  Alex
Hey Acacias. Whatcha doin' at the front of the ship?

  Acacias
Ive been thinking lately and im not sure we should keep going

  Alex
What? I thought you said you were liking the adventures.

  Acacias
I am… it's just im scared something will happen

  Alex
We'll be fine!

Alex smiles brightly. His smile reminds Acacias of the same smile he had given before he died. Acacias tears up and smiles back.

  Acacias
Im sure we will (wipes her tears)

  Alex
You ok acacias?

  Acacias
Yeah, im good

The two are interrupted by the rest of the team, a large muscular man with slicked back black hair whistles, thw man is wear a robe that exposes his chest and both arms. One of his arms is replaced with a three pieced magical prosthetic.

  Gilgamesh
Get some captain (him and everyone else chuckles

  Alex and Acacias
I-it's not like that!

Everyone keeps laughing until alex points forward.

  Alex
We're here! Everyone get yourselves together, you can laugh after our assignment.

Everyone gets off the ship and stands in front of Merrick. Merrick looks at them and smiles.

  Merrick
Great job out there, you're making the coalition proud.

  Everyone
thank you sir

  Merrick
I have your next assignment as well. I know you aren't use to these missions but today you will capture a darkness general by the name of Draculus, he's very dangerous with his ability to heal himself through drinking other people's blood, take caution when confronting him

  Everyone
Yes sir!

Most of the group goes back to the ship, alex, acacias, stay behind. They watch a ship land with the initials ND on the side. From the ship comes Rei and his team, alex and acacias run up to greet Rei.

 Alex
Sup dude! How'd the first mission go?

  Rei
It…. WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!!¡
i love my new ice powers dude!

Alex laughs as they engage in a complicated handshake. Acacias tries to keep with their hands and gets dizzy

  Alex
And who'd win, fire or ice.

  Rei
The battle of the ages…. Im in, let me train more first, the powers are still kicking in.

  Alex
Alright. Im looking forward to the challenge.

Alex and Rei smirk, acacias cuts in.

  Acacias
So what’s your team name?

  Rei
We are N-

Nice Dynamite, a man cuts in, this man is also large and muscular but just a little smaller compared to Gilgamesh. He's camo cargo-pants and a black tank top, but what's most notable are his large bushy eyebrows and his large blonde mohawk with the front spike dyed black. Alex and Acacias can't help but stare

  Acacias
So that’s the team name huh? (she laughs nervously) that's an interesting name

  Alex
So uhhh… what's your name sir?

Alex and Acacias are still distracted.

  Dynamite
You can call Me Sargent Dynamite!
(he smiles brightly) im assuming you two are the friends Rei keeps talking about? ( he let's out a generic superhero laugh) hahahahaha, it's good to see such young heroes on the quest for justice!

  Alex
(his eyes widen and sparkle with amazement)
Su-su-superhero!!!!

In an act that can only be described as fangirling, alex excitingly asks for his autograph. Dynamite happily signs. Both alex and rei geek out.

  Acacias
(sighs) boys will be boys

Alex quickly composes himself and clears his throat

  Alex
It was nice to meet you Mr. Dynamite.

 Dynamite
Nice to meet ya too

Alex looks at Rei again

  Alex
I gotta get going on my next mission dude, see ya

Alex and Rei repeat their convoluted hand shake and Acacias again fails to keep up. Acacias and Alex walk back to their ship, they give the navigators the coordinates given to them by Merrick and take off. While on their way, Alex is reading a newspaper article titled “United Conference Building Destroyed”

  Alex
(to himself) I might go for that guy.

The team ends up in the ruins of a city, it was almost as if it had been abandoned for centuries. There barely any signs of life except the darkness grunts patrolling the area. Everyone springs into action, taking on and beating all the grunts near by. Hearing all the commotion, another squad of grunts appear with a man with long black hair, golden eyes, a large black coat with a strange medallion necklace. Alex notices the man and smirks

  Alex
What's up dorkulus.

  Draculus
It's Draculus you Cretan!

  Alex
Yeah, yeah, whatever let's get to the point. We're here to take you out!

  Everyone
Ay!

  Draculus
I'm afraid it wont be that easy.

Draculus rushes at alex and tries to attack but is quickly countered and thrown.

  Alex
You guys take out the grunts I'll go for Dorkulus!

Everyone splits up and attacks

  Gilgamesh
Hey you gotta share the fun sometime! (him and alex smile)

  Alex
Ill think about it.

Alex and Draculus continue their fight, Draculus becomes more and more frustrated as the fact of his defeat is becoming more clear, plus he REALLY doesnt like immaturity.

  Draculus
Damn child! I’ll have to end this now!
(Draculus shoots an orb of darkness that grows around alex) Swirling Abyss!

The dust settles, alex's shadow appears, he smirks and dusts off his coat. His body becomes engulfed in blue flames.

  Alex
Alright, you played with fire now here comes the burn!

Alex lunges forward, his flames leaving his body and focusing onto his right hand, he then cocks his arm back.

  Alex
Giggaaaa impact!

Alex punches Draculus in the face with all his might and sends him flying a few feet. Draculus gets up, stares at alex and trembles

  Draculus
Those blue flames… it's really him.. The Blue Devil! (he speaks ro himself) never mind that. I have to kill him.

One of Draculus’s eyes turn red as starts to utter a chant. “Aíma , anaviónoun , tis zootrofés” the medallion begins to glow red and shoots a trail of light towards Acacias

  Alex
Acacias look out!

Alex shoots a fireball at Draculus's feet, causing him to miss, the beam is then sent towards Vrok and Gilgamesh who both dodge it. They both get angry.

  Gilgamesh
Try to keep the fighting over there idiot!

  Vrok
Yeah! Are you trying to kill us!


  Alex
Crap sorry! (alex turns to Draculus)
Alright, Let's finish this! Dragon's Glare!
(a large stream of flames is shot from alex hand and creates and explosion of fire, Draculus is knocked out).

  Alex
Looks like a win!

  Acacias
Could try not to go on the offensive so much?

  Alex
Why would i do that

The block in which the fight took place was reduced to rubble

  Everyone
Because you go overboard!!!

  Alex
Heh...sorry (he smiles brightly and scratches the back of his head). Welp i think it's time to go.

Alex pulls a large, golden beacon. A light emerges from it and shoots up into the sky

  Alex
I call upon thee who sets the skies asunder. Armada the sky castle

A portal opens as the team's battle ship creeps out from it and teleports the team onto it.

Draculus regains consciousness and is greeted by Zasahmel. Draculus tries to stand as fear strikes his body

  Draculus
M-my lord! I apologize my failure and im ready to receive my punishment. (he bows his head)

  Zasahmel
No need for such a rash decision.. (he shoves his arm threw Draculus's chest.) you know i have no room for the weak and punishing you would only make you weaker!

Draculus tries to speak but fails as Zasahmel takes his arm out out of his chest and falls over dead

Alex's ship is now flying through the sky, making it's way back to his home.

  Vrok
Another successful mission captain

  Alex
(looking a little down)
Yeah

Alex walks up to his room and lays on his bed with his arms behind his head. As the captain, Alex has the biggest room, with a king sized bed with two pillows and a black sheet and blanket. To the left is a window and a wardrobe next to it, inside the wardrobe are multiple t-shirts and jeans. To the left of the room is a chest full of little treasures that alex collects during his adventures. Even with his fascinating room alex is alone and left to ponder.

