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Title: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on October 18, 2016, 01:38:45 PM
Something I've been wanting to work on for awhile, has finally gotten off to a start!

"Cosmic Thief Silvia" is a magical girl story, involving music, alien girls, a Prince from a powerful planet, and a corrupt police officer. The main character is Silvia Twilight, and she and her comrades the "Galactic Girls" travel the galaxy using a girl band as a front to try and stop these evil doings.

This is a bit new for me as its a combo of maho shojo and sci fi, the latter not somethign I've done before.

So the first four pages are being put up as a preview. If youv'e seen my previous work and enjoy it, or you like where this is going, consider supporting me on Patreon. Then I can continue this aswell as other works. Your support goes towards the creation of more pages.

Enjoy!

(http://img04.deviantart.net/3278/i/2016/292/6/a/cosmic_thief_silvia_1_page_1_by_stardustpink-dalivkx.png)
(http://img13.deviantart.net/1122/i/2016/292/e/a/cosmic_thief_silvia_1_page_2_by_stardustpink-dalivkq.png)
(http://img11.deviantart.net/4c4f/i/2016/292/a/f/cosmic_thief_silvia_1_page_3_by_stardustpink-dalifis.png)
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Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: legomaestro on October 18, 2016, 03:40:01 PM
Wow, that opening scene was really relaly good stardust! I just loved the skyscraper scene.

Random question: If you had music to this what would it be?

Sci fi is a pretty interesting direction to go. As far as Patreon goes I'm pretty cheap as they come, but go ahead and post the link methinks.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on October 19, 2016, 02:46:11 AM
Well with music unfortuantley very few songs are public domain(hope that changes in the future), but I can reference titles and artists easily. I would like to reference Queen a fair bit becuase thats who the mian charactre, Silvia admires. Otherwise though I've been writing some "songs" for the girls to sing themseleves. Becuase I think lyrics add more to it than just pages of open mouths. Full Moon Wo Sage*censored*e the Manga does this, has words and even visuals like a picture music video. I'd like to do he same.

If I could put in actual music mind it would vary from girl to girl. Like I said, Silvia is into Queen, but other characters to appear prefer rock, so in that case it'd be Aerosmith, KISS, and another techno, so tht'd be Daft Punk, etc etc. Bit of a mixture I suppose.

https://www.patreon.com/stardustpink
Thanks. Even if I got like a single dollar from a handful of people, it would really help out.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: Gabryel on October 19, 2016, 05:48:53 AM
Very nice, especially the futuristic cars. I'm so bad with vehicles, I always admire people who are good with it (or aren't and just kick their own butt through it)  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: legomaestro on October 19, 2016, 06:52:20 AM
Wait you like Aerosmith, KISS, techno and Daft Punk?! Haha I had no idea! Pretty cool collection there.


I'll keep the comic in mind for sure.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on October 19, 2016, 08:34:54 AM
Wait you like Aerosmith, KISS, techno and Daft Punk?! Haha I had no idea! Pretty cool collection there.


I'll keep the comic in mind for sure.

Heheh, well, actually Im more into songs than bands. If I had to chose bands I like, it'd be The Beatles, Daft Punk, Lady Gaga. But I like a variety of songs and I try to make them fit each character. The girls in this comic have a variety of tastes that fit THERE personalities. I probably know alot anyway, rather ecclectic person

Thank you!
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: rnightlove9 on February 26, 2017, 07:56:52 AM
 :noyoudon't: :thumbsup:
This is a bit new for me as its a combo of maho shojo and sci fi Creamuten (https://www.facebook.com/Creamuten/)
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on June 01, 2017, 01:05:33 PM
Silvia is coming along so well. I've been feeling so motivated after recieving generous donations both on Patreon recently and on Kickstarter. I'm so very grateful to ya'll out there, both donations and encouraging words helps keep me going. So consider posts like this a return for it.

Some of the mpst recent pages were alotof work, bit turned out pretty fantastic so worth it I suppose. On a side note I feel like I've gotten much better on my backgrouns, using a lot of collected resources. Perspective is tricky but, gotta just try yer best.

So in these pages the stories gettin really underway I reckon. We see more of the young boy who appeared in te opening, and have had him meet our herione. Lets see if we learn more about im aswell as Silvia perhaps.
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Edit: For some reason page seven isent showing up right. Will try and fix it
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: RightWrite on June 01, 2017, 01:10:32 PM
The skyscraper looks amazing!! Also, all of your shading is fantastic.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on June 23, 2017, 02:55:19 PM
Pleased to say, gotten to the first, but not last, climatic scene in Silvia! Were only halfway through but I consider it one of the most important parts in this particular issue, so it feels good to get there. While difficult it was fun to draw too. I think magical girl is probably my favourite anime genre so I rather liked doing the transformation scenes.

SO, weve reached the first climax of the story. BUT not the end. So keep watching folks, were only halfway through.

