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Manga Artists Wanted / looking for Artists For Action Series
« on: March 02, 2015, 04:48:20 PM »
Hi I'm Looking for a artist who can partner up for a series or two. I've been writing for over 2 years and I've had couple flopped ideas.

Synopsis: Will to Fight is the story of Gunner Akamura who's Osaka best Fighter, he is invited to join an international Fighting tournament called the Will to Fight where he has to survive in a dome with the some worlds best fighter. The last one standing will be given a prize check (yet to be decided) and the right to call themselves the best fighter in world.

Characters:
Gunner Akamura (17) - MMC parents died when he was only 13 and has a older brother who runs his family Boxing School, his dad was the former World # 1 Boxer Cyrus Akamura. Gunner has brown hair and black eyes. Usually where a lot of ripped clothes and always as his hands tapped for a fight. Blames himself for his parents accident. Fight with all of his might never back down from a challenge

Azumi Itazumi (16) - MFC Azumi has known Gunner since she they were born and both were family business partners when her dad was Cyrus's Manager. Black hair with a bit of red and brown eyes. She has a really bad habit of talking too much.

Ren Akamura (25) - Gunner's older brother he raise Gunner when he was 21 when the parents died in a car accident and now runs the Akamura Family Boxing School. Brown Hair and Blue Eyes. Has a paralyzed left arm and worries about Gunner but Gunner think that Ren is holding him back.

Kazuma Suzuki (18) - Abandon by his parent when he was 2 and left on a churches door. He made a promise to himself that he would get his revenge on his true parents when he finds them. Black hair and green eyes has a cross scar under his right eye.

Preview

Scene 1: In a back alley where we see a man bleeding on ground knocked out and another on the ground who has shadowy figure with the sun blasting from behind the shadowy figure. A another man who looks like a to be a friend of the guy that bleeding pops from outside the alley and he starts to charge and at shadowy figure. The shadowy figure notices and turns catches a punch. The shadowy figure turns around start to crush the friends fist and with great strength hip tosses the friend over, he start look down on the injured man and his friend

???:  Tell your boss: this is Gunner Akamura's area. I better not see him or his men around here again. Got it?

One of the guy stands up try to swing again at Gunner. Once again counters the attack from behind and this applies a hold that could break his arm . The thug try to reach for a pipe that lying on the ground and Gunner sees the pipe

Gunner: NO!

The Thug continue to try to reach the pipe

Gunner: NO!

The thug try reach for the pipe.

Gunner: NO!!!

Gunner lets him go and tosses to the wall and quickly grab the pipe and in one motion hit him with a big swing with the Pipe. the thug goes flying and blood start drip from the pipe that Gunner hit him with.

Gunner: You should have listened.

Gunner start to walk away from the scene. He walks right up to a man who's scared.

Gunner: This is one free next time I’m charging you. Here’s my number anytime you need protection call me.

Gunner hands the man a paper with his number and continues to walk away.

Man: Thank you!!

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Develop Your Story / Re: Will to Fight ( Remake of an old series.)
« on: February 12, 2015, 03:21:51 PM »
Thanks hope you stay with for first chapter

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Develop Your Story / Will to Fight ( Remake of an old series.)
« on: February 11, 2015, 03:03:38 PM »
Hi I'm Looking for a artist who can partner up for a series or two. I've been writing for over 2 years and I've had couple flopped ideas.

Synopsis: Will to Fight is the story of Gunner Akamura who's Osaka best Fighter, he is invited to join an international Fighting tournament called the Will to Fight where he has to survive in a dome with the some worlds best fighter. The last one standing will be given a prize check (yet to be decided) and the right to call themselves the best fighter in world.

Characters ( all the MC that make an appearance in the first chapter )
Gunner Akamura (17) - MMC parents died when he was only 13 and has a older brother who runs his family Boxing School, his dad was the former World # 1 Boxer Cyrus Akamura. has brown hair and black eyes. Usually where a lot of ripped clothes and always as his hands tapped for a fight. Blames himself for his parents accident. Fight with all of his might never back down from a challenge
Azumi Itazumi (16) - MFC Azumi has known Gunner since she they were born and both were family business partners when her dad was Cyrus's Manager. Black hair with a bit of red and brown eyes. She has a really bad habit of talking too much.
Ren Akamura (25) - Gunner's older brother he raise Gunner when he was 21 when the parents died in a car accident and now runs the Akamura Family Boxing School. Brown Hair and Blue Eyes. Has a paralyzed left arm and worries about Gunner but Gunner think that Ren is holding him back.
Kazuma Suzuki (18) - Abandon by his parent when he was 2 and left on a churches door. He made a promise to himself that he would get his revenge on his true parents when he finds them. Black hair and green eyes has a x scar under his right eye.



