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Manga Writers => Develop Your Story => Topic started by: GabrielAlmighty on February 11, 2009, 02:13:59 PM


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Title: Is this a good idea for a webcomic? (Continued)
Post by: GabrielAlmighty on February 11, 2009, 02:13:59 PM
     I rewrote the story and made a few minor changes, here it is:

     ________________, and ________________ are cousins  that stumble across a ufo crash in the middle of the woods. Agreeing not to tell anyone, the two boys begin to tinker with the ship and what it contains. Before long the eldest, _____________, discovers technological power beyond any military caliber. They both agree to help people with that power, but ______________(the oldest) slowely turns away. All else is good until they are given warning of the aliens returning for their ship. As the world creeps into a nightmare, what can these two young boys do to stop this?

    I still haven't chosen the names yet, but I think it's pretty good. Remember I didn't take much time on this.
This is part A, part B will be about the oldest cousin going crazy with his power and then attempting to take over the world. But the younger one will stop him. I know it sounds a bit cheesy but it'll play  out different then you think.

What do you think?
Title: Re: Is this a good idea for a webcomic? (Continued)
Post by: Coryn on February 11, 2009, 07:49:51 PM
it sounds cool. if you have good writing behind it it will work
Title: Re: Is this a good idea for a webcomic? (Continued)
Post by: GabrielAlmighty on February 11, 2009, 10:27:10 PM
     Oh, also I just left out the biggest part. I've officially have titled it "Merciless". The name really fits it as you get deeper into the story. It's hard to write a summary without giving everything away, but I will try my best. I hope to have it out this summer. Here is a poster I threw down.

(http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/2213/mercilessposteruc8.th.jpg) (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mercilessposteruc8.jpg)
Title: Re: Is this a good idea for a webcomic? (Continued)
Post by: Coryn on February 12, 2009, 05:04:56 PM
cool poster it looks good with no color
Title: Re: Is this a good idea for a webcomic? (Continued)
Post by: kazbat028 on February 16, 2009, 09:58:12 AM
Sounds good, a little cheesy, but good. You'll need some high-caliber writing to pull that off.
Title: Re: Is this a good idea for a webcomic? (Continued)
Post by: santuli on March 30, 2009, 10:12:30 AM
Aha i  agree with what the others said you need good writing to make sure people understand everything you want to say but i liked the story, its always fun to see someone go crazy with power hehe