  Alex
(in his head) dammit...im not going to be like the rest (alex squeezes his hand) my fire will not destroy, but protect and create. I will protect all in danger, no matter the person and i will create a light for those trapped in the dark. Guidance is the true purpose of fire.

The ship is sailing through the air calmly. While on their way back home, they receive a messaging stone.

  Alex
Play the message

  Crewman
Roger that (she rubs the stone which displays a hologram of Merrick)

  Merrick
Im sorry but your mission isnt over, we have intel that a darkness slave facility was found near the Sonoran Desert. Invade it and save them. We're counting on you.

The message ends, the group all look at each other

  Alex
Well i guess im not sleeping in..

  Acacias
Is that really your main concern!

  Gilgamesh
Calm down, no matter what we still gotta go through with it. Besides, it'd be wrong not to.

  Alex
Yeah, you're right. Alright guys! Set course to the Sonoran Desert!

  Navigators
Ay captain!

The ship turns and speeds off. They reach the desert and everyone except alex is complaining about the heat.

  Acacias
Are you insane?!?! How are you still wearing that hoodie in this heat?!

  Alex
It's not even that bad. Besides my body is use to heat, you see not only does elementalism advance your range of abilities. It also nullifies anything of the same or opposite element. Like because fire is constantly generated in me, my body is use to the heat thus, it doesn't affect me. It'll also warm me up in the cold, the same applies to Rei and his ice elementalism.

  Acacias
Ooohh i see. Lucky!

  Alex
I know right

The ship violently stops and alex jumps back as a large spike of sand pierces the floor.

  Alex
What the hell?!?

The ship plummets to the floor, everyone gets off and looks around.

  Vrok
(staring at the ship) what the hell did this…

  Alex
I think i know who

Alex points foward as a man in cloak rises from the sand and walks towards the team. His body is covered in a long, thin cloak and has a mask covering his mouth. The only bits of his body that are visible are some of his hair and his intimidating dark blue eyes

  Cloaked man
My business isn't with the rest of you

He moves his hand as clumps of sand rise from the ground and trap their feet

  Alex
Leave them alone!

Alex charges at the man but is blocked, alex notices the man's next attack and dodges it then hops back.

  Alex
(in his head) this won't be easy

The man kneels and puts one hand on the ground

  Cloaked man
Pillar of Ra!

Spikes of sound shoot up and surround alex. He continuously dodges them until one gets to close to doge, instead he holds onto it and is shot up into the air. Another volley of spikes race towards alex, his body ignites and he jumps on the spikes, using them to maneuver around the others. Alex pushes off and charges towards the man again

  Alex
Giggaaaa impact!

The man tries to dodge but doesnt move quick enough, he is slightly hurt and his cloak has burned off revealing his black leather jacket, baggy white pants and black shoes.

  Alex
Who are you

  Noah
I am Noah Orson. And this will be the last name you hear!

 Naoh covers his hand in sand and shoots it forward, forming a blunt column

  Noah
Desert Scarab

Alex is hit in the stomach by the attack and is sent flying. He lands and shoots a barrage of fireballs at noah. Noah is overwhelmed and tries to block and still gets hit. The two rush out from the cloud of sand and attack, both dealing and dodging hits. Both are hurt but alex is still standing while noah has trouble standing and is breathing heavily. Noah tears up and tries to move forward but falls

  Noah
Damnit! I can't lose now! (he starts crawling forward as tears run down his cheeks) they need me to protect them…

 Alex sees the pain im his eyes and stares.

  Alex
What have they done to you…

A flashback is triggered

Noah is setting up a rifle and putting a silencer on it. He aims it at a man on the street. He shoots and hits the man in the head, quickly picking up his rifle and leaving. Noah takes his phone out and calls someone

  Noah
Target out, it was a clean kill

  Man on the phone
Good. I see i spent my money right

Noah is then seen holding a baby next to his wife in a hospital bed

  Noah's wife
What should we name her?

  Noah
Scarlet. (he smiles and tears up a little)

  Noah's wife
What a softy… i love the name. Scarlet Orson

Noah is now putting his guns away in a storage facility along with another man

  Man
Are you sure you wanna give this up?

  Noah
I've got a family to take care of and i know what could happened if i get too involved in this hitman business

  Man
You know, you're really kind for an assassin

The invasion is taking place now. Darkness grunts are surrounding the family as Noah tries to fight them off.

  Noah
Get away from here dammit!

As Noah is fighting, Zasahmel appears in front of him

  Zasahmel
I've heard of your past and i must say, you'll be a reliable soldier

  Noah
What the hell do you want with me?!

  Zasahmel
It's simple, you work for me as an assassin, in return we spare your family.

Noah
I have sinned beyond the point of forgiveness…

Noah is then seen walking away from a destroyed building, a torn banner falls to the floor. “United Conference” is written on the banner

  Noah
I've done so much wrong but only to keep my family safe..but shouldn't be telling you this, it's not like you'd give a rat's ass. Just kill me already..but please save my family..

Alex reaches his arm out. Noah looks up at it, grabs it and is pulled up

  Alex
I have an offer. Join my team and we'll make sure nothing like this will ever happen again

Noah is suddenly filled emotion again as the cloud of merciless killing that once hid his morals has been lifted. Noah wipes his tears and smiles.

  Noah
Will you help me save my family

  Alex
Your family and every other person in that facility. This will be your redemption for the sins you've committed. Will you join me?

Noah nods. He frees the others from his sand trap and they run towards alex

  Gilgamesh
You can't be serious! Why the hell are you letting him join?!?!

  Alex
I know there's good in him. Just trust me ok?

  Gilgamesh
(sighs) captain's orders i guess

  Alex
Then it's settled. Welcome to the team!

Some time passes as a worker with dirty overalls and a hard hat come up to alex

  Worker
She's up and running!

  Alex
Great! Vrok, take the team and report to Merrick, me and noah have a mission to finish.

Noah walks into the facility with alex in cuffs. He talks to the warden

  Noah
This is him, just like i promised

  Warden
You look pretty messed up but you really do live up to the title, you can visit them now

  Noah
Thank you

Noah walks off as alex is shoved into a cell

Its night time, the quietness of the complex is broken by screeching alarms. Two guards rush to Alex's cell only to see the door busted open and his cuffs melted. Noah slowly creeps behind them and takes his scythe out. Before the guards notice, noah puts the blade across their bodies and yanks it back. Noah's wife is holding her daughter as her cell door is ripped open. Alex is standing in the doorway.

  Alex
(puts his hand out) everything will be ok now

Noah's wife cries and takes his hand, they all start running. A group of guards gets in their way. Alex lets go and lunges forward

  Alex
I summon thee, sword of the starry heavens (alex slashes them all in one swing) Zodiac Chaser!

  Scarlet
Mommy look, a superhero!

  Noah's wife
That's right sweetie and he's here to save us.

They continue running and reach exit. The warden comes from behind and puts his claw to the back of Scarlet’s head.

  Warden
One more step and I'll kill the little brat!

