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Hiiiiii guys, i'm back and still trying to catch up.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR Project #2 - Age of Corruption
« on: December 07, 2015, 08:17:53 AM »
ok!
I've finally caught up. Sorry about the wait and now i can join in on the fun. Yosh!!

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR Project #2 - Age of Corruption
« on: November 20, 2015, 10:01:28 AM »
hi guys. sorry i haven't been active for a while but my Internet is off. I'll get back in action as soon as its back but i love the interactions so far. keep it up guys and again i'm sorry.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR Project #2 - Age of Corruption
« on: November 11, 2015, 05:39:47 PM »
characters: Lady Jade Dra'Azon RIn, Slade Finn and Storm Eagle are in Reality 6- Portals.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR Project #2 - Age of Corruption
« on: November 06, 2015, 12:26:26 AM »
CHARACTER 1

Spoiler

NAME: Jade Dra'Azon Rin
STORY: White Soul
MAIN OR SECONDARY: Main
HEIGHT: 6 3"
PERSONALITY: cheerful, soft spoken, and stubborn. Shes 144 yrs old but looks 26. she  is the leader of the Rhone Rju-kans, their an elite group that protects the king from the shadows. tends to smile a lot even when mad but gets down to business when she needs to.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: slim toned built, light Grey skin color, white locked fine medium length hair and fiery red eyes. when not in her battle suite she wears a hight waist long skirt... I'll just finish the drawing, thats a better description.

ABILITIES: speed, shadow walking, medium amount of healing to self only and enhancement of another persons ability for a period of time.

POWERS:  pure wind manipulation and air manipulation

WEAKNESS: Innocent people getting involved/hurt, someone who can cancel out air based abilities

COMBAT TYPE: quick witted and fierce. she can go on defensive or offensive in a split sec and If she has to command a team she can also be quite the strategist.

MOVES: Special 1---REQUIEM (she plays a tune in the wind that can only be heard by keen ears. with this she calls fort a army of dead pure souls to fight for her, she's unable to fight while playing as this requires great focus)

Special 2--- EXILE (she can banish a person to a place their most fond of, but because it has a 40% success rate persons sometimes appeared right back in her sights)
 
MOVE 1: AIR LOCK (she uses this to reduce or rise a gas in the air-- completely remove oxygen, or raise the carbon dioxide levels).

MOVE 2: MIRAGES AND TONE DEAF ( she changes air temperatures to create mirages then as the opponent is lured in, the air box is activated. The box completely cuts you off from any sound outside.)

MOVE 3: BATTLE MAXIA ( she wraps herself in her armor called battle maxia. its tough and not easily broken. she rarely wears it, unless she desperately needs to or gets into a killing frenzy.)

MOVE 4: VORTEX (she shoots a specially made vortex arrow at the target. It causes you to take in more  air than needed and exhale less air. Air is eventually stored in the target until they pop)

MOVE 5: SIG (she creates air platforms that she uses to move from one place to the next if fighting in the sky)

MOVE 6: TAG (the target is wrapped in a thin coat of constantly moving wind that amplifies their every sound to intense levels. she can now hunt them as they cant hear her)

 

CHARACTER 2- SUPPORT

Spoiler
NAME: Slade Finn
Story: White Soul
Main or Secondary: secondary: support
Height: 6 0"
Personality: Doesn't speak much just one word sentences and gives off the cold eyes look.
Physical Description: orange hair with deep brown roots, blue eyes, Grey skin, a red scarf wrapped around his neck and wears a blue body suite under his clothing. he usually dresses in the army color of purple, black and brown.
Ability: speed
Power: Invisibility and Density Shifting
Weakness: can only manipulate himself and objects.
Combat Type: hes more of a mid range fighter and can collaborate well. Aggressively throws a barrage of whatever attack hes using.
Moves: special 1: Dwind (he can shrink an entire town to fit in the palm of his hand)
special 2: Light God Slash ( he condenses the air around his hand to make it harder to form a sword then releases it back at his opponent with great force to form pulse waves)
Move 1: Untouchable (hes able to may his body tissues denser and tougher )
Move 2: Buoyed sphere ( he can manipulate buoyancy within a 54 miles radius)
Move 3: Air walk (alter his body weight and then condense the air under him to walk on)
Move 4: Bigle (he can shrink or enhance an objects shape)
Move 5:
Move 6:


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Name: Storm Eagle
Story: White Soul
Main or Secondary: Support
Height: 5 9"
Personality: Easy going, a lady of few words and cunning.
Physical Description: slim toned built, light Grey skin, orange long straight hair that sometimes changes to Grey, with mild brown eyes.
Ability:enhanced vision, speed and accuracy
Powers: Poison manipulation
Weakness: self poison immunity is limited.
Combat Type: long ranged, and doesn't stay put after she makes a shot.
Moves: Special 1-- LAVA FLOW (storm can spit out a small lake wort of 5 different poisons blended together)

Special 2--- IMPEL (she takes attacks that wont kill her and as she bleeds, aims her blood towards the opponent and can slowly seep into their body eventually controlling them. )

Move 1: Murk shots (water like bullets that cannot be traced and causes paralysis)
Move 2: Ruin field ( she creates a field filled with poisonous gases where anything within dies)
Move 3:  Archers Sin (she creates thousands of homing poison arrows that lock on to its target and won't stop until it touches them.)
Move 4: clou-clou (she can make poison clones with 3/4 of her full potential)
Move 5 poison bombs ( as the name suggest. smoke bombs tho)
Move 6: poison saber (a sword of endless poison, if touched is deadly. Used only when the target approaches her for a close quarter battle)




Character Moment

Spoiler
BLOOD TIES: THE OVERTHROWING! NO... WAIT! WHAT! THEIR OVERTHROWING?!

