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Title: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 12, 2009, 12:36:28 AM
Since its been a while we have done the last Manga Drawing workshop I guess its time to move on to next. So This is Corycalys request.. Fullmetal Alchemist character  Edward Elric.

This is it bit harder. I think this is the hardest drawing workshop so far. Edward Elric has an Metalic arm and a robe. I guess this can be a great workshop for those who already have skills and also to starters to move to next level. So guys and girls have fun !

(http://i213.photobucket.com/albums/cc78/hasitha200/EdwardElric.jpg)

Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 12, 2009, 03:26:51 AM

Ok here is my first Attempt .. It has turn out to be a disaster but it says dying fighting is always better than running away. So there it is. I ll try to go it again when i have free time because this is a just fast scratch while i was working and talking with some people online.lol


(http://i213.photobucket.com/albums/cc78/hasitha200/EdwardElric-1.jpg)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Corycaly on May 12, 2009, 02:07:43 PM
It's not a disaster I think. The hand at the right is very good! Maybe you could detail the head more but the rest is a good beginning.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on May 12, 2009, 04:33:24 PM
its not to bad hasith! just keep trying
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 13, 2009, 12:34:32 AM
its not to bad hasith! just keep trying

What about you Coryn ? you haven't done any so far, come onn draw them.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Fallen Kite on May 13, 2009, 12:11:09 PM
Haha, looks good :heart: Need a little work on head ;) I'll be sure to post in the nearest future :tongue:
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 13, 2009, 01:03:21 PM
yea! can't wait to get started on this!!
(well i did...but i got mad and tuned him into a stick man with some kind of magic stiff coming out of his arm... :sick:)

lol but ill post one soon! :D
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 13, 2009, 03:09:15 PM
Waiting to see others drawings. Come on guys there must be at least few who dare enough to draw it as a challenge !
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on May 14, 2009, 12:53:34 PM
challenge! hah!
(http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh319/Las7mans7anding/100_1734_edited.jpg)
hows that for a slice of fried gold?
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: dawood on May 14, 2009, 01:00:08 PM
both hasith and coryns drawings are good   :D
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Cache on May 14, 2009, 02:20:56 PM
Ohhhhhhhh Hasith in your face OOHHHH lol. Coryn put it down.

Yeah guy both of these came out good man. The only problem i main see with coryn's are the size of the hands  and with hasiths the neck might be too far from the right shoulder.

Suggestion to both parties. If you've never tried it Try drawing straight up. Often when we draw down  on a table we can't see that we're slanting the drawing because our angle of view is slanted.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 14, 2009, 02:29:30 PM
 :D cool!
the only thing i see... the hips are really small. :Embarrassed:
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on May 14, 2009, 02:49:34 PM
yeah i kinda messed up on that part. i was drawing the coat and didnt think about the legs so it got weird.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 14, 2009, 03:06:29 PM
So finally a drawing from Coryn ! Keep it up do all other workshop drawings too. So you see you can do it ! your drawing is good. Like Hannah said pants are bit smaller. Thats all I can point out.

 Cache and Hannah thanks for pointing out problems in my drawing. I keep them in mind for next time. I think this is the perfect way how a workshop should be.

Looking forward to see rest of the gangs drawings !
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Cache on May 15, 2009, 12:21:41 AM
I know Coryn It's about time! lol.

Here is my submission  for the workshop threw in a little color. =D
(http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f334/astaroth189/edcopy.jpg)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Fallen Kite on May 15, 2009, 06:54:46 AM
Sure you didn't copy that?  :laughing11: AMAZING :)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 15, 2009, 11:38:03 AM
Wow that drawing is great ! Good job Cache I'm waiting to see your Mecha drawing. I want to try it too.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Cache on May 15, 2009, 12:02:39 PM
Thanks guys lol and of course I copied it Kite lol thats the point of the workshop right XD just didn't trace it haha.

And Hasith I submitted my Gundam workshop too it's in the well.. mech thread.  lol
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Fallen Kite on May 15, 2009, 12:04:52 PM
Thanks guys lol and of course I copied it Kite lol thats the point of the workshop right XD just didn't trace it haha.
Waaaah Ya riiiight :D
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 16, 2009, 06:20:34 PM
wow, cache! :o...
i tried to do the whole body, but...
(http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii305/h_musick/workshoped1.jpg)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 16, 2009, 06:21:21 PM
 :o ops i forgot his hand there!  :(
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: dawood on May 16, 2009, 06:53:48 PM
 u did a good job on his auto-mail arm
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 16, 2009, 07:43:27 PM
thanks
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on May 16, 2009, 09:07:53 PM
yeah! auto-mail is awesome! only problem i see is that the head is a little mis-shaped
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 16, 2009, 09:16:24 PM
lol, yeah, i can never really get people heads the right shape... :hmm: i think this time it's way too wide. :Embarrassed:
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 16, 2009, 09:40:15 PM
Hannah I like the way you d drew this guys Metal arm. Its well detailed and has a 3D look. Only things I'm kinda see strange are eyes. I think its the black part inside. But overole its a good job ! Keep it up !
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 17, 2009, 12:58:03 AM
thanks!
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Fallen Kite on May 17, 2009, 11:03:14 AM
Haha, Very great pic, only the head could be a little better  :laughing11: seriously, it's well detailed :tongue:
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Corycaly on May 17, 2009, 12:18:49 PM
Oh my...I tried to draw it when I was stressed and it ended miserably: the legs are too shirt and for once, Ed really looks like a shrimp lol

I'll redraw it in two days.