Alex’s body ignites but before he can attack a hand punches through the Warden's stomach

  Warden
Y-you traitor!

  Noah
Shut the hell up, i was never a part of you crappy ass demons

Noah takes his hand out of the Warden's chest and lets him drop dead, his body soon evaporates.

  Alex
Hey do you know why they do that when they die?

  Noah
Not the slightest idea. Anyways i cant thank you enough for saving us. Ill do anything to repay you.

  Alex
I mean you already joined so that's payment enough. Besides we arent done here.

They all are teleported to armada. Alex kneels and looks at Scarlet.

  Alex
Hey, wanna see some fireworks?

  Scarlet
Heck yeah!

Alex gets up and pulls out a remote detonator, press the button and watches the facility blow up

  Noah grabs alex by the collar furiously.

  Noah
What were you thinking there were still people in there!

  Alex
No there aren't. My team teleported them all here while we distracted the guards.

Noah let's go

  Noah
My bad…

  Alex
It's ok, i have a habit of doing this kind of thing without saying anything. Alright team, time to head home!

The sun is barely rising, alex is outside watching the sunrise, acacias soo walks out in a morning robe and joins him

  Acacias
It's beautiful isnt it?

  Alex
Sure is...you know these kinds of luxuries seem small at first but even something as simple as a peaceful sunrise is worth every minute of fighting we go through. And they're even more worth it when you get to enjoy them with people you care about.

Acacias smiles lightly

  Acacias
I don't know how, but you always know just what to say.

  Alex
I do huh?

Alex smile's and sees the base in the distance

  Alex
Hey wake everyone up please, we're almost there.

Acacias walks inside and alex continues to stare into the distance. They make it to the base and report to Merrick

  Alex
We saved all the slaves and destroyed the facility, also i have decided to enlist Noah Orson as a part of my team.

  Merrick
Ahh a new recruit huh? Bring him out.

Noah walks forward. He's now wearing a sleeveless black hoodie instead of his leather jacket, this reveals Noah's white fingerless gloves that go up to his fore arm and his red E7 tattoo

  Noah
So you're the one that sent them.. (he shakes Merricks hand) thank you, if you didnt send them I'd still be stuck in that god awful hell hole
 
  Merrick
It's good know everything worked out well. Now let's get the refugees a home.

Alex leads all everyone out of the ship. Merrick then goes up to alex.

  Merrick
Ready for the next assignment?

  Alex
Sure am!

  Merrick
We're going back to ishtar

Alex's eyes brighten up

  Alex
I finally get to actually be there.. And experience everything without fearing if it's real or not..

Merrick smiles and nods. Acacias and Rei look in amazement

  Acacias
Wait that's the place from your dream right? Are you telling me it's a real place???? (she turns and stares at Rei) when the heck did you get here?

  Rei
ND is taking a small break so im tagging along

  Merrick
Alright, since we got all our guests. Let's get moving.

Everyone gets on armada as Merrick sets the coordinates. The shio is then teleported over ishtar.

  Alex
Woah! I knew we could teleport but i didn't think it can cross dimensions!

  Merrick
Well it can't but every teleport crystal made in ishtar has the ability teleport back, no matter where you are.

Armada lands and everyone gets off,Acacias and Rei look around in amazement

  Rei
Dude this is just like fairy fields!!

  Alex
It's funny you say that, ishtarians are all fairies, elves and crossbreed druids. See?

Alex pulls down his hoodie to reveal his long pointy ears. Acacias and Rei stare

  Rei
You're a fairy?!?!?!

  Alex
Nope, I'm an elf

  Acacias
What's the difference between a fairy and an elf

  Alex
Simple, fairies have tails, like them

Alex waves to three passing fairies as they wave back, one is a boy with spiky pink hair, the other is a girl with long blonde hair and the third one is another boy with short light blue hair.

  Merrick
Let's not get distracted

  Alex
Right

Everyone walks to the castle and are greeted by Vestia and Cerberus.

  Vestia
My boy has returned again!! Oh how i missed you so!

She lunges at him and tackles him with a hug

  Alex
Hey mom (alex tries to smile but can hardly breathe from how tight the hug is)

  Vestia
Im so sorry my dear, i always get so emotional when you leave.

  Cerberus
Dont smother the boy you're gonna kill him!

Everyone stares awkwardly

  Merrick
So…. Where's you know who?

  Cerberus
He's in the shrine at the temple of Vuryei. Alex, you must go alone. Think of this a training exercise. You can't always be dependent of your team.

  Alex
Right!

Alex grabs the map and sets off. He eventually reaches the temple and gets inside. It's pitch black inside so alex lights his finger and uses it as a torch. He sees a light down the hall, he makes his way through and finds out the light is the shrine. There's a mysterious entity of light

  Voice
Who entered my shrine

  Alex
I am alex strauss, son of Vestia and Cerberus, the kings and queen of ishtar

  DeltronX
I am deltron. But i know you speak lies you darkness fool!

  Alex
What?!

Deltron shoots a beam of light at alex. A bubble of dark energy surrounds alex. His body is then engulfed in it as his eyes turn pure white.

  DeltronX
So you are darkness, what is your name

  Nyguice
I am Nyguice. The kid has nothing to do with me, I'm Here to protect him from *censored* heads like you

  DeltronX
So you prayed on a boy to get power?

  Nyguice
It's not like that! You wanna *censored* talk ill give you a reason not to!

The two run at each other. Tentacles rises from Nyguice’s back and begin to lash out at Deltron

  Nyguice
Demon Spit fire!

Deltron dodges them all with no effort

  DeltronX
You'll have to do better than that! (deltron puts his hands out charging up energy then releasing a large beam of light)
Eternal light!

Nyguice gets hit, his entire right arm is blown off but regenerates immediately

  Nyguice
(talking to himself) damn that hurt! i cant let that hit me again.

The fighting continues for several hours. Nyguice gets cornered against the wall and deltron stands in front of him charging another attack

  Deltron
Any last words?

  Nyguice
I failed you kid... Im sorry

Alex bursts out of Nyguice and covers him

  Alex
No don’t hurt him! It was you wasnt it… every hit i took from my fight with noah, i felt the pain instantly go away… you were doing that, you were the reason i was able to keep fighting.

Nyguice stays quiet and Deltron lowers his hand

  DeltronX
Hmmm i guess you arent all the same are you darkness?

  Nyguice
No, there are some of us who have feelings ya know… we're not all monsters

  Deltron
You are worthy of my light young man

Alex looks at deltron , his light is absorbed by alex as him and Nyguice
Fade away

  Alex
Where are you guys going

  Nyguice
We're going back into your soul, where we now live.

  Alex
Is that where you been this whole time?

  Nyguice
Yes, i could've talked but the timing wasn't right.

Nyguice fades away. Alex makes his way out of the temple and back to the castle. Everyone rushes to him

  Merrick
Are you alright?! You took a lot longer than expected!

  Alex
Yeah im fine. I met two people as well

  Merrick, Vestia, and Cerberus
Two?...

  Acacias
Well all that matters is you're ok now (she hugs alex)

Alex hugs back and smile

  Alex
(in his head) i have the power of light and dark now. Ill show them all. The darkness isn't evil. We can all be heroes if we have the heart for it!

