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Author Topic: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02  (Read 13937 times)

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Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« on: May 20, 2009, 09:34:42 AM »
2nd Simple girls character drawing workshop. Just a portrait image of simple cute Manga girl. This is the easiest workshop so far till now. I don't think it would be hard to draw.


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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 12:49:06 PM »
Went ahead and gave this one a shot. Was too lazy to shade it, so I might come back to it later and color/shade it.

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 01:05:12 PM »
Nice. Eyes look bit different but I think shading would correct it. Only think i can point out if breast maybe bit too bigger than the original image. Other than thats its great !

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 01:09:41 PM »
That breast  thing is no accident hasith lol thats seddy being seddy lol. you can TRUST that was on purpose. I think if he just went ahead and added in the shading this would be on point. I love it! The only thing I see wrong mainly is the same thing i see wrong in the real picture lol her head is too tall.
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 01:19:38 PM »
Cache was right on the dot. Breast was made bigger on purpose~ ;D
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 01:32:01 PM »
Cache I had thought the same lol

About the head and neck I don't see it as an error because I have seen many which like that, character is kinda skinny too. But I think Seddy made his drawing head bit bigger and neck bit shorter. Again it hasn't made the character look bad, has it ?

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 03:24:52 PM »


Shoulda drawn her outline first but I was distracted by a certain part of the anatomy to think about it. =/
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 05:29:31 PM »
Congrats! Those pics are good!

I'll make mine tomorow!

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 08:52:13 PM »
Revision 1 - Probably won't be having many revisions, but I felt very unsatisfied with the previous version of this.



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Only two things really bother me, but one was already covered by the previous posts. One of the areas I pay attention to most is the face since that's where I personally start off at. The cheek line on our left side seems to be a bit off. Good effort though. =)
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 11:21:17 PM »
I started to color it~
Too lazy to finish it at this moment~ So you guys get to look at half a finished drawing. =)

I was lazy and half-assed it. ;D

EDIT:
Here's a more complete version of it. I'm too lazy to do the other eye and the hair, so I may just drop it right here for now.

« Last Edit: May 21, 2009, 11:18:59 AM by Sedistra »
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #10 on: May 20, 2009, 11:23:35 PM »
Sai both you drawings are cool. Eyes maybe better with more touch up. Also neck could be little shorter. I like the face it looks same. Check the eye of original image and do lil more touch up.

Also its fine to post revisions. more you post better it will be for you. also more to talk.

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #11 on: May 20, 2009, 11:24:58 PM »
Seddy, Im waiting see the colored face. lol mainly to see how do you do eyes !

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #12 on: May 21, 2009, 09:46:11 PM »
personally i like seddy's version much much better

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #13 on: May 21, 2009, 10:47:02 PM »
Seddy's drawing coming out nicely ! Coryn aren't you gonna try ?

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Simple Girls 02
« Reply #14 on: May 22, 2009, 11:19:53 AM »
maybe. havent had a lot of time lately. its summer so im home all day but my mom leaves a huge to do list every damn day! :'( i dont know how she keeps coming up with stuff!

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