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Title: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on June 19, 2017, 02:03:30 AM
READ IT HERE (https://tapas.io/episode/750762) ...click the pink text...

SO THIS Is THE BIG ONE XD

o-o i was supposed to be making pages for Adrian's Bane but failed since my mind cant stay in one place at once

ANYWAY story synopsis

"a supernatural story about a few people and their start at the academy of their dreams, or so they thought. vampires, sirens, were wolves, the undead and many more also attend this school, some friends, some foes. along with the human students that master in mechanics and technology, this school is a train wreck waiting to happen.

the story follows the lives of two brothers, Jr and Oliver as they try to keep their grades up, make friends, avoid enemies, struggle paying their bills, and most importunately... not get killed
"

there's romance, there's action, there's horror.... its pretty much a mixed bag of many genres since the chapters do follow a certain plot, they are also pretty episodic when it comes to conflicts

i'm probably only going to be throwing the first 3 chapters up here completely, then it'll be random previews

INDEX:

Prologue
Spoiler
(http://pre15.deviantart.net/1542/th/pre/i/2017/169/f/a/1_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbd81u8.png)(http://pre09.deviantart.net/9592/th/pre/i/2017/169/3/4/2_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbd829x.png)(http://pre01.deviantart.net/44da/th/pre/i/2017/172/8/a/3_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbdkeej.png)(http://pre10.deviantart.net/fd77/th/pre/i/2017/173/a/5/4_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbdpadf.png)(http://pre10.deviantart.net/4c3a/th/pre/i/2017/179/f/f/5_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbeeam4.png)

Chapter 1: part 1
Spoiler
(https://pre00.deviantart.net/2ef6/th/pre/f/2018/185/9/7/c1_1_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcg9vay.png)(https://pre00.deviantart.net/36df/th/pre/i/2018/185/c/c/c1_2_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcg9vaj.png)(https://pre00.deviantart.net/d3dc/th/pre/f/2018/185/4/1/c1_3point5_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcg9vbq.png)(https://pre00.deviantart.net/d0cc/th/pre/i/2018/185/6/0/c1_4_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcg9v9c.png)(https://pre00.deviantart.net/e191/th/pre/i/2018/185/7/9/c1_5_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcg9vcq.png)(https://pre00.deviantart.net/d45f/th/pre/f/2018/185/a/1/everything_hurts_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcg9vf6.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/66a0/f/2018/185/b/9/c1_7_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcg9vfh.png)(https://pre00.deviantart.net/8407/th/pre/f/2018/186/b/2/c1_8_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd7y9.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/b19d/f/2018/186/3/c/c1_9_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd7yw.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/1ae2/f/2018/186/d/6/c1_10_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd7yh.png)


Chapter 1: Part 2
Spoiler
(https://orig00.deviantart.net/f05d/f/2018/186/6/c/c1_11_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd7z7.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/6796/f/2018/186/9/d/c1_12_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd7zj.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/1756/f/2018/186/c/0/c1_13_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd808.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/34e4/f/2018/186/f/b/c1_14_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd80o.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/b50c/f/2018/186/8/1/c1_15_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd812.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/a23b/f/2018/186/0/b/c1_16_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd81f.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/0939/f/2018/186/5/0/c1_17_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd81u.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/2f26/f/2018/186/a/5/c1_18_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd82e.png)(https://pre00.deviantart.net/017b/th/pre/f/2018/186/f/2/c1_19_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd82y.png)(https://orig00.deviantart.net/7a64/f/2018/186/7/5/c1_20_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dcgd83f.png)
Title: Re: ROYAL
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on June 19, 2017, 02:10:05 AM
Prologue
Spoiler
(http://pre15.deviantart.net/1542/th/pre/i/2017/169/f/a/1_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbd81u8.png)(http://pre09.deviantart.net/9592/th/pre/i/2017/169/3/4/2_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbd829x.png)(http://pre01.deviantart.net/44da/th/pre/i/2017/172/8/a/3_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbdkeej.png)(http://pre10.deviantart.net/fd77/th/pre/i/2017/173/a/5/4_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbdpadf.png)(http://pre10.deviantart.net/4c3a/th/pre/i/2017/179/f/f/5_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbeeam4.png)
Title: Re: ROYAL (new page)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on June 21, 2017, 10:04:04 PM
i HATE colouring...
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: Killer B !!SAMA!! on June 22, 2017, 12:51:34 PM
Good dude
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: legomaestro on June 28, 2017, 06:57:35 PM
Your colour work is actually pretty on point! And I imagine if I knew magic I`d repair everything I could with it as well. It`d be good times.
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: MahluaandMilk on June 28, 2017, 07:16:54 PM
Same, Lego. I almost wish that was how magic worked. Speaking of, I do look forward to seeing how you go about explaining magic in this universe, BobbyJoe. It looks like fun (and probably death, given the rating).
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: legomaestro on June 28, 2017, 07:33:21 PM
You dabble. How does it work? Can I make a hand seal and make shadow clones of myself or is it more complicated than that?