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Manga Writers wanted / looking for a co-writer (unpaid)
« on: May 23, 2016, 05:22:29 PM »
Im writing a fantasy/adventure/ action manga called DeltronX (its posted in the develop your story section if you wanna read what i have so far) i feel like i can improve what story is given so far before i proceed to the next portion of the story. So im looking for a co-writer to help out

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Manga Art Gallery / random drawings
« on: May 21, 2016, 12:22:56 AM »






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Develop Your Story / Deltron X Prologue
« on: May 18, 2016, 06:36:07 PM »
I probably should have done this from the beginning but oh well, here is the entire first arc of my story

Alex wakes up in the middle of a field unfamiliar to him.

           Alex Strauss
What the heck is this place? I know i just fell asleep but this dream feels different...

He walks forward and looks over a cliff. He sees a large village with a castle in the center. The castle is the only structure made of stone. The houses are made of wood that looks oddly metallic. There are large boat like battleships floating around the kingdom .

           Alex Strauss
 Woah, whatever this place is it sure looks weird

Alex makes his way down the cliff to be greated by a woman with silky long hair and radiant green eyes
       
         Vestia
Oh my son has returned!

 Vestia hugs alex tightly, alex hugs back awkwardly and confused

       Alex Strauss
Its uh, its good to see you (he plays along knowing it's a dream)

      Vestia
How me and your father awaited your return! Come now, lets go home

Vestia grabs alex by the hand and takes him through the village towards the castle. As they make their way through town they are greeted with parade like cheers, as if the entire village was waiting for them. They finally make into the castle, alex is greeted by a large, menacing man in dark blue armour lined with white fur. As the man towers over alex, he puts his hand forward. Alex grabs his hand for a handshake. The man shakes his hand violently making alex flail like a noodle, he is then pulled in for a hug, which smashes alex's face into his chest plate

        Cerberus
You've grown so much my boy. It's good to see you won't disappoint !
   
    Vestia
Dear!
   
    Cerberus
What? He'd make a great soldier! The best of the best!

     Vestia
But he has so much potential as a scholar. Especially with his passion for astronomy. He is a bright man and we know that will reflect his future. Isn't that right my little space man !

Vestia smiles brightly as Alex's face turns red from embarrassment

      ALEX STRAUSS
Hey! I'm not a little kid!

      Vestia
 I'm so sorry, you've just grown up so quickly! I wanted my hot tempered little boy back. Well it is getting late so we should be going to sleep

      Alex Strauss
How is it already getting late?  I've only been in here for like 3 minutes there's no way its night time

Alex walks to the front door and peeks outside only to see it is dark outside. He closes the door and turns around

      Alex Strauss
 (in a voice of defeat) so umm... Where's my room again?

      Vestia
 Its on the second floor,  first door to the left
      Alex Strauss
 Thank you

 Alex starts walking up stairs

      Vestia, Cerberus
Good night

      Alex Strauss
 (his voice echoes) goodnight

Alex gets in bed, he stares out the window and sees two moons

      Alex Strauss
(in his head) what the heck is this place? Its so wie-

He loses control of his body and wakes up in his apartment. The alarm clock is screeching, Alex looks at the time and sees it's 7:40

      Alex Strauss
HOLY CRAP IM GONNA BE LATE FOR SCHOOL!

He jumps out of bed and dives into his closet, he comes out in a black hoodie, black jeans, and white sneakers. He runs through the apartment, catapults his backpack over his shoulder and bolts to his motorcycle. He quickly starts up the bike, puts on his helmet and hurries off .

Alex rushes into class just as the late bell rings.
 
    Alex Struass
 (breathing heavily) made it!

 The class room stares at alex as he's sluggishly makes his way to his desk. A girl with bright blue eyes and stunning blonde hair tied into a pony tail and a boy with bright messy red hair and grey eyes greet alex.

    Acacias
Hey alex!

    Rei
Sup dude? you look dead!

   Alex Strauss
Hey guys (he catches his breath) i woke up super late and had to run from the entrance

    Rei
HOW THE HELL DID YOU DO THAT!? THERE'S ATLEAST 3 SETS OF STAIRS AND 2 HALLWAYS YOU HAVE TO TAKE TO GET HERE!

    Alex Strauss
I ran through ALL of it (he collapses on his desk and naps)

    Rei
Dude wake up (he shakes alex), (in a dramatic joking voice) Dont go into the light!

    Acacias
(smacks rei on the back of the head lightly) just let him sleep! He's obviously had a rough morning.

Alex's eyes open, he's submerged in pitch black water, he hears rei and acacias arguing then a voice he's never heard before.

     Mysterious voice
 We've been waiting young bishop.

Alex panics and tries to swim away from the growing darkness but drowns in it. Alex wakes up in his bed in the castle. Vestia walks with a satchel and goggles.

     Vestia
You sure like to sleep dont you? Well we found your bag in the field and i thought id give it back to you. You can go back to sleep now.

she puts his satchel off to the side of the room, closes the door then walks away.

     Alex Strauss
(in his head) something isnt right, why am i back here again, arent dreams always different? Also how do these people know me so well... and why do i have memories of this place..

Alex gets out of his bed and grabs his satchel and goggles, he puts both on and walks out of the room and makes his way out of the castle.

     Alex
The forest... There's something there for me...
     
    Vestia
Alex where are you going? you just got back!

     Alex Strauss
Sorry, i have to get something.

     Vestia
(in her head) has he found out already?

Alex is running through the city, he grabs a map from the satchel and sees areas highlighted, he puts his Finger on one of the areas.

     Alex Strauss
Its here, i know it!

Alex puts the map back in his satchel and continues running. He ends up on a river bank, he then makes a raft and paddle and sails off. It's night now, the moonlight is covered by all the trees surrounding the river, alex barely reached land, in front of him lies what seems like the ruins of an old stone structure, nature won over the material as most of what was left was covered in vegetation and weeds. Alex finds a slab with an odd symbol on it, he has his doubts about inspecting it but chooses to anyway.

    Alex Strauss
This stone... It almost feels like metal.

A small blue wisp leaves the slab, alex is regretful of his decision and steps back as the wisp encircles his hand, it then slashes his hand and goes inside the cut

    Alex Strauss
GAAHH! crap!

Alex cries out in pain and holds his hand, the pain instantly leaves, as alex lifts his hands, he sees not only that the cut is gone but that the same symbol thats on the slab is now on his hand. alex picks up on the sound of footsteps and immediately turns to it, a shadowy figure slowly approaches alex.

    Shadow man
Hey, calm down im not gonna hurt ya'.

    Alex Strauss
(keeping his guard up) who are you?

    Shadow Man
Thats not important, whats important is that im gonna help you and in a way you're gonna help me

    Alex Strauss
(still hesitant) and how does that help?

   Shadow Man
Don't you think i would've attacked already if i was out for you?

   Alex Strauss
I guess i could trust you...

The man puts his hand on alex's forehead alex is confused as his body suddenly spasms. He is helpless, his eyes roll back and his mouth begins to foam. The man then takes his hand of alex's head, letting him lay lifeless. The man then puts two fingers on his own head.

    Shadow Man
Its done but he's out cold. We're at the fuuygah ruins. Sorry but things got messy during the transfer..

    Cerberus
(in the man's head) it's fine as long as he's alright... Ill send some people now.