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Manga Artists Wanted / (Collab) Looking for artist
« on: February 11, 2015, 02:59:45 PM »
Hi I'm Looking for a artist who can partner up for a series or two. I've been writing for over 2 years and I've had couple flopped ideas.

Synopsis: Will to Fight is the story of Gunner Akamura who's Osaka best Fighter, he is invited to join an international Fighting tournament called the Will to Fight where he has to survive in a dome with the some worlds best fighter. The last one standing will be given a prize check (yet to be decided) and the right to call themselves the best fighter in world.

Characters ( all the major ones the appear in the chapter )
Gunner Akamura (17) - MMC parents died when he was only 13 and has a older brother who runs his family Boxing School, his dad was the former World # 1 Boxer Cyrus Akamura. has brown hair and black eyes. Usually where a lot of ripped clothes and always has his hands tapped for a fight. Blames himself for his parents accident. Fight with all of his might never back down from a challenge.
Azumi Itazumi (16) - MFC Azumi has known Gunner since she they were born and both were family business partners when her dad was Cyrus's Manager. Black hair with a bit of red and brown eyes. She has a really bad habit of talking too much.
Ren Akamura (25) - Gunner's older brother he raise Gunner when he was 21 when the parents died in a car accident and now runs the Akamura Family Boxing School. Brown Hair and Blue Eyes. Has a paralyzed left arm and worries about Gunner but Gunner think that Ren is holding him back.
Kazuma Suzuki (18) - Abandon by his parent when he was 2 and left on a churches door. He made a promise to himself that he would get his revenge on his true parents when he finds them. Black hair and green eyes. Has a x scar under his right eye when he was beaten up by two bullies when he was six and one of them left a deep mark  with his nail, now he calls it his mark of strength

Preview

Scene 1: In a back alley where we see a man bleeding on ground knocked out and another on the ground who has shadowy figure with the sun blasting from behind the shadowy figure. A another man who looks like a to be a friend of the guy that bleeding pops from outside the alley and he starts to charge and at shadowy figure. The shadowy figure notices and turns catches a punch. The shadowy figure turns around start to crush the friends fist and with great strength hip tosses the friend over, he start look down on the injured man and his friend

???: Tell your boss my full name Gunner Shinjiro Akamura Protector of this area.

One of the guy stands up try to swing again at Gunner. Once again counters the attack from behind and this applies a hold that could break his arm . The thug try to reach for a pipe that lying on the ground and Gunner sees the pipe

Gunner: NO!

The Thug continue to try to reach the pipe

Gunner: NO!

The thug try reach for the pipe.

Gunner: NO!!!

Gunner lets him go and tosses to the wall and quickly grab the pipe and in one motion hit him with a big swing with the Pipe. the thug goes flying and blood start drip from the pipe that Gunner hit him with.

Gunner: You should have listened.

Gunner start to walk away from the scene. He walks right up to a man who's scared.

Gunner: This is one free next time I’m charging you. Here’s my number anytime you need protection call me.

Gunner hands the man a paper with his number and continues to walk away.

Man: Thank you!!

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what I recommend is have at least  have the setting first made then I do kind of like the idea have more important part  planned out on the page

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Looks great but it be more useful if you right in full format and explain the scene to the reader here's an Example from my project

EX : in a back alley where we see a man bleeding on one knee and another on the ground who has shadowy figure with the sun blasting from behind the shadowy figure. A another man who looks like a to be a friend of the guy that bleeding pops from outside the alley and he starts to charge and at shadowy figure. The shadowy figure notices and turns catches a punch. The shadowy figure turns around start to crush the friends fist and with great strength hip tosses the friend over, he start look down on the injured man and his friend


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Develop Your Story / Will To Fight (Tips would great)
« on: February 09, 2015, 05:03:41 PM »
Scene 1: In a back alley where we see a man bleeding on one knee and another on the ground who has shadowy figure with the sun blasting from behind the shadowy figure. A another man who looks like a to be a friend of the guy that bleeding pops from outside the alley and he starts to charge and at shadowy figure. The shadowy figure notices and turns catches a punch. The shadowy figure turns around start to crush the friends fist and with great strength hip tosses the friend over, he start look down on the injured man and his friend

???: Tell your boss my full name Gunner Shinjiro Akamura Protector of this area.

