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Manga Talk / Strange Dream
« on: March 31, 2019, 09:44:37 AM »
Okay, so I just had the strangest dream and I don't know whether or not to try and make a story out of it.  So basically these different unexplainable disasters keep happening such as jets crashing, poisonous gas being released through broken pipes in a large multi-story commercial building, etc. all occurring in one city as far as my dream had shown and all of it is the result of a human-like creature who can kill a large group of people by removing the "essence" of their hearts and crushing it in his hand causing the people to implode.  It is a weird dream I know but I'm curious as to what people may think of this and if it is manga worthy.


Develop Your Story / Re: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« on: March 29, 2019, 09:28:57 PM »
Action is actually a good friend of mine haha.  He's a funny guy. :D

Hey man. Don't take it seriously. The "It has to be original Man!" mindset is not good for a writer/creates. You will never create anything if you think like that. I heard someone say people who think like that are too much of a cynic to create something themselves. He was talking about internet reviewers, I think part of it applies here.
Nothing is original and every story already been made. Everything under the sun yada yada

The story just has to be entertaining. A while back there was this webcomic. The main character looked like Luffy in a blue wig and he had a demon wolf inside of him, It was one of the top mangas on the site. If that creator thought It has to be original he will not have made it, but he did make it and people enjoyed it.
A little bit of originality helps just don't get hung up on it. So yea, just create something.
I'll leave a quote from a guy called Action

" I never went around to drawing the idea that I had since junior high/high school. I’m afraid that it’s too similar to other series that became popular, but I can’t think of anything else."

this mindset plagues many creative minds ^^

and sadly its digs so deep many storys are left untold^^

there is a fine line between a Reskin and similaritys

a reskin is just a story told in the exact same way as a existing story but only

renamed or altered in a very small way that changes nothing

basically is a story that takes another story but calling it your own

a similar story
is just a tale told in your own way with elements of what you loved in other storys put on paper

for example
if you like Fairy Tale's feeling of family and Guild quests
then just use those elements

create a cast of charaters that feel real and have chemistry with one another

the guild quest is just a excuse to go on adventures

so then you would just have to write a goal for your MC to travel
could be to just help others along the way
could be to discover parts unknown
could be to solve something of the past

who knows

having a original idea does not ensure success in fact most new ideas try to hard to display what they are

and forget to display who their cast even is

leaving them with no character and above all

boring ^^

me personally, as long as the cast is enjoyable to follow and make me invested

i don't care if its in the most cliche generic story that every exist

it will always be better then a brand new idea but with a cast I don't care to find-out if they succeed or fail

but thats just me^^   


Manga Writers wanted / Collaboration Project: Beyond Realms Comic
« on: March 29, 2019, 11:36:22 AM »
Hey guys! I'm looking for a collaboration crew consisting of a few inspiring writers who have some knowledge and skill in writing medieval fantasy based comics/novels.  This comic will be based on one of many histories in the MMORPG game "Beyond Realms" which is being developed.  I have a potential artist who is drawing out the characters I need so my next step is getting a team together to create the most engaging comic for the game.  If you are interested and want to see a summary of the idea please contact me asap.

I am in need of the following specific types of writers:
* Someone who is experienced in making readers fall out of their seats by creating hilarious moments and dialogue
* Someone who can influence readers and their need to find out what happens next through the use of unseen twists and turns in a storyline
* Someone who can capture the hearts of the readers with scenes that portray a relatable sense of sorrow, joy, anger, love, etc.
* Lastly, I need at least one writer, preferably female, who can perfectly portray how a female would act and what they would say depending on their personality for any female characters that may appear in the story.

This first comic will not have much of any split written assignments and its plot is already set and will mainly focus on one script but the second comic will have multiple scripts and it would be nice to have formed a cooperative team before that point.  This collaboration will not be paid but if it begins to bring in revenue you will get payment at that point. Let me know if you are interested.

So, to recap, I need a total of 3-5 individuals for a collaborative written comic script, who have experience in writing Medieval Fantasy based stories.

Develop Your Story / Re: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« on: March 19, 2019, 11:11:29 PM »
You do realize you are making wild accusations based on your previous history of what you have seen, don't you?  When I wrote this, I wrote it entirely from my head.  All of those movies or whatever you mentioned I've never even heard of and yet you have the gall to call me a plagiarist?  How am "I" supposed to know that what I write has already been made?  I could care less about that.  I want to create something that sounds cool and when I wrote this it sounded cool and something I haven't seen yet so I'd want to see it created.  If I spend time watching anime's and reading manga's back to back I am much more likely to accidentally plagiarize based on what I have seen because it will then be all I can think about.  So, I stick to using my own imagination and this is what I came up with.

Oh boy, tough crowd. I guess neither of these ideas are quite what anyone is looking for LOL I guess I'll keep at it.
No, I'm the tough crowd.

Seven college individuals, all with entirely different personalities and nothing in common, become friends
You are stealing from Hollywood's septic tank. What you are plagiarizing is not human behavior. People like people who are like themselves and dislike people who are different. That was the idea behind The Breakfast Club and all the other garbage that copied it.
after receiving a suspicious note offering them a chance at a new life full of power and riches.
We have all Seen Enter the Dragon and everything that stole from it.
Each deals with the offer in their own way and they all eventually accept the proposal until one of them vanishes.  One after the next, they start to disappear from existence.
Dead horse, stop beating it.
When they awaken, they are inside some sort of stasis chamber filled with water (not sure what they are called ;P).  The room is empty and dark as they all come to.  One of them manages to break free of the chamber and releases the others.
we have only seen this 2-3,000x. Stop plagiarizing.

However, they begin to feel a dark presence surrounding them; watching them.  What they do not realize is that their lost friend is still very much alive and very angry.  They later discover that he was not killed but rather placed back into his chamber so that these scientists could continue their project of making controllable superhumans.  The lost friend is no longer responsive and his abilities have been heightened.
Larry sacrifices himself to save his friends and then hates his friends for it? When you steal please try to understand what you are stealing.
Larry sacrificed himself because he it was worth it to him to save his friends. HE DOESN'T HATE THEM LATER FOR IT. That is another bit that is stolen from "friend left behind"

Hey look scientists trying to give enemies super human powers rather than give them to themselves/cronies!..
Seen that a billion times and it is STUPID every time I see it re-plagiarized.

We can go through your work line by line and point out other plagiarists you stole from. If you want to impress bring us something new and not things we have seen other people steal before.
This is of course if you want to make something good.
If you just want to make something successful, go to TV Tropes, look up Shonen anime, and use it as a template. Steal steal steal, and remember you can have any amount of stupid as long is it milks the emotions.

As it is none of this piece is yours. All of it is other people's Legos. In Hollywood/anime it is all about copying. In the real world it is about creating.

And now you know what the tough crowd really is.

Anime Talk / Re: Which Anime series you are watching ?
« on: January 22, 2019, 09:15:30 PM »
I am watching food wars. I hate to cook myself, but after watching I feel like I should go and cook. The plot is a bit usual but has good interpretation. Imagine fighting tournament, where people use not weapon, but dishes. Yes, that's it.

Foooood fiiiiiiight!

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Walter's Gallery
« on: January 22, 2019, 09:14:44 PM »
Why does it feel like he always successfully evades? Lol

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Rusinstein's Illustrations
« on: January 22, 2019, 09:13:39 PM »
That softball drawing is amazing! The realism mixed with anime design is incredible.

Anime Talk / Re: Which Anime series you are watching ?
« on: January 10, 2019, 12:57:54 PM »
If there is nothing supernatural or kickass about it I pass on them XD

Develop Your Story / Spirit War - Manga Comic Series Project
« on: January 08, 2019, 02:55:11 AM »
Hey guys,  this summary below is a personal project of mine.  Right now I could use as much input and ideas to add as possible but soon I am looking to turn this into a Manga Comic Series and will need the help of anyone and everyone willing and interested enough to step up and envision a great Manga from this idea.  Writers and artists will be welcomed.  However, everything will be without payment, at least, until I can afford to pay anyone so I do not care how well you write as long as you give me great ideas and I don't care how well you draw as long as it is visibly recognizable by the community and they can really get a kick out of the artwork and not turn their eyes to something else because they are looking at something that looks like a toddler drew. XD  Anyways, I look forward to working alongside anyone who comes to me, interested in this project.  See ya around! (If you have a discord, let me know your username)

Spirit War

A bloody, century-long war took place between two colonies, the Devarii and the El'gora.  Both sides fought a brutal battle led by a Spirit Warrior who was able to use their own life force to release mythical creatures from the spirit world to fight alongside them.  These two spirit warriors had perfected the art of spirit communication called Realm Binding and unlocked the ability to release spirit entities of unknown origin both of good and evil.

Both warriors fought long and hard even after the soldiers from both sides retreated. The ground began to shift and the earth’s surface began to crack. The longer the spirits fought the more exhausted the warriors became.  This exhaustion caused their bodies to age drastically and it would have, eventually, led to their souls being bound and locked away in the Spirit Realm for eternity.  The Spirit Realm is not only a place where spirits can live and grow but also a prison for dangerous souls who sought to control what can not be controlled.

The warrior of light drew back before this could happen because he knew that the power was not his to wield.  However, the dark warrior did not feel the same way and wanted more; but before he could land his finishing strike his soul was immediately ripped from his chest and his body turned to dust.  The beastly spirit that had been corrupted by the dark energy of its spirit host was also cast away never to be seen or heard from again.

Good had triumphed over evil and the people of the Earth lived in peace for 12 years. Unfortunately, peace is not something that lasts forever. An apprentice of the dark spirit warrior continued, in secret, to study, train, and pass on the lessons he learned from his Master.  This young man found a way to consume others spirit creatures to strengthen his own stripping any spirit warriors of their abilities and, as was done to his Master, ripping out their souls and making his abilities stronger.

After that fateful day, many dark apprentices of this man had begun to devour the world and conquer it with their abilities.  The spirit warrior who defeated the evil long ago trained 7 individuals in all he knew before he passed away of old age. They called themselves The Knights of the Spirit Realm but they failed to find a way to counteract this new dark ability and one after the next, each great Spirit Knight fell to the hands of this dark warrior. 

Luckily, they had found a way to separate their souls from their bodies and did so moments before he could take them.  These souls held the very essence of their Master and were the only way this evil warrior could reach superiority to cause a ripple in space opening a pathway into the Spirit Realm where he would consume every last one of the spirit creatures and become the most powerful being in the universe.  When he realized that the bodies were emptied of their souls he was enraged and, in his anger, he levelled the entire city where the Knights of the Spirit Realm had lived killing every last one of the Spirit warriors ever trained; or so he thought.

He returned to his own city and declared an all-out war on the entire planet. Domination was his goal and destruction was his pleasure. Seeing these disasters unfold and knowing how strong this one enemy was, the rest of the world came together to fend off the rising evil and succeeded for years.  However, they were all running out of soldiers and resources and started to cause emotional and highly destructive civil warfare within the boundaries of the alliance. The relationship between all nations of the Earth was about to crumble until a young man approached the frontlines and revealed himself as the last living Spirit Warrior.  Though, still having much to learn, he manages to shake the enemy and cause them to retreat.

However, he also noticed, after the battle, that there were no dark spirit warriors connected to these spirit creatures.  They had been created and then sent out without a warrior to control them. They were more reckless and most of them would fight to the death.  They were being controlled, somehow, by someone strong enough to separate themselves from the creatures causing them to rampage.

The battle may have been over but the war had yet to begin for as soon as the dark warrior discovered of this warrior of light that had survived the onslaught he was not going to let this boy interrupt his plans.  He begins by sending his apprentices, one at a time, to destroy this young man and, eventually, he finds a way to defeat them all. By the time he has to step up and take care of this young man who threatens his plans, he has learned that he has been gifted with all of the souls of the Knights of the Spirit Realm which, in turn, allows him to become stronger every time he defeats a corrupt host.

Entering into the result of the battle, they finally reach a stalemate until the young man is gifted with one more ability.  To call forth all creatures from the Spirit Realm. However, what the young man doesn’t realize is that he just saved his enemy the trouble of consuming his soul in order to reach the realm and take the power of all of the creatures.  He erupts in fire and as his skin melts off of his bones he is reborn as a Spirit Demon. He begins devouring every spirit being around him as the young man tries to counter it but with no such luck.

It then comes down to his personal spirit entity and this demon lord.  The young boy pushes hard to fight off the demon and the harder he fights the weaker he gets.  He begins to age fast and falls onto his hands and knees as his only spirit entity is consumed. The demon laughs menacingly and says some things to the young man. However, when the demon tries to take his soul he is shocked heavily and shot back a ways. Coming back with an angry roar the demon is about to put everything into one last strike on the boy but then the 7 Knights appear and surround the young man.

A light shoots out from his body and connects with the body of the demon.  The spirit creatures are ripped out of the demon and returned to the young man.  Afterwards, the demon becomes wild as it begins to grow in size. The evil warrior who became the demon was no longer inside.  His soul was destroyed and now all that is left is a rampaging beast with even more power. The young boy, with the help of the 7 knights, bring every last spirit creature together to form a giant spirit entity of unknown origin. 

The last battle begins and the young boy is victorious.  Yet, again, peace only came for a time because after a few decades a creature landed on the planet.  One, whose aim was to travel to the Spirit Realm and destroy it leaving only the Demon Realm that would corrupt all life and cause chaos that would wipe the universe from existence.

break Room / Re: The Status Of Our Fellow Raiders
« on: January 07, 2019, 01:58:53 PM »
Im gonna add here that I noticed that there are 111 pages of members on this website yet i hardly ever see any activity.  Im curious as to why this is.  I have posted up some things and would be nice to be able to get some feedback on them whatever feedback it may be just so I know that this forum isnt dead.  Maybe something that i can do to get more people on here to see my topic and be like "this is interesting enough to post a response on".

break Room / Re: The Status Of Our Fellow Raiders
« on: January 07, 2019, 10:21:14 AM »
I guess that goes for my manga ideas to? Huh? better step up my game LOL

Wow seems alot of things have changed with us and this little forum we call home^^
Plans delayed
Dreams escalated
Still happy many of you are kicking around
As for our little team Animation still has 2 years in the marine's before he is finally free  so hopefully his drive returns
And I?
About the same, actully I think I hit burnout
So I been lurking in the shadows of forums reading storys here and there, looking for new anime or manga to get that drive back.

Sadly not much has peaked my intrest, so its been rather boring haha

Got a new job/career as a semi truck driver so at least thereis that

Manga Art Gallery / Re: Walter's Gallery
« on: January 06, 2019, 04:07:09 PM »
Props XD That was actually funny XD

New Year Party:

Happy New Year Mangaraiders!

Develop Your Story / Re: My Manga Ideas - Free To Take
« on: January 06, 2019, 03:47:29 PM »
New Ideas Added.

Develop Your Story / Re: Sorcery-Type Manga Idea
« on: January 05, 2019, 06:29:54 PM »
This can be deleted.

Develop Your Story / Re: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« on: January 05, 2019, 06:29:16 PM »
This can be deleted.

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