     Shadow Man
Roger that.

The man slowly begins to fade away.
 
     Shadow Man
Sorry kiddo, i really mean it...

The man fades away completely. Alex is immediately waken up in his class room. He sits up quickly, as if he was startled by something.

     Alex Strauss
Guys?? How long has it been?

     Acacias
It's only been a couple of minutes. Did you have a nightmare? You look really stressed.

    Alex Strauss
I guess you can say that...

    Acacias
Aww (she pats his shoulder) well everything's ok now.

    Rei
Dude?!?! Was there a monster??, i bet if i was there we could of taken that thing on no sweat! It'd be just monster mash!

Alex remembers thats the game he plays online with rei and smirks lightly.

    Alex Strauss
Haha yeah.. I bet we could have.

Alex goes through the day without speaking of the odd dreams and makes his way back home. He is still convinced that the dreams are normal.

Alex finds himself back at in the castle, except this time something's different, more then what was expect, he can feel the atmosphere, the wind that poured in from the window, the ray of sunlight illuminating his room and even weirder, he felt his phone in his pocket. Alex had never been able to bring his belongings with him into his dreams. He reaches for it and sees that he has a message from Rei

   Rei's message
Hey bro you still up? There's a raid boss even on monster mash you should get on, we could really use you!

  Alex
What the hell.....?

Alex ignores the message thinking its fake. He is then greeted by a familiar man, someone he remembers but doesn't exactly know

   Merrick
We need to talk

   Alex
(quickly becoming confused) Who are you?

   Merrick
(with a saddened face) thats right.... My name is Merrick Gideon

   Alex
Well Mr Gideon, what do you want with me

   Merrick
Cerberus and Vestia ordered me to go through your satchel and i found your studies, im here to teach you the full extent of your abilities

   Alex
Who the heck are they?

   Merrick
(he is slightly annoyed)...they're the one's who found you in the first place

   Alex
Oooohhh

   Merrick
Anyways...lets get back to the subject, im here to train you as much as possible

    Alex
Sounds good to me i guess

Alex and Merrick leave the room and go into a training room like area, there are wooden weapons sitting in the corner and some test dummies almost strategically placed around the room. Merrick tosses him a necklace with a dark blue crystal attached to it.

   Merrick
Put it on, it'll bring out your soul

Alex puts on the on the necklace, the ground begins to shake. An immense power is felt throughout the room, merrick is astonished by the amount of power given off by alex. Alex is then encased in a pillar of blue fire. The fire and the energy slowly calm down until the pillar is completely gone. Alex stares at his fist, clenching it as blue fire emerges from his hand

   Alex
I feel...powerful

   Merrick
(in complete amazement) I knew you had talent, but that was not what i expect. (he collects himself) alright, what you just saw is magic, specifically, elementalism

   Alex
Elementalism?

   Merrick
You see magic is a manifestation of the soul, a person's soul determines which magic he or she will specialize in, elementalism is magic so powerful, it can use an element to its purest form and will take its form in coherence with the user's soul. Though there many forms of magic, elementalism only covers the basic elements, you know? Fire, Ice, Water and Earth

   Alex
Wait but ice isnt a core element, isn't it technically water?

   Merrick
Yes, ice is water but conjuring ice and water take two different types of training, so they're categorized as two different types

   Alex
Ooh i see

   Merrick
Alright kid let's start training. (Merrick pulls out a leaf from his pocket) You're first task is to burn this leaf, but only this leaf (he seats it on the ground)

   Alex
That's easy

Alex puts his hand out but nothing happens

   Alex
So how does this work?

  Merrick
Just imagine the flow of energy moving from your heart to your hands, when the energy reaches your hands, put strain it

Alex closes his eyes and imagines the flow, he follows merrick instructions and feels heat in his hands, he then shoots a fireball out of his hands and reduces the leaf to ash

   Alex
I did it! (he smiles in accomplishment)

   Merrick
Thats good, you got the basics, now we just work on control, remember i said burn only the leaf, not the floor too.

Before merrick could start the next lesson, a man walks in and asks to speak to him

   Merrick
Alright, thats it for now, be ready for tomorrow

Merrick then leaves the room, alex feels his phone go off again and sees another of Rei's messages

   Rei's message
Hey again, not sure if you're up or not but if u are im not gonna be online anymore, im getting really tired so goodnight bro

Alex looks up from his phone and sees stone tabs on the floor, they have a weird writing on them, curious of the writing he takes a picture of it with his phone, he is then quickly sucked back into his apartment with his phone in his hand. With hesitation he unlocks his phone only to be freaked out by what he sees, the stone tablets picture, saved to his phone. Knowing about Rei's skill of topography he sends Rei the pictures and waits for a response.

Alex finally gets a response from rei.

 Rei’s message
Dude why didn't you tell me you got on last night? I really could've used your help clearing a dungeon i'm stuck on!

 Alex texts back.

 Alex
Dude i wasn't on last night… i didn't know where i was at all.. Never mind that i need to know if you'd be able to read that or translate it, they kinda look like the runes from monster mash so i thought you'd have a shot at it.

As Alex waits for Rei to respond he gets ready for school and contemplates on his little adventures he's had in the dreams.

    Alex
Man wouldn't this be a crazy story to tell everyone?

He leaves to school and talks to acacias and rei about the dreams.

   Acacias
Wow, That's a weird dream!

  Alex
Yeah, what's weirder about it is I've been in the same place in my dreams at least 3 times now and i wouldn't doubt the possibility of ending up there again

   Rei
Dude...we could make the best movie ever! No no wait! The best mmo!

  Alex
(him and acacias laugh a little) Only you would be thinking about mmo’s right now
 
  Rei
Also i deciphered the text on the picture you gave me (acacias peeks at rei in curiosity), well in the language in Monster Mash, it just says either crystals, where were you when you got the pic anyway?

   Alex
That's still pretty interesting and well i found the picture online (alex hoped his lie would work)

   Rei
Ahhh i see what you dude, online to much last night i see? (rei assumes alex had ended up on an unknown website when he said he didn't know where he was)

 Alex
Haha yeah i guess so.

The class ends and the three say good bye, alex gets by the rest of the school day and when he gets home, he's completely drained and decides to take a nap. He's wakes up in the castle again. He gets dressed and walks out his room and down the stairs only to be greeted by merrick again

 Merrick
Hey kiddo. Ready for the next lesson?
 
 Alex
Yeah actually, i've been looking forward to it! (he finally lets his sense of adventure take over)

 Merrick
Alright then follow me

Merrick walks out the door and alex follows. They end up in an empty field, merrick stares at alex's hand before speaking

  Merrick
Thats an interesting design on your right hand, how'd you get it?

  Alex
I uhh just kinda got it haha (he laughs nervously)

  Merrick
Nice try kid, i'm not stupid. But it seems like you don't even know what it is so ill teach you. Put your right hand out

Alex follows Merrick's orders

  Merrick
Now repeat after me, i summon thee, sword of the starry heavens!

  Alex
I summon thee, sword of the starry heavens!

The symbol on alex's hand begins to glow a dark blue, then a great sword materializes into alex's hand.

  Alex
Thats awesome! (alex plays with the sword) why's it so light?

