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Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« on: December 04, 2011, 03:06:36 AM »
So...i may have accidentally started writing arc 3. it just kinda started flowing out. Though let me say now that this doesn't mean things are going to get rolling again. I still have other stories that have priority. the song, the scene, the mood, all just kinda...clicked. so yeah. i'd advise listening to this when you read. sets a good mood for it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SXpnI52cLEc


O DEATH

   It was dark out, but then again, that was nothing new on this planet, a perpetual, cold

night, the byproduct of the tree moons orbiting above. This was Luctus, planet of nightmares,

where hope was long ago a thing of the past.

   The Advisor stepped through the wooden doorway. This room was supposedly just as

well heated as the hallway and all of the rooms he had previously passed through. But despite the

fire crackling in the large fire pit in the room’s center, he felt a cold shiver run down his spine.

He desperately wished he could see the man inside, but the Lord preferred to stay hidden in the

darkness, and there was little chance the Advisor would even think to disobey him. Without

having to announce himself the Lord spoke, he always knew when he was going to be intruded

upon, even sometimes before the intruder did.

“What is it?”

“Sire… The reports you requested from the Science Division have arrived.”

“And?”

“The readings were a match your Lordship…an exact match…”

        The temperature dropped a little more. There was the slightest of movements from the

Lord as he continued to skulk in the shadows. It put the Advisor on edge as he heard what he had

been sure was a chuckle, he had been serving the Lord his entire life, and he was sure he had

never even seen him smile.

“Then I suppose I should prepare for my departure.”

         Preparing to quickly bow and then leave as soon as possible, the Advisor felt his throat

open wide and the blood start to flow out. Hitting the floor his blood spurted out from the wound,

spraying the wooden floors in red warmth. Gurgling as his life faded, the Advisor’s last sensation

was of a heavy boot pushing down against his neck, and then snapping it with a quick thrust.

The Lord looked over and watched as his Advisor’s blood ran down and came into

contact with the searing coals, creating a screeching noise as it burnt away. Looking back up to

where the body lay he saw nothing but a massive white smile floating above the corpse, teeth

shimmering in the faint light.

“If you keep killing my underlings there won’t be any left.”

The smile widened, even though it was already at the point which it should have been impossible

for any human mouth to open any wider.

“As long as I don’t kill the chef, right? That’s what you said!”

“That Advisor was worth to me than you are, and far more trustworthy. You will do well to

remember that.”

“Che! Like you’d be needing him after this anyways.”

“That is hardly relevant. Now get out of my sight! And be ready in the morning!”


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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2011, 07:56:14 AM »
Oh man are you for real? Am i really seeing ARC 3 HERE? OHMAN. OH MAN!


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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #2 on: December 04, 2011, 08:01:41 AM »
Read and interested. And man, it's great to get into this. Now for more agony as i wait every week. Dammitawesome

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2011, 01:38:07 PM »
yeh. it's for real. can't quite believe it myself. feels odd to have an arc on my desktop again. but remember it'll be a while before i'm ready to really work on it. i've got to finish darling before anything else.

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #4 on: December 06, 2011, 11:53:09 PM »
Thanks for posting that Coryn, I actually enjoyed reading that. Other than a few misspelled/missing words this rough draft reads pretty well. Kudos to you  :thumbsup:
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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #5 on: December 07, 2011, 12:34:43 AM »
thanks rob! hopefully i'll be able to cut down on those pesky misspellings this arc

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #6 on: December 07, 2011, 03:15:12 PM »
*lurks

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #7 on: December 07, 2011, 03:23:18 PM »
don't lurk too hard. i wouldn't expect to see so much of a paragraph out of me till mid december.

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #8 on: December 07, 2011, 03:29:11 PM »
Nuuuuuuu.

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #9 on: December 08, 2011, 09:49:59 PM »
Is it mid December yet?.. ho hum..  :bored:
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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #10 on: December 09, 2011, 01:57:24 AM »
don't get too worked up. finals are next week. then i'll be home that sat. who knows when something will get written. and i'm still finishing darling first.

though, rob, this makes me think. did you ever actually finish arcs 1 and 2? 0_0

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #11 on: December 09, 2011, 02:13:43 AM »
don't get too worked up. finals are next week. then i'll be home that sat. who knows when something will get written. and i'm still finishing darling first.

though, rob, this makes me think. did you ever actually finish arcs 1 and 2? 0_0

I started Arc 1 when I was here back then, never finished it. So obviously I didn't get to read Arc 2 either. I don't even think that you posted up the 2nd arc back then.

Anyways, TBH I just thought I could start your story on Arc 3. Will I get confused if I didn't read the other Arcs? hmm, guess I might have a heck of a lot of reading this holidays season. Well, it's free entertainment.. Can't go wrong with that.
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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #12 on: December 09, 2011, 12:13:32 PM »
Rob, you would get so confused, it wouldn't even be funny.

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #13 on: December 26, 2011, 01:27:46 PM »
*lurks again

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 3
« Reply #14 on: December 26, 2011, 01:28:47 PM »
you aren't going to see anything new. lurk in darling if you want. this wont be worked on until i'm done there.

though i think i just an idea for that. sadly it's post christmas and i got game(s) to play.

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