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Title: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Luna Fang on March 19, 2015, 02:01:04 PM
Ill post my Art Gradually. Couple Original and others from Mangas I enjoy.

But here is my First Original: Luna

(http://i.imgur.com/AQQLBnc.jpg?1)
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: GingerStark on March 19, 2015, 02:17:36 PM
It's a bit hard to see but it seems like you've did a decent job at it  :thumbsup: Will have to see more drawings to get a better sense of style though  :hmm:
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Luna Fang on March 19, 2015, 02:35:55 PM
Yeah im sorry about  that. i had to shrink it. first upload was LARGE! but im gonna post a few when i get out of class.
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Luna Fang on March 20, 2015, 03:03:15 PM
This is Ikaros From Heavens Lost Property. Sadly Her wings got cut off because I couldnt fit them in.

(http://i.imgur.com/wKctJct.jpg?1)
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Luna Fang on March 20, 2015, 03:06:00 PM
His is Shimade Kambei from Samurai 7 and personally I think one of my Best ones.

(http://i.imgur.com/jAwFdmN.jpg?1)
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Nekonomicon on March 20, 2015, 03:20:05 PM
These are good! :D
Try to take more time with the shading though. It is good that you follow the contours of what you are shading, but it looks a little rough
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Luna Fang on March 20, 2015, 08:26:59 PM
Thanks but thats tough with pencil sometimes and here is Elsa.

(http://i.imgur.com/uub4qVE.jpg)
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Echo_River on March 21, 2015, 05:16:02 PM
Haha, nice one! The braid looks good XD

I think the nose would be a little more right for that perspective (?) But it's best to leave it.
Noses are hard to draw the same again once they've been erased O_O.
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Boosted Nomena :) on March 21, 2015, 06:21:24 PM
really nice pics  :thumbsup:

However, you can still improve  ;D ...I might not be accurate but hope you get what I mean

1) This is not a full front view of her so the nose should not be in the middle of the face (see figures below)

2) Her left iris should move a bit more to her left to make it consistent with the right iris.(I don't know how to explain it more)---beside that you seem to have had troubles with eye alignment (looking at eraser marks), you should draw some guidelines for the eyes  ;)

3) There should be a small side view of her forehead and chin

4) Her mouth should move just a little bit down.

Here is the summary in picture

Spoiler
(https://scontent-vie.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xpf1/v/t1.0-9/11069876_388913487947875_199905680903849614_n.jpg?oh=8eb20d3e979f2c3c3bcd2f8b922daf9a&oe=55729370) ---> (https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xap1/v/t1.0-9/10923213_388913521281205_1661934724203538406_n.jpg?oh=1307cd86f43f9c67185687e536f0d0d1&oe=557EF6ED&__gda__=1433828145_6cf26bbbe16b7ad0aa7c404f19aae87b)
Title: Re: Luna's Fan Art
Post by: Luna Fang on March 21, 2015, 07:12:55 PM
Thanks for the feedback and nice with the picture Nomena it does help