Okay so I finally got around to reading this and man I'm so happy that I did! This was a job well done, Lego. Lots of suspense and chest clenching moments. I'm also glad this continuation explained the reasoning behind the events of the original black pine. Really tied the whole thing together nicely. Also, badass Kajin was right: This really did feel like a video game.
However, I was still disappointed with your character's death. When I finished reading that part I said to myself, "Of course the black guy dies first. He always does!" Lol.
And with this finally checked off, I think I may have read every canon story written by you my good friend. Reading your work is certainly always a pleasure and I do hope to see more of it!
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Psssst! Lego if you ever decide to do a sequel of this be sure to include ya boy ;)
Damn, son. Don't you know zombies eat you when you dig up graves?
You deserve a medal for this, truly. That's some titan effort right there. Wait, definitely not telling you to do anything about it but did you already read Dystop? Because that's still part of my canon literature.
I feel super motivated to make more now. And hah! I loved that death scene man. It was hilarious. And haha! I didn't even know I was going for the black guy thing till you mentioned it. To be fair, a lot of people already bit it waaay before the raiders came in to check stuff out.
I wanted Black Pine to be video-game like on purpose. From the chapter titles to the speed to the convenient challenges the characters face in every 'level'.
Cheers again Frono!
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Haha if. And that's a huuge if. If there's a sequel sure, I'll write you in the sequel of death and despair.