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MR Pub / Re: Chit Chat 2018
« on: April 20, 2018, 02:00:51 PM »

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Members Manga / Re: Swords Like Gods
« on: April 20, 2018, 01:59:43 PM »
(nobody respects the scroll anymore)

Well, I could definitely follow it better than the last chapter. Probably helps that you didn't completely fill the scene with people. There was definitely some character overload last time. But I liked it. You could have maybe devoted a little more time to the old dude's one winged angel transformation. As is, it's like he just kinda pops into it, comical sound effect and all.

Oh, and as the meme goes: "stupid idiot dies from two gunshot wounds". Bullet cutting is cool, but still completely impractical.

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Manga Creations / Re: Quest!: A MangaRaiders Story
« on: April 20, 2018, 10:12:30 AM »
Thanks Eukocar! I'm hoping it will be funny the whole way through. I'm digging deep into my training to keep this one consistent. Can't let myself get too serious.

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Manga Creations / Re: MRverse: The Return of the Drifter
« on: April 20, 2018, 07:44:33 AM »
Lego you're too much of a good for that. We give you any more pensive looks and it'll open a singularity.

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Anime Talk / Re: Which Anime series you are watching ?
« on: April 20, 2018, 07:42:44 AM »
@tzefa: that would explain the look. That's neat though, I've never heard of that technique before. I'd like to see it used more.

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Members Manga / Re: Swords Like Gods
« on: April 20, 2018, 07:40:52 AM »
Dude your images are too small to read comfortably.i have no idea what's going on, let alone if the flow is good. I'll wait for the finished product for that. No sense putting the cart before the horse.

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Manga Creations / Re: MRverse: The Return of the Drifter
« on: April 19, 2018, 11:13:58 PM »
Alright, let's get into this bad boy. (I've elected to do a light review. Hope you don't mind.)


- "blonde" not "blond"

- this feels like a final fantasy cutscene

- Oh man, I actually just came across a sick cover of this song as a screamo song. Hardly fits the mood, but good nonetheless. Maybe like 10 minutes earlier.

- you capitalized "nostalgic" in the middle of the sentence. (On purpose?)

- it's still my last name. Don't forget it. *Sunglasses. Explosion*

- Everyone gather in the open field for the feelings jam. Drinks to be served after. (But seriously, I like to think we're all family here. Anything you need. (Alright, real talk over. That music got me feeling though.))

- keep leaving hairs behind like that and you might really go bald buddy. JK jk.

-Had (it not) been it a telegraphed strike,

- if you were sitting on the edge of a skyscraper thinker style, wouldn't jumping to your feet lead to a Willey Coyote style fall?

- Hmmm... that fighters club does sound awfully familiar. Wonder where I might have heard of it before

- And to be fair, I'd definitely hit up your bar if you added black cherry to your offerings

- Never refer to something as a scheme. It makes people feel uncomfortable. Great joke though. And honestly "Fighters Division" does sound rad as hell.

- To be fair, the Science Division only really starts below grade. 2D maps aren't everything.

- You got to get me in as an honorary sensei at least though. My muscles are still fleshy after all (OMG you would not believe what my phone wanted to correct "fle" to. What the f*ck phone). I digress. I bet I could still show the kids a thing or two. Even without fantastic powers.

- They're already subject to the terms and conditions (y'all really  should read those). But it's always nice to have willing volunteers.

- forwarding? Forward thinking perhaps?



Closing thoughts: I think it was actually better without the fight. Sometimes it's much better to show less. Without it the chapter flows much more naturally. Given the conversational nature of the rest of the chapter, it was a very smart decision. Even unindented changes can be for the best after all.

I'm honored you put so much time into thinking about my speech patterns. I hope I don't come off as too stern though. I'm trying to ease up on that and incorporate more of my little colloquisms, but I still like my dry wit, even if it doesn't translate well through text. (Somewhere, someone laughs at the notion that I actually have wit)

And don't worry, I'll only provide the latest training equipment. No deathtraps for the young'uns I promise  :D (those are for the advanced classes)



Over all I really liked this chapter. Felt very good and natural. Maybe it's because I'm doing it recently too, but you got to take time and explore those quiet, mundane moments. They're often more compelling than grand fight scenes, even if they aren't the center of attention.

Can't wait for the conclusion!

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Members Manga / Re: Swords Like Gods
« on: April 19, 2018, 10:29:38 PM »
I like to imagine them all moving really fast and with helium voices.

So at what rate is it taking you to go from storyboard to finished page?

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Comics and other Gallery / Re: My first time drawing in years
« on: April 19, 2018, 09:58:34 PM »
Hey now, "Read" is a great message to spread to the people of *insert your home town here*.

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Manga Writer workshop / Re: Origin Stories!
« on: April 19, 2018, 09:55:47 PM »
This is a topic for actual prose HaKhan. For stories set within the framework of a shared universe that we've built. Not for rants about animator quality.

And as I've said to you before. This is a forum for people who are looking to learn. Not a farm for talent. The post rule is to keep people from rushing right in to that kind of nonsense, and getting them to actually contribute to the community. We are not a platform simply for promoting your brand. There are plenty of other sites for that sort of thing.

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Anime Talk / Re: Politics of Anime
« on: April 19, 2018, 09:45:30 PM »
Well, if I recall my history correctly, Japan has something of a tenuous past with the Mongols. We do see plenty of media coverage for their own conquering warlords though. You can't throw a stone without striking a show about Oda.

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Manga Art Gallery / Re: - The Drawings of a Mushroom -
« on: April 19, 2018, 09:38:50 PM »
That's Milo. Don't disrespect. Atlantis the film is itself a lost treasure.

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MR Pub / Re: Chit Chat 2018
« on: April 19, 2018, 09:37:40 PM »
We mostly say just "America" around here. I know "the states" used to be popular when you were out in the territories though (before statehood). So I have to wonder if it's just used by those who aren't here, or in that context.

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@HaKhan: Okay man, I'm giving you a strike for that one. You can't just go railing on a whole community of people like that. We've all got personal opinions, but when it comes to the hateful one's, either keep them to yourself or get out.

Our rules are pretty clear about this. So stay on notice.

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Welcome Center / Re: Hi
« on: April 18, 2018, 10:15:43 PM »
Welcome to MR! The best way to attract artists is to get your story posted so people can read it, and to review art and make some friends. We're a forum for learning not a site for driving commissions after all.

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