  Merrick
You made a blood pact with it, there for the spirit of this blade is one with yours, it'll be easy for you to handle but near impossible for others. Also it has a name, Zodiac Chaser

  Alex
Zodiac Chaser… how did it get that name?

  Merrick
There's a legend of a group of Warriors known as the constellation, they were the guardians of an ancient council known as the council of light, fearing their power would drive them mad, the councilmen crafted this sword to latch on to one who is pure of heart, this person would be given the task of defeating the constellation once the time has come

  Alex
(scared) what the heck?!?!? How the hell am i supposed to beat them?!?!

  Merrick
Calm down it's just a legend.

  Alex
(slowly calming down) Oh man, you had me worried there for a second.

  Merrick
Back to the training, for today's lesson i'll show y-...  we've got company.

In the blink of an eye merrick turn around and sees two shadowy figures, instead of there colors coming to light, an intense orange emerges from their eyes and claws. The glare of the bright orange eyes frightens alex.

  Alex
What the hell are they?!?!

  Merrick
Darkness....they're just grunts anyway. Well i was gonna teach you to use the sword on some dummy's but this is the next best thing, get em!

Alex regretfully charges in and starts swinging the sword with both hands, as well as dodging all the enemy's hits

  Merrick
You look to stiff, try to loosen up!

Alex thinks about it and tries using one hand to swing and the other to block. It works great, alex advances on the grunts

  Alex
Woah! I feel awesome

Getting to cocky, alex messes up while dodging and gets cut by one of the grunts
 
  Merrick
Kid, switch out!

Alex jumps back and lets merrick into the fight. Merrick rushes the two grunts with a volley of electrified strikes

  Merrick
Tempest Strike!

  Alex
(in his head) a special move?.. Is this guy a video game character or something?

The grunts fall onto the floor and shatter into what appears to be glass that soon evaporate

  Alex
Are they dead..?

  Merrick
No, you can't die outside your own dimension.

Before alex gets the chance to ask a large monster looms over them and speaks

  Monster
Very good young bishop, but can you fight without your guard dog?

  Alex
What the hell do you me-

Alex drops to floor and wakes up back at his apartment. It's night now, He's confused and scared. Alex then runs out to the balcony and looks over the city. He's relieved to see everything's peaceful, his face turns from relieved to worried

  Alex
I don't what's gonna happen...but i know it won't be good.


Alex is unable to sleep the rest of the night, he sluggishly gets out of bed, gets dressed and leaves the apartment to get to school, everything's fine. Alex makes his way to class, acacias and rei see him, he's a mess. He's slumping his shoulders and has bags under his eyes.
 
  Acacias
Alex are you ok..? Are the dreams getting to you?

  Rei
Yeah are you alright dude? You look more dead then the first time.

  Alex
I'm fine guys, just couldn't sleep.

Alex couldn't believe his eyes, two grunts broke down the door to his classroom. Alex, Rei and Acacias get up in fear.

  Acacias and Rei
What the hell are those things?!?!

  Alex
Darkness grunts, (alex faces the grunts) what the hell are you doing here?

  Grunt one
(it gasps) young bishop?! What are you doing here with these insects?!?!

The name clicked in alex head as he remembered it wasnt the first time he was called that.

  Alex
Young bishop…. Ahh i get.

Alex looks down and sees zodiac chaser’s mark on his hand. He then smirks and puts his hand forward.

 Alex
I summon thee, sword of the starry heavens! (as the sword appears he slashes through the two grunts) Zodiac Chaser!

Acacias and Rei watch in astonishment.

 Rei
Dude.. You have to show me how the do that some time!

  Alex
I will but for now i gotta find out what's going on, because i shouldn't be able to do this…

Alex, Acacias, and Rei storm out of the building and what they see petrifies them, the sky's a deep scarlet, portals are emerging from everywhere, the city is overrun with grunts. The invasion has begun. More grunts storm in after alex, he charges at them as well and swings with all his might, cutting through almost all of the grunts except one which managed to dodge in time, it tries to hit alex from behind, before alex has the time to move his arms, Rei jumps in and hits the grunt in the head with a pipe. Rei’s attitude completely changes almost as if his usual laid back nature was a fa?ade, he speaks demanding and without slang.

  Rei
I have no idea what's happening but i'm gonna at least try to help

  Alex
Good to see you're focused

  Acacias
(cuts in) there's more coming in

A full platoon of grunts walk in but stop several feet in front of alex, they then split up into two groups with an opening in the middle. Standing there is a tall man in robes

  Zasahmel
Allow me to introduce myself, i am the great darkness general zasahmel. You may ask yourself why such an upper class of beings are here with you sub-par garbage, well it's simple, we want the boy with the brown hair. Our bishop

  Alex
No way in hell are you getting me! I don't care how much i have to give up but i'm not giving in to you bastards! This is my world, these are my people, and you'll hurt none of them!

Alex charges in to attack but zasahmel floats up

  Zasahmel
What a shame, this would have gone a lot easier. Get him!

All the grunts attack alex at once, he has trouble maneuvering around the massive group but he manages to fight. One of the grunts sneaks up on alex and claws his stomach, he coughs up blood but the pain give him more incentive to fight, alex bursts through the horde in a frenzy of flame. Zasahmel gets down and stares at alex

  Zasahmel
If you're so eager to die ill make it quick!

He leaps at alex but alex is quicker and block with his sword. Fire emerges from his right hand and punches zasahmel in the stomach, blowing him back a couple of feet. Zasahmel gets and stares down alex angrily

  Zasahmel
How does a worm like you know any type of magic?! And furthermore how can you damage m-

 Alex
Shut up! (alex charges in and punches him again) i don't know what i'm doing nor do i give a damn about how low i am to you, it doesn't matter if you're stronger then me, all i know is you're not winning today

 Zasahmel
Damn Cretan!

Zasahmel summons his own sword and goes to attack alex. The two lock sword for a while, each landing hits from time to time. Alex is slouched, fatigued and bleeding. Zasahmel is a little cut up but stands properly.

  Zasahmel
All that heroic blabbering for this? Though ill give credit where it's due, you were an interesting adversary at best.

Zasahmel stabs alex in the stomach, Rei and acacias watch in shock. Alex grabs the blade in his stomach and slowly pushes it out, he then looks zasahmel in the eyes.

  Alex
I'm not going down that easily!

Alex swings his sword with what little strength he has left and cuts off zasahmel’s arm. They both move back, alex takes the sword out of his stomach painfully. Before the fighting continued, a bolt of lightning landed between the two. It's merrick, he emerges from the lightning bolt and charges zasahmel.

  Merrick
Tempest Strike!

Zasahmel is pushed back, he then starts to flee.

  Zasahmel
Damn you ishtarian! This isn't over!

Zasahmel teleports. A siren goes off alerting all soldiers to retreat. They had won. Acacias and rei run to the wounded alex, he looks at them both.

  Alex
Heh...i'm not gonna make it..

  Acacias
Don't say that you'll be fine!

Rei is too choked up trying to hold back his tears to speak. Alex smiles brightly and hugs them both.

  Alex
Sorry we can't go on anymore adventures rei...sorry we can't get to go to the park anymore acacias…but atleast you guys are safe…

Alex falls over with a smile on his face as his eyes close. Rei finally breaks and cries, he falls to his knees and punches the ground hard.