(http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee171/mangaraider/workshop036.jpg)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 17, 2009, 12:57:41 PM
Co everything is ok except body proportion. It's not your best I don't think it has too many errors unlike rest of ours (always except Chache lol).
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: SaiHawkeye on May 17, 2009, 01:04:12 PM
(http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v3861/209/73/501380451/n501380451_2601207_3244230.jpg)

Sheesh, the proportions in this one are not what I'm used to. >.<
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on May 17, 2009, 01:06:29 PM
not bad! proportions are the only problems i see
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 17, 2009, 01:25:42 PM
Face Looks perfect and I like your drawings metal hand too. Only problem is proportions I think.

Good to see you did post in workshops. Take part other drawing workshops too when you have time. Also comment about others drawings too. That,s the whole idea here sharing advice and pointing out errors.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: SaiHawkeye on May 17, 2009, 01:42:41 PM
Well, the only real comment I had was for you, Hasith. Chill out on the paper, man. It didn't do anything to you.  :D
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 17, 2009, 03:08:29 PM
awesome! a few things are kind of off... and the head looks a bit out of proportion. but other than that he looks great!!  :JC_cheesy:
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Corycaly on May 17, 2009, 04:07:10 PM
Good work!

The metal arm is well detailed and I like the face because it's manly and serious.

I'll remake mine in two days, once I am less stressed.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Cache on May 18, 2009, 11:01:25 AM
@Hannah: Like everyone else I really like the way you did the Arm, =D love the detail, The eyes were just too far apart which in my opinion is always Edwards problem even the professional drawings his eyes just look too far apart to me haha.

@Cory: Woot! I liek the Sketchy detail you put in yours I agree with Hasith on the proportions but Honestly I liek the original touch on the character. So the sketchyness was a plus for me.

@ Sai: I really like the way the face came out. Compared to the head the hands are too small and the line of action seems to change once you reach his waste.If you cut the head down a bit maybe in photoshop or something I think everything would look just fine =D.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: MantisDragon on May 31, 2009, 05:34:08 PM
Been busy Lately but finnaly got this one done...took @1hr.45min off and on from start to finnish.(http://)
(http://i653.photobucket.com/albums/uu258/mantisdragon/MangaAnimeWorkShopPractice/MangaWorkShop3Finnished.jpg)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on May 31, 2009, 08:17:51 PM
everythings like perfect except for the face. the eyes are all off
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on May 31, 2009, 09:59:50 PM
 :o wow... great!!  :D but the eyes do look kind of off...
but i liked the way you drew the lips.
and the color version is...wow
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on May 31, 2009, 11:08:08 PM
@  Dragon : As whole character it is a great drawing, Only 2 things I see bit off are right side eye and hand (which was on hip). Also colored one is great ! Thanks for posting both !
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: MantisDragon on June 01, 2009, 12:37:20 AM
Your Welcome, and thanks.

I know...im still having a good bit of trouble with hands and faces...I cant seem to get the proportions or perspectives correct..Ive always had a good bit of trouble in those areas.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: AnimeDoodler on June 24, 2009, 10:08:04 PM

Here's mine ^^  I did this while watching Casino Royale, so I'm expecting critics on proportion ^^


(http://i738.photobucket.com/albums/xx24/_AnimeDoodler_/FMAworkshop.jpg)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: AnimeDoodler on June 24, 2009, 10:10:01 PM
Also, Mantis Dragon, I have the same problems ^^ Whyu are the most looked at portions of the body the hardest to draw?
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on June 25, 2009, 03:07:37 AM
AnimeDoodler I like the metal arm of your character. Maybe neck is bit too long.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on June 25, 2009, 01:57:30 PM
oh wow! a few things off, but the details are good!
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: AnimeDoodler on June 25, 2009, 02:07:59 PM
thanks ^^ I found it hard to draw another person's character...lol
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: legomaestro on February 22, 2012, 12:26:06 AM
*Comes out of a huge hole dirty and muddy, throws a shovel to the side.

Well yes i know, old topic, but its the one i found on the workshop list. I'll try to do more recent ones but i tried it out anyways.

It was interesting. I'll try doing this to the drawings of the artists i like to get their style, it really does give you a feel for how they draw...

