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Messages - Kata_Misashi

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*looks left and right*

...h-hello again!

(Been a bit folks. I'll be around to help out as much as I can!)

(Also... IT'S BEEN FIVE YEARS FROM WHEN I INTRODUCE MY CHARACTERS. THEY'VE CHANGED SO MUCH SINCE I'VE LAST POSTED THIER CHARACTER SHEET AAAAA

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Develop Your Story / Re: No-Named Story Idea (Critque/Adivce Seeking)
« on: July 25, 2020, 12:55:08 AM »
Gaaah cliffhanger! The moment I saw 'deaf son' I already immediately thought: That's a terrible thing to have in a musically inclined race.

This is a concept that just jumps out at you really, it almost writes itself. Definitely interesting and potential for a lot of interesting scenes and emotionally moving moments. Strange enough, I'd actually be more interested in the character stories rather than any action scenes. It seems like that kind of story from my first impressions.

Also, long time no see Kata. Hope you're doing good

Lego! It's good to see you! Been far too long!

As for the story; that was the idea. The action is few and far in between and captures the struggles 'Treble' face being thrown into leadership at a young age. Throw in the mystery of the origin of the virus, keeping ties with the humans strong, ordering the city and handling the mental trauma of it all... I aim to make fairly interesting.

With that being said; I wanted to pitch a few ideas on how to actually start the story without 'revealing' as much as I have already. That being in three ways...

1] Through the eyes of his father; racing desperately to the human city. Hearing his thoughts of how confusing everything is and the reaction from the humans upon them arriving.

2] Through the eyes of the doctor working on Treble. Starting off on a medical review that seems 'normal' at first before the reader begins to realize the patient isn't human.

3] Through the eyes of Treble. The 'dream cliche' start of Treble 'suffocating' in silence. A full description of what the virus is doing to him before... 'waking up' to the doctor preparing for a checkup.

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Welcome Center / Re: JayJaYce come in MangaRaiders !
« on: July 11, 2020, 07:54:00 PM »
Heyo! Welcome to the crew! Enjoy your stay!

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Develop Your Story / No-Named Story Idea (Critque/Adivce Seeking)
« on: July 08, 2020, 12:04:17 PM »
[* = 'WIP']

TITLE: *WIP*
GENRE: Action, Slice-of-Life
SYNOPSIS: Various races live on the planet of Gaia*, ranging from humans to other various 'beastfolk'. Each race and region harbor traits of, what is known as the 'Three Sacred Gifts Of Gaia': Strength, Knowledge, and Magic. And while many use various combinations of these gifts; many tend to focus on one in particular.

This story begins a few years ago from the main story on the 'Isles Of Sonata'; home to the Lutra race. Otter-like in appearance and aquatic by nature; the Lutra's were bestowed the gift of magic with skills in strength.

Known as one of the friendliest races upon the planet; they have lend their aid to many ships sailed by humans and help prevent nautical accidents and catastrophes.

Their main signature trait is their one of a kind 'Music Magic'. With hand crafted drums, flutes, and other instruments; the Lutra's weave sound for not only recreation but for offensive and defensive purposes. It is said that the energy they use is called 'Rhythm'; a force located in all beings that only a few can harness.

The Isles are made up of three main lands; each an essential part of the Lutras lifestyle. One for hunting and gathering. One for living. And another for Agriculture.

Unbeknownst to many non-Lutra is a hidden city located below the three islands. The City Of Allegro and the resting place of the 'Planets Heart'; an ancient, formless artifact said to have been gifted to them by the gods.

The tribal chief in days of old held the Lutra tribe together and was; at time, an ambassador between human and Lutra relations as they traveled across their waters. While they both agreed to lend aid each other on the seas; it was forbidden for either to step foot on the opposing persons land. Despite that, relations between humans and Lutra were often peaceful if not brief.

Fast forward to the birth of the tribal chiefs son, Treble. Upon being born; it was made clear that the boy was dangerously ill. A virus that robbed him of his fur pigmentation and rendered him deaf; a death sentence for the musically inclined race. All medical attempts on their behalf proved inconclusive and the chief grew desperate. Treble wouldn't survive the season at this rate.

Taking a risk; the chief gather a squad of men and carrying his sickly son, traveled to the human region; New Eden*.