  Rei
I was useless! All i did was freeze up and let him do the fighting! I probably couldn't have done anything but i could've tried damnit!

Acacias holds Rei as they cry together. Merrick looks at alex's lifeless body. He kneels and puts a clear crystal over alex's chest. He too is in tears.

Acacias and Rei watch the crystal fill with a dark blue tint, once filled, Merrick picks up the crystal and opens a portal and walks away. Acacias looks at Rei and wipes her tears.

  Acacias
He saved us...he actually did it.

  Rei
I wouldn't expect anything less…

He breaks back into tears. Another portal opens, merrick steps out with a cross-shaped box almost as large as him. He put the box down and opens it. What's inside shocks rei and acacias. There's a body of a familiar man in the box. merrick places the crystal onto the body's chest and watches it become absorbed. Acacias and Rei look at the man dumbfounded.

Acacias and Rei
A…..Alex?!

As if those words triggered existence into him, the man's eyes open widely

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Develop Your Story / DeltronX script 3
« on: May 13, 2016, 12:05:05 PM »
Here's the third part of the first arc, please read the first two before reading this one so you understand the story better. Hope you enjoy the story so far!

Alex finds himself back at in the castle, except this time something's different, more then what was expect, he can feel the atmosphere, the wind that poured in from the window, the ray of sunlight illuminating his room and even weirder, he felt his phone in his pocket. Alex had never been able to bring his belongings with him into his dreams. He reaches for it and sees that he has a message from Rei.

   Rei's message
Hey bro you still up? There's a raid boss even on monster mash you should get on, we could really use you!

  Alex
What the hell.....?

Alex ignores the message thinking its fake. He is then greated by a familiar man, someone he remembers but doesnt exactly know.

   Merrick
We need to talk.

   Alex
(quickly becoming confused) Who are you?

   Merrick
(with a saddened face) thats right.... My name is Merrick Gideon.

   Alex
Well Mr Gideon, what do you want with me?

   Merrick
Cerberus and Vestia ordered me to go through your satchel and i found your studies, im here to teach you the full extent of your abilities.

   Alex
Who the heck are they?

   Merrick
(he is slightly annoyed)...they're the one's who found you in the first place .

   Alex
Oooohhh .

   Merrick
Anyways...lets get back to the subject, im here to train you as much as possible.

    Alex
Sounds good to me i guess.

Alex and Merrick leave the room and go inro a training room like area, there are wooden weapons sitting in the corner and some test dummies almost strategically placed around the room. Merick tosses him a necklace with a dark blue crystal attached to it.

   Merrick
Put it on, it'll bring out your soul.

Alex puts on the on the necklace, the graound begins to shake. An immense power is felt through out the room, merrick is astonished bybthe ammount of power given off by alex. Alex is then incased in a pillar of blue fire. The fire and the energy slowly calm down until the pillar is completely gone. Alex stares at his fist, clenching it as blue fire ermerges from his hand.

   Alex
I feel...powerful.

   Merrick
(in complete amazement) I knew you had talent, but that was not what i expect. (he collects himself) alright, what you just saw is magic, specificly, elementalism

   Alex
Elementalism?

   Merrick
You see magic is a manifestation of the soul, a person's soul determines which magic he or she will specialize in, elementalism is magic so powerful, it can use an element to its purest form and will take its form in coherence with the user's soul. Though there many forms of magic, elementalism only covers the basic elements, you know? Fire, Ice, Water and Earth

   Alex
Wait but ice isnt a core element, isn't it technically water?

   Merrick
Yes, ice is water but conjuring ice and water take two different types of training, so they're categorized as two different types.

   Alex
Ooh i see.

   Merrick
Alright kid let's start training. (Merrick pulls out a leaf from his pocket) You're first task is to burn this leaf, but only this leaf (he seats it on the ground)

   Alex
That's easy!

Alex puts his hand out but nothing happens.

   Alex
So how does this work?

  Merrick
Just imagine the flow of energy moving from your heart to your hands, when the energy reaches your hands, put strain into it, you'll feel it when its there

Alex closes his eyes and imagines the flow, he follows merrick instructions and feels heat in his hands, he then shots a fire ball out of his hands and reduces tbe leaf to ash.

   Alex
I did it! (he smiles in accomplishment)

   Merrick
Thats good, you got the basics, now we just work on control, remember i said burn only the leaf, not the floor too.

Before merrick could start the next lesson, a man walks in and asks to speak to him.

   Merrick
Alright, thats it for now, be ready for tomorrow.

Merrick then leaves the room, alex feels his phone go off again and sees amother of Rei's messages.

   Rei's message
Hey again, not sure if you're up or not but if you are im not gonna be online anymore, im getting really tired so goodnight bro.

Alex loocks up from his phone and sees stone tabs on the floor, they have a weird writing on them, curious of the writing he takes a picture of it with his phone, he is then quickly sucked back into his appartment with his phone in his hand. With hesitation he unlocks his phone only to be freaked out by what he sees, the stone tablets picture, saved to his phone. Knowing about Rei's skill of topography he sends Rei the pictures and waits for a response.


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Manga Artists Wanted / looking for a long-term artist (unpaid)
« on: May 12, 2016, 06:15:37 PM »
So i have an idea for an action, fantasy adventure manga. The name of it is called chronicles of a deathless, im three scripts in but im wanting to make this last a very long time so imma need a commited artist. The basic plot line is a 17 year old boy (named Alex Strauss) sets off with his friends Acacias and Rei to prevent invasions by a group of demons who call themselves True Darkness. If you're interested i will pm you more info, (character chart, the scriptd, etc)

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Develop Your Story / DeltronX script 2
« on: May 11, 2016, 03:35:47 AM »
If you havent read the first script i suggest you read that first because this one directly follows it, also if you have read both i would like some feed back, is the story so far enjoyable in anyway?
Do you think theres anything i did wrong? Please let me know

Alex rushes into class just as the late bell rings.
 
    Alex Struass
 (breathing heavily) made it!

 The class room stares at alex as he's sluggishly makes his way to his desk. A girl with bright blue eyes and stunning blonde hair tied into a pony tail and a boy with bright messy red hair and grey eyes greet alex.

    Acacias
Hey alex!

    Rei
Sup dude? you look dead!

   Alex Strauss
Hey guys (he catches his breath) i woke up super late and had to run from the entrance

    Rei
HOW THE HELL DID YOU DO THAT!? THERE'S ATLEAST 3 SETS OF STAIRS AND 2 HALLWAYS YOU HAVE TO TAKE TO GET HERE!

    Alex Strauss
I ran through ALL of it (he collapses on his desk and naps)

    Rei
Dude wake up (he shakes alex), (in a dramatic joking voice) Dont go into the light!

    Acacias
(smacks rei on the back of the head lightly) just let him sleep! He's obviously had a rough morning.

Alex's eyes open, he's submerged in pitch black water, he hears rei and acacias arguing then a voice he's never heard before.

     Mysterious voice
 We've been waiting young bishop.

Alex panics and tries to swim away from the growing darkness but drowns in it. Alex wakes up in his bed in the castle. Vestia walks with a satchel and goggles.