I also forgot to mention that background was sort of amazing Bobby. Great detail.
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on June 28, 2017, 09:26:27 PM
prologue finished
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: MahluaandMilk on June 28, 2017, 09:29:03 PM
Ha, poor Junior. I have to say I know the feeling.

Great work overall. The only thing I'd say to watch for is the line thickness on the last panel of the third page (with the alarm clock breaking). It seems slightly out of place.
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on June 28, 2017, 09:43:37 PM
yeah i honestly dont know what happened there cause i use one size of brush

im also comfused cause 2 pages are like 50MB while the other 3 are under 10MB... so... i'll watch out for that XD
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: MahluaandMilk on June 28, 2017, 10:00:05 PM
:confused: That is really bizarre. Could it be the file type you saved them as, or the output quality, or something? (I don't know how your program works).
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on July 08, 2017, 02:08:16 PM
hey, hey... hey... hey... guess what... ROYAL is now on TAPASTIC (https://tapas.io/episode/750762)

also preview of chapter 1. I WILL STOP BEING LAZY WITH BGS AFTER LIFE PICKS ITSELF UP AGAIN

(http://pre00.deviantart.net/b354/th/pre/i/2017/189/c/e/c1_2_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbfked9.png)
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on August 05, 2017, 02:56:42 AM
the comic was updated on Tapas... 2 weeks or so ago..., sorry about the mature filter, it said that even if the sexual parts are censored, the character is still naked... filter that *censored*


also preview

my style broke in 3 different places in this one panel

before you say anything about the hallway i have since tried... repeat TRIED to make it look less claustrophobic... and failed.... can we just establish i am *censored* at backgrounds now?

 
(https://img02.deviantart.net/28de/i/2017/217/0/6/preview_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dbix1zc.png)
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: Shane on August 05, 2017, 04:47:07 AM
By the god. the perspective fundamental is perfect.
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on July 04, 2018, 12:52:48 AM
its been a while, my only shame is it took me almost a year to finish chapter 1, we are onto chapter 2, new characters being introduced, new events, conflicts, its going to be fun
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: MK on July 04, 2018, 05:54:35 AM
I totally know that feeling of taking forever to finish chapter 1 (I've redone mine around 4 times now T.T)
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on July 04, 2018, 03:15:38 PM
yeah, and now i was informed that i should remove the screen tones since they don't render properly on a computer screen so now im working on doing that while trying to set up chapter 2 for Tapas
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: MK on July 04, 2018, 03:24:46 PM
Idk how much time you have but if you're able to then I think you should enter into the line webtoon contest (i have links in my description).
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on July 04, 2018, 07:09:46 PM
no way, i read some shady *censored* about that contest, plus i already have Royal on webtoons
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on July 05, 2018, 04:23:11 PM
i added more pages to the first post
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: MahluaandMilk on July 05, 2018, 04:38:05 PM
Yeah those screentones look a little wonky, but the story is still there and the panels flow well. Computer rendering is so weird...that's part of the reason I'm starting to hate working digitally. It can mess with an otherwise good product.
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on July 13, 2018, 04:22:15 PM
well, chapter 2 is on its way, in around 40 minutes the first 2 pages are going up on Tapas

heres the title card for it
Spoiler
(https://pre00.deviantart.net/0e4a/th/pre/f/2018/194/6/0/title_card_by_bobbyjoexforgottensb-dch4nbf.jpg)
Title: Re: ROYAL (strong language, stronge violence and sexual themes)
Post by: BobbyJoeXForgotenSB on April 26, 2019, 10:06:10 AM
Update, Chapter 2 is completed and chapter 3 is in production!