Jade and Ramone ooze blood-lust as they walk towards each other.
“Do you think you can defeat me?” Ramone asked with his head hung in anger, “Don’t underestimate me. How dare you look down on me!!” he yelled looking up at her in rage as the ground below him began to crack.

“WHY!” she shouts as she walks slowly towards Ramone and her agbara orison releases granting her more energy.


“What’s that? Thinking about backing out now. Not A chance, I’ll chase you to the ends of the world” he opens his third agbara orisun and approaches her.

“Me, run!”  She whisper while laughing. “How could I when your soul is crying out. Give him back, Give him back! I’ve endured long enough!” Tears stream down her face as she starts running with her sword drawn.

“Not a chance. After I’m done with him I’ll hand over the pieces” he laughs as his eye color changes. With his sword drawn he charges her.  “Checkmate!”


(Bang!!)
“I’ll kill you this time for sure. My father was right to kill your kind!” pushes against his strength.
“TSK! You talk too much”.  He increases his speed and uses another sword.
(“Brother! Brother! Sorry… I took so long.”) She thinks to herself while increasing her speed and uses air wall to block. They collide creating a huge explosion.
They landed opposite each other but notice the ground shaking at an increasing pace.

“What is this? Another one of your tricks Ramone?” she looked up only to see the distraught look on his face as he jumped back.
The earth burst open as a tree of dark matter filled with agonizing cries emerged. It fanned out like an umbrella and began releasing tiny black spores that evaporated anything it touched.

“UGH” Jade cried as the overwhelming force pushed her back.
Below her was a huge abyss, everyone, everything, slowly vanishing from her eyes.

“Death, Death We Meet again, this time we’ll paint the sky bright red!”
“Death, Death We Meet again, this time we’ll paint the sky bright red!”
Jade looks up at the top of the tree to see what just made her blood run cold. A young girl with a bright smile but her eyes screamed death.
“RUN!!” jade yelled to her squad.
Ramone was frozen as the demon in him quivered from the nasty energy he felt.
“You should get as far away as possible, forget that, Leave this planet now!” the demon urged.

Jade tried to regroup with her squad but with debris flying everywhere she couldn't.
“If you want to live come with us now, you don’t have much longer” a voice whispered to jade.
She looked over her left shoulder and saw a white box that opened up. Knowing the squad couldn't take on whatever the girl was and the dark energy she ordered them to retreat to the box.
“GO GO GO!!” Rebel seconded but as soon as Diamon, Rebel and Dylan entered they realized there was a chain made of the dark energy through their chest.
“So you’re not gonna play with me? Tats how it is uh.” She dragged the three out and began yelling so loud Jades ear drums popped. The doors closed as she watched her men die and her world vanish. 


Lady Jade Dra'Azon Rin
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Manga Writer workshop / Re: MR Project #2 - Age of Corruption
« on: November 02, 2015, 10:23:35 PM »
Finally MR. Crow! we've begun.
I'll post my bits tomorrow. I'm guessing that since ryoshin didn't die in the previous one he should be back or can i change the characters?

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 27, 2015, 08:26:47 PM »
A sensei a student? I don't understand the 'shirt? what the hell I didn't even see that' bit. Is it the student saying that off camera or the sensei's thoughts?

I also ended up reading the panels on the left before going to the right. The positioning could be better. Maybe diminish the third panel so that it's not of equal height to the left. Or equalize both panels so that they stay in a straight line?

That's some serious training there. Looks like the student is impressive eh.

Ryoshin? Where did you read that?


Hahaha, as for the thumbnails those are for a comic I actually am working on. You can read it here if you wish:

http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,13015.0.html


@ Lego
      yes. Sensei and student.

    As for the shirt, a page before (page 3) would explain why. The drawing was supposed to show his jacket with two slashes.
And yes it is off camera the students thoughts.

Sorry about the mix up, I'll try to arrange it better.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 27, 2015, 04:50:48 PM »
yes, it is Ryoshin!.

I was trying to really get the details in but not enough time.
Thanks! glad you like it!

Is yours a story written down somewhere or just for the event? I'd like to read it. (^_^)

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 27, 2015, 11:32:45 AM »
sorry i took so long. The scanner just didn't want to be used. let me know if you don' catch the flow.

@echo
      Yours has this eeri feel like something big is gonna happen!

@lego
      nice action sequence. Now where's the rest!

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 27, 2015, 11:26:11 AM »
third panel.


Spoiler

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 27, 2015, 11:22:50 AM »
second panel.

Spoiler

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 27, 2015, 07:26:56 AM »
Spoiler

(Read left to right and repeat)
Let me know if you guys cant read a panel properly.
Working on posting the others.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 27, 2015, 07:06:57 AM »
It won't work. Gaaaaaa and my camera is less than average.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 26, 2015, 11:29:39 PM »
I'm trying to get this scanner to work. I'll post soon. (>.<)

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Writers Survival 3: The Best Name in The Game
« on: September 20, 2015, 03:33:14 PM »
Thanks lego!

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