     Vestia
You sure like to sleep dont you? Well we found your bag in the feild and i thought id give it back to you. You can go back to sleep now.

she puts his satchel off to the side of the room, closes the door then walks away.

     Alex Strauss
(in his head) something isnt right, why am i back here again, arent dreams always different? Also how do these people know me so well... and why do i have memories of this place..

Alex gets out of his bed and grabs his satchel and goggles, he puts both on and walks out of the room and makes his way out of the castle.

     Alex
The forest... There's something there for me...
     
    Vestia
Alex where are you going? you just got back!

     Alex Strauss
Sorry, i have to get something.

     Vestia
(in her head) has he found out already?

Alex is running through the city, he grabs a map from the satchel and sees areas highlighted, he puts his Finger on one of the areas.

     Alex Strauss
Its here, i know it!

Alex puts the map back in his satchel and contiues running. He ends up on a river bank, he then makes a raft and paddle and sails off. It's night now, the moonlight is covered by all the trees surrounding the river, alex barely reached land, in front of him lies what seems like the ruins of an old stone structure, nature won over the material as most of what was left was covered in vegetation and weeds. Alex finds a slab with an odd symbol on it, he has his doubts about inspecting it but chooses to anyway.

    Alex Strauss
This stone... It almost feels like metal.

A small blue wisp leaves the slab, alex is regretful of his decision and steps back as the wisp encircles his hand, it then slashes his hand and goes inside the cut

    Alex Strauss
GAAHH! crap!

Alex cries out in pain and holds his hand, the pain instantly leaves, as alex lifts his hands, he sees not only that the cut is gone but that the same symbol thats on the slab is now on his hand. alex picks up on the sound of footsteps and immediately turns to it, a shadow figure slowly approaches alex.

    Shadow man
Hey, calm down im not gonna hurt ya'.

    Alex Strauss
(keeping his gaurd up) who are you?

    Shadow Man
Thats not important, whats important is that im gonna help you and in a way you're gonna help me

    Alex Strauss
(still hesitant) and how does that help?

   Shadow Man
Don't you think i would've attacked already if i was out for you?

   Alex Strauss
I guess i could trust you...

The man puts his hand on alex's forehead alex is confused as his body suddenly spasms. He is hepless, his eyes roll back and his mouth begins to foam. The man then takes his hand of alex's head, letting him lay lifeless. The man then puts two fingers on his own head.

    Shadow Man
Its done but he's out cold. We're at the fuuygah ruins. Sorry but things got messy during the transfer..

    Cerberus
(in the man's head) it's fine as long as he's alright... Ill send some people now.

     Shadow Man
Roger that.

The man slowly begins to fade away.
 
     Shadow Man
Sorry kiddo, i really mean it...

The man fades away completely. Alex is immediately waken up in his class room. He sits up quickly, as if he was startled by something.

     Alex Strauss
Guys?? How long has it been?

     Acacias
It's only been a couple of minutes. Did you have a nightmare? You look really stressed.

    Alex Strauss
I guess you can say that...

    Acacias
Aww (she pats his shoulder) well everythings ok now.

    Rei
Dude?!?! Was there a monster??, i bet if i was there we could of taken that thing on no sweat! Itd be just monster mash!

Alex remembers thats the game he plays online with rei and smirks lightly.

    Alex Strauss
Haha yeah.. I bet we could have.

Alex goes through the day without speaking of the odd dreams and makes his way back home. He is still convinced that the dreams are normal.

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Develop Your Story / Deltron X sceipt 1
« on: May 08, 2016, 05:00:27 AM »
Well if the script is enjoyed then ill post the next one and any following that
This first arc of DeltronX is about a teen (Alex Strauss) who's kind of stuck in a dream cycle that has a message that he doesnt understand, as he goes through each dream he gets more and more clues until he eventually finds their meaning...but does he really want to learn? And is this discovery worth what comes after?

Alex wakes up in the middle of a feild unfamiliar to him

           Alex Strauss
What the heck is this place? I know i just fell asleep but this dream feels different

He walks foward and looks over a cliff. He sees a large village with a castle in the center. The castle is the only structure made of stone. The houses are made of wood that looks oddly metallic. There are large boat like battle ships floating around the kingdom 

           Alex Strauss
 Woah, whatever this place is it sure looks weird

Alex makes his way down the cliff to be greated by a woman with silky long hair and radiant green eyes
       
         Vestia
Oh my son has returned!

 Vestia hugs alex tightly, alex hugs back awkwardly and confused

       Alex Strauss
Its uh, its good to see you (he plays along knowing its a dream)

      Vestia
How me and your father awaited your return! Come now, lets go home

Vestia grabs alex by the hand and takes him through the village towards the castle. As they make their way through town they are greated with parade like cheers, as if the entire village was waiting for them. They finally make into the castle, alex is greated by a large, menacing man in dark blue armour lined with white fur. As the man towers over alex, he puts his hand foward. Alex grabs his hand for a hand shake. The man shakes his hand violently making alex flail like a noodle, he is then pulled in for a hug, which smashes alex's face into his chest plate

        Cerberus
You've grown so much my boy. It's good to see you won't disappoint
   
    Vestia
Dear!
   
    Cerberus
What? He'd make a great soldier! The best of the best!

     Vestia
But he has so much potential as a scholar. Especially with his passion for astronomy. He is a bright man and we know that will reflect his future. Isnt that right my little space man

Vestia smiles brightly as Alex's face turns red from embarrassment

      ALEX STRAUSS
Hey! Im not a little kid!

      Vestia
 Im so sorry, you've just grown up so quickly! I wanted my hot tempered little boy back. Well it is getting late so we should be going to sleep

      Alex Strauss
How is it already getting late?  I've only been in here for like 3 minutes there's no way its night time

Alex walks to the front door and peaks outside only to see it is dark out side. He closes the door and turns around

      Alex Strauss
 (in a voice of defeat) so umm... Where's my room again?

      Vestia
 Its on the second floor,  first door to the left
      Alex Strauss
 Thank you

 Alex starts walking up stairs

      Vestia, Cerberus
Good night
      Alex Strauss
 (his voice echoes) goodnight

Alex gets in bed, he stares out the window and sees two moons

      Alex Strauss
(in his head) what the heck is this place? Its so wie-

He looses control of his body and wakes up in his apartmant. The alarm clock is screeching, Alex looks at the time and sees it's 7:40

      Alex Strauss
HOLY CRAP IM GONNA BE LATE FOR SCHOOL!

He jumps out of bed and dives into his closet, he comes out in a black hoodie, black jeans, and white sneakers. He runs through the apartment, catapults his backpack over his shoulder and bolts to his motorcycle. He quickly starts up the bike, puts on his helmet and hurries off

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Welcome Center / Hey everyone!
« on: May 07, 2016, 11:50:57 AM »
Im not new, just returning, ive grown as a writer and somewhat as an artist

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Manga Artists Wanted / Artist wanted (unpaid)
« on: February 23, 2016, 10:10:42 PM »
I have an idea for a long term manga called Chronicles of a Deathless, the genre are fantasy adventure amd action,also it is a 3 part series and im hoping to find a long term artist. this is the first part of the story. If you're interested read through this part of rhe script and decide if the peoject is right for you. Thanks for takimg the time to read this

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