(http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt23/legomaestro/Elric.png)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on February 22, 2012, 12:31:06 AM
da-amn. not just old. one of the very first workshops.

good job though lego! better than mine back in teh day!
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: legomaestro on February 22, 2012, 01:52:39 AM
Thanks man! Though, it seems cache was a monster even then... >...<

and wow one of the first workshops huh...
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on February 22, 2012, 03:49:44 PM
basically. maybe even the first.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on March 02, 2012, 07:05:41 PM
I don't think it was the first was it? I thought it was that girl with the little star thing??
Really great work lego!! I really like how you did the boots! The only thing i see is the neak is alittle bit long? Looks really great!
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: legomaestro on March 06, 2012, 03:54:38 AM
Ah yeah i see what you mean. Thnks musick!
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on March 06, 2012, 10:56:14 AM
was there another one? can't remember anymore.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Tostificer on March 06, 2012, 12:35:15 PM
If you'd read the first post, you would come to the conclusion that there has to be one before this one.

But yeah, very nice Lego! The blade is kinda long though, for the rest of the body. I don't remember it being that long anyway 0_0
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on March 06, 2012, 03:08:15 PM
yeah i thought it was this one?? But then again This was the very first one i saw when i came here...
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,1288.0.html
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: legomaestro on March 06, 2012, 04:30:51 PM
Thanks Toasty. And yup your spot on T-T There's other issues i noticed but i was in a hurry to get it done. Copying such a professional drawing is sorta depressing at the same time.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: AldrichCrescent on May 22, 2012, 12:44:39 PM
I love this workshop area =) Here's my try. I'm not good at shadowing yet >_<
(http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/9288/tutorial02.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/708/tutorial02.jpg/)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: legomaestro on May 22, 2012, 12:58:05 PM
That's pretty solid! I really do love your linework!
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Rojas on May 22, 2012, 01:04:08 PM
Yeah what Lego said, your art is pretty good.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Coryn on May 22, 2012, 01:29:11 PM
nice job! interesting shading style.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: h_musick on June 30, 2012, 06:59:27 PM
i like your shading  :D
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: marionimous on January 24, 2013, 09:54:04 AM
ok heres mine...

(http://www.deviantart.com/download/350271938/mr_workshop___edward_elric_by_marionimous-d5sjjk2.png)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on January 24, 2013, 11:18:11 PM
Very good ! compared to the torso I think he should be little bit taller. But its not something big. :)

Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: marionimous on January 24, 2013, 11:21:37 PM
Very good ! compared to the torso I think he should be little bit taller. But its not something big. :)

thank you for pointing that out :D

when i drew this, i thought it was stretched or something lol, something wrong with my eyes. And the face.. its not Edward Elric at all :(
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Yuri_Prime on February 01, 2013, 02:14:51 PM
Here is my drawing of Edward Elric . It didn't turn out to good , but this is the best i can do for now....

(http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/032/1/b/fun_art_by_micapetrica-d5tgzer.jpg)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Jamie on February 10, 2013, 08:11:18 AM
For the life of me, i can't draw the fist...  Here's mine ~

(http://i1146.photobucket.com/albums/o521/jamieboy3/edfailed-1.jpg?t=1360501847)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: chargercole21 on October 13, 2013, 04:18:31 PM
I know this is a little old but here's mine.

Spoiler
(http://i934.photobucket.com/albums/ad184/cole_hazlewood21/5e5c55d2-e11b-4a2f-a259-7f879b162c77_zps284befda.jpg) (http://s934.photobucket.com/user/cole_hazlewood21/media/5e5c55d2-e11b-4a2f-a259-7f879b162c77_zps284befda.jpg.html)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: legomaestro on October 13, 2013, 05:19:36 PM
Something feels off with the arms and angle of the torso, but nice use of the medium. It looks good, nicely done.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: chargercole21 on October 13, 2013, 05:34:14 PM
Yeah, I couldn't get that left hand down so it looks gimped haha. But whats wrong with the torso? The angle seems the same and the picture given.
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Boosted Nomena :) on January 24, 2015, 10:49:20 AM
Good day ;D

Here is my bit here ... guess the body proportion was a bit off again and he ended up shorter than the original but I did my best

(https://scontent-a-fra.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xfa1/v/t1.0-9/1231124_363942543778303_882025334994159911_n.jpg?oh=ae1314e0a848d42b276b9eefc5b790e4&oe=55271C61)

Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Hasith on January 24, 2015, 09:45:21 PM
Looks very good! I don't think body proportions are bad. :)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: AmanoMai on January 24, 2015, 10:54:51 PM
you got that almost perfectly

the reason you think that body proportion looks wrong is simply because the head is a bit too big

it seems to have become a habit for you to draw head that size

but it's a small error that can easily be fixed, simply by keeping that in mind while practicing

Spoiler
(http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2015/024/f/0/fix17_by_amano_m-d8fa92i.jpg)
Title: Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
Post by: Boosted Nomena :) on January 25, 2015, 08:39:32 AM
Hasith > Thanks :-)

AmanoMai> I see ... now that you mention it, I have always had an awkward feeling after I finished my drawings before...so I went through all my previous drawing with GIMP software and reduced their heads...the awkward feeling was fading, I think they look much better...I don't know where I learned to make the heads like that...but thank you I am going to keep it in mind all the time and try removing that habit  :thumbsup: