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Develop Your Story / Re: Dark Sentinel [Working Title]
« on: August 31, 2014, 05:46:25 PM »
Chapter Two:
Spoiler
Chapter Two "Nobuko"
The scene opens up to Leo walking through Montegue Bay on a bright morning. The citizens are crowding around the marketplace as Leo makes his way up the street. In the background a large mansion can be seen with a tall gate surrounding it. To the side of Leo, there is a father and son watching him curiously.
Boy: Who is that father? Why is everyone avoiding him?
Father: He is the dark Sentinel, son. He is evil.
Boy: What is a Sentinel?
Father: Don't they teach you anything in your school? A 1000 Years ago, the great God of Light Derzo came to Aerogona. Before he left again, he endowed special powers to 12 individuals. These men and women became known as the Sentinels. Over the years, their powers have been passed down through the generations. They are tasked with aiding Aerogona's weak and defenseless people.
Boy: So what kind powers do they have?
Father: They have the power to control elements and environment. It depends on which of them you meet. I've only ever met two Sentinels, one of them could use fire, and the other could control metal.
Boy: So if he's a Sentinel, why do people hate him?
Father: Because he wasn't given his powers from Derzo. His powers come from The God of Darkness, Lufio. Those powers are evil and will only be used for evil. He is a dangerous man, boy. Do not go near him.
Leo continues on his way as the father grabs his son by the hand and walks the other way. He approaches the large mansion at the end of the city. A giant gate stands before him. In front of it are two guards, wearing the Mega Kingdom military uniforms, which are long blue robes with a gold belt strapped around their waist. They both have shaved heads and look tough. Leo puts his hands in his pockets and looks up at them.
Leo: I'm here to speak with General Beltime.
1st Guard: Are you kidding? You think you can just waltz up here and talk to the leader of The Silver Brigade? No way! Get out of my sight!
Leo: You're going to make his difficult, aren't you?
1st Guard: If you think for one sec-
The guard is cut short when they hear a commotion happening on the street behind them. Leo turns around to see a crowd circling around a Mega Army Soldier and a young man. The young man has long white hair and blue eyes. He is wearing a white robe with a blue belt. He has a large black sword slung on his back. The soldier has a short brown hair and an angry look on his face.
Soldier: What are you doing here, Nobuko?
Nobuko: I'm looking for somebody. I was wondering if anyone here has seen him.
Soldier: You realize you're a wanted man right? I'm going to take you in right now.
Nobuko: Then I won't hesitate to kill you.
Nobuko reaches up and pulls out his blade. He grabs it with two hands and gets in his fighting stance.
Leo (Thinking): Nobuko... I've heard of him. He's a powerful claimant. They say he searches the world for a certain man, killing anyone that gets in his way. I need to stop him..
Nobuko jumps forward extremely fast, coming at the soldier with a slash. But just as he is about to hit him Leo appears, blocking the blade with his arms crossed in an x. Blood can be seen dripping from his arms as he looks up.
Leo: I thought you were supposed to be powerful.
Nobuko gives him a grimace. Leo then pushes him back with all his strength. Nobuko flys back a few paces away, and lands on his feet.
Nobuko: Who are you?
Leo: I'm the one they call the Dark Sentinel.
Nobuko: Hmm... I've heard many things about you. Tell me, do you support the Silver Brigade?
Leo: What do you mean, why would I support the Silver Brigade?
Nobuko suddenly stands up straight and sheaths his sword back onto his back.
Nobuko: Well, if you don't know, then I guess I ought to let you find out. I'm here to put a stop to the Silver Brigade. Once you figure things out, come and find me. Then, if you still feel the need to fight me, you can.
Nobuko turns around and walks away. Leo lets him go.
Leo (Thinking): What is with that guy?
The groups begins to disperse as they realize who Leo is. Leo heads back to the gate to the two guards, who now look terrified.
Leo: Now, where were we?
The scene opens up to Leo walking through Montegue Bay on a bright morning. The citizens are crowding around the marketplace as Leo makes his way up the street. In the background a large mansion can be seen with a tall gate surrounding it. To the side of Leo, there is a father and son watching him curiously.
Boy: Who is that father? Why is everyone avoiding him?
Father: He is the dark Sentinel, son. He is evil.
Boy: What is a Sentinel?
Father: Don't they teach you anything in your school? A 1000 Years ago, the great God of Light Derzo came to Aerogona. Before he left again, he endowed special powers to 12 individuals. These men and women became known as the Sentinels. Over the years, their powers have been passed down through the generations. They are tasked with aiding Aerogona's weak and defenseless people.
Boy: So what kind powers do they have?
Father: They have the power to control elements and environment. It depends on which of them you meet. I've only ever met two Sentinels, one of them could use fire, and the other could control metal.
Boy: So if he's a Sentinel, why do people hate him?
Father: Because he wasn't given his powers from Derzo. His powers come from The God of Darkness, Lufio. Those powers are evil and will only be used for evil. He is a dangerous man, boy. Do not go near him.
Leo continues on his way as the father grabs his son by the hand and walks the other way. He approaches the large mansion at the end of the city. A giant gate stands before him. In front of it are two guards, wearing the Mega Kingdom military uniforms, which are long blue robes with a gold belt strapped around their waist. They both have shaved heads and look tough. Leo puts his hands in his pockets and looks up at them.
Leo: I'm here to speak with General Beltime.
1st Guard: Are you kidding? You think you can just waltz up here and talk to the leader of The Silver Brigade? No way! Get out of my sight!
Leo: You're going to make his difficult, aren't you?
1st Guard: If you think for one sec-
The guard is cut short when they hear a commotion happening on the street behind them. Leo turns around to see a crowd circling around a Mega Army Soldier and a young man. The young man has long white hair and blue eyes. He is wearing a white robe with a blue belt. He has a large black sword slung on his back. The soldier has a short brown hair and an angry look on his face.
Soldier: What are you doing here, Nobuko?
Nobuko: I'm looking for somebody. I was wondering if anyone here has seen him.
Soldier: You realize you're a wanted man right? I'm going to take you in right now.
Nobuko: Then I won't hesitate to kill you.
Nobuko reaches up and pulls out his blade. He grabs it with two hands and gets in his fighting stance.
Leo (Thinking): Nobuko... I've heard of him. He's a powerful claimant. They say he searches the world for a certain man, killing anyone that gets in his way. I need to stop him..
Nobuko jumps forward extremely fast, coming at the soldier with a slash. But just as he is about to hit him Leo appears, blocking the blade with his arms crossed in an x. Blood can be seen dripping from his arms as he looks up.
Leo: I thought you were supposed to be powerful.
Nobuko gives him a grimace. Leo then pushes him back with all his strength. Nobuko flys back a few paces away, and lands on his feet.
Nobuko: Who are you?
Leo: I'm the one they call the Dark Sentinel.
Nobuko: Hmm... I've heard many things about you. Tell me, do you support the Silver Brigade?
Leo: What do you mean, why would I support the Silver Brigade?
Nobuko suddenly stands up straight and sheaths his sword back onto his back.
Nobuko: Well, if you don't know, then I guess I ought to let you find out. I'm here to put a stop to the Silver Brigade. Once you figure things out, come and find me. Then, if you still feel the need to fight me, you can.
Nobuko turns around and walks away. Leo lets him go.
Leo (Thinking): What is with that guy?
The groups begins to disperse as they realize who Leo is. Leo heads back to the gate to the two guards, who now look terrified.
Leo: Now, where were we?