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Christmas's Quick Sketches
« on: March 08, 2016, 09:40:57 AM »
So everyone,

I have been trying to draw characters and things for a while. I have a bunch of art stuff I guess, but don't share it to the public... UNTIL NOW! :sheep:

SO without further ado, I present:


This picture is based off of a real life picture of my boyfriend and I at the beach. I was really bored, and just tried my best to do it. I know his left eye is a bit buggy... T^T (sorry babe...)

But yeah, looking for constructive criticism! Thanks!
« Last Edit: May 05, 2016, 11:55:35 AM by Hasith »

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2016, 06:37:46 PM »
u DID it her clothes are hiding her body, you're having fun there her right hand hugging the boy is a little long and the color what did u use to color this?
 
its good :thumbsup:
 


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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2016, 07:45:03 PM »
You should embed all of your artwork here on the forum using image tags Christmas. It makes the viewing experience easier on other members.

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2016, 07:49:57 PM »
u DID it her clothes are hiding her body, you're having fun there her right hand hugging the boy is a little long and the color what did u use to color this?
 
its good :thumbsup:

Thank you! I just used regular old coloring pencils :grin:

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I'm sorry, I don't quite know how to use the image tags. Where exactly can I learn how to do that? Sorry :/

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2016, 09:09:39 PM »

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #5 on: March 09, 2016, 04:52:42 PM »
Wow, based off a real picture O: I like the simplicity of it, makes it easy to look at.
Your face shapes look good too.

If it helps, here's a drawing tutorial for hair that I used to use. It's not for highly realistically drawn hair, but it does show you a few basics about hair flow and such:
http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/pages/tutorial_hair

Keep up the good work!
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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #6 on: March 09, 2016, 07:51:33 PM »
Wow, based off a real picture O: I like the simplicity of it, makes it easy to look at.
Your face shapes look good too.

If it helps, here's a drawing tutorial for hair that I used to use. It's not for highly realistically drawn hair, but it does show you a few basics about hair flow and such:
http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/pages/tutorial_hair

Keep up the good work!

Thanks!! :)

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #7 on: April 07, 2016, 03:35:41 PM »
i didnt actually notice anything wrong with the eyes :P
drawing from a photo reference is a great idea, your drawing looks good. the hair looks like its blowing around a lot, if thats the case then great, otherwise try and not make it stick up so much :P
well done and keep it up :P

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #8 on: April 10, 2016, 12:45:46 PM »
Thanks suupertramp!

It was really windy that day XD

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #9 on: May 05, 2016, 08:33:28 AM »
Okay so I tried drawing SONIC THE HEDGEHOG!

And I'm proud of it! I'll try to scan it in soon. But with Windows 10, I don't really know how to do image tags, because it won't let me click on emojis or spoilers or image tags like it used to...

So I'll continue using DeviantArt links until I understand how to do that.

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #10 on: May 05, 2016, 11:37:30 AM »
May you gain understanding.

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #11 on: May 05, 2016, 01:05:12 PM »
Right click on your DA image and then select "Copy Image Location".  Then in your post just right click and select paste. now select the url which is pasted on post and click on small Mona Lisa icon on post tools.

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #12 on: May 05, 2016, 05:40:26 PM »
Thanks to the both of you!!!

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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #13 on: May 05, 2016, 07:06:10 PM »
Here's Sonic!




Phew! Didn't think I was going to ever post him! :D

Looking for some critique, I used a reference online. Thanks!


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Re: Christmas's Quick Sketches
« Reply #14 on: May 06, 2016, 01:01:06 AM »
It's a bit weird to critique art that is copied from a photo because you never know how much is copied and how much is stylized unless you saw the original photo.

With the first picture I'll just point out a few obvious things which are you forgot the details in the ear and that the girl's ear is a little too small.  In the second picture I would say to just work on the inking.  It will take a while to get good at inking but the only tips are to have more confidence in your lines and to just practice more.
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