One of the guy stands up try to swing again at Gunner. Once again counters the attack from behind and this applies a hold that could break his arm . The thug try to reach for a pipe that lying on the ground and Gunner sees the pipe

Gunner: NO!

The Thug continue to try to reach the pipe

Gunner: NO!

The thug try reach for the pipe.

Gunner: NO!!!

Gunner lets him go and tosses to the wall and quickly grab the pipe and in one motion hit him with a big swing with the Pipe. the thug goes flying and blood start drip from the pipe that Gunner hit him with.

Gunner: You should have listened.

More on the way and I'm looking for an experience writer you could mentor me and just give me tips

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Develop Your Story / Re: Xross-Card
« on: December 12, 2014, 02:38:26 PM »
well I'm trying to use historic hero's with a new twist to them

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Develop Your Story / Re: Xross-Card
« on: December 12, 2014, 01:53:38 PM »
things like this tend to get too complex to tell and usually its never the story that is the appeal. For things like yu-gi-oh, bakugan, beyblade, and pokemon, its more about the cards, beyblades, bakugan, and pokemon that people like.

But regardless, there's still things you're trying to sell to us that we can't exactly imagine. there's a lack of simplicity to it too and theres no isnt of even attempting to be iconic the way Yu-gi-oh and pokemon does it.

there's no strong theme either.
Being Iconic like Yu-Gi-Oh will be tough but I will try to make it to surpass it

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Develop Your Story / Re: Xross-Card
« on: December 12, 2014, 01:44:23 PM »
Idk, but it looks to me like this is somekind of a mixture between deal masters and cardight vanguard.
Although the game itself looks pretty average, if you have a good plot, this could turn to a thing. Just don't use the "Theyware winning, then they lose, then come back again and win" plot, it's a little overused.
The deck types, the Alexand the Great specifically, look kinda cool, but you need to be sure they are balanced enough.
Well after Fate/Zero Alexander the Great got no much love

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Develop Your Story / Re: Killing fate (ongoing writing)
« on: December 12, 2014, 01:43:03 PM »
that what I meant

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Develop Your Story / Re: Killing fate (ongoing writing)
« on: December 11, 2014, 02:35:15 PM »
it's really good but the minor mistake but I still enjoyed

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Develop Your Story / Xross-Card
« on: December 10, 2014, 05:18:22 PM »


Synopsis: Shin Rama is a Junior High Student who stays away from people until he is introduced to the popular card game called Xross-Card by Senior classmate Kenji Nakamura. where in this game the power of bonds is the key to success.Meeting new friends he starts to aim to being the best Xross-Card player.

Rules of the game:
-Each Player must have a deck of 50 cards.
-Each will start with 5 cards in their starting hand.
-Every turn each player will draw a card and then they’ll have the choice of a charge(in the charge zone) a card in their hand and draw a new card.
-the charge zone will be used to pay the cost of their cards abilities. 
-when you want to start the game you must place a your deck’s level 0 hero on the field.
-they’re four phase in this game Level Phase, Main, Attack, End.
-In the level Phase up level up your hero to the next stage. they’re 6 levels (0,1,2,3,4,5,X). you only obtain Level X through pay your 4 charge card or 5 if you want activate they’re Level Up abilities and you can use level X if you’re Level 5 hero.
-In the Main Phase you call allies to the battlefield you may only have 5 cards on the field nothing including your Hero or Equipment.They’re your hero’s Frontline of protection. you place equipment on the battlefield for your hero/allies to use.
-In the Attack phase you can attack your opponent’s hero Allies or Hero. Your Level 0 can’t attack. If you go first you cannot attack.to block your opponent’s attack you can use your allies with a shield on the bottom right or destroy your equipment to nullify the attack. each attack can deal one damage.

How to win the Match
1. to attack and successfully eliminate the 10 Heart counters.   
2. your opponent is out of cards to draw
3. if your opponent surrenders.