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Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: MatsumotoTrix on June 25, 2017, 09:38:42 AM
Hahaha, just had to comment on your representation of crowds. Very interesting, never seen it that way before. Good job ;D
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on December 26, 2017, 05:19:14 AM
Latley Ive been focusing all of my energy into finishing Silvia. Infact I only have one page left to go, but am a litte stuck as it sometimes goes. Just gettong over that hump. BUT Im very close.

I'll be gradually updating however becuase this gives me time to work on other projects in advance. Over 20 other pages and other pre schedule images and treats are avaible however on my Patreon. So if you feel you cant wait, a dollar is all thats required for early acess.

Enjoy folks!

(https://img00.deviantart.net/e5cf/i/2017/226/1/a/cosmic_thief_silvia_1_page_32_by_stardustpink-dbk01t9.png)
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Hope everyone had a Merry Christmas ^^



Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: Coryn on December 26, 2017, 09:04:43 AM
Endings are always hard. You just have to push through and do what feels right at the time. Even if your thoughts on the matter change later, you can always go back and make changes.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on February 09, 2018, 05:06:41 AM
Issue One is officially complete, and hopefully I'll do more in the future. Im currently updating two pages a week, but early acess is avaible on my Patreon.

This turned out to be 69 pages long, twice the amount anything I've done so far. It was EXHAUSTING lemme tell ya

(https://img00.deviantart.net/02f8/i/2017/331/0/b/cosmic_thief_silvia_1_page_38_by_stardustpink-dbv243q.png)
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Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: legomaestro on February 09, 2018, 06:30:34 AM
WHOA! 69 Pages of interesting dialogue and those backgrounds! I wish I could do that. Great shading, solid technical work. I'd seriously enjoy reading this in hard copy form too. I seriously need to learn some tips and tricks from you, stardust.

Pretty charming story there. Two questions is the song correct when it says 'the rythm has took over'?  I wasn't sure how the line went. And secondly is that Ipod for real the newest model or an antique? Hahaha. I saw the jukeboxes in the next page so I figured the expo was showing off music from the older eras, or that the older eras are IN for some reason or another in this universe.

I wish I had such an encyclopeadic knowledge of films and actors and the like like Silvia did. Interesting conversation.

I guess she's about to go out to kick butt. I wonder why Satoru chose her.

Serious props on getting so much page work done. Always great to see manga done here.


P.S Haha Miss Tezuka. I saw what you did there with the reporters' name.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on March 06, 2018, 05:25:37 AM
WHOA! 69 Pages of interesting dialogue and those backgrounds! I wish I could do that. Great shading, solid technical work. I'd seriously enjoy reading this in hard copy form too. I seriously need to learn some tips and tricks from you, stardust.

Pretty charming story there. Two questions is the song correct when it says 'the rythm has took over'?  I wasn't sure how the line went. And secondly is that Ipod for real the newest model or an antique? Hahaha. I saw the jukeboxes in the next page so I figured the expo was showing off music from the older eras, or that the older eras are IN for some reason or another in this universe.

I wish I had such an encyclopeadic knowledge of films and actors and the like like Silvia did. Interesting conversation.

I guess she's about to go out to kick butt. I wonder why Satoru chose her.

Serious props on getting so much page work done. Always great to see manga done here.


P.S Haha Miss Tezuka. I saw what you did there with the reporters' name.

*Blush*I feel like Im still learning myself, so when someone actually says summin like that, its certainly quite the compliment ^^ Seriously, thank you so much.

Yep thats correct on the song lyric. The idea with Silvia is its not definite what kinda of universe this is. I dont like future stories much as there almost always WRONG(by now we ought to have flying cars for example). So I like to leave it ambigious, you the reader decide. IS this the future, an unknown outerspace a totally diffrent reality altogether? Either way though it is a sci fi story. And regardin the old tehcnolodgy, well some people enjoy retro ^^ Like how girls wear dress in Rockabilly dresses now, not to mention them selling records and players again(heck Ive seen them in supermarkets). It can be cool. For example, if you look at the girls transfomation cell phones? I did them in the style of flip phones, BUT inside its touch screen like an Iphone.

I watch a lot of movies and suc myself :P I wnated to give her character a bit more interest, infact I wnana give all my characters summin so there not so 2D, magical girls are pretty much like this(like dumber shallower knock offs of Sailor Moon), which is boring. Give em a personality ya know. Music and movies seemed a good match

Thanks ^^ Got a few more to post, hope you'll read it right to the finish
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on March 06, 2018, 05:29:01 AM
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Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on March 23, 2018, 12:19:45 PM
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Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on April 20, 2018, 05:43:29 PM
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Well we now know whats Satorus up to, who the true villian is, and why Silvia was choosen. At least i hope its an explaination that makes sense. Cant be any crazier than most magical girl stuff
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: legomaestro on April 20, 2018, 07:30:35 PM
It can't be crazier indeed, and that's why it's sort of crazy, and that's why it's awesome haha. You don't ever see detectives get involved in this sort of business, but not only is he invovled, he's actually the cause of the whole magical girl situation. Usually there's a nefarious/totally innocent but dumb mascot creature that's responsible but yeah that's a nice subversion.