Human are known to hold the gift of knowledge with a skills in strength. Their technological wonders range from medical and transportation to smaller applications like drones and security systems. All smacked dabbed within a bustling city that never sleeps.

Fear struck those who witnessed the band of Lutra on human lands. Many have never seen races like their before. Begging and pleading for them to care for his son; the group was swiftly taken to the heart of New Eden*; Naomi Industries*: The leading company of technological wonders spanning the city and then some.

The company head; Mr.Naomi, listened to pleas of the chief and agreed to help... under one condition.

Trebles race has never been fully studied before and to say they had the means to cure what ailed his son was a stretch without further understand the biology of the Lutra's. Under the condition that his race would submit themselves for study over the following years; Naomi Industries will house Treble and stabilize the virus within him until a cure was created.

Out of fear of losing his son if he declined; the chief had little choice but to agree to the terms and from there, the expansion of human studies traveled to the Isle of Allegro.

The tribal chief; as much as he wanted to stay by his son, needed to return to his kingdom along with the researchers. Placing his faith in the humans and leaving one skilled warrior behind, the chief was off back to the island to regain order.

As time past; a breakthrough was found through an invention called the 'SYNC' hearing device. Fitting the young otter with it; slowly his hearing would return and his natural link to magic energy;'Rhythm', was found. Further testing; to check for side effects, were place but after a long and tedious battle; Treble was now curious of the strange world in which he resided.

Stories of the massive metal city of New Eden, the lights and sounds of the various machines within facility, and strange food given to him; the young otter took it all in as the ever watchful eye of the warrior kept track.

Trebles favorite past time was listening to the radio. Music made by humans was very different from the natural rhythm his tribe felt. Nevertheless it was catchy and always put a smile on his face when DJ Jet Stream's smooth and snarky voice spoke. Speaking to warrior, named 'Beat', Treble confided his dream to one day be a DJ like her; Beat simply humoring him and becoming a close friend with the younger otter.

However; word quickly began to span the ocean.

The tribe chief was found deceased. Killed by the same virus that Treble was stricken with.


~MORE LATER~

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Welcome Center / Re: It's been a while...
« on: July 05, 2020, 05:04:55 AM »
Welcome back buddy  ;D
hey Kata, long time no see. Hope you're keeping well  :thumbsup:
Hi Kata! Good to see you again!

Sup guys!  Glad to see I left an impression. It's good to be back

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Welcome Center / It's been a while...
« on: July 04, 2020, 03:14:27 PM »
It's been a few since I last posted here.
Reading my old post reminds me of how far I've been on this journey to create a fiction piece.

Let's try this again.

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More fanart! This is everyones favorite toucan, Xiana! Created by Kata.

Fanart: Xiana

Spoiler

Say WHAAAT~ Walter! Thank ya kindly for the art yo! You're too sweet. >w<;

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Heck yeah! We're back in action! Need to get these old writing fingers back in the fray! x3

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR PROJECT 3: Prelude Stories & Sign Up Info
« on: February 02, 2017, 12:51:07 PM »
Phew... glad I had my email linked to this thread or else I'd miss out.
In any case... I'm still here. ^^;

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR PROJECT 3: Prelude Stories & Sign Up Info
« on: August 27, 2016, 02:21:40 PM »
Thought I might just put this here to... 'show off like a jerk' show Treble to everyone. ^w^

Spoiler

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR PROJECT 3: Prelude Stories & Sign Up Info
« on: August 17, 2016, 12:49:51 PM »
How to counter water.... Turn it all to ice? Send it all to the void? That's not an option...

Ice is the o ly thing that I can think of. Not trying to fight the control, just change the composition, fro liquid to solid. Or I light be Co pletely wrong here.

But assuming I'm right, anyone who could use ice magic or cold magic should go help out. Vedraleth can be of use but I don't think  he alone can do much.

Thats what I was thinking and... well... not to favor my own characters but Hiro can 'technically' control ice...
But he's not where Shio and company are so...

...but for final say purposes (if there is a way possible), then my final choice will be my hawk: 'Hiro'.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR PROJECT 3: Prelude Stories & Sign Up Info
« on: August 09, 2016, 11:15:57 PM »
The Almighty Data!

Where's my cookie?  :D

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR PROJECT 3: Prelude Stories & Sign Up Info
« on: August 06, 2016, 02:15:46 PM »
With help from the talented Lego and OhGodHelpMe, I present to this lovely CM!
Enjoy!

"Uhh... go team?"

<<After Chapter 1.2>>

"So what are we waitin' for!?" Xiana blurted as she pounded her fist together. "Let's in there and-"

"Hold it, Xiana." Hiro huffed as he folded his wings. "Didn't you hear what Samadaya said? 'Close to a thousand'. They're only four of us."

Peering back to the hawk, Xiana groaned. "Hey, if me and my group can take on a swarm of 'tar covered' wolves, I think we can-"

"And how did that turn out again?" Hiro glared.

Taking a moment, the toucan gave a small squawk and frowned. "...Aura..." She sighed.

"Besides... it's a good chance that we're going up against a clone so I think I'd be wiser to understand 'our' strengths and weaknesses before we rush in... agreed?" Hiro looking to Rex.

Rex glanced at Hiro, "We don't have time to be strategizing when we're already on the battlefield. I don't know much, but alternate realities mean people grew up differently, right? And what's to say they didn't get some special powerup from the Corruptions on their side? Until we fight we won't know anything, and as it is by taking so much time we've already lost members, and we risk leaking information."

He unsheathed his gladius, "I'm going in for the attack. I'll go after my clone. I have a better chance at guessing what his strengths and weaknesses are."

"Yo-you're joking... right?" Hiro said dumbfounded.

"See." Xiana perked her head back as the hawk placed a wing upon his forehead.

"The gamble you're taking might cost you your life. Who's to say your clone is even over there?" sighing. "Too many risks. This could even be a trap."

"What do suppose we do then?" Xiana asked as she turned to gaze upon the cloaked crowd.

Samadaya, the great destroyer of worlds and humanoid species alike, nonchalantly teleported to the group and sat on top of a rock, donning a black yukata and sword sheathed at her side. She yawned as she looked on with sleepy eyes.

"Samadaya!"

Xiana turning her attention to yell out.

"Where have you been?!"

<When did she... even leave?> Hiro muttered to himself.

Samadaya yawned again and shut her eyes.

"It's not any easier to sleep here than in the 7th dimension either it seems. It's especially more difficult when a giant, talking bird is screaming at you like an impudent child."

Hiro stepped in front of the fuming Xiana, stopping her from saying something that might ignite Samadaya's short fuse.

"I don't really know whose side you're on in all of this, but I would like it if you would lend us your power to help defeat these invaders."

Samadaya flipped her hair, yawning again.

"Why should I bother, exactly? If it were just me, I could wipe out this crowd and this entire world in about a day. I think it's much more fun to watch you all fight on your own strength. Surely you have the capacity to form strategies for tight situations, right?"

Xiana yelled out from behind Hiro.

"Stop insulting our intelligence and just decide! Will you help us or not?!"

*THINK THINK THINK*

"Hmmmm...."

After sparing some time to think it over, Samadaya suddenly disappeared into a swirling vortex, leaving the group behind.

Rex, Hiro, and Xiana stood dumbfounded. It was so insane and so rude, Rex laughed, thinking it was all just a cruel joke.

"Hahaha...very funny Samadaya. You can come out now. Come on. Stop hiding. Okay, NOW! NOW.......NOW....Oh my god, she really left us, didn't she?"

The portal reopened, and Samadaya emerged with a war fan tied around her wrist. Her long, black hair blew around in the wind, and she greeted everyone with a war-loving, peace-hating smile.

"Sorry, I just needed to get some things. So, who wants to start off, hmm?"

<"We're doomed."> Hiro chirped to himself as Xiana took her attention from Samadaya to him.

<"Don't say that!"> Xiana replied. "Look... how about we get a birds eye view and we'll dive in when things get hairy? Sounds fair?"

Taking a moment to think, Hiro grumbled. "...I... don't know... I have a bad feeling about this..."

"Oh come on!" Xiana patted him on the back. "Besides... been wanting to see what this chick can do with that crazy axe." She chuckled and thumbed a finger to Mary.

Mary seemed to preoccupied to answer, busy humming a lullaby to her axe.

<...did I mention how doomed we are?"> Hiro groaned as Xiana took to the air.

"You worry too much, Hiro! Come on! Quit crying and lets get into position!" Xiana flying off.

<"I carry the worry that all of you should be having...> Hiro shook his head before soaring after the toucan.


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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR PROJECT 3: ITS HAS BEGUN!
« on: August 02, 2016, 07:44:40 PM »
Okay, speaking of which Echo, Crow, Azimuth. Shall we do a CM before they head to the first city?

I'm like the sound of that! I'm all for my group grouping together for a CM as well.

As for my characters choices... while Xiana would normally be 'B', because Hiro is there she'd fall under 'C' while Hiro would probably pick 'A'; taking into account that they might be up against themselves and want to share each other's weaknesses... just my 2 cents.

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Rebels

“The humans in the Eden region calls us animals. I always questioned if it was because of our looks, our way of thinking, or some crap like that. I look upon our capital… our region; ‘The Tropics’... and its all clear now. What truly makes anyone; even humans, animals…

...War.”

   “Stay Out Of Our City! You Stinkin’ Reptiles!” A wake of vultures yelled as they loomed over a single gecko.

   “I-I’m sorry! I-I was just trying to-” He stammered as one of the avians stepped forward to kick him to the ground.

   “Shut It, ‘Scales’! You’re the one being in places he shouldn’t. This city… ‘no’... this ‘region’, was made by avians; for avians! It has no place for the likes of your-”

“You’re Wrong!” The gecko yelled out; wiping the blood from his nose away. “History said, Reptiles and Avians were suppose to share this region… ‘in peace’.” Slowly getting to his feet. “But then those damn crystals started sprouting everywhere and… ‘everyone’ went mad for power!”

Grinning a devious grin, the head vulture reached behind himself. “Crystals? You mean… like this?” Revealing a red-to-orange gem, fear falling over the lizard. “Face it, ‘scales’. This is Avian region. Even if what you said was true… ‘who cares’? I could kill you right now and nobody would give a damn! Oh but I dare you… lay a claw on me. I’d love to see the uproar you’d throw the city in. All it would take is one sob story.”

“This is… an injustice.” The gecko watched in horror and fire radiated from the crystal and around the vulture.

“There is no justice for lizards.” The vulture laughed as a torrent of flames washed over the gecko.

~~~

   “There is no justice for lizards.” Kyokyu sighed as he stood among the forest treetops the overlooked the city of Plumia.

   “I didn’t want this.” He uttered as he clenched his bat tightly. “I didn’t ask to be sent here… ‘just to see my world destroyed one again’. This world… this ‘reality’.”

   Taking a moment, Kyokyu descended back to the forest floor as he began walking deeper into the brush.

   “How did it get this bad? It wasn’t perfect before but now… they’re not even trying to hide it anymore; the avians hate for lizards.” he gritted his teeth. “Damn. Dammit! Is this what could have been if…” stopping in his tracks. “...that toucan and her team; The Avian Rangers… never came to be? Damn it all!”

   Taking a long pause, Kyokyu closed his eyes. “Whats even worse, is that they didn’t lie. All I asked was to see my sister again… and they…”

   “Kyokyu?” A voice speaking out as the monitor lizard glanced towards it.

   “Yasmin. Hey sis’.” Kyokyu sighed.

   “I thought I heard you yelling. Who are you talking to?”

   “Uhh.” Kicking up some leaves. “Ya know… ‘myself’.” giving a small chuckle.

   “O… ‘kay’.” She rose a brow. “Well we shouldn’t be out here. We could be spotted by an avian.”

   “Tcch!” Kyokyu spat. “I’m not afraid of a freakin’ bird.”

   “You will be if they’re a flock of them!” Yasmin glared. “And it’s not just you I’m worried about!”

   Taking a long pause, Kyokyu fell serious. “How many did we lose today?”

   Yasmin solemnly glanced to the ground. “Seven.”

   Looking back in the direction of the city, Kyokyu gritted his teeth and clenched his bat. “On Gaia’s name; How Much Longer Must We-!?”

   Walking up to place a hand upon her shoulder, Yasmin sighed. “Kyo. We just need to wait till the time is right. And then we can end all of this.”

   “But… is that really the only way?” Kyokyu huffed. “Do we really have to-”

   “Our brothers and sisters are dying everyday, Kyokyu! And every day that past we lose more and more! We… ‘have no other option’.”

   “It’s all up to me... right?” Kyokyu huffed.

"All up to 'us', Kyo. We're the final line in this rebellion. We're in this together."

   “Right. In order to save my people… I will... 'killed her'..."


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