Main Characters and Clans
(M)Shin Rama: 16 and shy,Black Hair and blue eyes, uses clan called Knights of The World. Main Hero Alexander the Great. Play to meet different types of people
(M)Kenji Nakamura: 17 and serious, Red Hair and Black eyes, uses clan called Dragons of the Underworld.Best Hero Dallarth Lord of Fir.Gets really Serious when in a match
(M)Hikari Akiyama:18 and Caring, Blonde Hair and Aqua eyes, uses clan Gods and Goddesses of the Universe.Best Hero Kaya-Nu-Hima. Act like an Older Sister to Shin and Rinku
Rinku Watanabe:13 and Cocky.Brown Hair and Black eyes.Uses clan called the Samurai of Destiny. Best Hero Toyotomi Hideyoshi. Claim to be Kenji biggest rival.


Currently Looking for an artist to work with me on this.

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Develop Your Story / YCSA (Preview)
« on: December 08, 2014, 04:28:19 PM »
Scene 1:
A Loud Screams start the Scene off with a woman running in the dark alley her breath exhausted from the running , right behind her a man whose face you couldn’t see because of the dimmed lighting in the area carrying a Knife in his pockets. The woman arrives at a dead end.“Please don’t kill me I won’t tell anyone about this.” the woman begging.

“Yeah right we can’t trust anyone now a days,so get ready to join her on the Death list“ Said the Shadowy Man as he takes out his knife from his pocket.
The woman tries to hit the man with her purse but the Shadowy man grabs the purse and start her stabs her in her chest multiple times.

3 Days later

Scene 2:
Scene start in the streets of tokyo with the sun blazing hot and two cops dragging a kid in handcuffs, Suddenly the kid breaks free from the cops.
“Hey get that kid!” a Cop yelling. As a kid start to the run toward the roof of the a building. “Damn this to easy they don’t make cops like they used to,right guys? Said the kid,running away from the two police officer. The kid starts jump from roof to roof with no care of getting hurt

“What are you waiting a please call the chief already” said the on one of the cops.”He’s the only one who can catch Ken Ishizu” the said the cop said again. Ken stops for a moment “ You Really think that Chief Ishikawa can catch me.” Yelled Ken .
“You must be joking that guy is nothing more old timer who needs to learn the word Retirement”.

“So Ken who needs to learn the word retirement?” Said a tall old man behind him. Ken turn around and it was Chief Ishikawa.
”Hey Ishikawa haven’t you heard that it’s bad to sneak up on people” said Ken to the Chief . Ken try to run away from the Chief but Ishikawa grabs Ken’s hand. “ Ken,you know you can’t beat the law.”
“Who needs to beat the law when I can run from it” said Ken.
"Ken I Have a better plan for you something that doesn't involves Jail time". Said Ishikawa
Ken sits down and think about it.Ken sees vision about what it be, in his vision he sees walking 20 dog or working in a Restaurant without rest .
“No way count me out I’m not gonna Walk 20 dogs” Ken Said as he get up.
Ishikawa looks surprised at Ken and is trying to figure out why he said something like that.
“Ken you’re an Idiot and I don’t think walking dogs is a good punishment in the Youth Justice committee and Let’s go already we’re already late ” said the Chief Ishikawa.

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Manga Creations / WBR(World Battle Royale)
« on: October 09, 2014, 03:05:19 PM »
Chapter 1

Setting: A Back Alley of a Street with Gunner standing tall in victory and a thug is on one knee and is bleeding from the fight
Gunner: Come on is this the best you got
Another thug comes in
Thug 2: hey what did our ever gang do to you?
Gunner: Nothing but what you did to the owner of this shop is a different story
Thug 2: so you this places protector
Gunner: Nope I’m just a fighter for hire and now I’m going to make you look like your friend
Thug 2 is looking at his friend
Thug 2: let’s go, where the *censored* did he go   
Gunner: Up here Ass
Gunner drop down from up top hits the thug with a heel kick. The thug falls on his face
Gunner: Well that settle that and don’t you two or anyone from your gang come here or else
Gunner walks away from the area and returns to his home

Setting Gunner’s home, which is also a boxing school
Gunner: I’m Home Kato (gunner’s Cat)
Kato: Meow
Gunner: Don’t worry I bought your food
Kato: Meow (Happy one)
Gunner: yeah it was kind of low priced so I bought, let see the mail. Bill, bill, bill, junk, sweet something that isn’t bill.