Great art there as always, keep it up! I can't get over the toning!

Are you done with the chapter or have you just posted what you have so far?

Either way looking forward to more

Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on April 25, 2018, 09:18:32 AM
It can't be crazier indeed, and that's why it's sort of crazy, and that's why it's awesome haha. You don't ever see detectives get involved in this sort of business, but not only is he invovled, he's actually the cause of the whole magical girl situation. Usually there's a nefarious/totally innocent but dumb mascot creature that's responsible but yeah that's a nice subversion.

Great art there as always, keep it up! I can't get over the toning!

Are you done with the chapter or have you just posted what you have so far?

Either way looking forward to more

A bit of both. It IS finished, but Im posting two pages a week on my accounts, with bulk pots here every now and then. Just a few more to go then.

Most ideas I came up with when I was a kid, and theyve really evolved and changed form there origins. Silvia is a lot darker than I originally intended, I wanna go more a Batman route with the stories. For a kids show that was quite dark. Guns, drugs, explosions, murder. Definelty a lot less sugar coated than most. So far I feel Im managing that route. I hope I can continue to do the stories and give it further life. Keeping up the will to draw is frankly HARDDDDD
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: Coryn on April 25, 2018, 10:40:50 AM
That's definitely a mood alright. Although there is always one way to get the juice flowing again, and that is to have a lot of stress and conflict in your life. (Sounds lovely doesn't it?) But seriously, try to harness the hardships, because apparently humans react with bursts of creativity when challenged, even if they aren't challenged in a way that directly related to your work. (Assuming you are, of course, human)

Best of luck!
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on May 15, 2018, 06:31:29 AM
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Annnnd thats the END! PHEW! Almost 70 pages long, this turned out to be a lot more work than anything I've worked on, but I did it. It was hard but fun and Im glad to have brought these characters to life. I hope in the future I can build there world even more. Hope everyone enjoyed it
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: MahluaandMilk on May 15, 2018, 10:08:18 AM
Congratulations on the completion! I know you've worked long and hard on your stuff, and of course I enjoy feeling the passion behind the smooth, polished outlook.

Now let's see if you can send it somewhere and get published, because good lord yes.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on May 18, 2018, 07:23:41 AM
Congratulations on the completion! I know you've worked long and hard on your stuff, and of course I enjoy feeling the passion behind the smooth, polished outlook.

Now let's see if you can send it somewhere and get published, because good lord yes.


That is like the nicest thing anyones said to me  :D THANK YOU!
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: legomaestro on May 22, 2018, 06:27:04 AM
*you're a minor

Yeah I hate that typo too.


What Mahlua said basically, stardust. You've really made something here. Best of luck with it, and congrats!
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: Theserialdoodlist on May 24, 2018, 03:43:57 AM
This was an awesome read!
congrats on your chapter, I adored the tones, the characters, and the action as well. You're great at this.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: TEA on May 28, 2018, 12:10:23 PM
Really inspiring, loved it! It made me very nostalgic for some old manga I used to read as a kid. Keep it up!
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: EffulgentFirefly on May 28, 2018, 02:14:47 PM
I don't really know what to say that hasn't already been said, but it was a very good read, visually and story-wise. Keep it up.
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: stardustpink on June 15, 2018, 05:53:03 AM
Im really happy with the positive response Silvia has been met with ^^ When something youve drawn is enjoyed by others it gives you the best feeling.

Thank you everyone and, I hope I can create the world further. Others actually wanting to see it too certainly is encouraging
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: KohakuRiver on June 17, 2018, 09:03:55 PM
This has a really cute story, and I only read the first page. I'm gonna finish the next part, keep it up.
This is so cute. It reminds me of those Magical Girls, like Sailor Moon or Cardcaptor.
Only thing it really needs it more detailed backgrounds. Other than that this is absolutely adorable :)
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: Walter B on July 02, 2018, 01:36:44 PM
Thats a very cute style. It indeed has some dark themes (drugs, police corruption, crime) one would not expect from the art style. Congrats on putting so much work. Keep it up!
Title: Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
Post by: suupertramp on July 10, 2018, 09:26:29 AM
whoops missed this when it came out :P
loved it loads, well done on completing such a long chapter to a constantly high standard!
I would definitely love to read more and see how it goes. A proper shoujo/shounen mix.
As with normal shoujo I found the panel order a bit of a trouble sometimes, but mostly fine.
I think the script itself had a strange vibe, I cant describe it but maybe they were too well spoken? like not enough casual speech in there? Mine had a similar feel when I wrote it, so not sure exactly but just that vibe it gives off. font size and style can have an impact on the feel of a sentence, so that might be a thing too.
A lot of the time the eyes are drawn completely blank, without a pupil you lose a part of displaying emotion and expression, and the charcaters expression feels a little blank as a result.
very cool plot and story :)
overall very great, well done and keep it up!