Gunner opens the mail in it is a DVD. Gunner puts the DVD in his laptop
A man is in the movie appears
Roku Kuroshiji: Hello Mr.Akamura you have been selected to participate in the up coming International Martial Arts tournament called World Battle Royale where you will have a chance represent Japan against some the world best fighters but before that you must participate in the qualifying tournament happening in your Country’s Capitol Tokyo in 2 months. You must be thinking who I’ am, I’m Roku Kuroshiji and I’m the tournament host. And I have heard about fighting abilities you’re the son Shinji Akamura the Former Number One Boxer in the world and from my deepest place in my heart I’m sad to hear about his death.

The Video ends
Gunner: Kato let’s book our ticket to Tokyo
Kato: Meow (while wearing a pair of sunglasses)
Gunner: We aren’t going now; now let’s get some sleep

Next Morning at his high school
Gunner: haven’t been here in a while
As he’s walking to class a girl walks up to him
Azumi: good morning Gunner
Gunner: Same to you
Azumi: where have you been for the last week?
Gunner: it’s none of your business
Azumi: as class president it’s my duty to know why you weren’t coming to school
Gunner: let me go to class
Azumi: No
Bell rings
Gunner: Know I’m late, thanks
Azumi: It’s not my fault you wouldn’t tell me.
Gunner: now let go to class already

They both rush to class. At lunch Gunner is having lunch by himself
Gunner: I really need to learn how to cook
Azumi: Hey Gunner mind if I join you for lunch
Gunner: If I say no will you go away?
Azumi: No
Gunner: then sure
Azumi: thanks, what do you have
Gunner: Fish & rice
Azumi: You always have that
Gunner: Well it not like I own a private chef like your family does
Azumi: how do me being rich have to do with my lunch?
Gunner: Well at least you have a family; all I have is Kato with me
Azumi: Now I remember, it was your parent’s death anniversary last week
Gunner: Thanks, for remembering
They both quiet down
Azumi: well let’s change topics I heard this morning by someone that you’re leaving Osaka in 2 months for a trip, can I know why.
Gunner: There is an International Fight tournament being hosted in Tokyo, I’m going to participate in there to represent Japan by winning the qualifying tournament (Serious mood)
Azumi: But why do you want to fight you can get hurt
Gunner: Well to make my Dad’s dream he wanted me to be the best fighters in the world.
Azumi: if you’re joining then I will to
Gunner: Why? I told you my reason what yours
Azumi: Well someone has to take of you
Gunner: but can you fight?
Azumi: If you teach me sure
Gunner: Sure why not, I’ll teach you
Azumi: Thanks Gunner
Gunner: it’s Gunner Sensei to you 
Azumi: Ok Sensei when do get started
Gunner: How about Next Monday
Azumi: Sure
Bells Ring
Gunner: Let’s get to class
Gunner and Azumi run for the door

During that time the two thugs that were beaten-up by Gunner are at their base
Thug 1: Kazuma Sir
Kazuma: What Happened?
Thug 2: this guy named Gunner Akamura attacked us yesterday when went to get protection money from the shop on 3rd Street
Kazuma: And you’re telling me this now
Thug 1: we were in the hospital for the night sir
Kazuma: well show me where this guy lives
Thug 1 & 2: yes sir

As Gunner is walking home from school he sees his house door broken and all messed up with windows broken and runs to his home and sees Kazuma and the two thugs he beaten up.
Gunner: you two I told you don’t come near this area
Kazuma: you told them not me
Gunner:  who are you and what do you want
Kazuma: the name is Kazuma Suzuki and I challenge you to a fight
Gunner: And why should I accept your challenge?
Kazuma snaps his fingers and a thug pulls an out cage with Kato in it
Gunner: Kato, you leave him out of this.
Kazuma: And if you try to stop us you can says bye to your cat forever
Gunner: When and Where?
Kazuma: Under Toriyumi Bridge at 1:00 pm tomorrow
Kazuma and his thugs leave his house 
Gunner gets into serious mood. Gunner picks up is cell phone and dial Azumi number
Gunner: Hey Azumi its Gunner I wanted to tell I’m not coming to school
Azumi: Why what happened
Gunner: I got kick some guys ass


Thanks Reading and your Responses I will Update every 4 Days

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